Sonichu Obscurity: Sonichu's Finale

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I'll give you Mitch, I think I can still write him in.
 
Fuck it, it's Thursday where I am.
Fuck this fuck this fuck this fuck this fuck this fuck this fuck...this
Punchy didn't care for flying, even if it was with his friend and former infatuation Angelica.
"We'll be there soon, just hold on a little longer." Angelica was very aware of Punchy's anxiety. The ground became closer and closer. Soon, they were back on the ground.
I swear, I could marry this dirt right now!
Punchy looked around, there was nothing but trees. "Where is....what are we looking for?"
"According to this map, there's a gym or something like a gym around here." Angelica flew up to get a better view, "I see something about a mile or two away, come on. Let's fly."
"Let's walk, I'm done with flying."
"Ok then, let's walk." They walked to the building.
The building wasn't a gym, it was a fighting pit. Inside, dozens of people were lined up at betting booth. A few people were in the lobby holding pokéballs having mundane chatter. Cheering could be heard past a couple of double doors. The ceiling was at least 50 yards high. Everything was gray and dirty.
"God help us, where do we even begin."
"I can help you." A tall thin man in a navy suit, fedora, and sunglasses appeared from behind. His skin was olive and his hair was black with a purple streak.
That's suspicious. "Who the fuck are you?"
The man took his sunglasses off. His eyes were an eerie purple, "You were Magi-Chan's friends, yes? I am the Mewtwo who raised him. You know by know my son is gone. I've taken control of this mans body, I want to help you because that's what Magi-Chan would want. You're not going to be able to find Wild's father until you enter the fighting pit. You'll need to be registered by your owner." He smiled, "That would be me." He put his sunglasses on.
"MAKE A HOLE! CHAMP COMING THROUGH!"
A short fat man wearing nothing but denim pants and a sweat stained white shirt was pushing a cage containing a Scizor. Behind them, an even fatter man in a black pinstripe suit was strolling behind them.
"That Scizor is Wild's father." Mewtwo whispered to Punchy.
Not going to be able to find him, my ass
Punchy whispered back, "What's the plan?"
"Killington!" Mewtwo screamed at the Scizor's owner. The man in the black suit looked over and smiled.
"Cornell? It is you." He walked over to them, "My god it is!, I haven't seen you in years, what are these you have here?"
"Sonichus, from CWCville."
"Ha! I've never seen sonichus before. I'd never thought I'd see them in this place. Will they be fighting?"
Mewtwo placed his hand on Punchy's back, "This one will be. What about your prized Scizor?"
"Not today, I've got a new champion in the making." He showed off a golden pokéball. "This one has 200 wins, no loses. He isn't going to be defeated today or anytime soon."
"Oh, I think my punchy can defeat anything that enters the ring."
"Do you now? Well, I think we should make this a little...interesting. If you win I--"
"If I win I get the Scizor."
Killington smiled, "I don't want to give up my Scizor, but then again I don't think I will. What if I win?"
Mewtwo placed his other hand on Angelica, "You can have this one, she fights well enough, but she can also cook, clean and sing. If you can find a male sonichu you can breed them."
Killington put his hand in Angelica's hair and pulled out her scrunchie. Her hair fell down to her shoulders. He moved her hand to her face then to her back. "Yes, this would be a nice addition indeed. I'll accept this bet."
"Then let's go set up the match. I have a feeling it'll be the match of the night."
"I hope so, I don't want to win that sonichu from you too easily now." Killington laughed as they stood in line to place their bets.
Poor Angelica, now she's the terrified one. Punchy found her scrunchie and gave it back to her. She had a blank stare on her face, "T-thanks." She put her hair back up hastily, her hands were shaking.
Punchy made sure Killington couldn't hear them, "You're not gonna be Fatty Fat Fat's slave. I promise you. What ever was in that pokéball won't last 10 minutes against me. We'll get Wild's father and be home soon." Angelica still didn't say anything, they walked over to Mewtwo.
Killington spoke to the bookie, "Yes, I'm back again boy! I'll be sending my new champ against this son-ee-choo my old friend has brought. Make it the final fight tonight."
The bookie looked bored, "Yes sir, will you be betting tonight," he spoke in a monotone voice.
"I sure will, my Scizor will be the fee."
"Very well, I'll have the boys put him in the safe. What about you sir?"
Mewtwo adjusted his fedora, "I will be fighting with the red one, I'm betting the white."
"Does it have a cage?"
Angelica is NOT an IT!
"I'm afraid not."
"No worries sir, we have a spare backboard."
"I don't think SHE needs to be restrained."
"Regulations."
A group of men wearing denim overalls came and pushed Scizor's cage away. A few minutes later, another pair showed up with a wooden board six feet tall and two feet wide. Leather straps were undone at the sides. The two men let it fall. It hit the floor with a loud BANG!
"Ok, sir. Please order your pokémon to lie down so we can restrain it."
HER! She has a name! Her name is Angelica!
Mewtwo looked to Angelica, "Angelica, lie on the board now!"
