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- May 14, 2019
So I started Empire of the Ants, then I stopped because it seemed like it kind of sucked, then I wanted to started again, but I can't find it!
So instead I'm reading The Hornet's Nest by President Jimmy Carter. Yes, the President. He was the first President to write a novel. It's about the Revolutionary War in the Deep South, Georgia (his state) and South Carolina and such. A front that, as it often goes, is quite overlooked despite having lead directly up to the end of the war, from Camden and Kings Mountain and such up to Yorktown. Recall, after the British realized they were fucked in New England they shifted their focus to the relatively Loyalist South and tried to hold on there. It's an interesting front, because whereas in New England the population was overwhelmingly Patriot, in the Deep South the population had a very large Loyalist movement to the point that the war was effectively a civil war within the colonies and degenerated into the same kind of nasty guerilla warfare and atrocities (The Patriot) that brings.
Unfortunately, so far it seems to not be real good. There's a common flaw of historical fiction where the author wants to expodump but doesn't know how. They write dialogue into character's mouths that sounds like they're giving a history lesson on what is to them contemporary events. Then there's a separate issue, which is when the author needs to skip large periods of time, or introduce the life story of a character, and does it through description in a way that feels like a biography instead of seeing it "through their eyes." I can't blame Carter too much, it was his first novel, but still.
So instead I'm reading The Hornet's Nest by President Jimmy Carter. Yes, the President. He was the first President to write a novel. It's about the Revolutionary War in the Deep South, Georgia (his state) and South Carolina and such. A front that, as it often goes, is quite overlooked despite having lead directly up to the end of the war, from Camden and Kings Mountain and such up to Yorktown. Recall, after the British realized they were fucked in New England they shifted their focus to the relatively Loyalist South and tried to hold on there. It's an interesting front, because whereas in New England the population was overwhelmingly Patriot, in the Deep South the population had a very large Loyalist movement to the point that the war was effectively a civil war within the colonies and degenerated into the same kind of nasty guerilla warfare and atrocities (The Patriot) that brings.
Unfortunately, so far it seems to not be real good. There's a common flaw of historical fiction where the author wants to expodump but doesn't know how. They write dialogue into character's mouths that sounds like they're giving a history lesson on what is to them contemporary events. Then there's a separate issue, which is when the author needs to skip large periods of time, or introduce the life story of a character, and does it through description in a way that feels like a biography instead of seeing it "through their eyes." I can't blame Carter too much, it was his first novel, but still.