Sonichu The Sunstone (A Fanfic)

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Should Chris-Chan Sonichu make an appearance?

  • Yes, it's a huge part of the source material.

    Votes: 1 25.0%

  • No, it's refreshing to see him in a support role to the real sonichus.

    Votes: 3 75.0%
  • Total voters
    4
  • Poll closed .
Yeah, that couldn't have been easy. Even if RuleCWC is still a ripoff with a dumb name, at least the skeletons and Zelina's undead father made things creepy and pretty intense.

Thank GodJesus the Sunstone was there to save them, otherwise they'd have been effed.
 
"It gets better. So then I tell her, 'It's a good thing you're pretty for a rat thing' and she stared at me with these dumb shit rat eyes. Bitch was dumber than rye toast."
Stryker, Edison, and Malcolm laughed as they made their way back to the hideout. Edison was glad that Malcolm was back with them, and Stryker seemed like he was back to his old self. The only problem was Edison didn't want to go back to the cave. He knew once Stryker saw the moon rock he'd become catatonic again. He wanted to go home, back to Deege League's HQ, chill out on the couch, smoke a blunt, and watch Malcolm try to pick up women online. "So commander, what happened on your mission?"
"Ya bro, did ya kill that faggot?"
Stryker nodded, "Snapped his fucking neck tahaha."
"Dude that's sickness!"
"Yeah yeah yeah, but we gotta get our story straight for Serene. She told us to stay together. So what happened is Edison broke into Bill's house and tazed him, then I broke his neck."
"That's great commander, but how do we explain Malcolm's return?"
"Those rat things were with Bill, so we tell her after we broke his neck, we got the intel from the rats where Malcolm was."
"Are you saying they just told us?"
"Cut the smartass shit Edison. Yeah they just told us…at gunpoint tahaha!"
Edison thought that sounded believable. "Yeah that'll work. Some say in vino veritas, there's truth in wine. I say there's truth in front of a gun barrel."
"Yo man, why you gotta be philosophical an' shit?"
"It's the way I am Malcolm, you know that better than anyone." He playfully shoved Malcolm aside as they entered the cave.
There in the back of the cave was the Moonstone, as it always was. Edison had a feeling that something was off, the Moonstone seemed, angry.
"Queen Serene, we have returned."
"I asked you to preform one task Stryker, and you failed." Serene's voiced echoed throughout.
"Wait what? What the fuck? You asked me to kill that faggot and I did."
"Bill still breaths this second. I asked for death, and you gave me a broken neck. A broken neck isn't always the same as death."
"…I"
"Silence! I am not concerned about Bill. He may be alive but he is no loner able to help the Sunstone hunters. What concerns me is that you disobeyed me."
"My queen, I had no clue Bill wasn't dead, I'm sor..."
"This isn't about Bill. This is about you and your lower going different ways, I don't recall ordering you to split up."
"Chill, my queen. We rescued Malcolm and I..."
Edison was blinded by a flash of light, just like on the island. When he opened his eyes Stryker was lying motionless on the ground. Edison was shocked, he didn't move or say a word.
Malcolm and Edison weren't very alike.
Malcolm picked up a pebble and threw it at the Moonstone, "MOON BITCH! I'M GONNA FUCKING." Another flash "ACK!"
Edison ran to his lifelong friend, Malcolm was squirming on the ground. Edison held him, he couldn't help but think of the old war movies they used to watch while high. They all had a scene like this.
"Edd....I ain't making it. Can I axe you sumthin'?"
"What is it?"
"Those rat things, they know where we at. I told the black one. All I w-want...is for the black one to die first."
"Heh, like all those horror movies?"
Malcolm's voice was growing weak, "Haha...I guess...so. Be loyal to the Moon Bitch...I don't want this to happen to you. You're too smart for this shit. You're the smartest...fucker I know." Tears were in Edison's eyes, "Don't...cry dude. That's………gay." Malcolm's body became heavy. He was gone.
Edison wiped away a tear and stood up. He looked at the Moonstone, what was Serene going to do to him.
"Stay loyal to the 'Moon bitch'?" Serene mocked Malcolm's final words, "For once, your friend was correct, stay loyal to me Edison. And my name is not Moon bitch, you will address me as Queen Serene or my queen."
Edison was a smart man, but he wasn't a brave one. He didn't want to get struck like Stryker and Malcolm, and he wanted to stay alive to grant Malcolm's dying wish. He wasn't going to defy Serene, as much as he wanted to.
"I understand my queen."
"I have only one use for you Edison."
"What are you're orders, Queen Serene?"
"I find you to be a handsome man. I must say I adore your black hair, your stunning green eyes, and your muscles. I haven't seen a man as handsome as you in 600 years, then again I've only seen you three and Swift in 600 years."
"My queen, I don't understand this order."
"I'm going to be released from this rock soon. The Sunstone kept me in here, and now the bond is weakening. Soon, I'll be in a human body again." Serene's voice shifted tones. Edison thought it sounded like a socially awkward girl trying to be flirty. "Now, do you understand?"
"I...still don't understand my.."
Serene became impatient,"MY HUSBAND! I WILL BE THE QUEEN AND YOU WILL BE MY KING!"
Edison thought about his decision, he could die or lay with queen crazy. Death was looking preferable, but then he thought of Malcolm's dying wish.
He sat next to the Moonstone and kissed it, "Anything for my queen."
 
