Inactive SYRSA - Tit Milking Fetishist/Game Developer

[TheAmazingAxolotl]

I promised myself not to come back here, but I just have to say:

Big engines are awesome and I love them! I'm not going to write anything about this vessel and explain how it works because my readers said they would respect me more if I didn't.

You do realise that bigger engines create a ship that's hard to control and also one that consumes fuel at a faster rate than the typical V8 engine, right? Especially when you look at the size of the tail of the vessel as compared to those two unnecessarily big engines; steering would be a nightmare.

 

[Loke]

I promised myself not to come back here, but I just have to say:

Big engines are awesome and I love them! I'm not going to write anything about this vessel and explain how it works because my readers said they would respect me more if I didn't.

Child, you remind me of another fool who used to frequent his own thread on here. He too refused to address people's questions and points, and wondered why people mocked him.

 

[SYRSA]

Child, you remind me of another fool who used to frequent his own thread on here. He too refused to address people's questions and points, and wondered why people mocked him.

I did address them. I'm currently working on Zerahypt, improving functionality, and I've added a tutorial. I answer questions and points too, even though you dismiss my answers as stupid. And currently, I just agreed with you that large things look cool, and left it at that.

 

[Meowthkip]

I did address them. I'm currently working on Zerahypt, improving functionality, and I've added a tutorial. I answer questions and points too, even though you dismiss my answers as stupid. And currently, I just agreed with you that large things look cool, and left it at that.

Did you give any real thought to the skeleton wolf titties?

The thing you posted in response was not wolf or skeleton enough. Plenty of titty though.

 

[pickledance]

Professional art-fag here. This whole stylist choice thing is old as dirt as an argument and is to most people who work in the field a giant red flag not to even fucking bother with a person cause they clearly aren't ready to put their all into things and expand their knowledge. The sad fact is no one will take Syrsa's art, or by proxy, game seriously in any way when it looks like shit a 16 year old draws. I'll give props to some of the vehicle models, but a lot of them make no sense logistically when one applies basic aerodynamics. The Dubstep orb thing for example is trash. The new model posted is trash, it's almost like flying in an atmosphere needs wings or something.

It's pretty sad that I keep seeing art scrubs like this. I'm not expecting you to be a master, just to maybe push your boundaries a bit and develop more than the knock-off weeb stuff most people grow out of. Or pick up a book on and do some research for what you're designing before laying down lines. But it's pretty clear from the DA that that's not happening and isn't going to happen, mainly cause pushing artistic bounds is hard and research is frustrating and who can bother with that when you can just slap some titties on it.

I suppose if Syrsa just wants a little vanity project to hang his ego on than fine, this will do, but for the rest of the world it's kind of pathetic even when compared to other single person deved games, like say Cave Story.

 

[SYRSA]

Professional art-fag here. This whole stylist choice thing is old as dirt as an argument and is to most people who work in the field a giant red flag not to even fucking bother with a person cause they clearly aren't ready to put their all into things and expand their knowledge. The sad fact is no one will take Syrsa's art, or by proxy, game seriously in any way when it looks like shit a 16 year old draws. I'll give props to some of the vehicle models, but a lot of them make no sense logistically when one applies basic aerodynamics. The Dubstep orb thing for example is trash. The new model posted is trash, it's almost like flying in an atmosphere needs wings or something.

It's pretty sad that I keep seeing art scrubs like this. I'm not expecting you to be a master, just to maybe push your boundaries a bit and develop more than the knock-off weeb stuff most people grow out of. Or pick up a book on and do some research for what you're designing before laying down lines. But it's pretty clear from the DA that that's not happening and isn't going to happen, mainly cause pushing artistic bounds is hard and research is frustrating and who can bother with that when you can just slap some titties on it.

I suppose if Syrsa just wants a little vanity project to hang his ego on than fine, this will do, but for the rest of the world it's kind of pathetic even when compared to other single person deved games, like say Cave Story.

I indeed do alot of real research when I create my fictional objects, if you bothered to ask rather than assume, I could share some of the ideas behind my vehicles and the "dubstep orb thing", which is called an Estrellite btw.

Go ahead, ask away and scrutinize my machines and structures. I'm always looking for ways to improve the logic behind my lore.

 

[Sigyn]

I indeed do alot of real research when I create my fictional objects, if you bothered to ask rather than assume, I could share some of the ideas behind my vehicles and the "dubstep orb thing", which is called an Estrellite btw.