Angelica still didn't speak, but she complied. The two men began strapping her down and tying her wings so she couldn't flap them. Her ankles were tied together and her wrists were tied behind her back. Leather straps bound her neck, chest, hips, and knees to the backboard. They stood the board up, Angelica was fighting back tears.
Punchy looked down. I can't watch this.
As the men carried her to the safe with Scizor she finally said something, "PUNCHY!," Punchu looked at her being carried away, "GOOD LUCK! YOU CAN DO THIS!"
Punchy fought back tears as well, "I WILL, DON'T BE SCARED!"
Killington threw his gold pokéball in the air, caught it and laughed, "Ain't that precious!"
Punchy was angry, he could have killed him right then an there, but he knew he'd never see Angelica again.
Punchy and Mewtwo were led into a ready room. Unlike the lobby, this room was clean and lavish. The carpets were a deep purple and felt plush under Punchy's feet. A large window had a remarkable view of the jungle outside. The walls were a bright red. Brown leather couches were spaced on the floor. An oak table in the middle had bottles of water, grapes, toasted bread, small pieces of steak, and cubes of cheese resting on golden plates.
"We will call you when it's time to fight." The man who had escorted them closed the door.
Punchy picked up a grape, looked at it, rolled it in his fingers, and squashed it in his hand.
Mewtwo took off his hat, glasses, and jacket. "You should take this time to meditate."
"I've never meditated before. I always called M-Chan a faggot for doing it."
"What is bothering you?"
Punchy threw the smashed grape at Mewtwo. "I'm in the best room I've ever been in, and Angelica is tied up locked away in some safe! I'm pretty sure my girlfriend Lalya thinks I'm a piece of shit. I'll never see her again! Oh, and I'm gonna go fucking poof anytime soon! So yeah, that's what's bothering me!" Punchy didn't even notice Mewtwo had stopped the grape. It was floating in front of his head. "Some people say anger is a bad thing," without touching the grape, he threw it into the trash bin in the corner of the room, "but we know it isn't. You need to utilize your anger for this fight."
"How?"
"What will happen if you lose this fight?"
"We fail in getting Wild's father. Angelica becomes that fat shit's slave."
"Then what?"
"I go back to CWCville, alone."
"Then what?"
"I guess I just...wait to disappear."
"Angelica. What happens to her?"
"She belongs to fatty. He...touches her again. She does what ever he tells her to. She makes his food, cleans up after him. He might make her fight here."
"Eventually, she'll lose the will to live, she'll wish for her disappearance every time she opens her eyes every mourning. Every night she'll pray. She'll pray to God that tonight is the night she enters obscurity. And who's fault will that be. If only you won that match."
"Fuck! You!" Punchy threw another grape. Mewtwo stopped it again.
"Sit down! Close your eyes, and think of what will happen if you lose this fight! Think of everything that makes you angry! Think of everyone that pisses you off!"
"You piss me off!"
"Than think about me!"
"Fine!"
Punchy sat down and closed his eyes. Fucking Magi-Chan! Not telling us sooner. Fucking Lalya! Stubborn bitch. Fucking Fat Fuck! Putting his hands on...
Punchy's eyes were closed but he saw something. He saw a giant safe opening, he saw stacks of cash, gold bars, and boxes full of jewelry. He saw Scizor in his cage, and he saw Angelica. Then he saw Killington enter. "So, y'all son-whatevers can talk," he put his hand on Angelica's face and leaned into her ear, "When you're mine, can you call me daddy?" He then move his hand down to her chest.
Punchy snapped back and opened his eyes. "Mewtwo! Fatty touched Angelica in the safe! I think he's attracted to her!"
"I know, he's what you call a furry, and Angelica is just his type."
Punchy lost control. "You knew about this! And you just offered her to him?!"
"It was the only way he'd consider betting the Scizor."
Punchy leapt towards him, but his whole body froze. "Attacking me won't save Angelica now! Concentrate your anger. Think of Killington. If you win this fight one of his champions is defeated, the other he loses. He'd be ruined! Do you hate this man? Use that hate!"He let Punchy go. "Now sit back down and close your eyes again."
Punchy did, he thought about Killington and Angelica again, hoping he could see what the twisted sack of shit would do to her this time.
No matter how much he focused his thoughts, no vision appeared. He kept thinking about how much he hated Killington, and Mewtwo for putting Angelica in that situation. He was angry. He thought about what he would do to Killington if he had the chance.
Then, he saw the safe again. Killington had left and the safe was closed again. Angelica was crying, "Punchy, please win this."
I will.
Punchy continued to think about what made him angry; Layla, Magi-Chan, Mayor Chandler, until a knock on the door interrupted him. Mewtwo put on his sunglasses and opened the door.
"Ten minutes Mr. Cornell."
"Thank you." Mewtwo closed the door. "Punchy it's time."
They were led down a long narrow hallway by a female employee. "Have you ever fought here before?"
Punchy said, "No."
"The rules are simple, once you enter the ring will rise 10 feet off the ground. If you become unconscious or fall off, you lose." They approached huge steel double doors, "Here we are. Mr. Cornell, you're pokémon can enter here, you will come with me to the balcony."
