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Title: The winged god
Medium: Procreate
Challenge Name: Technical line work
Description:
A remarkable discovery in the distant desert, recorded by a scholar in search of the mysteries of ancient times.

It was on a blisteringly hot day when my path led me into a hidden cave, tucked within the jagged terrain of a desolate rock formation. Within the cool sanctuary of this stone refuge, I was met with a wonder beyond anything I had dared to imagine: a wall covered in paintings and inscriptions, testaments to a long-forgotten civilization.

At the top of this display, etched in red pigment with astonishing clarity, I noticed something that sent a shiver down my spine. The script was unmistakably Aramaic! That sacred language, spoken by prophets and sages of the Near East, adorned this wall in the heart of a barren desert, far from its supposed origins. The impossibility of this discovery left me momentarily speechless. Yet with care and diligence, I began to decipher the characters, which seemed to be part of a prayer or solemn declaration. Their message read:

“They dance and gave gifts to the deity.”

These words immediately drew my gaze to the scene depicted below them. A large circular figure, majestic and commanding, loomed over a group of smaller figures. The large figure appeared to represent a deity, perhaps divine in nature, while the smaller ones were clearly human. They were simple, almost childlike in their design, yet their movements were unmistakable. They seemed to be caught in the throes of a dance, their arms outstretched, their postures animated with reverence and joy. It was a scene of rhythm, devotion, and a profound spiritual connection to their god.

As I studied the figures, I could almost hear the faint echoes of drums and jubilant cries, the fervent sounds of a ritual meant to honor and appease their deity. But the more I examined the wall, the greater my astonishment grew. How could these people, whose art and culture appeared so distinct and local, have known the sacred Aramaic script?

Had travelers, merchants, or even missionaries once ventured to this remote land and shared the language of the prophets? Or had some long-lost connection existed between these peoples and the ancient Near East? Could this cave have been a holy meeting place where stories, languages, and rituals were exchanged across vast distances?

The phrase, “they gave gifts to the deity,” suggests that these people held their god in great reverence, offering gifts and performing dances in an effort to secure divine favor. The circular figure towering above them might represent the sun—a universal deity of life and sustenance. Or perhaps it was a local god, unique to these people, but so potent and sacred that their worship transcended borders, merging with foreign beliefs.

One thing is certain: this work is far more than mere wall art. It is a window into a time long gone, when people danced, prayed, and believed that their offerings could maintain the delicate balance between heaven and earth. The strange intermingling of Aramaic script with the symbolic art of an unfamiliar culture makes this site one of the greatest enigmas I have ever encountered.

May future generations preserve this legacy and uncover the truths that I, in awe and wonder, must leave inscribed within these stone walls.
Time Spent: 1h
Art Specific Critique: yes
Challenge Feedback: No idea
 
Title: The Dead Sneed Scroll
Medium: Cosclay, acrylic, colored pencil impression
Description: An ancient tablet outlining the guidelines for a persecuted society comprised of civilians with the sole intent of documenting other societies. Sic semper Sneedus Fidelis mors Keffals
Time spent: Yes
Critique: the best way to improve your art is receiving constructive criticism. I know the text needs more color to be more legible, short on time and paints are just blending :lossmanjack:

Edit: one commandment is use thumbnails, am I doing it right??
Edit 2: My phone camera is dog shit ands didnt capture the whole piece. Dark out now, will update tomorrow with better image
 

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Title: The Anchuent Prophesy

Medium: Toned Paper, grey pen, watercolors, a wet sponge applied to the paper to create edge damage and staining, slight phone camera filter.

Description: One of the more perplexing pages found in the Codex Autistica, the imagery features a mythical creature that historians have found to be named Sonichu. The designs would indicate that Sonichu was belived to have some sort of elemental power, while a radiating design resembling a rainbow shoots out behind it. It is unclear what the five orbs were meant to represent, however the position of the orbs are behind Sonichu which could indicate an event in the past. Before him sits a homely human figure, reaching for or even placing a medallion similar to Sonichu himself upon an offering pillar. The glyph below the figure represents cuitlatl or excrement, indicating the figure was in the process of defecation.
The monsterous purple face below could be a similar entity as seen in other codecies, bearing the name Graduon- a deity representing fear of change and moving on.

Time Spent: 1 hour maybe? Not counting sketches and research.
Critique: Yes plz
Challenge Feedback: This was a fun beginning challenge! Concept was both straightforward and open-ended.