Go ahead, ask away and scrutinize my machines and structures. I'm always looking for ways to improve the logic behind my lore.

Hey friend. Glad to see that you're working on your game. Not sure how coming back is gonna help you, though. I mean, I posted a last update, @Loke commented, and that was it. Thread was dead. Are you here to get more critiques? And have you updated Zerahypt since your last message, so that we can try it out?

 

[SYRSA]

Hey friend. Glad to see that you're working on your game. Not sure how coming back is gonna help you, though. I mean, I posted a last update, @Loke commented, and that was it. Thread was dead. Are you here to get more critiques? And have you updated Zerahypt since your last message, so that we can try it out?

I'm playtesting it currently to make sure no major bugs are present, then I'll upload it after I've recorded the update video that goes on youtube together with the download link. It will take a while.

 

[Sigyn]

I'm playtesting it currently to make sure no major bugs are present, then I'll upload it after I've recorded the update video that goes on youtube together with the download link. It will take a while.

Cool! Keep us informed.

 

[pickledance]

I indeed do alot of real research when I create my fictional objects, if you bothered to ask rather than assume, I could share some of the ideas behind my vehicles and the "dubstep orb thing", which is called an Estrellite btw.

Go ahead, ask away and scrutinize my machines and structures. I'm always looking for ways to improve the logic behind my lore.

An orb is a shit shape for an aircraft unless you plan on that aircraft spinning, it offers no stabalization. "but it has wings" So? That doesn't over shadow how dead un-aerodynamic a spere is for any kind of controlled flight. You seem to be confusing research with designing. Designing is fun, research takes time and learning, something you haven't done, that's not a guess, that's reflected in your own designs and blindingly clear to those of us who do this shit professionally. I can tell you haven't since you thought a sphere with no landing gear was a real design. You thought that bad boob physics were more important of a step in your character's animation than their actual run cycle, I can hear you already try to justify that as "just 4 or 5 frames" but that's time you should have focused elsewhere if you wanted this to be taken seriously or if you had any half decent work flow or priorities. You thought, in your last 4 posts, that designing a new ship was more important than working on the flight physics.

Now I have shit to get ready for publication, if you need more help, you won't be getting it from me, my time is worth more than offering advice to someone who can't even be pissed to learn basics.

 

[SYRSA]

An orb is a shit shape for an aircraft unless you plan on that aircraft spinning, it offers no stabalization. "but it has wings" So? That doesn't over shadow how dead un-aerodynamic a spere is for any kind of controlled flight. You seem to be confusing research with designing. Designing is fun, research takes time and learning, something you haven't done, that's not a guess, that's reflected in your own designs and blindingly clear to those of us who do this shit professionally. I can tell you haven't since you thought a sphere with no landing gear was a real design. You thought that bad boob physics were more important of a step in your character's animation than their actual run cycle, I can hear you already try to justify that as "just 4 or 5 frames" but that's time you should have focused elsewhere if you wanted this to be taken seriously or if you had any half decent work flow or priorities. You thought, in your last 4 posts, that designing a new ship was more important than working on the flight physics.

Now I have shit to get ready for publication, if you need more help, you won't be getting it from me, my time is worth more than offering advice to someone who can't even be pissed to learn basics.

Lucky I have an information video of the exact aircraft you are so skeptic about.

 

[WonkeyDong]

the game seems pretty interesting, but the breasts, i mean really, this is worst then ninja gaiden where if you shook the controller the boobs jiggled

 

[Loke]

Lucky I have an information video of the exact aircraft you are so skeptic about.

I'm sorry for making fun if you before actually. We all make mistakes, and as an artist myself, I understand how one's ego can run away with them. Having said all of that, why did you prioritize those jiggle physics? Is the sexual aspect of your game that important? And don't give me a lore based reason. YOU'RE THE ONE MAKING THE CREATIVE DECISIONS.

 

[SYRSA]

Zerahypt is now updated. Download link is in the video description.

 

[Sigyn]

Zerahypt is now updated. Download link is in the video description.

Gotcha bro. Thanks for filling us in!

 

[Sigyn]

So It's definitely improved. I've bolded important comments, but @SYRSA please read the entire thing. Every word. Cause knowing you, you'll start getting defensive and skipping over the explanations. Don't do that, just listen and if you respond, don't get defensive. No one's attacking you.