Punchy opened the doors and walked into the ring. The crowd around him was silent. They had never seen something like him before. Punchy looked up, behind him Mewtwo was looking down at him in a balcony. In front of him was Killington. Killington smiled a threw the gold pokéball into the ring. It bounced and opened up in a blinding white light. An oddish appeared, and the crowd let out a huge roar.
Oddish. A fucking oddish. Punchy laughed.
"THE FIGHT BEGINS IN THREE...TWO...ONE!"
Punchy ran towards the oddish in the middle. The oddish lowered it's body and slammed into Punchy's chest. Punchy went flying towards the edge, he managed to grab the edge and climb back up.
Shit, he's a strong little fucker.
The oddish jumped in the air and extended it's foot. When it came back down it kicked Punchy in the head. Everything became blurry.
No, I can't lose this. Punchy tried to punch the oddish's face, but he missed. The oddish quickly went behind him and kicked the back of his knees, he fell on his stomach and the oddish began jumping on his back. Punchy had never been in so much pain his entire life.
Angelica... He managed to roll while the oddish was in the air and got back on his feet. Once again the oddish slammed it's body into him and he went sliding towards the edge. He managed to stop himself form getting too close. The oddish ran to him an kicked him straight into the air. He saw Killington whisper into a employee's ear and give her a wad of cash. When Punchy landed the oddish began jumping on him again. Punchy's body became numb and his eye's never left Killington. The employee he whispered to came back, she had the back board holding Angelica with her. Killington put the board at the end of the balcony so Angelica could see Punchy lose the fight. The oddish was still jumping up and down, a loud crack was heard. Punchy screamed, that time it hurt. He saw Killington put his hands on Angelica's shoulders.
Then he kissed her.
Angelica tried to move back but the employee held the board in place. As he kissed her he moved his hand to the back of her head, a if he was the one holding her in place.
You son on a bitch!
Punchy finally felt the anger physically inside of him. Everything turned shades of red, he could feel his fur getting heavier and his quills getting longer. His skin had turned silver and was hard as steel. The spikes on his hands grew longer. The oddish landed on him and gave out a cry of pain and fell off him. When Punchy stood back up, silver wings emerged from his back. Around him was a blood red aura and his eyes were solid black.
The oddish was still crying, rolling on it's back. "Oh, I'm sorry, did you hurt your widdle leg from FUCKING JUMPING ON ME." Punchy picked up the oddish and threw it up in the air. It came down in front of his feet and he stepped on it. It screamed. Punchy picked it up by it's leaves and flew near Killington. "HEY ASSHOLE!", Killington was too busy with Angelica to see Punchy transform, but he realized at that moment what had happened. Punchy held the oddish to his face, it was kicking and screaming, "You...lose." He threw the oddish down to the ground outside of the ring, it cried as it hit the floor. "Angelica, are you ok?"
Angelica smiled, "I am now."
Punchy flew back into the ring, he felt his wings were shrinking back into him. Soon, he was back to normal, but the pain returned. Everything began turning dark, the last thing Punchy heard was the crowd cheering his name. He passed out.
He woke up in a feather bed. The sheets were a clean white, the walls were white, a wooded cross hung over the bed.
"Wha?"
"You're finally awake," Angelica was kneeling by his bedside, "You're at the church. After the match Killington gave up me and the Scizor like he said he would. Mewtwo teleported us here and he and the Scizor are on their way to Wild's. You did it Punchy."
"What happened to me?"
"Mewtwo said you had your final form, like when Rosey turns into the Incredible Lioness or when Sonichu turns ultra. It was pretty amazing, I never thought I'd see you fly. You had wings like a falcon."
"Heh, Falcon Punchy. I like the sound of that."
"And don't worry about Killington. I made sure he never touches me again." Angelica smiles an almost evil smile. "Get some rest Punchy, we had a long day." Angelica left the room.
Punchy smiled to himself and closed his eyes, for the first time in a long while, he wasn't angry. He felt light headed, almost as if he was fading away. I guess it's time. He didn't seemed bothered that he was disappearing. All in all, I had a pretty good life.
A breeze came in from the window and blew the sheets off an empty bed.
Next week will be two chapters again, we'll check in on Bubbles and go back to sunstone island with Sonichu
Falcon Punchy. Yes, I went there. Don't judge me!
More importantly, Punchy is gone along with Magi-Chan. Blake has transformed back into a Pikachu. I'm about half way done with this story. After Bubble's and Sonichus chapters , I'll do more ferry fluff with Layla, Reginald, and Megagi. To the 7 or so people still reading this I say thanks for reading. I have the ending planned and I don't want to drag this story out for too long. This is probably the darkest and most disturbing chapter (no more furries, promise) as I respect the rules of the Sonichu board. Other than that, I'm the kind of person who finishes what they start, so Obscurity will be completed.
 
