The Writing Thread

Pink flowers, and white/Brown bark that shines, smelling sweet/birds sing as do I

When mountains cut air/and valleys grow damp, humid/my tree grows sturdy

Warm green to cold red/Busy yellow, dead orange/and warm robes to share

Cold, cold snow smothers/trees lie barren with silence/Dwell by my fire
 
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I started writing again a bit.

After the sudden passing of Woodrow, I announced America as part of my dominion the same day.
Killed, Like an animal in his own home, by those who betrayed his leadership, thinking they have right to rule by the notion that their logic was greater than his actions.
I felt saddened, The one who killed him was brought to justice, yet that would not bring him back.
Arrogance— That is what lead to his undoing, not that of his own; He was a true selfless man who took the burden of being the face of the war.
The one who had the same color of blood, The same internals that made them tick, dared to kill the one who tried their hardest to defend them from the Europeans.
It disgusted me. From all worlds I have seen, From those I fed from their fabric, Nothing prepared me for this, Nothing could have.

Spewing my absolute hatred for their actions, not toward a specific person, but man’s nature, it did not only shake the foundation of the surface, but the depths as well.

They came from the sea and started to walk nude through the farmland of Deale.
Finned, Scaled, Their eyes huge and black as void, Their physique mimicked that of man yet were misshapen to adapt to the waters below.
The horde was small, Some would walk on all fours with their webbed hands and feet, yet some try to clumsily imitate the one who was in front of their march who strode with a mix of fury and determination.
The citizens met their gaze, hurrying inside, grabbing weaponry, A pot, A pitchfork, A rifle, and those who did not find any would try and run.
Yet even with their weaponry, even if they could easily outnumber them, They did not attack.
Their world changed fast with introduction to Me, to risk attacking the unknown would be a gamble they might have to pay for with their lives, either by them, or by the many.
Those who the horde met unarmed or with nowhere to run, were ignored, as if they were not even worth their attention let alone their gaze.
They moved from Deale to Bristol, From Bristol to Queenland, until finally, they reached Me.
My many, mutated yet still very human, their instinct took over and readied their tendrils to strike at them, yet before they could, my booming voice demanded them to refrain.
I asked them to lead them to me, and they retracted their limbs back into their body as they gestured them to follow.
And so, They did, The leader still in front, as they would lead them beneath the house were my vessel was kept.
They look upon me in awe, He and his kin petrified at my mass as they were being watched by the men who tried to strike at them.
Their leader snaps out of it, his fins standing up high, his eyes wide as his webbed hands balled into fists showing his thick veins beneath his scales.
He runs toward Me, The many wanting to stop the sudden movement yet a gaze of my many eyes already stopped them from acting.
“You!” He gasps, as his gills open as he speaks, It is clear his body can tolerate the environment, yet is so twisted that is physically pains him.
Yet in this pain, In his movements, In his voice, one thing was clear, Rage.
“Are you their God!?” He yells yet after finishing his sentence, he grabs his throat and staggers, dry heaving.
One of his kin, A female one, quickly rushed toward him lend her shoulder which he desperately leans upon.
Finally I answer “No, I am not.” My voice booms, and he looks to Me again.
Before he could speak, the woman covers his mouth and points to her ear hole.
The language was foreign, even to Me, what I could recognize was tongue clicks, yet for the rest it sounded like pebbles striking water.
“Tehyn what, are Tye?’’ The woman calmly and softly speaks in broken English, each word uncertain and painful to her as well.
“NYARLATOTHEP,” I declared, “The entity that guides this sliver of humanity.”
“… Who might you be, Kin from the water?” I ask, my words gently lingering in the air as the man whispers again to her.
“DACy-GAonn!” She pronounces awkwardly, clearly the name does not belong in the air.
“Dagon?” I make of it to easily fit the atmosphere, and she just nods understanding what I am trying to do.
My form stands motionless, Unsure how to proceed, Why they were here I do not know, The only one who can vocalize drains themselves doing so.
Woodrow would have them slaughtered, of that I am certain, Yet something speaks to me, Curiosity, Another being to rival man’s intelligence?
“Dagon.” I announce their name, firm yet gentle, Acknowledging their existence the others looked up to me in reverence as if a respect was rare for them.
“The name of our God which is with us as we stand before you, and our people.” The man softly adds, clenching the woman's shoulder harder to support himself.


Yet I felt nothing, No ripple, No shift in the Fabric, Nobody akin to me.