So I've watched the video and I will say that you've improved it a fuck ton. The tutorial is great, and the problem Vinny had with that one terrain vehicle doesn't seem to be a problem now that you've stabilized it; it wasn't flipping over at least. The ships SEEM to fly better, but that may be because you're already skilled at handling them. I'm waiting to get more memory for my computer and then I'll DL it and play, but I'm sure a couple other Kiwi's will play it in the meantime.

As for criticisms. As a potential player, I need to see Pirizuka interact with other NPCs/Characters. I realize that this will all be in the game eventually, but I need to learn more about your lore and characters from these Demo videos. Some people will just see Pirizuka running around a (quite frankly, beautiful) desert and get bored and not bother to play it. By introducing your lore in one of these Demo videos, anyone who's interested in the same things that you are will be much more willing to DL your game. Also, I think we've covered by now that boobs are an essential part of your game, for whatever reason, and I'd like to say that I'm not debating that nor am I criticizing that at this point. But I will point out that in this video, the phrase "anteanna and big massive engines!" is not appropriate and let me explain why. I say this because so far none of the lore that 'explains' the games sexual aspects is present in this video, the only character is Pirizuka who a normal joe-schmoe would just assume was a sexually objectified human female. So if you wanna cater to a larger audience, there needs to be concrete, consistent proof in these demo videos that other characters are the same way and that there's a reason. Otherwise your commentary will seem inappropriate and/or out of place.

So that's it!

TL;DR: Your game has improved, you've improved, I congratulate you on your progress and hope your game does well. I also hope you listen to these comments and at least keep it in mind.

 

[SYRSA]

So It's definitely improved. I've bolded important comments, but @SYRSA please read the entire thing. Every word. Cause knowing you, you'll start getting defensive and skipping over the explanations. Don't do that, just listen and if you respond, don't get defensive. No one's attacking you.

So I've watched the video and I will say that you've improved it a fuck ton. The tutorial is great, and the problem Vinny had with that one terrain vehicle doesn't seem to be a problem now that you've stabilized it; it wasn't flipping over at least. The ships SEEM to fly better, but that may be because you're already skilled at handling them. I'm waiting to get more memory for my computer and then I'll DL it and play, but I'm sure a couple other Kiwi's will play it in the meantime.

As for criticisms. As a potential player, I need to see Pirizuka interact with other NPCs/Characters. I realize that this will all be in the game eventually, but I need to learn more about your lore and characters from these Demo videos. Some people will just see Pirizuka running around a (quite frankly, beautiful) desert and get bored and not bother to play it. By introducing your lore in one of these Demo videos, anyone who's interested in the same things that you are will be much more willing to DL your game. Also, I think we've covered by now that boobs are an essential part of your game, for whatever reason, and I'd like to say that I'm not debating that nor am I criticizing that at this point. But I will point out that in this video, the phrase "anteanna and big massive engines!" is not appropriate and let me explain why. I say this because so far none of the lore that 'explains' the games sexual aspects is present in this video, the only character is Pirizuka who a normal joe-schmoe would just assume was a sexually objectified human female. So if you wanna cater to a larger audience, there needs to be concrete, consistent proof in these demo videos that other characters are the same way and that there's a reason. Otherwise your commentary will seem inappropriate and/or out of place.

So that's it!

TL;DR: Your game has improved, you've improved, I congratulate you on your progress and hope your game does well. I also hope you listen to these comments and at least keep it in mind.

This is the kind of criticism I have always waited for. You explained to me why people got so confused and started assuming due to Pirizukas presence as the one only sexy character in Zerahypt currently. I just didn't really understand the point of the ruckus because Pirizuka has always looked like she did. I found her to be perfect for her role in Zerahypt because her job title is "Top Overseer" where she has tons of privileges and contacts according to the lore. I will have to add more context though, there's not really a backstory to her that's public.

Boobs aren't REALLY an essential part of Zerahypt as you've come to believe due to my time spent giving answers to all the people questioning it. I've always looked for an opening to tell a story, but all I got was arguments circling around boobs, and I did oblige to explain. And why shouldn't I? That's the key part of telling a story. I focus on EVERYTHING when I work on my lore. Even taboo material, such as the fundamentalist terrorists called the Akbars.