I've really enjoyed following this. Don't get discouraged if the number of readers or responders seems a bit low. These boards have a lot of very good artists and authors (and I count you among these), but it seems that visual media attracts a bigger audience here than the written word.
That's just how it is, I guess, and it's certainly not because there's no good fanfiction being produced.
Anyway, I'm glad you're going to finish this. I want to see how it ends, and I know I'm not the only one who does.
 
What am I going to do? Bubbles gave her Pikachu husband a plate of berries to eat.
"Pika!" Blake seemed happy considering what had happened to him. He began happily munching on the berries.
He's not my husband, he's my pet.
Bubbles heard a knock on the door, she looked through her peephole, it was Angelica and she was crying.
Bubbles opened the door, "Angelica! What's wrong?"
"Punchy's gone. He was sleeping in my bed and when I went to check on him he was gone. He wouldn't leave without telling me, he just wasn't there anymore."
"It's ok Ange, Sonichu will fix everything. Punchy and Magi-Chan will come back I just know it. Don't lose hope." Angelica wiped her eyes and stopped crying. "Thanks Bubbles."
Why was Punchy in your bed? "Ange, I have a problem too. Look at Blake."
"God help us, he's a pikachu again," Blake looked at Angelica and waved with a happy sounding "Chu!"
"What am I going to do with him, if I go he's free game to anyone."
"What about Kel?"
"What do you mean?"
"Kel lives in the woods, far from the city. If she takes Blake he'll be out of sight for just about anyone."
"That's right! I didn't even think about Kel! And she's with Naitsirhc, he used to own Blake! I'm sure he'll take him back! Ange, will you fly me to her cabin?"
"Of course, when do you want to go?"
"Right now!" Bubbles grabbed Blake, he started sparking and screaming. She sighed, "Or when Blake finishes his berries."
"Pikachu!"
"Yes, we won't leave until all your berries are gone."
"Pika! Pi!"
My husband of six years.
"Let's let Blake finish his food in peace. Let's take a step outside, shall we?"
"Uh, sure."
The two rosechus stepped outside. Angelica spread her wings out and looked down.
"Bubbles, I don't think Sonichu is going to destroy the medallion."
"Hah, w-what are you talking about. He's SONICHU! He can do anything."
"Stop lying to yourself. You're a terrible liar."
"What happened to your so-called faith?"
Angelica slapped her in the face, Bubbles tried to hit her back but she flew up 6 feet in the air.
"MY FAITH?!? I prayed every day! I prayed every night! For what? It's not like I'm going to heaven. I mean, if there was a God--"
"Angelica! Don't talk like that."
"Are you fucking serious?! We have no soul, there's no afterlife. We have no God! Our creator is Chris, and he clearly doesn't seem to care because if he did, the medallion would be destroyed a I'd be with Punchy right now!"
"…Reginald."
"What?"
"You'd be with Reginald."
"Yes, that's what I said."
"You said Punchy."
Angelica came back to the ground. "You're right. I would be with Reginald. Mayor Chandler created Reginald too. He created him just for me, but now I realize I just didn't care. Reginald was a jerk. Without us knowing we'd disappear, I'd be at the church right now, making lunch for… Reginald." Her wings drooped down, almost as if they were sad, "I miss Punchy! But the only reason I care this much is because I knew what was going to happen.

I'm sorry for hitting you"
"It's ok, you were upset, we all are."
"Pi!!" Blake stepped outside, berry juice around his mouth.
"Is my Blakey-boo ready to go?"
"Chu!!"
"Angelica, will you still take us to Kel's?"
"Of course."
Bubbles held onto Blake and Angelica held onto Bubbles. Nobody said a word the entire trip, other than the occasional "Pika!"
"We're here."
Kel's cabin was modest. It was surrounded by tall trees with lush foliage. Outside Naitsirhc was chopping logs.
When Bubbles last saw Naitsirhc he was the evil Reldnahc Ha-Taque. She didn't know much about him, what she did know mostly came from Blake's stories.
After he was defeated by Mayor Chandler, Naitsirhc became a socially adjusted heterosexual man. He had begun working full time at one of CWCville's soup hotels, once a week he would go to the children's hospital and play guitar for the kids. He had organized a donation fund for Asperger's research. He had been living with Kel, now his fiancée, for 4 years.
"Pikachu Pika Pi Pika Pi" Blake jumped out of Bubble's arms and ran to his former master.
"Woah, hey there little guy! I've never seen a black pikachu before." Blake hugged Naitsirhc, he laughed and started scratching behind his ears. "I used to have a sonichu with the exact same coloring."
"Nait, that pikachu IS Blake."
Naitsirhc looked at Bubbles, "I don't quite understand, all I see is a black pikachu," he held up Blake. "Are you really Black Sonichu, my old partner?"
"Pik!" Blake bobbed his tiny head up and down.
"Oh my God you are! This is great! Kellie! Come outside and see this!"
Kel came outside, she was wearing an apron over her light blue t-shirt and jeans. "What is it?"
"Look! It's Black Sonichu! Only he's a black pikachu. He came to visit me after all these years!"
"Wow, that's great Nait!…But why is he a pikachu?"
"I…I don't know. Do you know?"
"Pika."
Angelica stepped towards Nairsirhc, "If you let us in we can explain everything."
"I think we can manage that. Kellie, do we have enough food for a dinner for four tonight?"
"Yeah, it's a good thing I went to the city yesterday."
Inside the cabin, Kel had begun making a large pot of stew in the kitchen, while Bubbles, Angelica, and Naitsirhc were in the living room. Blake was sleeping by Naitsirhc's feet.
"So what is happening to you guys?"
"Magi-Chan told us the chaotic emerald rainbow's powers were only temporary. He told me Blake would revert back to a pikachu because he was cloned from Sonichu, who will also revert back. The rest of us were created entirely by the rainbows power so we will cease to be."
"Magi-Chan and Punchy are already gone."
"Yes, and soon all the sonichus in the city will be gone too. Which is why we're here, I'm worried about Blake. How often do you see a black pikachu? I don't want my husband to be in some PokéCircus or.…"
Bubbles realized at that moment. His father is the leader of Team Rocket!"
Nairsirhc must have sensed what was wrong, "Don't worry Bubbles, I won't give Blake to my father. He's in prison, you know? My brother sentenced him to life for trying to steal Rosechu."
"That's good to hear. The reason we came here was to see of Blake can live with you guys, away from the city."
"Of course, Blake can stay here. He'll be safe here, I promise you."
"There's something else. Blake…might change back. Magi-Chan told us there was a way to make the rainbow's effect permanent."
"How?"
"If Mayor Chandler's medallion is destroyed, none of this will happen. Blake will change back into a Sonichu and Magi-Chan will come back."
"Punchy too."
Naitsirhc looked down at Blake and sighed. "I don't think that's going to happen. I'm sorry to be this honest, but my brother has a thing for material possessions. He won't give up something that's his, even if you carefully tell him it will save the city. I'm sorry Bubbles, he just doesn't care."
I beginning to think that. "I really hope you're wrong."
"I hope so too, but I'm not. He's my brother, I know him better than anyone."
"I---argh." Bubbles fell out of her chair. She became faint, everything became darker.
Oh no, not now! Please! Not now!
Angelica held her up, "Bubbles!"
"An…geli…ca, t-t-thank you."
Blake woke up at the sound of Bubbles falling."Pika! Pika! Pika!"
Bubbles voice was getting weaker, "It's ok, Blake. I…love…you."
Naitsirhc got up, "Kel! Call the pokécenter!"
"No, that won't help. I'm just glad I got Blake here before I…"
Bubbles was gone.

