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[Chandelier]

There's something called 'JayVik week' that's been going on at AO3, hosted by twitter user Viktortalisss, a JayVik reaction profile that hangs around YearnerJayce and the others. For a whole week they've been posting content based on themes for every day of the week, and one of them was this one. It's the usual 'they got sucked into the Arcane and spat out into a new universe', with a helping of - you guess it - trans Viktor. It's rather popular so I decided to review it. One thing I noticed, and you will as well, is that if you look at the 'squirting and vaginal ejaculation' tag, you'll see 11k fics of 'M/M'. Of course, no actual men are involved - they're all FTM fics.

Spoiler

It was Jayce's selfless decision to stay, so you're not really selfish by letting someone stay. It screams more of desperation than selfishness, honestly.

> He's- he's alive
Yes you are living when you are alive. What I also noticed is that Viktor immediately knows he's in Piltover because of the plaster, and then later on asks where he is despite deducing he's in Piltover because of the plaster, lmao.

> He has no idea where or when he is
But you had no problem knowing the plaster is from Piltover.
> He briefly wonders if he's even still Viktor here, or run off with somebody else's life
The latter is true. He is skinwalking another Viktor's life because we don't know what happened to Viktor B here. Poor lad is going to be a back seat driver for the rest of his life.
> He smells...about the same as he did
Hopefully it's not T sweat or ass hair.

> Paper stalagmites dotting the floor
Look, I know the author was aiming for a 'cool' metaphor here, but it just doesn't work. Stalagmites are solid rock and are meant to be unwieldy and unsettling, especially in the locations they are found in. Paper just doesn't have the same mental imagery. You mean to tell me the books fell from the overflowing shelf into perfect little towers? OK.
> He wonders if he is still deterioriating
Spoiler: he still has a fucked up leg despite living full time in Piltover, so this should answer your question.


> He's in Piltover and Viktor knows this
He didn't know where he was a few paragraphs ago.
> It is unfortunate that he is naked
Aren't you covered in a blanket?

> Violent entrance aside
We learn that Jayce has keys and has been trying every apartment to find his own, and ended up breaking into the wrong one earlier, scaring the previous inhabitants. He could have just knocked to see if the apartment was even occupied or got a floor plan, but nooo. He just kicks down the door and wrecks the damn thing until he finds Viktor. Nice way of damaging Academy property, bud!

> Like he was so fucking important
This man was literally breaking down doors for you because his dumb ass couldn't knock, and now he's on his knees crawling like a baby to worship you. That pooner pussy power is something else.

> This is Piltover
Yes, we know. You've said it four times already.
> Of the two of them, he had never been able to speak about Viktor's condition so plainly
He talks about it to Mel in S1 and how it was the inspiration for them to create Hextech. He directly mentions the Fissures and the gas. He even made him his cane; how can he NOT talk about it? He certainly didn't have any difficulty when he pulled that fucking talk no jutsu stunt at the end there.
> My leg is still weak and ineffectual
And yet, you don't seek treatment. But you want those T shots, oh yeah.

> Everything I did...it was wrong
You weren't wrong to help people. The cosmic genocide thing, though? Yeah that needed work.
> It is not worth fighting for me Jayce
Le sigh. Not this shit again. "I'm so helpless and smol uwu I did all this bad stuff how can you forgive me?" By the power of love and friendship. Plus, pussy power wins over all.

I'll give the author this: unlike Marcus Skeen in his work (soon to be featured), she comes right out and has Jayce admit he fucked up. He apologizes, he said he was selfish, he actually shows some growth. He doesn't pull the tone deaf shit and comes clean with what he has done. I appreciate the honesty.


This dialogue isn't bad. Now, this changes when we get to the smut as you'll soon see.

Look at that. A reconciliation in just a few paragraphs. Marcus Skeen could never.


And now you just ruined the moment. You mean to tell me this Viktor has never kissed before? Shocker. Usually, trans Viktor is a slut who's seen every dick in existence. Virgin pooner Viktor is rare and something even other pooners don't like writing. This is a first.

Oh? I thought they were still on the floor? They must have teleported there.

> His work makes him as much as he does it
What? No literally, what the fuck does this mean?
> He smears wet through his curls as he rubs his training cock
I assume this line refers to Viktor, because the author moves between using 'clit' and 'cock' for Viktor's genitalia. If not, and this is Jayce touching himself, I am still confused.
> Viktor's fingers work at the shaft of his cock
What shaft? You're working with 1-2 inches here.
> Nnh
You're going to see a lot of that because the author can't just leave the sex talk to basic moans and groans. She has to use the 'I'm having a heart attack at Denny's' tactic.
> Spread folds of his cunt up toward his swollen clit
> They catch right beneath his cockhead
So, you just used 'cunt' and 'clit' there, and 'cockhead' in the next breath, because you cannot commit to which sexed genitalia you want. You see this a lot in pooner fanfic and it hasn't changed at all; these women do not want to commit.

