Redesigning Floraverse - Because PK is a fucking idiot

[RADICALGOBLIN]

Changed some minor things about Ameer's design.

Spoiler: Ameer's Bio

Name: Ameer
Age: 19
Sex: Intersex
Gender: Gendervoid
Likes: Sex, Mirrors, His Friends (for the most part), IHobs, Waffle Houses, Dicks, Rap
Dislikes: The Man, Authority, Emo Country

I actually had some ideas for the story, but i'll see what Bernard or any of the other writers wish to say.

 

[sad cowboy cat]

you guys make me wanna make a flora villain oc but

im just ugly ass jasmaby

dark jasmaby

 

[Bernard Buttfart]

Maybe this is the first ordeal that you guys (and whoever collaborate) need to tackle by using the basics of that tangled mess instead of trying to patch, opening the way to some coherent shit.

I'm thinking the Troupe is a staff of garbage writers that control the world of Floraverse and can change plotlines and characters dramatically on a whim. Maybe they worship the Masked Sun as a God.

Also, here's some backstory for my shitty Florasona:

Spoiler: :autism:

Bernard's childhood sweetheart was a half-Flowercat demon girl with an abusive demon father. She found comfort and solace in escaping her abusive home to hang around Bernard. However, a non-sexualized pair of straight children didn't sit well with the Troupe (as it's an extension of PK), so they retconned the girl and she disappeared without a trace.
Bernard figured her father killed her but after investigating, he found out that nobody remembered her existence at all, even her father. Distraught and alone, Bernard eventually became convinced the girl never existed at all and that he had simply gone insane and hallucinated her. He tried to force her out of his memories, but he never could forget about that sweet missing child.

A few years later, Bernard discovered the girl in a brothel as a screeching, gender-special cumslut, as most retconned Flora characters become. Upon interrogating her, he discovered that she had her memories completely wiped and that she had no idea who he was. Enraged at this treatment of his lover, Bernard swore to find the Troupe and force them to return her to the sweet, genuine girl she used to be.

He developed a powerful depressant substance that turns the recipient into a horrible body-horror monster if they take too large of a dosage, and turned his tail into a syringe to administer it. He wanted to threaten the Troupe with this weapon, and to protect his identity and avoid getting retconned himself, he changed his name to Joytail. Joytail joined the resistance led by Shmoopy to end the retconning and save his lost love.

I made this character as a joke but now I'm legitimately invested in it. Oops

 

[Sedim Entari]

Spoiler: My OC’s bio

Name:LuxGAY haha
Age: 24
Gender: Genderfluid Asexual probably
Likes: sex, beanmouths, shiny things, being 2deep4u, attention
Dislikes: negative feedback, empathy, teenagers

 

[Bernard Buttfart]

Spoiler: Joytail/Bernard's bio

Name: Bernard (formerly), Joytail (currently)
Species: Turf Tiger / Manticore
Pronoun: CIS MALE SCUM REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Birthday: Drath 10
Astrological Sign: Phoenix
Affinity: Poison
Languages: Common
Age: Adult
Place of origin: Dewclaw
Quirks: Has a fetish for severed arms for some reason

Spoiler: Retcon girl's bio

Name: ???
Species: Flowercat Demon
Pronoun: she's a girl, but probably goes by some bullshit neopronoun after being retconned
Birthday: Goath 1
Astrological Sign: Lepus
Affinity: Spirit
Languages: Common, Prattle
Age: Child (pre-retcon), Adult (currently)
Place of origin: Pike
Quirks: Can't remember childhood

 

[RADICALGOBLIN]

I'm thinking the Troupe is a staff of garbage writers that control the world of Floraverse and can change plotlines and characters dramatically on a whim. Maybe they worship the Masked Sun as a God.

Also, here's some backstory for my shitty Florasona:

Spoiler: :autism:

Bernard's childhood sweetheart was a half-Flowercat demon girl with an abusive demon father. She found comfort and solace in escaping her abusive home to hang around Bernard. However, a non-sexualized pair of straight children didn't sit well with the Troupe (as it's an extension of PK), so they retconned the girl and she disappeared without a trace.
Bernard figured her father killed her but after investigating, he found out that nobody remembered her existence at all, even her father. Distraught and alone, Bernard eventually became convinced the girl never existed at all and that he had simply gone insane and hallucinated her. He tried to force her out of his memories, but he never could forget about that sweet missing child.

