Redesigning Floraverse - Because PK is a fucking idiot

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Don't beat yourself up, it's fine! Also i like your idea that despair can cause people to turn into archangels.

I like to think it's somewhat similar to depression and it slowly consumes them in this black-y goo as they sink deeper in their depression, and people have to like put the victim in these intervention scenarios and/or have to suffer seeing their loved ones succumb to this, not knowing it's because of the Hitler/Stalin-esque leader they worship.
I've been toying with the idea that Crater Caverns fell to that and became the deranged hostile sort that Pipp and the few others had to put out of their misery.
Which is why under the politeness and goodytwo shoes dialogue, there's this numbness that enables him to just cut them (and others) down without much damage from the mind-breaking affect they have.
 
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I've been toying with the idea that Crater Caverns fell to that and became the deranged hostile sort that Pipp and the few others had to put out of their misery.
Which is why under the politeness and goodytwo shoes dialogue, there's this numbness that enables him to just cut them (and others) down without much damage from the mind-breaking affect they have.

So there's a part of him that's squeaky clean but another part that's like super fucked off? Like if XXXTentacion got reincarnated into a care bear?
 
So there's a part of him that's squeaky clean but another part that's like super fucked off? Like if XXXTentacion got reincarnated into a care bear?
Never thought of that description, but I guess?
Still somehow less angsty than the other losers' backstories in the fact that it doesn't shape his motivations. It's just something that happened and it felt really bad, so he doesn't address it at all. Pipp is the idiot that buries it deep down.
 
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Never thought of that description, but I guess?
Still somehow less angsty than the other losers' backstories in the fact that it doesn't shape his motivations. It's just something that happened and it felt really bad, so he doesn't address it at all. Pipp is the idiot that buries it deep down.

Yeah, because he's never had to talk about it with anyone, he's never had to confront it head on, which is why he can become so violent (i assume, considering how volatile his powers are) and why he can become such an on/off member of The Loveless Coalition due to his moody tendencies. Do i have that right?
 
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Yeah, because he's never had to talk about it with anyone, he's never had to confront it head on, which is why he can become so violent (i assume, considering how volatile his powers are) and why he can become such an on/off member of The Loveless Coalition due to his moody tendencies. Do i have that right?
Close! It is the reason for the volatile ability, but he's not moody or aggressive per say. He is pretty intense at times and can switch focus like it's nothing once something is taken care of. It'd be why he often suddenly goes off in another direction from them when it's apparent they've got it handled for awhile.

There's a definite lack of rage, though, as that burned out in about a month. When he breaks down, it's because of the sorrow.
 
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Close! It is the reason for the volatile ability, but he's not moody or aggressive per say. He is pretty intense at times and can switch focus like it's nothing once something is taken care of. It'd be why he often suddenly goes off in another direction from them when it's apparent they've got it handled for awhile.

There's a definite lack of rage, though, as that burned out in about a month. When he breaks down, it's because of the sorrow.

So he's very flippant? or socially stupido?
 
So he's very flippant? or socially stupido?
Flippant. At least until it's obvious it means a lot to someone/it's time to get down to business and then he's serious beans. He's socially adept ,which probably makes it exasperating for the more serious doom and gloom types.

Kinda like the tiny team dad. It's dad jokes until someone gets hurt. Then the baddie doing the hurting gets dead or injured. Or serious shit arises and it needs solving diplomatically.
 
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Flippant. At least until it's obvious it means a lot to someone/it's time to get down to business and then he's serious beans.
Kinda like the tiny team dad. It's dad jokes until someone gets hurt. Then the someone doing the hurting gets dead.

God, Him making dad jokes is the best/worst idea in this entire thread.
 
God, Him making dad jokes is the best/worst idea in this entire thread.
Worse than Schmoopy sounding like Nathan Lane?
I made it to da big leagues!

But seriously, if you feel you may have difficulty writing for a character like that, I'd be glad to help with his and Stolas' appearances.
 
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Worse than Schmoopy sounding like Nathan Lane?
I made it to da big leagues!

But seriously, if you feel you may have difficulty writing for a character like that, I'd be glad to help with his and Stolas' appearances.

Nah, i can write that! If you have any ideas for either of them, design or character-wise, please spare them! I love both of them and i wanna keep up to date.

Joytail (Beau Billingslea)
Triste (Spike Spencer)
Luxgay (Steve Blum)
Wraps (Johnny Yong Bosch)
Ameer (Ameer Vann)
Mementa (Cassandra Morris)

Anna (Ellen Page)
Shmoopy (Nathan Lane)

P.K. (Helen Mirren)
EV (Amanda C. Miller)

Might make an updated list.
 