Damn. Death or being a husband to a lunar queen that killed yo best pals. Talk about a pain.
Still, Excellent writing man.
 
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Finally got around to reading this, MAN I did not expect Serene to kill Malcolm.

Moon Bitch X Edison, new OTP.
 
Chapter 15 got split...the exciting part next week.
Sonichu and Wild had just arrived in RuleCWC. They were standing at the end on a vast field, the castle was barely seen.
"Magi-Chan couldn't bring us any closer?" Wild said as he squinted to see the castle.
Sonichu rolled his eyes , "Just start walking."
A beaten path split RuleCWC field into two, and lead right up to the castle. The sun was intense today, and the two grew tired easily. Wild could barely hear the wagon coming from behind them, Sonichu couldn't hear it at all. Wild managed to grab him and get out of the way in time. They were lying on the grass when the horses neighed and the covered wagon came to a stop.
A red Rosechu looked at them from the wagon. "Hoo boy, y'all almost just got flatter than my daddy's pancakes. Y'all ok?"
Wild got up and looked at her. "Yeah, we're fine. Sorry, we're a little run down from the sun and we couldn't hear you."
"Ain't a thing at all. I'm just glad I didn't squish you like that snake I ran over this mourning, poor little thing. Where y'all heading?"
Sonichu tried to whisper to Wild to not tell her anything but he blurted out, "We're friends of Darkbind and Zelina. We're going to see them in the castle."
"Ain't you lucky, I'm bringing some milk to the castle town. Why don't you two come on in. One of you is gonna have to sit in the back with the milk crates, if ya don't mind that."
"Thank you very much ma'am." Wild smiled at her, her face turned a darker red. Sonichu managed to get up and whisper to Wild's ear, "No. This could be a trap from Swift."
Wild shot back, "With a milk wagon? C'mon. That'd be pretty dumb for Swift."
"Fair enough. Just stay alert."
"Fine. But you're with the crates, I'm riding shotty with the pretty girl."
"Really Wild? This is about saving the world, not getting your dick wet."
"I can do both."
The red Rosechu looked confused. "I-Is there an issue with you boys?"
Wild spoke back, "No not at all." Sonichu crawled into the back and Wild took a seat next to her. "We're ready when you are."
"Great! Let's get a move on!" The horses began moving towards the castle.
"I'm sorry, here you are helping is out greatly and we haven't even introduced ourselves, my name is Wild."
"Malona Rosechu. Charmed."
"Hrumph!" Sonichu grunted in the back.
"May I ask, are you a grass type?"
"Yeah, why?"
"I've never met another Sonichu with a type, the king and queen are normal type, speaking only of their powers. I was beginning to think I was the lonely little elemental in this big wide world."
The horses neighed and stopped, there was a lifeless skeleton on the path.
"Skeletons?"
"For corn's sake! Not again. We've been having some walking skeleton scaries the past night. This one's deader than my brothers work ethic, bless his heart. Well, no use not taking care of it."
Malona jumped out of the wagon and moved the pile of bones off the wagon. She opened her mouth and flames shot out, burning the body. All that was left was ashes.
She got back into the wagon and smiled, "Them bones ain't gonna walk again, that's for darn sure."
"I'm going to go ahead and guess your a fire type."
She laughed, "Yessir, hotter than a hornet's temper I am." She took the reigns and the wagon was moving again.
"Where are you from?"
"Don't know that. Daddy says I was a big ol' egg that landed in the barn one day. When I hatched he said I almost burned the barn down. He said it was good though, winter was close by and I sure could make fire. I've been working at the ranch since."
"Uh-huh."
"So if you're a grass type, do you know others like us?"
"Yeah, back where we come from we have psychic types, flying, fighting, water, electric, but no other fire types. You're one of a kind."
Malona giggled.
The wagon continued and made it to the castle.
"Well, you boys have fun. I gotta get this here milk and beer to the market. These castle townies can't go without milk and beer, no siree."
"Thanks Malona, perhaps we can meet again."
"I'd like that Wild, I'm at the LonaLona ranch." She smiled and drove off.
"Fantastic." Sonichu said sourly, "Let's just get this job done."
"Sonichu!" Darkbind saw his old friend from the castle gates. "Hold on, I'll let you in."
"Wild, Darkbind doesn't know you that well. So let me do the talking."
"Fine. Just ask him for the shard so we can go home."
The gates opened and Darkbind hugged Sonichu. "My friend. What brings you here?"
"We're on another collection mission." Sonichu pulled out his small shard of the Sunstone. "Magi-Chan told me you had a piece we needed."
Darkbind looked closely at Sonichu's shard.
"I see, it's in the castle. Follow me."
Wild and Sonchu followed King Darkbind over the drawbridge and into the great hall of the castle. Queen Zelina was waving to them from the other side of the room. Two guards stood by her side, and two more stood behind them at the entrance.
"Guards!"
"Yes my king!" All four shouted.
"Arrest these two!"
"Wait what?"
"What?"
Darkbind looked at Sonichu, "I'm sorry old friend, but I have already been warned about you."
Of all te things to criticize Sonichu for, did it ever bother anyone that there was no fire type in the Chaotic combo? Because I never got the lack of a fire type.
In Chris fashion, when a Rosechu is introduced she must be immediately shipped. Hey, at least Wild isn't visiting a humanoid magikarp prostitute this time.
 