> Hah, fuck Jayce
I make that sound too when I get the Cheetos bag opened.
> Sensitive and soaked tip of Viktor's cock
It'd be a very tiny tip, smaller than a pen cap.
> Tickling motion all of a sudden against his clit
> It feels like a hundred tongues
From tickling? A hundred tongues makes me think there's some wet action down there; if you're tickling the clit I'm thinking vibrations. Unless Viktor is just that soaked? Who knows. Maybe I'm thinking too hard.
> Thumb bumps against the jut of Viktor's cock
It'd be a very tiny jut.

> Jayce's hand jerk into his hole
And yet, 'cunt' and 'pussy' is used just a few paragraphs later, because...? Dysphoria, I guess. Whatever makes the author comfortable, I suppose.

Viktor having a breakdown and covering his face and having a sad hiccup is very...female brained. Why are you crying? Is this not what you wanted? Oh right, drama.

And look, the Rapunzel pubes are back!

> He pounds Viktor's pussy the way he's been begging for
Almost as if he was MADE for it, get it? Interesting how clit and pussy are used here no problem, and then we go back to 'thick little cock' and 'hole' and then 'cunt' because we need all the terms or else pooners might get upset. It's just distracting and irritating. If you can use pussy, you don't need to use hole, simple as. You clearly are not that offended at the term if you can use it so easily.

> He pushes his thighs apart with only his thumb and pinky
Man, pooner Viktor must be really tiny for him to do that. And look! He nearly gets fisted! Nnnggh!

> Viktor's clit gets harder, swells bigger
> His cock tingles
Either you stick with clit or you decide to lie with cock. Pick one. It's getting tiresome at this point.
> Accept what's being given to him
What's that? Is a pooner's purpose just to be fucked into the mattress by an actual male with a dick? You don't say.
> Dirty pump
I'd love to know what that is.
> Strokes at Viktor's fat clit quick and wet
Like I said, pick a struggle.
> His hole clenches around nothing
> Twitching clit
> Dripping pussy
Le sigh. And, of course, Jayce has a big, thick piece of man meat, so he's going to use that to full effect - sorta. He barely lasts four thrusts.

> Caressing his soaked cock
What did I just say?
> Broad hand spreads across his body
There's that clocking again. Uwu smol trans boy Viktor getting his pussy pounded by a real man. It's not heterosexual sex, it's GAY SEX, DAMMIT!
> How his balls slap against Viktor's folds
Huh, I didn't even know he went in.
> Fingers fly too fast over his cock
Ah yes, that fat, flushing cock/clit that you can't decide on which term to use. Anything to avoid its female connotation.

> His balls rub against Viktor's entrance
This would be hot if, you know, you focused on the grand penetration moment.
> Fear flashes through Viktor
From what? Pregnancy? Or that dreaded 'Nnh'?
> He drops his hand to Viktor's dick
ENOUGH OF THIS ALREADY

By the way, it's written that Viktor orgasms three times, and has a 'soaking, dripping pussy'...and yet, there's the fear that there is blood from Jayce's enormous dick.

> It'll get gross
Implying it isn't already from the sheer amount you dumped inside - and yes, the author talks about that.

Like I said earlier, Viktor was exceedingly wet and prepared for penetration. You only get blood if the man never even tries to do foreplay. There was more than enough of that here, so why is there the risk of blood?

> Pulses with the ghost of a third orgasm
Still an orgasm, honey.
> Fluid trickling from his hole is a pearly mix of his and Jayce's release
> So much that had he not been buried it would have sprayed everywhere
Yet you wrote that Viktor only squirted when he rubbed against his G-spot, not when he ejaculated inside. Semen doesn't work like that. He would have sprayed everywhere anyways because the Skene's gland is responsible for that.


I'm assuming the author forgot what she wrote, because Viktor already knew Jayce worked for the Academy because he said he was dressed in 'academy blues'. There should be no 'oh' of confusion here; he knows.

> I should have realized we were together
You think? The man had the KEYS TO YOUR APARTMENT and yet was kicking down doors anyways like a demented ape. It's love, yo; makes you do stupid shit like break into random people's apartments because you don't remember your own.

> Pinches the smaller of the two
Since Viktor's fingers are not that small, I have to wonder how small this version of pooner Viktor is. I wager he wears a size 4 ring - which is tiny, btw.