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Some notes about the rockhoggs because I'm an autist and hate PK's pedolicious inability to depict the age process past dubious young adult.
The distinctions between juvenile, adult, and senior are fairly clear; even for a slowly aging, diminutive species with little to no sexual dimorphism:

Infants are clawless and mostly hairless, save for a fine coat of vellus hair. Colors start out as a faint pink but will begin to change depending on the parents' genes around a month of age. Eyesight is very poor and they depend on their parents for everything. Very small. Either sex parent will carry the infant around in a sling or a pouch. (Generally a sling as pouches only stretch so much for a fat healthy infant.)

Juveniles lack the ability to make their hair turn into crystalline spines (instead it's an irritating guard hair) and their claws are shorter and blunt, fur is soft and fluffy. Still small and less dependant.
-Juveniles aren't considered adults until at least twenty to thirty yarsy as it takes that long for the adult characteristics to form.

Adults can create defensive spines and launch them, their claws are short but sharp, fur still soft but shorter in length. Larger than juveniles by a head and a half. Generally regarded as the prime, given they can work hard without dying of exhaustion at this age.
-Most if not all rockhoggs start families at this point as it is the second longest "season" of their lives. It's not unheard of for litters to be born later, but it raises the risk of complications for both adult and offspring.

Seniors of both sexes gain a shaggy appearance and larger claws as well as small tusks. Seniors can no longer launch the spines they create. Vision becomes poor due to advanced age and bushy eyebrows, but hearing is increased and their claws can feel the different frequencies of minerals in the earth. Most retirerinto jewel trade or somethig similar. HairHai bristly, but hasn't lost it's faint coloration. Hairier than the juveniles. Slightly shorter than an adult while still taller than a juvenile.
-A rockhogg can be a senior for upwards of hundreds of years, before passing, if their health is good and accidents/predators are avoided.
 
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Some notes about the rockhoggs because I'm an autist and hate PK's pedolicious inability to depict the age process past dubious young adult.
The distinctions between juvenile, adult, and senior are fairly clear; even for a slowly aging, diminutive species with little to no sexual dimorphism:

Infants are clawless and mostly hairless, save for a fine coat of vellus hair. Colors start out as a faint pink but will begin to change depending on the parents' genes around a month of age. Eyesight is very poor and they depend on their parents for everything. Very small. Either sex parent will carry the infant around in a sling or a pouch. (Generally a sling as pouches only stretch so much for a fat healthy infant.)

Juveniles lack the ability to make their hair turn into crystalline spines (instead it's an irritating guard hair) and their claws are shorter and blunt, fur is soft and fluffy. Still small and less dependant.
-Juveniles aren't considered adults until at least twenty to thirty yarsy as it takes that long for the adult characteristics to form.

Adults can create defensive spines and launch them, their claws are short but sharp, fur still soft but shorter in length. Larger than juveniles by a head and a half. Generally regarded as the prime, given they can work hard without dying of exhaustion at this age.
-Most if not all rockhoggs start families at this point as it is the second longest "season" of their lives. It's not unheard of for litters to be born later, but it raises the risk of complications for both adult and offspring.

Seniors of both sexes gain a shaggy appearance and larger claws as well as small tusks. Seniors can no longer launch the spines they create. Vision becomes poor due to advanced age and bushy eyebrows, but hearing is increased and their claws can feel the different frequencies of minerals in the earth. Most retirerinto jewel trade or somethig similar. HairHai bristly, but hasn't lost it's faint coloration. Hairier than the juveniles. Slightly shorter than an adult while still taller than a juvenile.
-A rockhogg can be a senior for upwards of hundreds of years, before passing, if their health is good and accidents/predators are avoided.

You forget, dubious young adult is like, senior citizen for PK.

But this is really good! I take it that Pipp is at least a young adult, or someone in his 20s? I thought he was a lot younger.

Only One - Kanye West (Triste and Lily)

On The Way Down - Ryan Cabrera (Laxgay and Wraps)

Everytime - Boy Pablo (Joytail and Anna) (pronouns swapped, obviously)

Updates coming soon, you guys! don't kill me

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Sorry if these updates aren't as big. It's the end of the semester soon.
 
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Thanks to @Meowthkip for about 50% of this chapter, Shmoopy's character.
I was half expecting Shmoopy to be like “I’M MAKING FUCKING MAC AND CHEESE AND NOBODY CAN STOP ME!”
For real though, this is incredible. I’d rate Semper fi if I could.
 
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