Nice reference to an obscure bit of Christory in there! ;)

Y'know, I never realised that there wasn't a fire type in the Chaotic Combo...
 
I've only read the first few chapters but I wanted to say thanks Pikonic, damn good story so far.
 
CWCissey said:
Y'know, I never realised that there wasn't a fire type in the Chaotic Combo...
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Yeah, it was always one of those tiny details in Sonichu that bothered me. The most basic Pokemon types are fire, water, grass. When Chris had given set up Simonla to Wild, he had said something about opposites attracting, which bothered me again since earth and grass aren't really opposites. But you know what is opposites, grass and FIRE!
Blazebob is assumed to be fire and I gave him fire powers in Obscurity, but a fire type should have been in all along, and Chris should have come up with it himself.
So now it's my job to make elemental Sonichu's. There's 300000 normals running around and no fire, ghost, or ice. So in Obscurity I made Lovesh the ghost type and here is Malona the fire type.
And she totally isn't based off of a Zelda character.
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So yeah, this thread now has 22% more poll.
Basically, I'm hammering out the details of the big finale. One thing I can't really decide is; should Chris become Chris-Chan Sonichu? I enjoy focusing more on the chus than him, but c'mon, this is a Sonichu fanfic and I can't leave out the star of Sonichu. So I'm really conflicted and have decided to let others make the tough decision for me. THE READERS DECIDE!
If your caught up you know that,
Bill was the decendant that could have stopped Serene, so Chris isn't gonna Deus Ex Machina his way to victory. So don't worry, God Chris won't turn this into easy mode.
Also, if you have any suggestions about Chris (he can't transform because he lost his ring, he transforms and Crystalina Rosechu shows up too, he transforms but is a bumbling idiot, etc.) just spoiler your idea in your post and I'll look into it.
 
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Aww, but using a Deus Ex is how chris does it! *sigh*
Ah well. Here's my suggestion..
Chris transforms and uses the Chris-Chan Pure Jolt Lance (whatever it's called, been a while since i read Sonichu.) Serene shrugs it off, calls Chris an idiot for thinking that would work and kicks him in the balls, therefore reverting him to his normal self.
Been a while since i've done some fan fiction.
 
