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He could be good at descriptive writing if learned how to say more with less. As it is, I can get a few paragraphs in before my eyes start glazing over. This is pure literary diarrhea.
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I think I understand why this book is so long, it goes on too long describing things. Just look at the description of Locket, almost a page detailing her appearance.He could be good at descriptive writing if learned how to say more with less. As it is, I can get a few paragraphs in before my eyes start glazing over. This is pure literary diarrhea.
He said there will be an illustration between each chapter, in which I guess environment and characters will be, so he could really relax a little with the description and not describe every single little detail. Detail is always good, but this here is way too much.I think I understand why this book is so long, it goes on too long describing things. Just look at the description of Locket, almost a page detailing her appearance.
With how extremely overdesigned his characters and environments are, you can imagine that a lot of the content is going to be describing what they look like.
He could cut the sentences or directly put some illustration of the character with a simple description, I don't know.
I don't know, this feels more and more contradictory."Violence is a quality that is built into all living things, and sympathy is not a factor when it comes to the natural order"
Ok, so I gave the writer the benefit of the doubt and thought that maaaybe, in his work he might have cases where all this constant violence destroys them, but this? this is not in quotes, this is 3rd person preaching about how sympathy is useless. sure, violence is hard-wired into creatures but "sympathy is not a factor" that's a red flag. Am I saying fennah is the sort that believes homeless people should be euthanized, no, but that kinda thought is down on the same slope.
How much Vore do you think is going to be explained in detail in the book? just pages of how one character eats another weaker character whole. Just how many pages about the big mountain-sized thing lapping up whole villages or slightly smaller 1-mile high characters. all this explained in flowery detail and presented as horror when is reality it's all just fetish fuel.I don't know if this was already posted sometime, but I found this as well and... yeah. Nice they have a position for everything, guess he will explain these in the book too what their use are (vessel is for giving birth). I'm not looking forward to it, this will be extremely gross. If they at least had heads it would be so much more bearable - and the waist thing they even tear off limbs holy fuck.
What is so humilating about getting your head torn off? Yeah you lost, everyone saw that, you don't have to cut off the head to make it clearer. If the opponent is stronger anyway they can force you in that position whether you have your head or not. Why do they have to get their head cut to give birth??? I also want to add that them getting pregnant is basically two people raping a person, which is even more disturbing.
I know fetish is fetish and no one can choose to have or not have a fetish, but from the point of view of writing logic this doesn't make sense. Have your disturbing fetish but at least make it have sense. The victim is unconscious when the head gets cut off, so what is the point of it? Isn't it so much more humilating if the victim lives through it than regaining their head after time and getting to know what happened? The winners basically humilate a temporarely-dead corpse. Where's the satisfaction in that? Isn't the whole point of humilation that the victim is alive/conscious and gets shamed?
The only way to sense is A. No head cutting (which means no fetish) or B. Head will still be conscious (altering aka removal of half the fetish). But he wants to have sexy all the way through so he'll rather have the full fetish than good story. Humilation is part of the fetish so why not remove the decapitation and let the humilation stay? I don't get him.
I like how he says it's not his fetish and then explains in immense detail how they straight out love to behead, humilate and sometimes rape. "I want to include my fetish a little but not make it obvious." - Fennah's an expert in that.How much Vore do you think is going to be explained in detail in the book? just pages of how one character eats another weaker character whole. Just how many pages about the big mountain-sized thing lapping up whole villages or slightly smaller 1-mile high characters. all this explained in flowery detail and presented as horror when is reality it's all just fetish fuel.
I mean I don't care if that's what you like but to present it as anything other than light pornography is so fucking ballon-headed.
Sam is probably a fan of Hard Vore, since these things are cannibalistic and there are slaughterhouses where they prepare the weak kivs. So, we'll probably see a description of it.How much Vore do you think is going to be explained in detail in the book? just pages of how one character eats another weaker character whole. Just how many pages about the big mountain-sized thing lapping up whole villages or slightly smaller 1-mile high characters. all this explained in flowery detail and presented as horror when is reality it's all just fetish fuel.
I mean I don't care if that's what you like but to present it as anything other than light pornography is so fucking ballon-headed.
I think his fetish is the most interesting thing about him. It's so... Novel at this point. A quick PL: I proof read and edit smut to pay my bills. I'm desensitized to most fetishes. I've spent hours writing in commas into stories about werefrogs with penis tongues fucking wolves through the mouth, out the ass, and into the snatch. That's an actual thing I was paid to do. Fennah at the very least has a novel fetish to laugh at.I like how he says it's not his fetish and then explains in immense detail how they straight out love to behead, humilate and sometimes rape. "I want to include my fetish a little but not make it obvious." - Fennah's an expert in that.