Nothing.
 
It's getting there and I don't mean that dismissively. You should inform the reader who exactly is speaking early in the text or you could play with that and allude to their identity early on.
I am planning to show Nyarlatothep's perspective and interactions with the Dagon as mini chapters and shedding light on an alternative WW1.

Eventually it would lead to the bombing of the Zeedijk in the Netherlands and the Dagon Invasion of it.
 
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Random thought crossed my mind while writing comic( when i finish last 3 pages ill post dialouge so far)
I've been thinking of writing my thoughts, just for sake of it. Dont have to be public but yknow wondering if fellow writers do same like often note down/ write their opinions or thoughts or other things for whatever reason it may be weather to blow steam off or for sake of it
 
I've been thinking of writing my thoughts, just for sake of it. Dont have to be public but yknow wondering if fellow writers do same like often note down/ write their opinions or thoughts or other things for whatever reason it may be weather to blow steam off or for sake of it
Don't think that's too uncommon. People have kept diaries and journals forever, and blog-writing is fairly common today, even if the intent is for people to read it, it functionally serves as a repository for one's passing thoughts and opinions.

So if you have time to write private stuff, and think you'll get some value out of it, then why not?
 
It occurred to me that the most famous writers are known either because of adaptations of their work or they had such a personality and did public speaking (I.E. Hunter S. Thompson or Bukowski) that the fame came from the romantization of their personal character.

How many famous writers can you think of that never had their work adapted?
 
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It occurred to me that the most famous writers are known either because of adaptations of their work or they had such a personality and did public speaking (I.E. Hunter S. Thompson or Bukowski) that the fame came from the romantization of their personal character.

How many famous writers can you think of that never had their work adapted?

What definition of "famous" are you going by? I think Thompson was more famous back in the day--definitely not anymore. I think a younger person would only have heard of him if they were already familiar with the New Journalism movement. And I've never even heard of Bukowski or any of his work lol.

Thompson did get his work adapted. This movie was pretty popular, there's star power behind it after all.

Your question did make me think, though. Yes, all famous authors will have at least one of their works adapted, but outside of maybe the high-fantasy types (Martin, Tolkien, Rowling) I think the big names are generally known from their books first, with the subsequent movies or TV series being considered a disgrace to their work. (King and Nabokov come to mind.) And the reason why fantasy authors see their name better spread by adaptations is because fantasy is much more fun, for the average person, experienced visually than in the form of an awkwardly paced seven-book series clocking in at 150K words per volume.

To me, the formula for fame seems to be volume + niche. Not "niche" niche, but as in having their own lane and dominating it. And without volume, then the book will become famous rather than the author (can you name the author of Mockingbird off the top of your head?) I see adaptations as just a badge of honor for a literary work that was already famous on its own merit. Companies won't make adaptations if they don't believe it'll have an audience.

ETA: Just remembered that you were referring to writers in general and not just novelists. My bad. But in my defense, journalists, poets, essayists, and even short story writers no longer have the grip on the public attention that they used to. When I think of famous, I think of "your average reader who's not 'in on' the literary field knows of them".

Wish me luck, because I've decided to give querying another try. I'm starting to see short stories, writing contests etc. as just meaningless gimmicks, after focusing exclusively on that sort of thing for the past year.

Recently I've both published a short story and made second place in a contest ... and realized that I just didn't give a shit :slayer: Nothing can really replace the joy of having an actual printed book in your hands.
 
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It occurred to me that the most famous writers are known either because of adaptations of their work or they had such a personality and did public speaking (I.E. Hunter S. Thompson or Bukowski) that the fame came from the romantization of their personal character.

How many famous writers can you think of that never had their work adapted?
Used to be the other way about. Tolkien, Herbert, Joyce, Moore... people whose works were considered to be unfilmable / unrapeable filled the top-tier of famous authors.

Some of them even managed it by being unreadable.
 
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Tell me what you think of this section. I'm curious. I liked writing in the Browning M2.
The M2 Browning chugged hot lead at the monster as the HMMWV swerved and swung out of the way of its mighty blows. Manning the gun was First Lieutenant Jack Elvis. In all his career, he hadn’t seen such an alien creature take such a beating from a .50 Cal. They tended to die after a shot or two in his experience. This one was chewing through a full 100 round belt.

The last casing and belt link spit out of the heavy machine gun as the belt was expended. All while that giant chased the HMMWV. Elvis hurried to load the next belt.