Sonichu sat in a damp dungeon cell underneath the castle. Across the room, Wild was in his own.
"Sonichu, what just happened?"
"I'm not sure. Darkbind said he was warned about us. They must really want that shard."
"Warned him? Who...Swift. I have a feeling he's behind this."
"Sometimes you actually say something smart Wild." Swift appeared and laughed.
"Swift!"
"Oh no no no, you guys know me as Swift, but your brave king and fair queen know me as Magi-Chan." Swift was wearing a hooded cloak, hiding the white S on his chest.
Sonichu slammed on his cell bars, "They think you're Magi-Chan?! You tricked them!"
"Why yes! We really do look similar from the neck up. Zelina thought I was her trusted friend, so I went with it."
"What did you do?!"
"I made another skeleton army, I'm beginning to like skeletons, truth be told. Those evil buggers almost killed Zelina. Good thing a magic crystal keeps them away. Must be careful though, some have been corrupted by a dark force and want to take it away, then what will be of RuleCWC?"
"That's why Darkbind had us arrested."
"That's why Darkbind will have you executed, they got this fire Rosechu, she'll burn you up good, can't have your remains coming back. How come we've never seen a fire type before?"
"Malona!"
"I think that was her name, don't tell me Wild, you have the hots for the hot. Fire and grass don't mix."
"Fuck off Swift!"
"I'd love to stay and have more pleasant conversation, but I must be going."
"Why are you doing this?!"
"I have my reasons, I'll see you at the stake Sonichu." He vanished.
"Gotta think fast!" Sonichu said to himself. Wild just sat silently on the ground.
What were they going to do? Swift had convinced the others they were evil. They couldn't convince them otherwise, and they couldn't fight their way out, they'd never get the shard that way.
Seven guards came in. "Come on you two." They effortlessly tied Wilds hands, Sonichu tried to struggle, but seven was too much for him. They were marched up the stairs and outside the castle to the courtyard. Two long metal posts were sticking out of the ground. The guards tied them to the posts and left. They were alone again.
"I'm thinking Malona and I won't be talking a roll around in the hay."
"No shit Wild."
"Oh well, I'll be seeing my Simonla again soon."
"So, you don't have a plan?"
"No, not really."
A few hours went by and night had fallen. Darkbind and Zelina showed up, accompanied by seven new guards. Behind them was Malona, wearing a black dress that covered her wrists and feet. Next to her was Swift, wearing his cloak.
Darkbind spoke, "Sonichu, Wild Sonichu. For being servants of the dark force that threatens RuleCWC's peace, I, King Darkbind, sentence you to death by burning. My queen, Zelina, and my new advisor, Magi-Chan, will be witnesses. May the RuleCWC gods have mercy on your soul. Malona, please begin.
Malona couldn't bring herself to look at Wild, she closed her eyes and opened her mouth.
Sonichu saw the flames come closer, then stop, almost as if they had some sort of barrier around them.
Wild yelled, "About time you showed up! I contacted you hours ago!"
When the flames cleared, the real Magi-Chan was floating in front of them.
Sonichu was shocked, but relieved. "You contacted Magi-Chan!"
"You didn't?"
Zelina gasped, "THERE'S TWO MAGI-CHANS!"
Magi-Chan put up his hand, and Swift's cloak flew off, revealing his chest.
"Ah, well I do believe it's time for my departure." Swift teleported back to the outside of Serene's cave.
Things didn't look good, Magi-Chan could easily explain the situation to Zelina, and the shard was as good as theirs. They had every piece of the sunstone, minus the shard Stryker has.
Swift entered the cave, hopefully Serene would awaken before they found the Stryker. He saw Stryker lying on the ground, next to one of his teammates.
"Serene, I do believe our little team has just became smarter with these two dead. Though if I may be so bold, why did you kill them?"
"They are not dead, I can wake them up at my wish. They were useless to me anyway. The bond that holds me in this stone is growing weaker, I'll be free soon."
"Where's the last shard?"
"I gave it to Edison."
"Can he be trusted?"
"I'd be careful with your words. You have now let our enemies gather three shards of the sunstone. You'd probably just hand this one right over to them on a silver platter."
Swift knew better than to argue, "Where is Edison?"
"Outside."
"I'd like to talk to him."
"Fine, he knows not to let you touch the shard."
Swift stepped outside where Edison was smoking a cigarette.
"Oh joy, the rat thing has graced me with his presence. What an honor." Edison rolled his eyes.
"Why don't you like me?"
"I don't care for rats."
"You're a smart man Edison, I'm going to need a better answer.
"Alright fine, you're working with the other rats, you've quote unquote failed in stopping them from getting pieces. I don't trust you and neither should Serene."
"I am not with the others, I want to see Serene free just as much as you do."
"Why?"
"Why what?"
"Why serve Serene?"
"I could ask you the same question."
"First, I was following orders, now I need to save my commander and my friend. I'll ask again. Why are YOU serving Serene?"
Swift took a deep breath, "Are you a Christian?"
"Jewish."
"I didn't know Edison was a Jewish name."
"My mother was a Goldstein, can you get to your point?"
"Fine, you believe in the one true God, and shall have no other gods beside him."
"Yeah, so?"
"I am a Christian man. My companions were Christian men and women as well."
".....ok"
"One time, I had to save them, and I brought them here. And they now think that Sonichu is their godly savior."
"Is that the green one?"
"The yellow one."
"Why?"
"That's a story for another day. When I met Serene, she promised me they would know Sonichu wasn't their true savior. I'm a godly man, I just want to save my friends' souls. That's why I led you guys here, I scared Stryker into hiding here. There were no terrorists, only me."
"Can I ask you something?"
"What is it?"
"Do you want them to know God is their savior, or do want them to know you are their savior? You're doing some pretty dark deeds in the name of God."
"I…" the skies grew dark, the stars disappeared.
"The time has come." Serene said. Her body was released from the Moonstone. A dark purple dress billowed in the wind, jet back hair covered a milk white face. Her plump, scarlet lips smiled as her delicate hand wrapped around the outside of the cave.
"If these heroes of the Sunstone want to bring light back to this world, let them come here and face me."
 
Baaaaack, she's baaaaaaaaack...

Nice one, really liked learning more about Swift! Now to see where this all takes him...
 
