Tiberius Rising Tiberius Rising: Chapter 19

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Whats this? An overarcing plot? In MY Tiberius Rising?

Edit: For thoose giving the optimistic rating, I am just noting that this is turning from a mary-sue fanfic to... well, still a mary-sue fanfic but one thats not just AH GO INTO DA ROOM AND KILL ALL THE TERRORISTS
 
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Favorite quote:

"As of now, we have evidence to suggust [sic] hate crimes, drug growing and trafficking, several counts of suspected murder, possessing illegal assault weapons and weapon mods, weapons trafficking, using child soldiers, operating vehicles with suspended licenses and treason."
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The line between fiction and reality blurs evermore.
 
Obama responded tiredly. "Having a rifle to protect your home is fine. Installing a jury-rigged anti-aircraft gun in your backyard is another thing. These people are a powder keg waiting to happen."

lel.
 
As always, it would help the story immensly if he dropped any pretense of "ITS REALISTIC!1" and just admitted to what it is: Escapist fantasy.

A bonus of this is that you can do whatever you want. Have Stryker kick open a weaposn create to reveal... A FAMAS with a underbarrel plasmagun "Now to put the fire in their eyes!" yells Stryker elatedly.

I am at least glad he didnt potray Obama as secretly the mastermind behind this all...

(Rate this optimistic! You know its gonna happen!)
 
Woody Chan said:
As always, it would help the story immensly if he dropped any pretense of "ITS REALISTIC!1" and just admitted to what it is: Escapist fantasy.

A bonus of this is that you can do whatever you want. Have Stryker kick open a weaposn create to reveal... A FAMAS with a underbarrel plasmagun "Now to put the fire in their eyes!" yells Stryker elatedly.

I am at least glad he didnt potray Obama as secretly the mastermind behind this all...

(Rate this optimistic! You know its gonna happen!)
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YET. If you seriously don't believe the final chapter will have Stryker raiding the White House Black Dynamite Style to assassinate the true Caliphate Obama, then you might as well be in Tyce's sped class.
 
Oh I guess I have something thoughtful to say.

This part right here:
Alexander cleared his throat. "The first prong of attack begins with Stryker's militia, 'Deagle Nation', being condemned by the media as a domestic terrorist cell. We'll publicize a mix of fabricated and honest evidence to achieve this end. Then we'll send National Guard peacekeepers to Massachusetts in force."


"Can't we just drone strike them?" Obama offered, impatiently. "They've already shown more than enough anti-government sentiment to warrant such an action." Alexander responded: "Unfortunately, HUMINT suggests the militia possesses anti-air capability, and if we fail and they manage to spin it against us, we'll have a media shitstorm on our hands. Attacking them with force would only martyr them, and prove their anti-government beliefs." Obama sighed. "Alright, then what do we have on them? We need something for the press."
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Obama asks why they can't use a very sophisticated drone airstrike to pinpoint eliminate Deagle Nation and his second reason is that using force would bolster Stryker's message, but he advocates using a different kind of force with an even large fingerprint in just the last paragraph. Both things are said by the same person.
 
KingofManga420 said:
YET. If you seriously don't believe the final chapter will have Stryker raiding the White House Black Dynamite Style to assassinate the true Caliphate Obama, then you might as well be in Tyce's sped class.
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It still fucking kills me every time I read the phrase "sped class", instinctively mouse over to rate the post A-Log, then remember that he is actually in a sped class and take a knee to thank Allah for granting us such beautiful divine comedy.
 
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And double post but:

Obama responded tiredly. "Having a rifle to protect your home is fine. Installing a jury-rigged anti-aircraft gun in your backyard is another thing. These people are a powder keg waiting to happen."
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Like, when I read that Obama was trying to disarm people in the paragraphs before, I kind of got the feeling he was going to take all guns, making him the bad guy. That alone is already paper thin and very obvious right-wing propaganda, but then his "evil reveal" message is completely sane and (more humorously) a policy that is already extant, so the accomplishments of destroying Deagle Nation would change nothing and eliminate what is made out to be a crazy nest of AWOL marines in possession of cutting edge heavy weapons.

:nicedude::nicedude::nicedude::nicedude::nicedude::nicedude:
 
يكون الله معك في قلبك وكذلك الطبقة أسرعت،, DeagleDad420
 
What I want to know is why the DCI is reiterating publicly known points of the war on terror to the President as if it was classified information.

Also why is ISIS in play now?
 
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Also why is ISIS in play now?
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Because he's been talking about it and seeing them on the news lately. It is literally that simple.

Tiberius Rising exists only as a vehicle to tie his momentary whims together in the cheapest manner possible. It's not remotely cohesive. That's why it's so incoherent and has such massive shifts in tone, subject matter, even writing quality.
 
So... Stryker, a specop marine Navy SEAL Army Ranger Delta Force Operator Crewman Whateverthefuck also happens to run, in the Tiberius Rising universe, a militia that expresses an anti-government sentiment.

GOD DAMMIT.
 
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