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Bonus sketches:
All references used came from Mary Ellen Miller's The Art of Mesoamerica: From Olmec to Aztec.
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Well here’s my attempt, I ended up doing two, one in my wheelhouse and one very much not. I’m rusty and this was really hard but a lot of fun. I’m cool with critique and editing for both.

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Title: The Payment of Quasi
Medium: Procreate
Description: Early post-merge illumination depicting porcine scribe Patrick S. Tomlinson paying his debts after failing to identify the gossips chronicling his exploits. I had a very specific style of wonky medieval art in mind that turned out to be 13th-century Gothic, so there you go, I learned something. I wanted to include Dan and Niki but drawing one face was bad enough. The hardest part was capturing how fucking fat he is.
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Title: Stone Mayan Mutt
Medium: Procreate
Description: Ancient stone carving of a drooling beast; perhaps had religious significance. Started as a fallback in case I gave up on the other one.
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Challenge Feedback: Very fun once I figured out what it was asking for. A little confusing, I feel like historical artifact or piece of art emphasizing linework probably would’ve sufficed. The example is cute and it helped to have something to refer to.
 
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Text reads:
Sneed onto other as though others would Sneed onto you
Don't touch the cow
Thou shalt not conspire
Use thumbnails
Stay on topic
Keep it SFW (looking at you, flurries)
Be an adult with problems
Yaniv must be ridiculed
And most of all
Praise cobras magic
TWU.

Assignment feedback: excellent. The niche concept of the ancient kf theme kept it wide open for creativity by making us make the connection, which led to such a variety of approaches and concepts. Inspiration like this is what I live for

What brand wc paper is that? And what medium/tek did you use to weather it? Looks straight up authentic, very nice work!
 

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Title: The Anchuent Prophesy

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For my money, this is my favorite one, even though it could use additional work.

Sonichu and Chris figures are perfect, don't change anything. Remember that the late codices the Spanish haven't burned have speech balloons, you can use them! The string of writing above is also a great idea, I would use imitation Maya decorative writing, a lot of which looked like faces to grimace some sort of a message into being. The Sonichu medallion and the calendar dial down the bottom could use work, but they are already pretty cool. I would have Mayanised the medallion more and maybe given the dial mismatched animu eyes, or something.

Good work, mate!
 
For my money, this is my favorite one, even though it could use additional work.

Sonichu and Chris figures are perfect, don't change anything. Remember that the late codices the Spanish haven't burned have speech balloons, you can use them! The string of writing above is also a great idea, I would use imitation Maya decorative writing, a lot of which looked like faces to grimace some sort of a message into being. The Sonichu medallion and the calendar dial down the bottom could use work, but they are already pretty cool. I would have Mayanised the medallion more and maybe given the dial mismatched animu eyes, or something.

Good work, mate!
Thank you!

I wish I had remembered the little speech bubble glyphs, that would have been perfect to add in. I was really into Mesoamerican art for a while and studied it a lot in college, I like the fun symbolism like that.
 
Here's a WIP for Day 1. Once it's done, I will add the description for my art. Also, an extra Raiden and Fujin from MK because of bias. I'll also be using hatching texture for my art as a callback to Georgio's stylization :smug:
:null: (BUFF) + The Thinker + Ghost hands
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Again, this is a WIP, so there will be no description until it's done.
 
Can you believe it, guys? The next challenge, just a week away. Woohoo!

Just wanted to say everyone's submissions so far have knocked it out of the park, I eagerly await for those who have yet to post. I almost feel spoiled to the gills with the amount of creativity on display.

Apologies to those who thought the challenge fell short on clarity, ones in the future will be more ironed out. Appreciate all the feedback so far!

There's a morsel of a hint for the upcoming challenge in the post somewhere :O
 
Aye, I've done it. Not what I was looking for in me mind but eh, anyways.
This image was done with Krita. And truth be told due to my irl affairs I had only, like, 1 hour for something to do, and I promised to provide. I might to crack on 'stopheles lore later. though.
Title: Kiwistopheles Greek depiction
Medium: Krita
Challenge Name: Technical Line Work
Description:have Kiwistopheles, the Perpetual kiwi bird traveling all across the timeloop, gathering and archiving the most curious and intedasting thing over the world. He's a basketball lovin' philosophy riddled little buddy of Slobbermutt, yet another Perpetual who, however, is very pissed at being one, but I might to explain the reasons later on.
Time Spent: ~30 min
Art Specific Critique: if you need to provide one I'm all ears.
Challenge Feedback: see above
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Plus, it's all a bit of fun. No-one is going to to stab you if you're late.
So I don't have to engage in trial by combat for being late? Lame! ;)