Darkbind handed the sunstone shard to Magi-Chan. "Sonichu, from the bottom of my heart and Zelina's, we're sorry."
Zelina was embarrassed, "I can't believe I fell for that impostor, we almost got you killed."
Magi-Chan put his hand on her shoulder, "There's nothing to be embarrassed about. Swift is a very convincing man. He used his psychic powers to trick you. It could have happened to anyone."
Wild was rubbing his wrists, "No hard feelings. The important thing is that I'm not on fire," He laughed, "and Malona, I'm sorry we couldn't get to know each other under more positive conditions, I'd like to meet you again after this is all done."
Malona blushed, "I'd like that too."
"Alright, I think we're done here, Magi-Chan. Take us back to Sunstone."
"Yes, I'll contact the others, we'll all meet there."
In a flash of purple light they were back at Flame's hut. Magi-Chan disappeared to gather the others. Soon; Chris, Punchy, Rosechu, and Blake were in the same room. It was time to go to the cave of the Moonstone.
"It's a shame Angelica can't help us." Sonichu said.
"It's a fucking shame Bill can't help us." Punchy grumbled.
"Guys, now is not the time to dwell on things we can't control. We need to focus on what we can do. I have four pizza bots ready to go to the location that Blake managed to find out. They'll sweep the mountain for traps and start the first attack, we'll follow right behind them. Keep your eyes on Stryker, he holds the last sunstone shard."
"Stryker was hit with Moon's Glow as well," Solario entered the hut. "I felt it, him and one of his soldiers, the one called Malcolm."
"That means...."
"That bastard who tried to blow up my babies has it now! Oh, goodie. I'm going to give him a personal beat down."
"What you do means the fate of the world," Solario said, "If you fight with emotion, use that emotion."
Rosechu's eyes turned red, "Oh don't worry, I will."
While everyone was getting ready, Blake was at his wife's bedside, "Don't worry Bubbles. I'll be back soon."
"I've assembled the pieces of the Sunstone, it's almost complete. I'll stay here. An old bird like me will be nothing to you. I've trusted you to get the other pieces, get this one."
"Solario," Chris asked worried, "When we complete this thing, what will happen to…you?"
"Do not concern yourself with me."
"I just..."
"Get the final shard, my physical being isn't worth the world being plunged into dark days!"
"Alright, I'm sorry."
"Everyone together, I'll teleport us to the base of their mountain." Magi-Chan put his arms out.
They were gone. Only Solario and Bubbles remained. Flame entered the hut, "Solario! The skies have grown dark! We're too late!"
"No, so long as our friends are alive, it's never too late."
Chris and the chus arrived at the foot of the mountain, the sky above them was almost black. Chris pulled out a radio, "Pizza bot 1, sweep from the north, 3 and 4, take the east and west. That leaves the south for 6. Meet at the cave in the center and start the offensive."
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Edison and Swift stared at the incoming aircraft, "I believe our friends are here, and they brought their shiny toys."
"I didn't know rats could fly."
"Please, they're unmanned bots."
"I do not care for them, and my power has not yet restored to me. I'll be in the back of this cave, take care of those things." Serene walked to the back of the cave, with a wave of her hand, part of the rock crumbled, making a hallway. "I must meditate for a while, hold them off."
Swift didn't know what to do, he didn't even notice Edison ran into the cave and emerged with an RPG launcher.
"Are those rockets?!"
"Rocket propelled grenades, the perfect choice for aircraft neutralization, well, perfect unless you have another aircraft."
"Where has that been?!"
"We have a few at HQ. I grabbed one on my way back from interrogating the pink one. Thought it'd be handy. I was right."
"No! I mean why haven't we USED them yet?!"
"You're serious?," Swift didn't reply, "Shit, you are... I'm a civ. These are illegal for civs to have, I had to buy these through...channels. One rocket costs 2500 bucks. I'm not made of money, and I'm not gonna fire one because some asshole sneezed in my direction."
Edison aimed at one of the pizza bots, the rocket hit the face of it. "One down!" Bits of metal were landing by their feet.
"Good! Now shoot the other three! They're coming closer!"
"Hold on, these things don't reload themselves, hows about you use your mind to slow them down."
***
"Mayor! This is Pizza bot 6, Pizza bot 4 is down. We can't seem to get any closer, there's some sort of invisible force holding us back!"
"Roger that."
"It's Swift." Magi-Chan said, "I have a feeling he's behind that force.
An explosion was heard. Pizza bot six had been hit.
"That's probably Edison!" Rosechu shrieked.
"Pizza bot 3 and 4, fall back!"
***
"They're turning around."
"Don't care." Edison shot down the next pizza bot. "One left." Edison loaded the launcher and fired. The rocket whirled right past the last one.
"Shit!"
"Hold on." Swift closed his eyes, the rocket turned around and hit the last bot, it hit the left side of the pizza bot and it crashed to the side of the mountain.
Edison nodded to Swift, "Not bad man."
***
"Pizza bot 4! Come in!....Dang it! They took them all out!"
"What are we going to do now?" Rosechu panicked.
"We go in and fucking fight anyway!" Punchy yelled, "It's not like we have a choice!"
***
Swift looks down the hillside, "I see our friends, they're coming this way."
"You go hold them off. I'll stay up here if they get past you."
"But I..."
Edison pulled out a pistol and pointed it at Swift's face. "Go. Now."
"Fine."
After Swift left Edison went inside the cave, Malcolm and Stryker were lying down by his equipment. Edison looked at the lifeless Malcolm, "Kill the black one first."
 
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Has anyone else been following that real doll guy? Had that thread happened sooner Deage League would've had some sweet cyborg assassin bitch. It's probably for the better that that didn't happen, adding Jace to a Sonichu story was crazy enough.