Looking through the gallery, KiwiFarms including his furaffinity and even his animations I saw so much fetish- and sexual art comissioned or official that I can't. It's like presenting a criminal undeniable proof including a recording of him commiting the crime and he says "I didn't do it, I'm innocent."
Clap clap Fennah, you're extremely subtle. This dude wrote an 700+ page encyclopedia of all his fetishes! And this is just the first volume of six! Man, I'm so looking forward to reading Fennah's fetish bible.
I listed vore at the bottom, its a really boring fetish and there isn't much to examine there, it is also worth noting that I have no real insight into vore as fetish, more "sane" fetishes, like BDSM and its components, I have more experience with and have read a fair bit on the psychology of them. There isn't enough evidence of size play for me to list it. He's only ever mentioned two giant monsters, and that is more for "Oh wow look how big and powerful these things were and this one character killed them, oh man look how cool that is!" reason more than "crush me mommy" reasons. Like yeah he has big tall beasties, but that's just tall woman fetish. He doesn't really spend that much time on size play stuff for me to be sure about it.I think you forgot Vore and size play, as well as full-on macro, but I guess you are on about the mechanically possible ones lol. again, I don't care what he is into but presenting this story as anything but pornography is fucking delusional. it bares repeating, just make an erotic story dude.
I can imagine most people buying PDF's and Ctrl-F'ing the words: humiliate, eat, swallow, dominate, step on, impale, giant, etcetera. without caring one bit about any of the political bullcrap.
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My god y'all are going in to deep with this fetish crap. I highly doubt it goes further than that.I listed vore at the bottom, its a really boring fetish and there isn't much to examine there, it is also worth noting that I have no real insight into vore as fetish, more "sane" fetishes, like BDSM and its components, I have more experience with and have read a fair bit on the psychology of them. There isn't enough evidence of size play for me to list it. He's only ever mentioned two giant monsters, and that is more for "Oh wow look how big and powerful these things were and this one character killed them, oh man look how cool that is!" reason more than "crush me mommy" reasons. Like yeah he has big tall beasties, but that's just tall woman fetish. He doesn't really spend that much time on size play stuff for me to be sure about it.
I plan to read it over, I hope he does a PDF release, as I am over in Canuckistan land, so ordering a physical copy cross the ocean will suuuuuuuuck. When I do get around to reading it I will list the fetish count per chapter though. It'll make it more fun.
Lol, I agree. However, someone rated you "autistic" which is pretty below the belt tbh. I mean personally, I just think y'all are taking the whole fetish thing too seriously at this point. We get it, Fennah's stuff can come off as very fetishized. What else is new? Perhaps we should take a step back and start over, because this is getting ridiculous. So Fennah hasn't posted anything new in awhile, he's probably still working on various projects behind the scenes. Isn't he suppose to make a voice test animation for Winifred next?My god y'all are going in to deep with this fetish crap. I highly doubt it goes further than that.
But hey what would I know?
He is actually as far as I'm aware of. Also, I am actually a high functioning autistic so please avoid using it in a form of insult. It's offensive.Lol, I agree. However, someone rated you "autistic" which is pretty below the belt tbh. I mean personally, I just think y'all are taking the whole fetish thing too seriously at this point. We get it, Fennah's stuff can come off as very fetishized. What else is new? Perhaps we should take a step back and start over, because this is getting ridiculous. So Fennah hasn't posted anything new in awhile, he's probably still working on various projects behind the scenes. Isn't he suppose to make a voice test animation for Winifred next?
Nice sock Sam. Also you seem a bit retarded. Double check what site you're on and lurk more.Personally, likely i won't interact to this thread much. But y'all really dipping into this a bit much, if you don't like his content or seemingly seek some form of reason to make him out as this bad guy.
Why not simply ignore his content entirely? Why are you so invested in what he's doing? Its weird to one's pov, true but now its become an obsession to finding out every little flaw there is and hanging over an unnecessary amount of finding out what his fetishes are. Its a little weird.
But i won't criticize your opinions and how you feel towards it. I'm honestly unbothered.
Well damn, that's a bit harsh.Nice sock Sam. Also you seem a bit retarded. Double check what site you're on and lurk more.