Wendigoon Thread

Aunt Carol said:
In the "before" pictures she looks exactly like the kind of woman who becomes a veterinarian; basically a horse girl.

...Wendiwife is a research vet, right? She might have gone from contacts to glasses after walking by the eyewash station too many times, or getting fur stuck under a lens.

I don't care to research what drove the rest of the makeover but eeh, it does make one wonder, more so than the bad moustache decisions that are common to the younger male.
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She needs a different style of glasses, regardless of why she's wearing them.
 
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Blue Gem Muslim Queen said:
Did she really do anything worth a fuzz or are we just making assumptions based on how she looks?
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Mostly due to her starting her own NepoTube channel. I don't find her that interesting aside from her appearance transformation. I think we should wait to see more from her if her taste on that shitty moustache really is a bad omen.
 
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Weekly Creepcast, “I wrote myself a letter, I got a response”


Shorter video which is promising.

Blue Gem Muslim Queen said:
Did she really do anything worth a fuzz or are we just making assumptions based on how she looks?
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To be honest I wasn’t expecting this much negative backlash when I shared it. I’m personally hoping it goes smoothly though I do recognize the risks she’s taking trying this that have been brought up here. I won’t post anymore unless there’s a disaster or it ends up being genuinely enjoyable on its own beyond being Wendigoon-adjacent.
 
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PyrrhicRustle said:
Weekly Creepcast, “I wrote myself a letter, I got a response”


Shorter video which is promising.
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>From the same guy who wrote My Job is Watching a Woman Trapped in a Room

E: It's certainly a lot better, but it's still a weird-ass story. It's like was worried about making it too bleak in the climax he decided on a weird thriller thing and left it kinda ambiguous if Not Scott survived or not just to avoid making it the obviously happy ending he wanted. It's bizarre. Now if it was an Elias Witherow story we'd go all the way up to the (very graphic) child killing and it turns out that wasn't how you open the door and Not Scott was just messing with them.

The rest of it was fine. I get the impression he was pantsing the first three parts and then got stuck at trying to figure out how to get Scott and Christine out of the mirror world he sat down and wrote up a proper narrative instead. Between this ending and the plot of My Job I'm starting to think this is how he likes to write his stories, and probably why both stories' endings sucked. Frankly, you could have just ended it at part two with some editing—maybe more description of Not Scott's world—and that in and of itself would have made a great story.
 
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Godchu said:
>From the same guy who wrote My Job is Watching a Woman Trapped in a Room
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This one was actually better, and I didn't expect the unveiling of the Autistic Expanded Universe. Short, sweet, shit goes down, and now I’m actually interested in whatever stories may tie into the mirror dimension because it almost reminds me of Hellstar Remina in that something weird happened and now there’s insane cults going around doing shit.
I looked into it, and wow.
There's an absurdly large chart tying all his stories together, he has a subreddit at r/verastahl, and a very large library of shit he wrote.
 
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I do like how this dude came from a dimension where pugs didn't exist, and he sees this:
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and goes, "DAMN that thing's fucked up! I love it."
 
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Story wasn't too bad, but it was a slog getting through it because Meat and Goon just spent so much time pausing, which I typically don't mind usually but this time I was just thinking it was too much.
Why did Not Scott tell Scott he raped Christine? It seemed extremely pointless since Not Scott would pull nearly an immediate 180 and save them, just to go back, just to kill another kid and come back. That and the way the author just planted the idea that Christine was getting raped silly nonstop by Not Scott seemed like a dumb author's way of making an "adult story". If it has rape it must be mature!
I would be curious on a follow up about Christine since she seems like the actual villain. She went along with the rape lie and even added on to it saying the rape got progressively worse and was all too eager to kill a child. Honestly I'd probably have liked the story ending better had she been pulled back in the other world since it took her only two weeks (?) to become a pshycho when she admitted to herself multiple times that Not Scott didn't even treat her bad.
Story wasn't the worst one the boys have covered, but far, far from the best.
 
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If this new story is really done by the tard who did the Woman Watching thing, this is gonna be really dumb. Good way to kick off my work morning.
Aunt Carol said:
research vet, right?
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If so, that's like 160k a year

Edit: Tapped out hard and early. 30 minutes in and it's more stupid than his last story. Plus Goon and Meat keep showing they don't know what the fuck words mean by harping about this being some incel, mgtow, redpiller story. Very reddit.
 
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Rick The Stick said:
Edit: Tapped out hard and early. 30 minutes in and it's more stupid than his last story. Plus Goon and Meat keep showing they don't know what the fuck words mean by harping about this being some incel, mgtow, redpiller story. Very reddit.
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Exactly what I had to do. After the whole mgtow pissing and moaning I just looked up the story online and read it there. It's a much shorter story if you don't have those two trying their hardest to virtue signal over a bad guy calling a woman a whore for like 3 minutes apiece after every paragraph.

