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Daaaang, both of those are good! I hope to see the full drawing of the gang.
I can draw Ameer slightly better with my new mouse.
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Redesigning Floraverse - Because PK is a fucking idiot
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Daaaang, both of those are good! I hope to see the full drawing of the gang.
I can draw Ameer slightly better with my new mouse.
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Given that my character is basically a flamboyant, six-legged, pink Pekingese with a human butt that farts rainbows and a unicorn horn with a wifi signal, I'm of the camp that people can do whatever the fuck they want.
RIDE, SHMOOPY, RIDE!
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I agree, but I try to write shit that isn't TOO out of character, if that makes sense. I am all for wacky shit. Like, the inside of an archangel being some weird sex dungeon kind of thing. But if it gets too out of hand it can get groan-worthy IMHO.
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I'll decide what's out of hand.
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Back from the grave to try making more sense with the latest page of Flora. Definitely no Mona Lisa.
Definitely could have redone her arm and backed ears better but honestly this is too bad to fix from itself. Entire thing would need to be done over from scratch.
I can see why Glip half asses her designs after a page or two from their introduction - they're all clusterfucks. Had to give up on drawing Papaya because she's so messily designed, especially with the mane and necklace things. Doesn't excuse Glip for being a shit artist though knowing her Pokemon background. The bean mouths and 100 mile stares are definitely something she can fix with no problem but thinking that is
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Definitely could have redone her arm and backed ears better but honestly this is too bad to fix from itself. Entire thing would need to be done over from scratch.
I can see why Glip half asses her designs after a page or two from their introduction - they're all clusterfucks. Had to give up on drawing Papaya because she's so messily designed, especially with the mane and necklace things. Doesn't excuse Glip for being a shit artist though knowing her Pokemon background. The bean mouths and 100 mile stares are definitely something she can fix with no problem but thinking that is
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Sorry if there's a lack of updates, guys! School stuff. I'm halfway done with Wraps' chapter, though.
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Wraps' chapter is now done!
Also, i made this.
Also, i made this.
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I’m still not sure about this design for him. He’s naked because I can’t do outfits.
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wrap's story and art gives me life, hot damn
i gotta contribute to this thread soon, whew
i gotta contribute to this thread soon, whew
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Do it at your own pace! I want to see art of the world we make but obviously I don't wanna end up making some hellish Amazon-esque scenario where you have to pump it out 24/7/8/4/6
Also, here's some of @I'm Just A Human Bean 's chapter.
FYI, his name is Ijhim. His name comes from a mangling of one of the suggestions that Bean gave me while also being based off of an actual class of angel! Fitting, due to this type being the most connected to humans while Ijhim is the only connection to the non-Masked Sun religion in Flora's world.
Sorry if i keep posting in this diddily darn thread, but i made something!
It's an intro to the first session, where we meet Bernard / Joytail.
It's also not at all subtle to it's references.
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Holy fuck ahahaha I love this
Great job man!
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soz for double posting but heres this fucker, was trying to replicate PK’s Itchy Itchy/Broken Toy style. More to come
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soz for double posting but heres this fucker, was trying to replicate PK’s Itchy Itchy/Broken Toy style. More to come
god, you have all this GOOD art, and here i am with all these fucking MS Paint shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@#$%^&*
But this is a really good artstyle tho, legit.
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Don't stop
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Alright.
I do have one idea for the story though, that gets into more sadboy kind of territory. If that's not your thing, then keep scrolling.
I do have one idea for the story though, that gets into more sadboy kind of territory. If that's not your thing, then keep scrolling.
Im gonna keep this vauge in order to avoid spilling my load too quickly.
One of the party members asks Shmoopy, in fear, if they'll live.
After all, he made the contract. He's the god. He should know.
Shmoopy assures them that they'll survive.
The person asking isn't as afraid anymore.
Time passes. More people join the party, and the resistance seems to win.
In the final series of fights against SUNBATHER, a lot of people in the main party die.
One of the people left alive is the person asking about their fate to Shmoopy.
Speak of the devil, he appears.
He lashes out at the god, for lying to him.
But he wasn't lying.
He opens the window curtains, showing a large mob of people.
They're destroying propaganda, fighting cops, and putting E.V. near an oddly Guillotine-ish device.
When Shmoopy said that they would survive, it was never in a physical sense.
They're cause, however, would live on.
One of the party members asks Shmoopy, in fear, if they'll live.
After all, he made the contract. He's the god. He should know.
Shmoopy assures them that they'll survive.
The person asking isn't as afraid anymore.
Time passes. More people join the party, and the resistance seems to win.
In the final series of fights against SUNBATHER, a lot of people in the main party die.
One of the people left alive is the person asking about their fate to Shmoopy.
Speak of the devil, he appears.
He lashes out at the god, for lying to him.
But he wasn't lying.
He opens the window curtains, showing a large mob of people.
They're destroying propaganda, fighting cops, and putting E.V. near an oddly Guillotine-ish device.
When Shmoopy said that they would survive, it was never in a physical sense.
They're cause, however, would live on.
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WHAT THE FUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK
GOD, I AM SO UP FOR FLORAVERSE: THE LOVELESS BEING SOME VISUAL NOVEL ASS THING LIKE THIS, LIKE I KNOW IT'S UNLIKELY BUT LIKE THIS LOOKS COOLER THAN ANYTHING I'VE EVER WRITTEN, OH MY GOD
ATLEAST LIKE, THE PRESENTATION / AESTHETIC OF A VIDEO GAME OR VISUAL NOVEL, THAT SHIT WOULD SLAP LIKE XXXTENTACION
SORRY THIS IS LIKE LEGIT EXCITEMENT
https://vocaroo.com/i/s1V4qc85oGEm
in fitting with what @Bernard Buttfart did, i made this.
It's Lisa's "Lord" that i ambient'd up and added the acapella to BROCKHAMPTON's WASTE. I accidentally added the rest of the song at the backend, thinking i only selected the one part in FL Studio. I kind of like it like that though.
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stop making cool things that make me want to do cool things myself despite not having any skills myself, goddammit!!
but seriously speaking, it is a cool thing. i might do something myself in the style of flora's videos or vns myself one day. emphasis on might. i don't have any ideas tho so i'll likely just remake something from the main story.
WAIT I FORGOT TO ASK is this gonna be like a little video or a vn or an actual game? cuz holy shit
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We'll have to find out. Ideally we could mix pseudo-game play with panel style comics. But obviously that takes more work than it did to create the Pyramids, so hopefully we're able to avoid slaving ourselves until we get a big chunk of plot going.
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