Bye bye Bubbles! Her two chapters were the hardest chapters to write by far. My reasoning? Bubbles is just an irredeemable character, I couldn't fix her because she was just too bland and boring. You probably noticed she had almost no inner thoughts and her chapters were short. At this point in writing I kinda wanted to wrap up her story because writing more chapters would have become a chore for me. If you're a fan of Bubbles, I'm sorry. If you had to guess who my favorite character was, you'd probably pick Angelica and you'd be right. What attracted me to Angelica was simple. Her faith. As I stated in my note from the author a while back, in this story we're dealing with the idea that there will be no existence after "death." This is a big deal to a devout Catholic like Angelica. She's now questioning her faith. She's realized the man she married (or was living with? It's implied but not shown in Sonichu) she doesn't really care about and the man she started having feelings for is now gone. Her and Punchy are going through big changes while Bubbles and Magi-Chan basically stayed the same. Bubbles became a little pessimistic, but that's really it.
In the future expect more from Angelica.Thanks again for reading.
-Pikonic

"Let's be quick, there are going to be more bots, and soon."
Sonichu, Rosechu, and Allison continued their journey through the jungle. Sonichu tried to keep a clear head, but he was still angry over what happened.
I swear to God Meg-Chan. One day I'll find you again...
"Ally, where are we?"
"We must be half way to the volcano by now, just keep going in the same direction that the moss grows on the trees and we'll be at the volcano."
Rosey, I'm sorry you have to do this.
"It's ok Rosey, just keep on walking and we'll be there soon."
"That's what Ally JUST said."
She's tired, that's all. She gets a little bitchy when she's tired.
The jungle was dense. A thick fog covered their legs. The air was so thick Sonichu thought he could bite into it. Scratches covered his legs and Rosechu and Allison's tights were shredded from the knees down.
Just keep going. Sonichu clenched the handle of the briefcase. He began to think about his father. Why didn't you just give me the medallion? Why was it so important to you? You didn't care until I wanted to take it away. You hadn't used it in 4 years, I found it under a pile of garbage. Do we not matter to you? Is an object more important that dozens of us? Maybe you just didn't understand the gravity of the situation. Did you even listen to me?
"Look! Sonichu, Rosechu! We found it!"
Allison pointed her finger forward to a massive volcano. It was going to be a long steep climb, but the summit was open, smoke was rising from it.
We did it.
A loud crash was heard behind them. There was a pizza bot behind Allison, it grabbed her before she had the chance to see it. She let out a gasp.
"Allison!"
She tried to free herself, but the grip on the pizza bot was too strong. Arms held behind her back, she screamed, "GO!"
As awful as they felt leaving Allison to be caught, Sonichu and Rosechu raced up the volcano.
They were on all fours climbing the steep slope as quickly as they can.
BEEP! "Allison Amber has been caught! I need two more to catch Sonichu and Rosechu"
"Copy that!"

Just keep climbing. Sonichu heard a loud buzzing sound and Allison screaming. She had been tasered. Just keep climbing!
Rosechu lost her footing, she began to roll down the slope.
"SONICHU!"
No! I'd rather be a pikachu than a widow! He jumped to where Rosechu was going to be and grabbed her hand, careful that his feet were securely on the rocks.
Rosechu stabbed the hand holding the briefcase with her tail. Sonichu yelped in pain as his hand opened. The briefcase went bouncing down the volcano's side, then into the dense forest.
Where is it?
"Sorry Sweetbolt," Rosechu pulled her tail out of Sonichu's hand, "I'm afraid I have other plans."
He punched her in the face, all the time they were together Sonichu never thought he'd strike her. He once shocked Punchy with a thunderbolt for smacking Lalya, but that didn't seem to matter. He scrambled down the slope.
I can still find it. Rosechu can't stop me!
Rosechu managed to catch up to him and grab his tail, "Ha! Where you going heart sweet? I want you," she threw him up closer to the top, "up here, it'll be easier for the bots to spot us on the slope than in the jungle."
Sonichu tried to get past her, she threw him again. He tried again, she kicked him in the face. She was standing in front of him, "Oh look, we've been caught. I guess we failed." Her voice was dripping with sarcasm. Sonichu looked up and saw two pizza bots flying down towards them.
He pushed Rosechu to the side and began dissenting the mountain again. He felt a sharp sting in his neck. He felt around and found a dart.
No. No. Nononononono. Everything went dark.
He woke up inside a large steel room, everything was shaking around. A truck. Going one way to Mayor Chandler.
He was alone, Allison and Rosechu were probably in different trucks, just in case something happened to one of the trucks. Catching one fugitive is easier than three.
He failed, he lost the medallion and he was on his way to face trial. None of that seemed to matter. All he cared about was how angry he was at his wife.
Next week we see how Reginald's doing
Short but sweet. Sonichu has figured out Rosechu's intentions, so it's not a secret anymore. Other than that it's pretty straight foward. Thanks for reading
-Pikonic
 
Oh wow this is getting really good! Motivations are starting to reveal themselves!
 