Also the more I thought about the story after I made my post last night I kept poking holes in the plot, that author is really fucking retarded. Give me back Elias Witherow.
 
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Meth Dick said:
Why did Not Scott tell Scott he raped Christine? It seemed extremely pointless since Not Scott would pull nearly an immediate 180 and save them, just to go back, just to kill another kid and come back. That and the way the author just planted the idea that Christine was getting raped silly nonstop by Not Scott seemed like a dumb author's way of making an "adult story". If it has rape it must be mature!
I would be curious on a follow up about Christine since she seems like the actual villain. She went along with the rape lie and even added on to it saying the rape got progressively worse and was all too eager to kill a child. Honestly I'd probably have liked the story ending better had she been pulled back in the other world since it took her only two weeks (?) to become a pshycho when she admitted to herself multiple times that Not Scott didn't even treat her bad.
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I took that as her being corrupted by the mirror world and Not Scott losing the corruption of the mirror world, but it could have been done more tidily.
I would rather have had the letter threaten to do horrible things to her, then have Christine make shit up as she gets more corrupted and desperate, and then while Not Scott is chilling with the pug doing some soul-searching Scott comes in and kidnaps him like what happened before, throws him in the mirror world, and they never see each other again. Maybe even have the question of abuse be held off until the end when the dust settles and have it be revealed, fucking with Scott's feelings about everything.
 
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VeteranOfTheRetardWars said:
I took that as her being corrupted by the mirror world and Not Scott losing the corruption of the mirror world, but it could have been done more tidily.
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So just merely existing in the other world corrupts or un-corrupts?
If the story had been she survived a year or more having to do and endure horrible things that she became a monstrous psycho, and Not Scott existing in the nice world made him soft in that time it would have made more sense, since she's just been hiding in the apartment for 2 weeks, being fed regularly, and enduring no physical or sexual abuse, so she just turns into a bitch because... she's there? Lazy.
This entire story seems rushed and like something a edgy and lazy but creative highschooler would write for a class assignment, giving some effort but not 100 percent.
I think if the author rewrote this story and worked on some of the details, fleshed out some things, especially like what happened in the good world while Christine was gone (there had to have been an investigation over her disappearance). Also when Not Scott went to Scott's job, it glossed over people giving him weird looks for his work clearly not being what Scott would typically do, that could have been extended upon. I understand that not everything needs to be explained, but this story feels disconnected and just jumping limb to limb with no connective tissue.
It's fine as a proof of concept, but not as the final product.
 
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I mostly liked that last story. It has a decent bit of general dumb/wat but my main problem was the rape thing. I don't get why Not-Scott would say that if he didn't do it since he wouldn't have any reason to lie.

I could see that beat working if he kidnapped Christine to Mirror World, used her as leverage to get Scott to give him whatever he needed to travel to Normal World permanently (and brought Christine back with him when he did), and then once the corruption of the Mirror World wore off he started feeling guilty about what he had done to Scott so he started sending him awful letters to convince Scott that he had to kill a kid to save Christine from what he was doing to her in Normal World

I did like Christine lying to get Scott to do whatever it took to get back home, though I laughed when she ended up being 100% correct anyway

The ending sucked on its own but if it has a sequel there's interesting places it could go, I wouldn't hate hearing more

I was also thinking about SCP-093 basically the whole time, which used to be a favorite of mine, not sure how it holds up (if you just read the entry there's not much to it but if you read the test logs it's all about exploring mirror dimensions, some of which aren't too dissimilar to the Mirror World from this story)
 
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Meth Dick said:
So just merely existing in the other world corrupts or un-corrupts?
If the story had been she survived a year or more having to do and endure horrible things that she became a monstrous psycho, and Not Scott existing in the nice world made him soft in that time it would have made more sense, since she's just been hiding in the apartment for 2 weeks, being fed regularly, and enduring no physical or sexual abuse, so she just turns into a bitch because... she's there? Lazy.
This entire story seems rushed and like something a edgy and lazy but creative highschooler would write for a class assignment, giving some effort but not 100 percent.
I think if the author rewrote this story and worked on some of the details, fleshed out some things, especially like what happened in the good world while Christine was gone (there had to have been an investigation over her disappearance). Also when Not Scott went to Scott's job, it glossed over people giving him weird looks for his work clearly not being what Scott would typically do, that could have been extended upon. I understand that not everything needs to be explained, but this story feels disconnected and just jumping limb to limb with no connective tissue.
It's fine as a proof of concept, but not as the final product.
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It had good ideas, and that’s a mean thing to say tbh.
 
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