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In high school I wrote a 25 chapter story about a royal daughter who fell in love with a young working class man. She has an affair with the man when she's arranged to marry an older man and gets pregnant while her father jails the guy and accuses him of raping his daughter. The boyfriend spends time in prison being sentenced to death while the daughter runs away to a friend of her boyfriend and hides out until she gives birth.
On the day of the execution a riot happens and the king gets overthrown.

I had a thing for historical love stories back then.
 
Oscar Wildean said:
In high school I wrote a 25 chapter story about a royal daughter who fell in love with a young working class man. She has an affair with the man when she's arranged to marry an older man and gets pregnant while her father jails the guy and accuses him of raping his daughter. The boyfriend spends time in prison being sentenced to death while the daughter runs away to a friend of her boyfriend and hides out until she gives birth.
On the day of the execution a riot happens and the king gets overthrown.

I had a thing for historical love stories back then.
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do you still have a copy of this story? I'd be interested in reading it.
 
CressAlbane said:
do you still have a copy of this story? I'd be interested in reading it.
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I wish I did. I don't have the notebook I had from that time. Out of all the stories I wrote I wish I had kept that one. I've got a journal somewhere in my home that's written from the daughter's perspective a few years before my original story took place. That's all that remains of my story and none of it was written online.
 
Pretty sure just about all of my OCs are too much of a :powerlevel: for me to name, but while I can't tell if OP was serious about the Pokémon OCs or not, it does remind me of something my brothers and I made up that I've never posted anywhere.

So my brothers and I many years ago had made up a story of a trio of Pokémon middle-schoolers who were childhood friends and were superheroes (or at least thought they were, we like shamelessly ripped off KND, Stupendous Man, and Max Keeble's Big Move and I think a few others). Their main shtick was they "protected" the weak and nerds alike, and by "protect" I mean they were troublemakers fighting against bullies, the student counsel, and the school staff, with the main "bad guy" being the principal they called "The Dictator". Which is funny now because the principal was a Kangaskhan but we didn't really know at the time that Kangaskhan are all female. We each made up superhero catch-phrases for them as well that they'd recite every time they changed into costume in their lockers and jumped out in front of their villain-of-the-week, but I can't remember it anymore. Pretty sure mine was a ripoff of Darkwing Duck's now that I think about it. Either way, it was pretty formulaic with occasional breaks to take a look into their families and such; my character was a Mew and thus an only child, but the others had older siblings (the Squirtle's older brother was a punk who never got along with his parents) with the Charmander character having a baby sister. (Oh yeah, we used our favorite Pokémon at the time as the main characters.)

Later on the main leader of the group fell into the "trappings" of puberty and her growing crush on the transfer student was affecting her superhero duties and relationship with her "comrades". Because girls mature faster than boys and shit. The superhero stuff happened less and less because of it, which should've been a sign we needed to wrap it up but that never crossed our minds. We never did give it a proper ending, anyway, and just ended up falling out of it.

I otherwise don't remember much of the characters, but for some reason the one brother had the Charmander constantly carry around a pet lava rock he named "Lavvie" or however it's spelled, and he was super protective of it. His character was in general just a butt monkey, he was the middle child who was jealous of his baby sister getting all the attention, he was an inventor but his gadgets never worked right, he was the only one of the trio who was being shoved into all the lockers, all that jazz. He was also quite a klutz and would nearly "give it away" he and his friends were superheroes due to his inventions going haywire in the middle of the classroom, but he got away with a lot of stuff because apparently the character was cute out of costume or something. Makes me wonder if my brother was trying to hijack the story to make his character the main protagonist or something lol.
 
Kari Kamiya said:
Pretty sure just about all of my OCs are too much of a :powerlevel: for me to name, but while I can't tell if OP was serious about the Pokémon OCs or not, it does remind me of something my brothers and I made up that I've never posted anywhere.

So my brothers and I many years ago had made up a story of a trio of Pokémon middle-schoolers who were childhood friends and were superheroes (or at least thought they were, we like shamelessly ripped off KND, Stupendous Man, and Max Keeble's Big Move and I think a few others). Their main shtick was they "protected" the weak and nerds alike, and by "protect" I mean they were troublemakers fighting against bullies, the student counsel, and the school staff, with the main "bad guy" being the principal they called "The Dictator". Which is funny now because the principal was a Kangaskhan but we didn't really know at the time that Kangaskhan are all female. We each made up superhero catch-phrases for them as well that they'd recite every time they changed into costume in their lockers and jumped out in front of their villain-of-the-week, but I can't remember it anymore. Pretty sure mine was a ripoff of Darkwing Duck's now that I think about it. Either way, it was pretty formulaic with occasional breaks to take a look into their families and such; my character was a Mew and thus an only child, but the others had older siblings (the Squirtle's older brother was a punk who never got along with his parents) with the Charmander character having a baby sister. (Oh yeah, we used our favorite Pokémon at the time as the main characters.)

Later on the main leader of the group fell into the "trappings" of puberty and her growing crush on the transfer student was affecting her superhero duties and relationship with her "comrades". Because girls mature faster than boys and shit. The superhero stuff happened less and less because of it, which should've been a sign we needed to wrap it up but that never crossed our minds. We never did give it a proper ending, anyway, and just ended up falling out of it.

I otherwise don't remember much of the characters, but for some reason the one brother had the Charmander constantly carry around a pet lava rock he named "Lavvie" or however it's spelled, and he was super protective of it. His character was in general just a butt monkey, he was the middle child who was jealous of his baby sister getting all the attention, he was an inventor but his gadgets never worked right, he was the only one of the trio who was being shoved into all the lockers, all that jazz. He was also quite a klutz and would nearly "give it away" he and his friends were superheroes due to his inventions going haywire in the middle of the classroom, but he got away with a lot of stuff because apparently the character was cute out of costume or something. Makes me wonder if my brother was trying to hijack the story to make his character the main protagonist or something lol.
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I was being serious about the Pokémon OCs, but I can understand wanting to hide your power, considering Pokémon OCs tend to get a bad rap for not being original. That story you and your brothers made seems pretty neat, though.
 
