After the disaster that was his previous love story (which I don't want to keep harping on about), SP said he wanted to write another romance, but better. I'd say he succeeded, even if it's still far from perfect. I can at least understand where some of the janky writing ideas are coming from, at least. However, despite that, it's still got an air of cringe that hangs over it like a dark cloud.
Chloe de Vries is our plucky girlfailure protagonist, a loser who has never succeeded in her life. She's tried her hand at many things and failed them all. The fact she even got this job assessing kolshian asylum seekers is some sort of miracle, but it's less due to her qualifications and more because nobody wants to interact with kolshians. Lucky her. Things start poorly, because everyone on the station is a dickhead, and she's got a failure complex and is completely out of her depth. It's fortunate, then, that her first assessment is a very friendly kolshian indeed - our second protagonist, Kelvanis. Or Kelvan to his friends.
I'd say Kelvan's chapters are more interesting than Chloe's. While the woes of a perennial girlfailure are kind of endearing, Kelvan's an alien and his perspective is typically more intriguing. We learn about the state of Aafa in more detail than we've heard about Grenelka or Nishtal. It's fucked. Things are bad on Aafa and it shouldn't come as a surprise that a lot of kolshians want to leave. With his education in xenobotany going to waste when he can't leave the planet and the population living in squalid semi-anarchy, he decides he needs to make an exit... even if it means leaving his sister behind, all by herself, on a planet where law and order has mostly fallen apart. Hmmm. Okay. His sister doesn't want him to go, but it comes from a place of fearing for his life, rather than fearing what might happen to her if she's left by herself, which is something that gets bizarrely glossed over outside of token references to burglars. This is one of many very odd writing choices in this story.
Kelvan looks over Aafa as he ascends to the human space station, giving us more tidbits on the state of the planet and reminiscing about the Federation-Terran war from a random civilian's perspective as he zooms up into the sky. He remembers seeing the faint explosions in the sky as arxur, kolshian, and human ships were entangled with each other... as well as the falling of debris that killed almost as many people as the riots. This is one of the strengths of the bonus chapters - we all unironically love a random civilian's perspective of a massive conflict and its aftermath, since it's more relatable than the heroes' perspective. He can't think for long, though, as he's got an interview with Chloe to get to. He's not confident, but he's gonna try, by gum, because humans need to see that most kolshians are goo' boys who dindu nuffin.
Chloe is in a complete state when Kelvan strolls in. No idea what to do, say, or write. The sight of him pushes her over the edge and she loses her head and starts to babble. SP takes the time to describe a kolshian in more detail, but I still, for the life of me, cannot visualise what the hell a kolshian is supposed to look like. As one of the few alien species that aren't 'Earth animal but a bit weird' in design, kolshians need to be described in a little more detail, but I'm just full of questions. Are their legs tentacles too? Are they hunched over, or upright? How big are their heads relative to their body? Was there a better description in the main story that I forgot about? I don't have a clue! I guess the image on the wiki is close enough, although it's explicitly stated that kolshians have vertical slit pupils... I'm rambling, sorry. Point is, Kelvan is a big sweetie and helps Chloe calm down by engaging in some friendly silliness. Rather taken by the big-hearted alien, Chloe relaxes and starts noticing stuff about him and their interview lasts way too long and you can see where this is going. Strange, isn't it, how in the few times SP has paired a human female with an alien male, it's always a white woman. Does he truly hate aliens that much? I can't imagine why he'd be so cruel.
Their romance is thankfully a slow burn. They don't fall head over heels immediately and it takes a handful of chapters for the pair of them work out they fancy each other, which I'm appreciative of, even if it results in SCL being one of the longest side stories. Kelvan and Chloe both mistake their growing interest in each other for other emotions, like anti-predator fear or new job nervousness, which is cute. The interview degenerates into casual chat as they talk about what a shithole Aafa has become, to how the mighty Dutch have conquered the galaxy with their knowledge of water's edge living. It's pretty cute. They're interrupted by Chloe's manager, but she tells him to piss off. It seems our intrepid lovebirds are about to be split up! But Kelvan offers to carry Chloe's bags to her room! And then she invites him in! And they have a nice meal, share some more chitchat, and generally get to know each other better, as the romantic tension begins to REALLY blossom. There's no getting around it - they're in true and honest looooove. And then they FUCK. The first official sex scene of the franchise, although it's mercifully kept very vague. Or perhaps unmercifully if you're into that sorta thing. I'm not judging. Really! Apparently she bit him a lot, which is funny to think about, seeing as she's a meat-eater.
Everything goes wrong the next morning, though. Kelvan wasn't in his bunk, and his application was rejected anyway. Chloe has to admit to her manager that he's in her room. He loses his mind, because he's been assaulted by a kolshian before, as have many people... but he's just barely nice enough to allow Chloe to get rid of Kelvan herself, rather than sending in the SWAT team. The security guard (who's much nicer than the manager, although he's still kind of a dick) plants an idea in her head to get Kelvan a second shot, although he ends up refusing to go along with it - he returns to Aafa, promising to name a new flower after her. But all is not lost, for there's ANOTHER way to get him asylum on Earth. All she has to do is go down to Aafa and find him. But that's a really bad idea! Aafa is borderline lawless, full of criminals and desperate people who fucking hate humans. Sending down a lone human by herself is tantamount to suicide. Mercifully, she realises this, and doesn't go through with it, ending the story right there and then - hey, wait, why's that shuttle going down to Aafa- oh, goddamnit, woman.
Ordinarily I'd say this was a retard writing decision, but let's face it - everyone's done something spectacularly fucking stupid in the name of love before. I myself have embarrassed myself in the name of romance in the past. This seems to be a step above that, though. Chloe's trip to Aafa is... a mixed bag, to say the least. She finds Kelvan, but at the cost of being brutally mugged. So that's nice. But now their love can finally blossom, if they can get past the final boss of romance blockading.
SCL is a bit of a hard one to read. It's cringe, for a start. There's also a lot of stuff that seems really fucking stupid and nonsensical on paper, that only start to make sense when you stop and think about it - people doing stupid shit for love, the office being barely functional because nobody's qualified and it's far away from Earth jurisdiction, the fact there seems to be so few avenues for rejected applicants is farcical because the manager hates kolshians, Chloe makes ridiculous decisions out of inexperience, etc etc. I still can't quite get over Kelvan abandoning his sister, though. His reasons for seeking asylum are altruistic, but you can't just leave a young woman alone in a society like that, my guy. SCL is also fucking long - I've only covered the first half of it in any detail, and I haven't talked about the last couple pages at all. However, it's still a good yarn, the sort of romance that'll resonate pretty well with men - it's not about the chase, but about perserverance and unconditional attraction. And in that regard, it works quite well, although I kinda question why they didn't just add each other on Discord and keep in touch that way.
But let's not allow all this distract us from the fact Noah is a double cuckold.