"I see the the cave!" Sonichu pointed towards the cave about a half mile up, "Let's go."
"I think you and your friends should stop." Swift appeared in front of them. "You're little journey ends here."
"Stand down Swift." Magi-Chan said calmly, "You can't take all of us down, and you can't take me down."
"Wonderful! The old man has joined you! So Magi-Chan, let's see you save your imbecile friends from this." Swift raised his hands and dozens of skeletons and corpses arose from the ground, some holding spears, some holding bows and quivers, some with Native American headdresses on, all facing them. "Did you know this place was an Indian burial ground? Plenty of skeletons in the soil."
Sonichu sighed, "What is with you and skeletons?!"
"I have the strength of an entire army, and I don't need to dirty my hands, perhaps Magi-Chan could use a skeleton army, we could have a skeleton war! Wouldn't that be fun!"
"Am I supposed to be intimidated Swift?" Magi-Chan pointed at him and the skeletons now faced Swift. "My psychic powers are far greater than yours, these skeletons are mine to control now."
"Oh, I know your telekinetic powers are superior, old man. Tell me, have you ever fought with someone as equally matched as I am?"
"What do you mean?"
"You've never had to try, have you. You're the great Magi-Chan. Nobody could ever stand up to you and your psychic powers, but I have psychic powers as well. You're strong, but you're just an old man and your mind is starting to go. You noticed the skeletons, but did you notice the rock?"
"Wha-" Magi-Chan was hit on the head from behind with a large rock. He fell on the ground and the skeletons faced his side once again.
"Oh this is just divine! The great psychic Magi-Chan, what takes him down? A rock! Dozens of skeletons in front of you, one rock behind you! Magi-Chan, the borderline god among men and chus, defeated by a rock."
Chris helped Magi-Chan off the ground, "How did you know to have the rock behind Magi-Chan?"
"It's like I'm psychic or something! Really, you need to think before you speak Chandler. Now, let's end this."
Swift floated back and the skeletons advanced.
Rosechu pulled out her lighting sword. She held out the sword and began spinning around, bones were flying apart from the lightning tornado.
Wild used his razor leaf attacks to slice the walking dead in half. Punchy was pummeling a skull into dust. Blake was using lightning to explode them.
"Guhh, we have to get to Swift," Magi-Chan rubbed the back of his head. "Break his concentration."
"But how?" Sonichu asked.
"I got an idea, but I'll need you and Chris."
Rosechu, Wild, Blake and Punchy were beginning to grow tired.
"There's too many of these things."
"Fuck this!"
"Keep trying to hold them off."
Sonichu ran through the skeleton army, he whispered something to Wild, then headed towards Swift. "Hey asshole!" He pulled a femur off one of the skeletons, "Take this!" He threw the femur at Swift's head.
Swift used his telekinesis to stop the femur, then was able to stop the stone Magi-Chan tried to hit him from behind, "Really you two? You tried to stop me the way I stopped you. I..."
When Swift turned his head to Magi-Chan, Wild has used his vines to hit Swift in the head. The skeleton army collapsed into inanimate piles of bones. Wild used his vines again to tie up Swift and slam him to the ground. Magi-Chan floated over and put his hands on Swift.
"We won't be doing that again Swift. You guys go ahead, me and Wild will stay back and hold this one down."
As Chris, Sonichu, Rosechu, Blake, and Punchy ran towards the entrance of the cave, Swift squirmed on the ground. Wild's vines and Magi-Chan's psychic hold kept him in place.
"There's no use Swift, Wild and I will be keeping you here."
"Magi-Chan, Wild, please. Serene will demolish your friends. Edison might take one down too."
"Why are you doing this?"
"Fine, I'll tell you."



Also, I've kinda enjoyed writing this whole fanfic with Chris in a positive light thing, Obscurity's Chris and this Chris are two totally different characters.
I'm also kinda enjoying adding more meat to underdeveloped Sonichu plots. That's the unintentional kinda good thing about Sonichu, it leaves a lot to the imagination of it's readers. After this I'm actually gonna write another work, focusing on another part of the Sonichu universe that was covered less than the Sunstone. It's been bouncing around in my noodle recently and I decided "what the hell." The name should give it away.
Next week get a small sample of Crystal Weston Chandler's Dark Chronicles.
 
Sorry I'm late, had my own writing project to take care of. Fortunately I'm all caught up now, and damn this is just getting more and more intense! Loved the fight between Edison and the Pizza Bots, and man Swift got really cocky! Really loved his fight scene too. Can't wait to see what Serene has in store for them.

And yeah, writing Chris in this light is definitely unique and makes the story stand out. As funny as I find the accurate or over the top parodies, this is actually pretty refreshing to read.
 