A few years later, Bernard discovered the girl in a brothel as a screeching, gender-special cumslut, as most retconned Flora characters become. Upon interrogating her, he discovered that she had her memories completely wiped and that she had no idea who he was. Enraged at this treatment of his lover, Bernard swore to find the Troupe and force them to return her to the sweet, genuine girl she used to be.

He developed a powerful depressant substance that turns the recipient into a horrible body-horror monster if they take too large of a dosage, and turned his tail into a syringe to administer it. He wanted to threaten the Troupe with this weapon, and to protect his identity and avoid getting retconned himself, he changed his name to Joytail. Joytail joined the resistance led by Shmoopy to end the retconning and save his lost love.

I made this character as a joke but now I'm legitimately invested in it. Oops

I love both of them and they get all my praise

Now, lemmie spit out my idea for what happens in this world.

Basically, there's a monster in Floraverse that "consumes" you as it states.

http://floraverse.com/comic/seeds-a-mini-story/seeds/chapter-5/269-ch5-p49/

I think we can use this as a main pull for the villains. Whatever bad guys in this universe won, and capture the main characters in this sex craved limbo state of hypnosis. I could make this some allegory for the furry fandom but i'll keep my tounge shut.

Basically, they use this as a way to keep people in line, and incase the main characters into it, using them as drones. Either it can be like, some sort of chip, or a full body suit of the creature's specimen. They can also use it's effects on the mind for Bernard's concept of wiping memories. It's, in a way, the Mementos of the Floraverse.

 

[Bernard Buttfart]

I love both of them and they get all my praise

Now, lemmie spit out my idea for what happens in this world.

Basically, there's a monster in Floraverse that "consumes" you as it states.

http://floraverse.com/comic/seeds-a-mini-story/seeds/chapter-5/269-ch5-p49/

I think we can use this as a main pull for the villains. Whatever bad guys in this universe won, and capture the main characters in this sex craved limbo state of hypnosis. I could make this some allegory for the furry fandom but i'll keep my tounge shut.

Basically, they use this as a way to keep people in line, and incase the main characters into it, using them as drones. Either it can be like, some sort of chip, or a full body suit of the creature's specimen. They can also use it's effects on the mind for Bernard's concept of wiping memories. It's, in a way, the Mementos of the Floraverse.

The Troupe is basically an extension of PK's garbage writing and tendency to change characters and plotlines for no reason. Maybe the Troupe uses these monsters (which are Angels in Flora canon) to facilitate retcons, since they have powers of consumption, reality-warping and mind-bending?

 

[RADICALGOBLIN]

The Troupe is basically an extension of PK's garbage writing and tendency to change characters and plotlines for no reason. Maybe the Troupe uses these monsters (which are Angels in Flora canon) to facilitate retcons, since they have powers of consumption, reality-warping and mind-bending?

Yeah, like that. Kind of like those things in MiB that wipe your memory.

 

[The Great Pancake]

I want to draw a villansona now guys.

 

[RADICALGOBLIN]

I want to draw a villansona now guys.

DO IT

you decide if it ends up in the story / how deep they're roll is though

 

[hambulocetus]

you guys make me wanna make a flora villain oc but

im just ugly ass jasmaby

hope this works

Spoiler: gagsmaby

my florasona's backstory is something along the lines of being 1. ugly and bald 2. ironically being oppressed for being gay (and male aligning i guess, seeing as he's 80% living jello). as for glip-esque kinks, he likes hands. not like paws, but human hands. fuckin weirdo.

 

[sad cowboy cat]

goddamn, buttfart coming in hot with the legit well-written backstory, kinda makes me regret designing a living shitpost based off a reaction image cat meme.

 

[hambulocetus]

we're all Bested By Buttfart at one point or another

 

[RADICALGOBLIN]

Probably last art of Ameer for a bit, since this thread ain't designed for that

I might try to come up with a sadboy backstory like Bernard soon. They all probably meet sad and drunk at this waffle house / iHob anyways.

 

[Bernard Buttfart]

gomen for sadboy backstory everyone

 

[RADICALGOBLIN]

gomen for sadboy backstory everyone

Don't worry, that's a compliment.

Anyway, here's what i came up with.