Anyway, Latin studying done, here's my artistic contribution:
Title: Nazkiwi Lines
Medium: Krita, on my crappy secondhand Huion tablet.
Challenge Name: Technical Line Work
Description: You're having a helicopter joyride in a vast arid desert when you spot odd lines, gigantic geoglyphs carved into the earth, depicting all manner of odd animals and objects. Could this be the workings of an ancient civilization? What could these possibly mean? Somehow, you feel like these were made just for the fun of it.
Time Spent: 3 hours, I think? I wasn't keeping track.
Art Specific Critique: If it's on the internet then it's free game, yes.
Permission For User Edits: Feel free.
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I first wanted to do a caveman painting but lots of kiwis were doing that already, so I went for some Nazca linework instead. I suck ass at digital art, which is why I want to dust off my tablet and get a little better at it. Can't say I'm too happy with how it turned out because it feels very bare. I suck even more at drawing backgrounds and the image is basically a background. Anyway, here's how I did it, starting with the references used:
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I colorpicked the second image to fill in the background and used a textured brush to doodle some kiwi-related shapes and stray lines. I noticed that the Nazca geoglyphs are all closed shapes and tried staying loyal to that, but the slobbermutt doodle's ear breaks this rule.
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I tilted the drawing using the perspective tool so that it seems like you're seeing the lines at an angle, but it's very subtle. I also added several layers of simple and textured gradients so that it wouldn't be one boring flat color.
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I added a sandy texture to the drawing and some shading on the lines. They're dents in the ground, so I had to shade the parts facing the sun which felt a little weird. They're the part of the drawing I spent the most time on and they're barely noticeable lol.
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After that I fiddled around with the transparency and color correction settings, warped the perspective a little further and also adjusted the slobbermutt's position to avoid creating a tangent with one of the lines. The sand texture desaturated the image so I darkened both it and the shadows to compensate. After all that the lines became too subtle so I copied the layers they were on, duplicated them into the top position and lowered the opacity to make them more noticeable but not too bright.
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Posting this for a friend who loves using the site but refuses to make a damn account

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Title: The Grey Menace
Medium: Ibix Paint X. Have a subscription to it, but only free tools were used.
Challenge Name: Technical Line Work
Description: A simple depiction of one of the site’s greatest enemies, Elliot Fong, as a vengeful Mayan god that tries in vain to stop kiwis from harvesting corn. Probably didn’t make his face square enough, honestly.
Time Spent: 1 hour and 17 minutes.
Art Specific Critique: Sure, can be harsh or light.
Challenge Feedback: Enjoyed the wide range of eras we could tackle this topic in
 
Okay, finally I had a chance to sit down and draw for a while; last two weeks have been hectic as hell.

Title: "The Sixfold Recitation of the Sneed Dragon: The Drunken Balldo’s Lament in the Court of Jewsh"
Medium: Krita, with a Wacom Intuos tablet. I specifically use a really old version of Krita, I think 3.3.1? I like it better than the modern ones.
Challenge Name: Line Work
Description: My favorite MATI stream moment of all time: Null nearly choking on his laughter while Nick Rekieta drunkenly opens the same AI-generated furry dragon inflation porn superchat from AnimeSucksCopeAndSneed six separate times (I kept it SFW, don’t worry). I’m not autistic enough to accurately translate hieroglyphics so I attempted to write out “anime sucks cope and sneed” phonetically.
Time Spent: Roughly six hours, I'm a slow artist.
Art Specific Critique: Sure, light.
Permission for User Edits: Please ask.
Challenge Feedback: This was fun! Really good balance of specific yet open-ended, and let me jump out of my comfort zone without getting stuck or frustrated.
Future Challenge Suggestion: Surprise me!
I added several erase layers of blurred noise and masks of the background texture to really mess up the art and make it look old.
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Un-weathered version, with only the stock papyrus and crosshatch textures I pulled off the Internet.
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Just my lineart and colors; I ended up blurring everything slightly in the final result because everything came out a bit too crisp. Colors were done almost entirely using the fill tool since I actually bothered to do clean lineart for once.
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Just the lineart, before I added line coloring to match the way my reference images were lined. I used Krita's stabilizer tool for most of it to get nice curves since drawing smoothly on a non-display tablet is a little difficult even after all these years.
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My sketch! I usually do pretty clean sketches if I'm referencing a style; sketches for my own style are a lot more messy and gesture-like. Please admire tiny Nick.
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