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Fuck it, it's already Thursday here.
On a weird note, Chris's trial is today. Sad coincidence that it's the same day as the chapter titled "Moving Forward" is posted.
Chris and the remainder of the team made it to the cave. Inside, the bodies of Malcolm and Stryker were laid next to the RPG launcher, then they finally saw the Moonstone.
"It doesn't have the same shine like the Sunstone had." Rosechu pointed out.
"Heh, that rock don't mean nothing now, Queen Serene is free." Edison stepped out of the shadow, his pistol in his hand.
"Where is she?!"
"Nah, I ain't answering you. She don't want to be bothered."
Chris took a step forward, "Do you know who I am, sir?" He reached into the neck of his shirt and pulled out the Sonichu Medallion, "With this medallion, I will become the ultimate soldier of love and honesty and my pure heart will punish you. Electric…hedgehog..."
Edison shot the Sonichu Medallion, Chris rubbed his chest, checking for blood. He wasn't hurt, but the medallion shattered and pieces were around him on the ground.
"You know, this is just me guy, but maybe you should think before you open yer yap. If you cut the heart shit speech I wouldn't have had the chance to shoot you." Edison's gun was still pointed at Chris's chest. He pulled the trigger, nothing happened. "Fucking piece if shit is jammed." He threw the gun to the side and pulled out a combat knife, "Ah well, more than one way to skin a rat."
"Step aside boys." Rosechu held up the lightning sword. "This one's mine!" She grew in size, and her eyes turned red, she became the Incredible Lioness once again.
"What the fuck?"
She opened her legs and sprang in the air, hoping to land on Edison's face.
Edison took a step back, "Bitch are you attacking me with yer cunt?!"
The Lioness roared.
"Look, I'm sorry about what I did to your kids, I'm just trying to save my friends."
Rosechu reverted back, "You're sorry?"
Edison was shocked how easy it was to calm her down, "Lady, I don't want to hurt no kids ever." He raised his knife, "But my friends are dying and Serene is the only one who can save them. Sorry bitch, I can't let you see her." He pulled a flash grenade off his belt and threw it.
Punchy still had his sunglasses and managed to get them on before everyone else was blinded. "That trick's getting fucking old!" He lunged forward to Edison.
Edison managed to dodge every one of Punchy's attacks, "Some fighter you are." Punchy's rage got the better of him, he began attacking quicker.
Edison caught one of Punchy's fists, and bent his arm back, a loud crack echoed in the cave, followed by Punchy screaming.
Sonichu was the first to get his vision back when he saw Punchy had a broken arm, Edison was standing behind him with his knife, about to slit his throat.
"Sorry Malcolm." Edison whispered, "I gotta kill the red one first."
Sonichu spin dashed to Edison's left side and knocked him back, his knife flew to the side and he was flat on his back. He tried to get up, but Punchy firmly planted his foot on his chest.
"Look who's some fighter now bitch." Edison groaned as Punchy put more pressure on his foot.
"Where is Serene."
"Fuck off. Ack!" A quite crack was heard as Punchy broke one of Edison's ribs.
Rosechu was able to see again, she put her lightning sword to Edison's throat, "Pardon?"
"I said fuck off! Errggunh!"
"Do you understand that me and Punchy could kill you?"
"Do it. I don't care."
"Oh," Rosechu walked over to Malcolm, "I see, you want to be with your team again." She used the tip of her sword to lift Malcolm's chin up.
"Fuck off bitch! Don't you fucking touch him." Edison spit up blood.
Rosechu smiled, "Oh lovely, they're not dead, yet." She pointed her sword to Malcolm's chest and put both her hands on the handle, "Tell us where your Queen is, or I'll plunge this sword into his heart."
"S-she's in the back!" He pointed to the hall Serene created, "Down that way! I put the sun crystal whatever back there too!"
Rosechu walked back to Edison and pointed her sword at his face, "Chris, Sonichu, Blake, you three go ahead, me and Punchy will keep our friend contained."
Sonichu nodded and the three ran down the hall.
"Errragh, do you think they can kill the moon bitch?"
"Moon bitch?" Rosechu seemed confused, "You don't speak very highly of your queen."
"Ah, fuck her crazy ass. I just wanted to save the commander. She told me she'll wake those two back up."
"Punchy, you don't think..."
"She hit those two with what she hit Bubbles with?"
"What?"
"Solario told us she'd wake up with the Sunstone whole."
"You mean if you rats win, they'll be fine."
"I think so."
"FUCK! Seriously? Errragh, you think youse guys can beat her."
Rosechu looked down the hallway, "Sonichu can do anything."
"Howzbout you get off me and..."
"No. Fuck you man. We have to be careful."
Rosechu continued to look down the hall, "Sonichu, you have to be careful too.

Here's a piece from Crystal Weston Chandler's Dark Cronicles

The mirror flipped, just as she knew it would. She let go of her brother's had and returned to her human form.
She pressed her hands against the mirror, she clearly saw her brother crying, but she barely heard anything, it felt as if she was underwater.
"Crystal! No!" Her brother screamed.
Slaweel said something, but she couldn't make it out. Then she saw a green light. When the light faded, she realized Patti-Chan had the mirror. Everything went black and silent. She was in the dark mirror's realm. She kept her hands on the surface of the mirror, she felt something was trying to pull her away. Dark forces were trying to pull her deeper into the realm. She grabbed the edge of the mirror and held on. She didn't know what lied deeper in the dark realm, and she didn't want to find out.
This might not be released right away, as I decided to take part in the Kiwi Farms short story contest. So I'll be working on Rebecca's Last Drive first. CWCDC will definitely start in March, possibly late February.
 