So I just read it all. Deep and dark stuff, loving it. I wonder what other plot references we'll see besides LoTR.
Sorry if I'm nitpicking, but Layla's name is constantly spelled wrong.
 
So I just read it all. Deep and dark stuff, loving it. I wonder what other plot references we'll see besides LoTR.
Sorry if I'm nitpicking, but Layla's name is constantly spelled wrong.
Damn, thanks for pointing that out, I'll probably start editing those later this week.
 
I've been keeping up with this story ever since the prologue, and I really like it so far. Punchy's chapter and Rosechu's second chapter were probably the most compelling of the bunch, but all in all it's really good so far. I do get a bit confused at who's talking from time to time but that's more my fault than it is yours since I know you deliberately feel like indicating who's saying what from their personalities and the words they choose rather than "said ____" or "____ explained" I guess I'm just too used to that style of writing at this point. It doesn't get that confusing too often though. (The hardest time I probably had with it was when Angelica and Bubbles met with Naitsirhc and Kel.)

But yeah, this is actually really compelling so far. I really love the Lord of the Rings reference and I love the distinct personalities you gave to each character. Every time I see one of them fade away I was like "Aww dang...at least they went out accomplishing something and feeling fulfilled because of it." like with Punchy or "NO WAIT, IT CAN'T BE OVER FOR THEM! COME BACK! NOOOOOOOOO!" like with Blake and surprisingly Bubbles too, I know you said she irredeemable as well as the hardest to write for, but I really felt like you did an excellent job with what very little was originally there, and I really enjoyed her interactions with Blake in this story even when he was just a Pikachu.

You're doing a really fantastic job with this overall and I'm always excited to see another chapter of this story.
 
Hope all you Americans enjoy your Independence Day (legal holiday.)
I will be taking the entire month off to----lol, I just read the latest Facebook status.
Reginald visited the captain in her cabin. "Hey Megagi, how are we on terms of our course."
"We should be at Parodyse dock by mourning. Everything seemed to go well. Everyone is in high spirits, considering they were forced to move."
Not everyone."Layla missed dinner again. I got her to eat two nights ago. I tried to get her to eat again but she won't let me in. It's like she wants to starve."
"If the sheep bitch wants to starve, let her."
"Megagi!"
"What? I have almost 500 on this ship, I HAD my boyfriend here too. We were gonna live at my old place on Parodyse together. But no, he had to give up his spot to fucking crybaby Layla. He should of stayed on the ship, if dumbass wanted to stay, not my problem."
"Bionic wanted to help the city. The CWCville police won't be enough once the sonichus disappear and the people panic."
"Fuck the CWCville police. Fuck the city. Fuck the mayor."
"I can't believe I'm hearing this!"
"Why? CWCville's a shithole run by a shithead. What kind of mayor puts almost all his security in 6 individuals? What do you think will happen when they disappear? He'll shit himself and cry and beg for money. 'I NEED the money for a bigger police force.' All it's gonna take is one person with a brain to ask about their tax dollars. If they find out about his Legos, Patti-Chan's salary to hang out with him, and his PSN, that's what's gonna make them riot. Fat for brains had the chance to make a better city but he didn't. And in the end, he has nobody to blame but himself. So, why should Bionic or I care?"
"The humans at CWCville."
"Name one you care about."
"…There's Miss Jackarass."
"Your teacher for one semester? Reggie, you're fucking grasping at straws."
"Ivy."
"Dead."
"Mr. Mays."
"Dead."
"Nicole Spicer."
"Moved away years ago. Are you seriously naming any human that pops in your head. You don't give a shit. Admit it. I mean, Ivy? You didn't know she died almost 6 years ago?"
Holy shit."Ok, you're right, I can't name a human I care about."
"Yeah, but you care about your sheep bitch. Sounds like she don't give a fluffy fuck about you though." Megagi showed Reginald the door, "Excuse me, I have work to do."
Reginald left Megagi's cabin and headed to his own. To his surprise, Layla had left her room and was waiting for him outside his. She was holding something in a black satin bag.
"I-I I wanted to talk to you, I'm sorry I refused to let you in last night."
"It's fine, yeah, you wanna come in?"
Reginald opened his door and Layla followed him in. She sat on a stool in a corner and placed her bag carefully by her feet.
"I got to thinking today. I don't want to be miserable anymore. This is what life has given me. It's not what I want, but it's what I have. This is like, a new start for me."
"It's gonna be a new start for all of us."
Layla smiled and opened her bag, she pulled out two flute glasses and a bottle of champagne. "I snuck into Megagi's room during one of her shifts, she's got about a hundred of these, I think it's for when we land. I think we should make an early toast."
Reginald laughed quietly, "Why not? I'm sure Megagi won't miss one bottle."
Layla popped the cork, poured a glass, and gave it to him. She poured a gass for herself and raised it up.
"To a new life."
"To a new life."
After a few more glasses of champagne, Layla was getting ready to head back to her room.
"I should get going, I'd hate for Drill Sargent La Skunk to find me this late at night." She giggled, "I'll see you tomorrow."
"Yeah." Layla left an Reginald got ready for bed. It was a huge relief, Layla was beginning to be her old self again, but he couldn't help but think about what Megagi had said.
"You don't give a shit. Admit it."
Was there really anyone in CWCville I cared about? Did any of them care about me?