“Come on baby, come on!” He shouted, slamming down the feed cover on the fresh belt before charging the machine gun again. “Have some more fun with the Ma Deuce, Aquian scum!”

Several shots rang out. All were useless. The Aquian giant had finally caught up, flipping the truck over with one gorilla like fist. Lieutenant Elvis was flung out of the turret, hitting the dirt and sending his helmet flying.

Jack Elvis could barely see anything. His face was covered in blood, his mind in a total daze. Something in his body felt broken. He couldn’t tell. Elvis could smell fire though. The Aquians had done a good job at laying siege to the base.

The monster’s shadow drew over him. The Aquian wasn’t even breaking a sweat. Jack closed his eyes. The glacier of a fist was raised and swung down in one fluid motion.
 
Tell me what you think of this section. I'm curious. I liked writing in the Browning M2.
The M2 Browning chugged hot lead at the monster as the HMMWV swerved and swung out of the way of its mighty blows. Manning the gun was First Lieutenant Jack Elvis. In all his career, he hadn’t seen such an alien creature take such a beating from a .50 Cal. They tended to die after a shot or two in his experience. This one was chewing through a full 100 round belt.

The last casing and belt link spit out of the heavy machine gun as the belt was expended. All while that giant chased the HMMWV. Elvis hurried to load the next belt.

“Come on baby, come on!” He shouted, slamming down the feed cover on the fresh belt before charging the machine gun again. “Have some more fun with the Ma Deuce, Aquian scum!”

Several shots rang out. All were useless. The Aquian giant had finally caught up, flipping the truck over with one gorilla like fist. Lieutenant Elvis was flung out of the turret, hitting the dirt and sending his helmet flying.

Jack Elvis could barely see anything. His face was covered in blood, his mind in a total daze. Something in his body felt broken. He couldn’t tell. Elvis could smell fire though. The Aquians had done a good job at laying siege to the base.

The monster’s shadow drew over him. The Aquian wasn’t even breaking a sweat. Jack closed his eyes. The glacier of a fist was raised and swung down in one fluid motion.
It's a start but you need to setup the environment much more. Paint a picture with words where these guys are and how terrible or glorious it might be for them.
 
It's a start but you need to setup the environment much more. Paint a picture with words where these guys are and how terrible or glorious it might be for them.
Ok ok. So more environmental stuff. I can dig that.
I'm not sure 'chugged hot lead' works for me. Sounds like it shoots itself.
I can see that. I like it tbh but I see what you mean.
 
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Think it's finished.

Gonna sit on it for a month, let the text settle for a while before going back in to see if I actually *like* the fucking thing, but yeah, I'm fuckin DONE.

Would like to say it feels good bros, but it feels more weird than good.
 
Does anyone know if they have a world they are building, like a universe as big as warhammer40k, where they can publish it? At least to get the ball rolling making something. I was thinking of just making a word-press website, but I've heard its something like Photoshop copyrighting whatever art you make on their software the last time I've heard about it. So wordpress might do the same copyrighting what you put on their platform, and taking everything down if I put too much "offensive" content on it.

Also lets say you finished your first draft, @darknation, where would you publish it after you sit on your work for a month and you "like" the fucking thing? The first site I think of is watt-pad but from what I've heard I'm not so keen being involve with the people there.

Also I found some advice when it comes to world-building if this helps: Write down your ideas on a notebook or piece of paper. Let it sit for a week. Cross out ideas where if its paragraphs long , or its something you just don't like reading, and you can't bother to read through it cross it out or mark as something you may get back too. And if an idea you wrote down catches your attention, and even better if its not written neatly yet it still catches your attention, check mark it and expand on that idea.
 
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Also lets say you finished your first draft, @darknation, where would you publish it after you sit on your work for a month and you "like" the fucking thing? The first site I think of is watt-pad but from what I've heard I'm not so keen being involve with the people there.
Online? Wouldn't bother. I'd rather burn it out of spite than subject myself to begging strangers for clicks.

I used to do performance poetry, which started as standing on street corners swearing at the government / people who happened to be walking by. Entered some competitions, got well known because muh iambic pentameter. Got a couple of editing jobs for other street poets who were publishing, I scratch your arse you scratch mine later, blah blah blah. See people, meet people, do little gigs here and there. Write a novel. Delete it. Write it again.

Ultimately, you want to be in a position where you can call in favours, put some fucking blood in the water, see who bites.
 
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