> I didn't mean to make you cry
Ah, we all need a heartfelt mental breakdown on how our love doesn't deserve us. Right?

Haha, get it? It's a reference to episode 7! This was baby's first JayVik fic and she hopes she did well. I'd say the beginning had a nice start, and the dialogue was fine until we got to the smut with the Nnnh and Hnng shit. Don't do that - it makes me think you're choking on something. And please decide whether you want to use 'clit' or 'cock' or 'cunt' and 'hole' - I am tired of this swap in gendered language because they're so easily triggered by female anatomy.

In terms of general pooner shit, it's your predictable romantic, moody trash; not good, not terrible. Just forgettable. This one almost approached 100 bookmarks so that's why I read it - I like reading the more popular ones to see what draws people to them. This one is meh. You'll forget it.

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A smaller one this time around. This one has Jayce referred to as a 'cum slut'.

Wonderful. Alright, let's see what was written in this 'horny daze'.

Spoiler

Oh no, we've got the queercatfan sentence structure again. Quelle horreur!
> Four fingers deep into Viktor
Oh that's a nice start. All this to get the man to sleep?
> Nnh
Oh, it's that kind of sex dialogue. Alright.
> Back arched delightfully
My man has a bolted spine, and yet he seems to be able to perform these arches really well. Pooner pussy magic is real.
> Presenting his cute little ass and wet cunt to Jayce's viewing pleasure
Now, see how many times 'cunt' is used vs 'hole'.
> Force so many orgasms
Spoiler: he gets three.
> Problem
*trollface*
> Been milking Viktor's hole for thirty minutes
> Pushes his fingers in with more lube
Eh? Why do you need lube if the pooner is dripping wet and you've been at this for 30 minutes? Something isn't adding up.
> Desperate to get Viktor to multiple orgasms
You've been at it for 30 minutes, you should have achieved at least one by now.

> Can be controlling in bed and is also a total slut
> Be a pooner
> Nearly always depicted as a slut
Nice. There's a trend here I'm clearly missing.
> Suck his nipples while he fucked him
Huh. I wonder if they're symmetrical or if their nerves are shot like how most pooner nips are.
> I want to eat you out so bad I could cry
That's how I feel when I see the food on 'Diners, Drive-ins and Dives'.
> Pretty cunt and cock
Ah yes, that pretty *checks notes* 1-2 inch roid clit.
> He knows Viktor likes because of the size difference
We gotta have that so you can be reminded who the trans man is. Never fails.
> Jayce rests his head on Viktor's pubes, his cute curls scratching against his size
Size difference? Check. Tarzan pubes? Check. Man we're hitting all the checkmarks here.

And why the fuck are you spitting on Viktor's cunt if he's already dripping wet? It defeats the purpose. You've been at it for 30 minutes and you STILL have to spit on it? Amateur.

> Still stretched hole
If you can use cunt, just use it. No point in using the sex-killer 'hole'.

> Moves up to Viktor's cock
Not much to go down on, honestly.
> Moves down to his hole
> His cunt
What did I just say?
> Greedily licking around his ear
EH? His ear? Are you some kind of dog?

Lmao at Viktor referring to Jayce's dick as his own. At least his is real. You have to pretend yours is like his.

> Really crying now
Want a tissue?
> They do it raw sometimes, sometimes not, it's a success if he cream-pies him
All this and they're not worried about pregnancy. Would be a damn shame if Viktor wakes up and he finds out he's a seahorse dad.
> Warm wet hole
Yes I am definitely all fired up and horny once I read 'warm, wet hole'. I've heard cinnamon buns referred to in more loving and erotic language.
> Viktor's cock pressed into his stomach
There's not a lot to go on, so it just means their stomachs are pressed together.
> Jayce isn't small but Viktor's so well stretched and slick he can thrust until his balls slap against Viktor
Yes, that's what 30 minutes of foreplay will do. The vagina is a wonderful thing.
> The more stimulation Viktor gets on his cock
Again, not really much to go on. You're talking a roid clit the size of an eraser.
> Begins eating his cum out of Viktor's hole
Sexy. I've seen more enthusiasm from Guy Fieri when he bites into a sandwich.

'Fuck, mm' yeah, that would be my reaction to this. Horny posting that cannot decide whether to use the proper terms for female anatomy or not because we can't piss off trans men because any mention of them being female is wrong, dood. It's just disgusting and you're being transphobic, dood. Sex isn't gender, dood.

Just accept that these are True and Honest Men with vaginas, dood. Or else you'll lose your teeth.