CressAlbane said:
I was being serious about the Pokémon OCs, but I can understand wanting to hide your power, considering Pokémon OCs tend to get a bad rap for not being original. That story you and your brothers made seems pretty neat, though.
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Wasn't just Pokémon OCs for me, but yeah, Pokémon OCs are everywhere lol.

I think in hindsight it wasn't really a bad thing we came up with, pretty sure we were being subversive and meta as fuck without realizing it, but we were just silly little autists who were bored and loved Pokémon way too much for our own good. It was one of the better ones we came up with, we were otherwise just doing really stupid unoriginal "lulz so random" shit with the legendary Pokémon and outright making a fan fic of a Digimon crackfic someone made on FFN years ago that was parodying Darkwing Duck and other stuff called "Adventures of Batpig" or something.

I did make an OC for Calvin & Hobbes when I was a kid, but it's :powerlevel: as well since I've actually told a few people about it whenever we talked about weird old projects we've made in the past. It's also something my mom brings up to me sometimes because she had adored the idea and wished she saved the comic. (I did bring it up somewhere on here in a spoiler tag, though, I'll go get the link and edit it here.)
 
Magos Dominus Hepatia Teklan -

A Genius if somewhat rebellious Magos of the Adeptus Mechanicus, who is interested in mythical old technology's from the Dark age and is willing to perform unsanctioned heresy in the form of unsanctioned experimentation and reverse engineering is currently engaged in the exploration of the Dead Hive World of Genus Atlanta Minoris Sextus, who has only escaped the sanction of the traditionalists amongst her Adepta by staying far away from the Political machinations of the Mechanics, Far away from normally inhabited space, and that when she does return she returns with wonders of the Omnisia long thought lost, with a smattering of skilful allegiances to an Astarties Chapter and Renound Imperial Gurard units who often provide contingents to her explorations.

2nd Company Captain Julias Agrripa Scopius of the Son's of Apolune, a chapter of unusual founding as they where founded after the official end of the 2nd founding but before the 3rd from scattered individuals or squads recovered after the scouring descending from the linage of Dorn. As all sons of Dorn are want to do become builders and creators of engineering fetes he is a superb combat Engineer and Siege defender and more importantly a breaker it is often said of him that he despite being a Granite Cast Praetorian in his fathers image is warm and charismatic figure to those he knows personally. Equipped with a Storm bolter, Chain fist and Servo Harness he is formidable in combat and in his private workshop. He is currently assisting Magos Hepatia in her explorations of the deepest parts of the supposedly dead world of Genus Atlanta Minoris Sextus from the Mutants that exist in the deeper levels so far discovered during the explorations.

Crusade Captain Jon Tellemir Brummagim, of the 43rd Amalthian Dragoons, Hailing from a Recruiting world for the Son's of Apolune who competed in the Chapter trials in his youth and was only rejected due to a heredity genetic issue that would have caused Gene-Seed Rejection Syndrome but fuilling all other physical and mental prerequisites he was rapidly recruited into the Amalthian Military Academy, who is a specialist of Heavy Assault infantry tactics. He is a Friend of Bother Hepatia and Scopius or as close as a standard human can be considered as such. Both he and his men are currently assisting in the exploration of Genus Atlanta Minoris Sextus and are providing exploration assistance and advice regarding artefacts and environments that are not easily well understood by the Astarties or Mechanicus contingents especially when understanding the environments and who are likely to form the core of any settlement efforts should the world be considered suitable and that the local Mutant population can be culled.
 
I drew this a while back based on my friend's ramblings while he went insane from boredom.

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I mean, I don’t really share many of the characters I’ve made because I don’t seem to RP like I did back in high school, not aided by the fact I don’t draw as much as I used to. not really too much to do with any OCs, lately. Any old ones I made could be edgy at times and quite honestly I chock up that to being a fucking teenager. Though oddly enough, some of the ideas I had going into some of the old ones weren’t bad, they were just executed by a hormonal depressed teen.

Dink Smallwood said:
I used to do shitty roleplay as a vampire catgirl maid when I was in middle school. It still makes me cringe just thinking about it..
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You mean you aren’t that irl? Damn, that means I owe a friend two bucks.
 
Ass eating cunt said:
Should I post details or...
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Basically they're Ash but with white fur while wearing the same uniform as Shinobu, with shorts replacing the skirt. The personality would lean more closely to Ash's, but Shinobu's skills and motivation will stand out. What I mean by this is that Ashler(the name of said oc) would be a social outcast who is ingnored by his family and is not very popular at school, but he wanted to prove himself worthy to his father. This is when he found out his father was a contracted killer, this is when he enrolled in the ukaw(United Killers Across the World) and slowly became one of the top ranks. However this inevitably got his father infiltrated and got him killed by the hands of the anti-ukaw. This has made him even more distant (and grumpy). However this tragedy has made him refine his skills to an expert degree
 
I have a character, he's a sailor moon inspired character named Tuzi Yue. Tuzi is a rabbit prince from the moon, he's 50 years old but he looks a lot younger and 5"2. He has a group of legendary warriors named the Rainbow Moonstones. He has albinism and he is a black character who lacks pigment. He is a rabbit. He has a twin identical twin sister named Lishu Yue who used to be part of the Rainbow Moonstones but she is a woman now and the Rainbow Moonstones are all male/male only group. Tuzi however gave her own group to join.
 
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