Spoiler: Ameer's Backstory

Ameer's story started out when they were a young teenager. Unlike a lot of other imps, he was a bit more caring and showed more joy than most of them, obsessed with sex at a young age. The friends he had to find escape from it all, too, succumbed and tried to force him into situations of a nature. With very few caring, and lesser to rely on, he ran away from Hellside. He spent his time homeless or in shelters trying to hold down a job, until he ended up relying on Alcohol and Waffles to give his life meaning. After a while, he realized the society of the Troupe and the religion of the Masked Sun were part to blame for the atrocities committed by his race. He ended up yelling this anger in a heart felt sob-session at his local iHob, where the people who listened to him, who he initially turned away, would be his closed allies.

 

[I'm Just A Human Bean]

I'll go full shitpost mode on this. My super original OC is pretty much copyright-hell sonichu-style shit anyway.

Spoiler: more autism

Name: Lucifer/Haylel, Ijahb (Disguised name)
Age: As old as time
Gender: Intersex but uses male pronouns so he can stay gay.
Species: Angel, or Lion Rabbat Imp
Orientation: Asexual, he is above primitive reproductive urges. Aromantic, except for one dude he really likes.
Likes: The color white, demons, violence
Dislikes: God, demon furries, mediocrity, time loops, sex
Background: Before the world was rewritten and taken over by the demi gods (The Troupe?), God had created his angels, that retain memories of the former world. Lucifer, his strongest angel, was able to stay hidden away and sleep through the many retcons world resets. As the floraverse emerged, Lucifer's body changed form to blend in with his environment, becoming the furry you see now.

Spoiler: boobs

Much to his displeasure, the demons had been rewritten so much that they had lost their true nature, their personalities being nearly indistinguishable from the humans people Lucifer despised. He preferred the demons' more violent, brutish, straight-forward nature.
Lucifer's end goal is the eradication of all furries, or to at least restore them to the former glory of his past demonic army.

Feel free to rewrite this character however you want if you want to include it.

 

[Sedim Entari]

Ok, I feel bad for not putting in much effort with Luxgay. Here’s a slightly more detailed bio.

Spoiler: Absolute Asperger’s

Name: Blake
Gender: Genderfluid (cis female who wants to feel special)
He/him
Orientation: GAAAAAAAAAYYYYYY
Species: mixed, part Bastian
Age: 24
Birthdate: Horth 8
Sign: Corvus
Languages: Common, some Prattle
Affinity: Water
Current Location: Petal
Likes: shiny things, making coin, feeling superior, reading fanfiction, pool noodles
Dislikes: being cheated or criticized, when his pancakes absorb the syrup
Quirk: consent fetish

Backstory: A merchant of some kind. I really don’t know what to do with this character.

 

[Meowthkip]

I was not expecting to have a trailer made with my terrible handwriting, wow.

Anyway, here's some additional info on Shmoopy that I posted in the main thread a while ago.

Spoiler

 

[sad cowboy cat]

shit

Spoiler: bring on the puzzlepieces yeehaw

Blind and with a pathetic excuse for a flower on his head, Triste was born to an impoverished, yet loving family of seven pygmy flowercats living waaaay out in the sticks of owel. Triste is a reserved and taciturn soul, keeping to himself and keeping his ears tuned to his surroundings, helping out folks however he could. Aside from performing odd jobs here and there, or lending a friendly ear to a pal, he was content to spend his days lazing about and listening to his cheesy cowboy radio dramas.

Life was pretty good, if very quiet, until strange disappearances started taking away some of the residents of the town. While he could explain the missing people as just folks up and leaving for a better town, he couldn't explain how very few people in town noticed the disappearances; even straight up forgetting the existence of the villagers, or the occasional nightime screams he picked up on the breeze. For a while, Triste blamed this on maybe eating a funky can of beans what done sit badly in his gut, makin' him think funny, but he was quickly forced to face reality when his own little sister was snatched in the night, kicking and screaming, leaving him in silence.

As his parents had no recollection of ever having a daughter, and his brothers unwilling to play along with his dumb desperado games, Triste took it upon himself to find out the whereabouts of his sister and the rest of the town, travelling to a more populated city to maybe gather information, ending up at a fateful encounter at a terrible breakfast place over stale waffles.

Spoiler: aaa

Name: Triste
Species: Pygmy Flowercat
Pronoun: He's a feller
Birthday: Horth 13
Astrological Sign: Corvus
Affinity: Earth
Languages: Common (kinda)
Age: Adult
Place of origin: owell
Quirks: Likes beans