Reginald decided not to dwell on his old life an went to sleep.
 
Here's an excerpt from Chapter 12, to be fully released Thursday
Two armed officers entered and pointed their pistols at him. "Arms up!"
Sonichu raised his arms and one officer ran to him, in one motion he grabbed his arms and put them behind his back. Sonichu could feel handcuffs. He was escorted out of the truck. The sunlight was blinding at first, but then he could see the humans of CWCville looking at him, yelling at him.
"TRAITOR!", "THEIF!", "COCKSUCKER!", "ABOMINATION!," "BACKSTABBER!"
The people of CWCville. Sonichu was led into the mall. Inside, the shouting continued.
"WHY?", "I LOOKED UP TO YOU!", "I NAMED MY SON AFTER YOU!"
"TRAITOR!"
"TRAITOR!"
"TRAITOR!"
"JULAY!"
 
Chapter 12 (Sonichu)
The truck slammed on the breaks and Sonichu went face first onto the floor. He slid towards the front of the trailer and slammed his back into the wall. On the other side, the door began to open. Two armed officers entered and pointed their pistols at him. "Arms up!"
Sonichu raised his arms and one officer ran to him, in one motion he grabbed his arms and put them behind his back. Sonichu could feel handcuffs. He was escorted out of the truck. The sunlight was blinding at first, but then he could see the humans of CWCville looking at him, yelling at him.
"TRAITOR!", "THEIF!", "COCKSUCKER!", "ABOMINATION!," "BACKSTABBER!"
The people of CWCville. Sonichu was led into the mall. Inside, the shouting continued.
"WHY?", "I LOOKED UP TO YOU!", "I NAMED MY SON AFTER YOU!"
"TRAITOR!"
"TRAITOR!"
"TRAITOR!"
"JULAY!"
Once they were in the elevator, the yelling stopped. Sonichu thought they'd go up to the mayor, instead they went down.
I'm going straight to a cell.
Finally, one of the police spoke. "Your wife begged to see you one more time, the mayor decided this was fair enough. You'll be in one of the interrogation rooms before placed in your own cells."
"Thank you sir."
The elevator opened and Sonichu was led to the room with his wife.
"You have 10 minutes." The police closed the door behind them.
Ten minutes, I need 10 years!"
"Sweetbolt?"
"I can't even believe you can call me that! They called me traitor but the only traitor is you! Tell me Rosechu, why did you do it?"
She spoke sweetly, "Stealing is wrong."
Fuck you."Don't play sweet on me! Why did you sabotage me? We're going to become pikachus! Don't you give a shit about that?!"
"You're"
"What?"
"You're going to become a pikachu. I will be a raichu."
"Are you saying…you want to be a raichu."
"Wow, you figured it out! You're so smart Sweetbolt! But it's not the raichu I want to be, though being worth a damn again will be nice, but it's the part of me that was male I want back!"
"I…what?"
"I was born a male, I was happy being male. Then that fucking rainbow hit me. I became this pink shit. I became a female. I'm a male Raichu! Every time you touched me, every time you ENTERED me, I prayed and I wished that I could become a male again. Making love to you was worse than death. Giving birth was worse than death. Losing my power, depending on you for everything, and letting you put your cock where ever you wanted…but then, Magi-Chan told us we'd go back to what we once were." She started laughing, "My powers, my penis, my pride. Everything I loved and lost, back. I'd never have to lie on my back for you again. No more pretending to love you, no more pretending I like your miserable excuse for a penis. I'd be free!"
"What about the others?"
"Fuck them!"
You fucking… He tackled her. She tried to fight back but he pinned her down. She began screaming for help. He grabbed her dress and pulled it up. "miserable excuse for a penis" at least I have one. He tried to rip off her underwear, but he was still in handcuffs.
"Get off her!" The cop had his gun pointed at his head. He put his hands up and stepped away from Rosechu.
She began crying, "He tried to rape me, he…made me do it! He wanted to steal the medallion … and start a rebellion against Mayor Chandler. I begged him not to. Please, cut me a break. Sonichu made me do everything. I was so scared." She cried even harder.
Nice try bitch. I don't think cops are that stupid.
Another cop came in and helped her up, "It's ok Rosechu, we'll see if we can get your charges dropped."
A joke, this is a joke.
"Take Sonichu to his cell!"
A joke.
"Rosechu was the mastermind! Not me! We weren't supposed to get caught. You have to believe me! She's just trying to roll on me to get away with it! She'll go back to sunstone!"
"We found out it was Rosechu who alerted the pizza bots. So tell me, if she's the mastermind why did she sabotage herself? Hmmmm? Nothing? Get this lying sack of shit out of here. He'll face the mayor tomorrow. Sonichu was taken to his cell. The guard sat in a chair outside. There were no bars, just a glass pane with a small door big enough to allow a plate of food in. Sonichu tried to shock the guard, but the electricity couldn't get past the glass. The guard smiled at his attempts.
"Ain't you at all interested about your pretty little partner Allison?"
"Where is she?"
"Oh, Allison already had her trial." Something told Sonichu it wasn't real a trial. "Guilty X4, she was sentenced to rehabilitation."
Rehabilitation, my ass. Allison was a successful Hollywood actress. During an interview she made a joke about Chris while she was in CWCville and he didn't find it funny. Chris invited her back to CWCville for a charity banquet. There was no banquet and Allison was sent to rehabilitation for the first time. Three days later, she had announced she was staying in CWCville, to be by Chris's side.
Sonichu sat in the corner of his cell, part of him was angry at Rosechu, but part of him was angry at himself. He dragged Allison into this, and only God knew how awful rehabilitation was for her, and now she has to do it again.
What's next, she begs Chandler to marry her and have kids?
"Ain't talking huh? We'll fuck you anyway traitor." The guard pulled a folded newspaper out of his jacket and started reading.
Maybe it's not too late for me, when they let me out to see Chandler, I'll quick attack away and get back to sunstone. How? …Angelica will fly me. I can still destroy the medallion. When Magi-Chan comes back he'll convince everyone Rosechu was the traitor, not me. Easy. I can still do this.
Sonichu sat quietly in his cell, he began to grow tired.
Is it nighttime? He couldn't tell since his cell was underground. I guess it isn't important now.Sonichu went to sleep. He needed his rest, tomorrow was a big day.
 