Hey, did you know that for this and Obscurity, I had been calling the island the Sunstone was kept Sunstone Island, and it turns out in the original Sonichu, it was called Rainbow Island. Oh well.
The stone hallway seemed to last forever. Sonichu couldn't stop thinking about his wife, who was left with an injured Punchy to hold off the psychotic Edison. Chris still mourned the loss the four Pizza Bots. The four Pizza Bots HE sent here.
Blake was thinking about Serene, the Sunstone, and his wife. He had to defeat Serene, not just for his wife. He remembered the first time he saw his wife's face, when he had tried to steal the Sunstone himself. He had no idea what consequences stealing the Sunstone would do then, and he was glad he was defeated years ago. Defeating Serene and saving the Sunstone was his chance at redemption.
At the end of the hallway was Queen Serene, facing away from them.
"Do you know the meaning of loneliness?" She turned to face them. "Do you know the feeling, having...nobody?"
Chris pointed to her, "Yes I do! For years I've been looking for an 18-32 caring, smoke-free, non-alcoholic white girl to make into my heartsweet! And I'm still a girlfriend-free, frustrated, cultural virgin!"
"You couldn't find a girlfriend? I had my entire village call me insane, I stayed trapped in the Moonstone for centuries! I didn't have a single soul for companionship! You don't know what true loneliness is! You have your family, your friends. I had nothing!" She snapped her fingers and the Moonstone appeared next to her, "This was the vessel of my loneliness.
"I DO know what it's like to be lonely! I've been lonely my whole life. I had to pay a hundred dollars for a damn hooker!"
"I've had nobody to even speak with for six hundred years! I could've purchased whatever a hooker is but they're were none around! Do you understand, NOTHING!"
Sonichu grew tired of this pity contest, "What's your goal?"
"Hmm, When my powers return to me I will rule everyone. I'll have scores of slaves waiting on me hand and foot, I'll have a queens cabinet, ready to do my every command. Edison will be my husband, and he'll never leave my sight. I will never feel loneliness again, and I will have my revenge on my village for calling me insane. Swear your allegiance to me, or perish."
"Serene, I can't let that happen." Blake walked up to her, "I understand your feelings, I was born in a tank. My only purpose was to kill Sonichu. Many nights I spent in that tank, looking around with nobody to talk too, knowing nobody cared about me. I wasn't a living creature to them. I was a weapon, a thing. Things change, I realized that the person I was trying to stop was actually one of my closest friends, I'm married and surrounded with friends I care for. Because of that, I can't let their world plunge into darkness for your selfish reasons."
Serene grabbed his neck with one hand, "You're a fool for defying me. You'll be the first to die." Blake struggled to get free, but Serene had a tight grip on him. She raised her free hand and shot a wave of silver energy into Blake's chest. When she let go, Blake dropped to the ground, no longer moving.
"BLAKE!"
Blake opened his eyes and saw he was in the lab that created him. He saw Bill pressing his lips to a can of cherry cola near a slide labeled "SONICHU DNA." Bill then spilled the cherry cola on the slide. Blake realized he was watching his creation.
"Bill was able to stop Serene because he had the blood of the Lunnu people." Blake turned around and saw Bubbles. "Did you see the cherry cola Bill was drinking?"
"Bubbles, what does this mean?"
"You're more than just Sonichu and cherry cola, Bill's DNA was on that can as well. Bill was the decendant, but part of you was cloned from Bill. Do you understand?"
"I, I can really stop Serene?"
"Don't let me die Blake." Everything went black again.
Blake was back in the cave by Serene's feet. He grabbed her ankle and pulled her to the ground.
Blake stood up, "It's over Serene."
Serene stood back up, "It seems you didn't learn your lesson the last time!"
"Chris! Sonichu! Get out of here!"
"Blake?"
"Now!"
As Chris and Sonichu ran back to Edison, Serene tried to fire a blast at them, Blake kicked her hand and she missed. Serene blasted Blake again, he absorbed the energy, his fur bacame silver. The quills on his head stood up.
"What's happening to me?"
He heard his wife's voice again. "Sonichu has Ultra Sonichu, and you have Silver Blake."
"I have a ultimate form too!"
Blake punched Serene in the stomach and sent her back to the wall. He flew up in the air and prepared a spin dash to her. As he dashed to her, she managed to swat him away, causing him to hit the Moonstone.
The Moonstone shattered into dust.
"NO! What have you done?!" Serene began to rapidly age as she limped to the pile of dust. She knelt down in the Moonstone's remains, a brittle and broken old woman.
Just then, golden dust flew into the cave, Solario appeared, "My queen."
Serene was sobbing, "Solario?"
"It's ok, my queen. I'm here now. You'll never be alone again."
"Solario, you were my one subject who stood by my side." She hugged the old bird.
"Yes, and I'll stand by my queen's side forever."
"Solario!" Blake yelled, "What's happening."
"The Sunstone served as a balance to the Moonstone. When you shattered one, you shattered the other." The golden dust, the dust of the Sunstone, began to mix into the dust of the Moonstone. "It's time to take these forces and make them into one."
In a flash Solario and Serene were gone, all that remained was a large, star shaped stone. When Blake closely examined it, he saw flecks of gold and silver crystals.
"Blake!" Chris ran into the cave, "We saw some gold fly into here and a flash of light! What in a bottle of Pepsi happened?"
"It appears the Moonstone and the Sunstone have fused to make this star."
"A Starstone?"
"I guess we can call it that. Let's get this rock to Flame, it's not the Sunstone, but at least it's whole."
"I'll contact Magi-Chan to teleport it back to Sunstone Island."
As Blake exited Serene's chamber with Chris, he saw Edison barely able to stand.
"Did you..."
"Yeah. I.."
"Yo, bitch what the shit happened?!" Edison turned to see Malcolm had awoken. Stryker's eyes were opening.
"It's cool Malcolm, our rat friends killed the moon bitch."
"Nah really? That black thing saved us?! Fuck man. I'm glad you didn't kill him."
Stryker didn't seem to remember anything, "There was this fucked up talking rock and."
"It's dead commander."
"Sickness."
Magi-Chan appeared by Sonichu, "Sonichu, I'm going to get Blake and the Starstone back to Flame's hut. I think you need to have a talk with Swift."
"About what?"
"He turned to Serene because...I think he should explain it. Blake, are you ready to go to Flame's." Blake nodded.
Magi-Chan teleported himself, Blake, and the Starstone back to Sunstone Island. Magi-Chan placed the Starstone where the Sunstone once rested. Blake ran into Flame's hut, there his wife was sitting up on the bed, smiling.
There will be an epilogue next week.
In case you're wondering, I did not make Silver Blake up, though he was called Silver Blachu at the time
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