Just for equality, here's some classic sissification that you'd normally see in the Tranny Sideshows thread:

And a mention of Bill Clinton:

Right.

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For those that don't know, The Locked Tomb series (first book titled Gideon the Ninth) is a sci-fi/fantasy series written by author Tamsyn Muir. The main characters (Gideon and Harrow) are lesbians, and they are shipped together both in the books and by the fandom. And there are no trans characters, to my knowledge, anywhere in these books. Neither is there polyamory. Or pet play. Or BDSM.

TBF, I'm pretty sure that series got famous because it featured non-binary characters, so this is a result of the fandom being true to itself.

Hope people enjoyed, and feel free to give me pointers/tips and let me know if I did anything wrong, it's my first time posting in this thread (and only fourth post on KF) so I could have easily made some mistakes.

It's something you learn on your feet; hell I still make mistakes that I catch when I miss a word or misspell something in my reviews. Just always strive to improve - and have fun. These people hate having their work mocked so if you make people laugh then it's worth it.

Regarding your comment on the spacing in that one fic - a lot of fics are spaced like that. I don't know why, but it's a pain because it means more screenshots for me.

Also, regarding your post on the Marauders fandom and HP in general - I'm quite sure All the Young Dudes really did start the 'fuck JKR's transphobia' thing in the HP fandom as it was the most notable fic to bring it up. I am not surprised it's a fandom within a fandom with its own culture; I remember one TikTok video showing people how to print out the fic at home and read it as a book. The irony, though, is that despite them trying to break away from her work, they are still using her work and consuming her world and growing its cultural impact every single day.

In the same vein, Queercatfan's Coming Home that I reviewed chapter-by-chapter here has the same power within the Arcane fandom: she has fanart, TikToks, probably edits made and more, and people are inspired by her and write their own fanfic based on her shitty fic. I've known other JayVik fics that are far better written and never saw that level of fame, or got shitty fanart when they deserved way better art for what they wrote. JayVik has tripled in three months, going from 3000 fics to 9000 fics, which is insane growth, but I've seen it grow in real time and a lot of the fics are pure Arcane tourists who don't know the main lore or, in one case, didn't even watch the show.

Obviously I cannot cover every single fic - no one can - the goal is to find the most egregious ones and poke fun at them. But like the Marauders fandom, these people consider themselves 'gay and trans allies', and latch so hard onto the disabled white man that they end up making him the most pathetic character around. Ironic.

Whenever I publish something on AO3 I feel like the most vanilla person to walk this earth; even if it's a 15k words pure pwp one-shot.

People over there are absolutely insane.

It do be like that.

 

[Sexy Peach Emoji]

Marauders sub-fandom sperging

Christ, and I thought the Nobody Dies subfandom of NGE was bad. They don't come close to the dumpster fire you've just described.

 

[Tread Miller]

While doing research for another thread, I was reminded of two Wattpad stories I heard about from a friend. Unfortunately one is basically impossible to find and the other has been deleted, so this is all from memory.

This friend really loved those shitty "yandere female x male reader" Wattpad stories, and one of the ones he sent me that I remember was "yandere autistic female x (caretaker?) male reader." All I remember about this one was that the autistic yandere asked the reader why the sky is blue and the setting seemed to be some sort of mental institution. Honestly the only reason I remember this one is because the yandere girl was the "autistic" one instead of the reader.

At the time he sent this, this friend was also an SMG4 fan, so he sent some SMG4 Wattpad stories. One of the ones I remember was Mario (yes, Super Mario) getting drunk and raping another SMG4 character, Desti. Desti gets PTSD, but somehow overcomes it and has a threesome with Mario and Meggy (another SMG4 character).

What causes a person to write a story like that? While I have no proof because she DFE'd, the author, Generous_Gamer, mentioned in a Wattpad Q&A that she suffered some sort of sexual abuse when she was young.

Why did Generous_Gamer DFE?
In late 2023, she got caught cheating on her boyfriend by grooming minors. Now I have no idea how true these accusations are, but as a result her Wattpad and Twitter accounts are gone.

Link/Archive

What a shame too, since she had some ridiculous fics I wanted to laugh at again. Oh well.

 

[Strawberry Milkshake]

On the subject of pronoun switching, I remember coming across this one Fire Emblem Three Houses fanfic. It's short, but the switching between he and they pronouns was quite frustrating to read through. Bear in mind Ingrid is supposed to be a woman so the fanfic is portraying her as a genderspecial.