About npcs. There already is one npc in Zerahypt who is quite hidden, and she's a Thilian. You can talk to her, and you'll notice that she's a guard who's on her job. There will definetly be more npcs added, but It will take some thinking because they will have to be genuine.

 

[Sigyn]

This is the kind of criticism I have always waited for. You explained to me why people got so confused and started assuming due to Pirizukas presence as the one only sexy character in Zerahypt currently. I just didn't really understand the point of the ruckus because Pirizuka has always looked like she did. I found her to be perfect for her role in Zerahypt because her job title is "Top Overseer" where she has tons of privileges and contacts according to the lore. I will have to add more context though, there's not really a backstory to her that's public.

Boobs aren't REALLY an essential part of Zerahypt as you've come to believe due to my time spent giving answers to all the people questioning it. I've always looked for an opening to tell a story, but all I got was arguments circling around boobs, and I did oblige to explain. And why shouldn't I? That's the key part of telling a story. I focus on EVERYTHING when I work on my lore. Even taboo material, such as the fundamentalist terrorists called the Akbars.

About npcs. There already is one npc in Zerahypt who is quite hidden, and she's a Thilian. You can talk to her, and you'll notice that she's a guard who's on her job. There will definetly be more npcs added, but It will take some thinking because they will have to be genuine.

Glad you've found some use in it. To summarize, It's never been about the boobs specifically but about the fact that we had no context and when you were asked, your replies were not clear, and were defensive which prompted everyone to ignore your explanations. I think you've got a really great thing and as long as you recieve criticism like this you should be fine, regardless of whether you use it in the final product or not.

 

[Hawker Hurricane]

@SYRSA, I don't really have a problem with the boobs to be honest, I see a lot of parallels between the lore that exists of this game and ancient fertility myths, and I actually think that's pretty cool, like it's an ancient culture that's modern, and it makes me wonder if ancient fertility myths were porn to them and if, thousands of years from now, archaeologists will unearth some sort of softcore pornography that's story-driven and if they would think it was some set of fertility myths that our culture had. I guess my point is that fertility myths are sexual in nature but not necessarily sexy in every case and I kind of get the feeling that that's what you were going for.

EDIT: That race with the big boobs is like a race of fertility Demigoddesses, I've noticed. They seem to have a lot of abilities to maintain the purity of nature and increase vitality of people and animals, and fertility goddesses weren't just about human virility and vitality, they were also in charge of maintaining the virility and health of animals and the fertility of the soil that plants grew in, basically all of the things required to stay alive and healthy and keep everybody well-fed in whatever culture they existed in and as such, fertility Goddesses were pretty high on the scale of importance of various Deities in the Pantheon because if they had a bad day they have the power to starve entire towns and regions to death.

 

[SYRSA]

@SYRSA, I don't really have a problem with the boobs to be honest, I see a lot of parallels between the lore that exists of this game and ancient fertility myths, and I actually think that's pretty cool, like it's an ancient culture that's modern, and it makes me wonder if ancient fertility myths were porn to them and if, thousands of years from now, archaeologists will unearth some sort of softcore pornography that's story-driven and if they would think it was some set of fertility myths that our culture had. I guess my point is that fertility myths are sexual in nature but not necessarily sexy in every case and I kind of get the feeling that that's what you were going for.

EDIT: That race with the big boobs is like a race of fertility Demigoddesses, I've noticed. They seem to have a lot of abilities to maintain the purity of nature and increase vitality of people and animals, and fertility goddesses weren't just about human virility and vitality, they were also in charge of maintaining the virility and health of animals and the fertility of the soil that plants grew in, basically all of the things required to stay alive and healthy and keep everybody well-fed in whatever culture they existed in and as such, fertility Goddesses were pretty high on the scale of importance of various Deities in the Pantheon because if they had a bad day they have the power to starve entire towns and regions to death.

That's kinda how Thilians are. Tyg is a god who chose to be goddess-like after she discovered humans (one of the first species she discovered on her very first voyages around the cosmos), with their creativity and intelligence, especially where the females could give birth and feed their offspring self-sufficiently, like a mortal with godlike powers. This inspired Tyg to create a specie that shared all of these traits. And Thilians are split up into different sub-species, starting with the strongest: Cyrathilians, Kybrothilians, Locuans and Ceiphians. Cyrathilians are angel-like class while Kybrothilians are devil-like class, both possessing great powers. Locuans and Ceiphians are more like the civilians of the Thilians.