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Don't make me pull up Sonichu issue 8 (was it 8, pretty sure it was 8)
Shit, you're right. But let me remind you that they're Electric Hedgehog Pokémon, so they've transformed and were given genitals. The only reason I brought that up is because it would be AMAZING to Rosechu being shocked to see she
no dick
 
Chapter 13 (Megagi)
I'm home.
Megagi stepped off the ferry at Parodyse Dock. Around her, everyone seemed happy to be on land again. The Parodyse Police were hard at work, collecting names of their newest residents.
"Welcome home Megi!"
"Caino Howlhound! Good to see you again. I see you guys are taking care of our new residents."
"Sure are sir! Bionic sent us a list of all the passengers. We managed to clear a large enough section of forest to start building their new homes, for now they all have rooms at Parodyse Inn. Patty Chan has already agreed to help everyone find jobs and assimilate to life on the island. She said it's gonna be hard, many of these people never worked a day in their lives."
"They'll get used to it, anywhere is better than being in CWCville right now."
Bionic, why did you agree to stay, is CWCville worth saving?
"Is something wrong Megi?"
"No, it's just I'm tired, I'd like to return to my old home."
"Of course, you've done enough sir. I think you deserve a rest. Me, I'm thinking of trying to talk to that lovely flaffay over there."
Megagi looked over at Layla, she was talking to one of the officers. Further back, Reginald was talking to Lilith, they were smiling and laughing away.
I have done enough.
Megagi had returned to her old house, a modest one-story just outside Parodyse City. It had been a while since she was there but the maids kept it nice for her. When she moved in with Bionic she contemplated selling it, she never got around to it, and she thought having two homes wasn't a bad idea.
Just in case.
She dismissed the maids for the day and lied down on her old, but comfortable leather couch.
I did my job, everyone is safe, everyone is happy.
Except me.

She missed Bionic, she wished he had stayed on the ferry with her. She was mad at Layla, but deep down she knew it was Bionic's choice.
She heard a knock on the door.
Bionic? She ran over to the door and opened it, a big smile on her face.
It wasn't Bionic, but it was still someone she was happy to see.
"Meg-Chan!" It had been years since Megagi and Meg-Chan had seen each other, after Meg-Chan was falsely accused of treason, she told Megagi to lie about her to Chandler so she could stay, Meg-Chan had been on the run for years, and Megagi had stayed in CWCville. Megagi felt awful for the things she had said, but she and Meg-Chan knew it was what had to be done to keep Megagi safe.
"Hey Spunky! I've missed you, may I come in?"
"Of course, you're always welcome in Parodyse!"
Meg-Chan had taken a seat next to the couch, Megagi took a seat on her old couch, "What brings you here?"
"I could ask you the same question. Chandler called for Sonichu's arrest, you filled a ferry with passengers to come here, and the dock in CWCville is destroyed. This was a one-way trip. So I have to ask, what the hell is going on in CWCville?"
"I don't know much, the sonichus are going to vanish."
"What?"
"That's what Angelica told me, something about the rainbows power was beginning to wear out."
"What about Rosechu?"
"The rainbow changed her, it didn't create her. I assume she'll just change back."
Why do you care about Rosechu?
"We got as many of the non-chu creatures that a ferry could carry hhere, Magi-Chan thinks once CWCville's finest go, the city will lose it's shit."
"Uh-huh. I think I get it, where's Bionic?"
Megagi began to cry. As tough as she was, knowing Bionic would probably die in the streets to angry rioters was too much for her.
"Spunky, if there's anything I can--"
"Will you go back to CWCville and help Bionic?"
Meg-Chan didn't say anything.
It's too much for me to ask.
Then she nodded.
"I think I can stop the riots in CWCville. If not, I promise you I'll protect Bionic." She hugged Megagi.
Megagi pulled back, confused, "How will you save CWCville?"
"Don't worry about that. I have my job and you have yours. You need to help all the new residents of this island start a new life. Leave hell on earth to me."
"I...thank you, and be careful."
"I've lasted this long on the run, I'll be fine." Meg-Chan transformed into Sailor Megtune
She went outside, strummed her guitar, and was gone.

Also my layout for the fan jam, made with duct tape.
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