Spoiler: Sperging for those unaware about this character

Ingrid dreams about becoming a knight, but her family's territory is shit and she's the only one in her family who possesses a Crest (basically special blood enabling her to wield a Hero's Relic and it's a big deal within the 3 Houses universe). She was in an arranged marriage until the guy was killed during a massacre before the events of the game. Afterwards Ingrid is divided between finding a suitor that will help bring wealth or pursuing her goal.

Definitely reads as the author projecting themselves on the character.

Spoiler: Author bio

Well that might explain it.

 

[Thiletonomics]

I just can't get over what a basic lack of understanding of the role of pronouns this is. Like, pronouns exist to replace a noun. Without pronouns, you'd have to just say the character's name over and over. Slash/femslash writers already struggle with pronouns because of how often they write scenes with only characters of the same sex and therefore have to go "he" "he" "his" "him" "he"/"she" "she" "her" "her" "she" over and over. You have to randomly bring up names (or epithets if that gets too repetitive, tho most people can't use them well) to distinguish who is doing what constantly. The reason why mixed-sex scenes don't have this problem is because it's understood that a different pronoun = a different character. You can write a scene between a man and a woman without ever mentioning EITHER of their names or descriptions because the reader understands intuitively that "she" and "he" refer to different characters.
Switching pronouns for a character without giving a clear narrative reason for it (e.g. it's an androgynous character and the narrator has just discovered their sex, or it's some kind of wacky gender-bending plot where the character magically changes sexes halfway through a scene) is downright INSANE.
Do they not go back and reread their fics before they post them? I simply do not believe that they themselves wouldn't get confused reading that shit!

Which gender of writers slip up more with pronoun usage? I'm thinking that male writers tend to use them correctly more often, while female writers are the ones to mess them up.

On the subject of pronoun switching, I remember coming across this one Fire Emblem Three Houses fanfic. It's short, but the switching between he and they pronouns was quite frustrating to read through. Bear in mind Ingrid is supposed to be a woman so the fanfic is portraying her as a genderspecial.

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Spoiler: Sperging for those unaware about this character

Ingrid dreams about becoming a knight, but her family's territory is shit and she's the only one in her family who possesses a Crest (basically special blood enabling her to wield a Hero's Relic and it's a big deal within the 3 Houses universe). She was in an arranged marriage until the guy was killed during a massacre before the events of the game. Afterwards Ingrid is divided between finding a suitor that will help bring wealth or pursuing her goal.

Definitely reads as the author projecting themselves on the character.

Spoiler: Author bio

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Well that might explain it.

I don't think this writer is male to begin with, sounds like a FtM or a genderspecial in general.

Here's my thread tax, a FE foot fetish story that features the brown stuff too:



Link / Archive

Also, are commissioned fanfics more deprave in terms of their content, compared to ones written by the writers themselves because they wanted to?

 

[hind matches ltd]

Which gender of writers slip up more with pronoun usage? I'm thinking that male writers tend to use them correctly more often, while female writers are the ones to mess them up.

I don't think you're wrong. Most people who write fanfics are girls and women, so, in a numbers game, female authors will come up on top.

It kinda surprises me that, as much gender fuckery as there's been in the last decade, I haven't really noticed much of a shift regarding overall demographics in this kind of stuff. There's a lot of pooners and gender specials writing fanfic, but not a sudden influx of trannies. There's been a few featured on the thread, but not really enough for them to "take over" or even make a significant dent. Has anyone had a different experience? (To be fair, my fandoms don't tend to overlap with tranny preferences).

 

[jray4559]

I don't think you're wrong. Most people who write fanfics are girls and women, so, in a numbers game, female authors will come up on top.

It kinda surprises me that, as much gender fuckery as there's been in the last decade, I haven't really noticed much of a shift regarding overall demographics in this kind of stuff. There's a lot of pooners and gender specials writing fanfic, but not a sudden influx of trannies. There's been a few featured on the thread, but not really enough for them to "take over" or even make a significant dent. Has anyone had a different experience? (To be fair, my fandoms don't tend to overlap with tranny preferences).

This is just the simple fact that men (troon or not) almost always prefer their fictional porn in visual form and not in text form. Cutting one's dick off doesn't stop the brain from being the way it always was. I don't really go into the kind of fandoms that have troons in them though so I can't personally say anything on how they act, but my suspicion is that it wouldn't be too different from the male smut harem-y writers that are already there, just a few dollops extra of femboy-ism and male submissiveness.

 

[Petrusha the White]

Trannies writing fanfiction are almost exclusively pooners, because fanfiction is written by, overwhelmingly, women. Men who troon out are virtually never creative enough to write fic, even shitty ones, so if anything mtf trannies are underrepresented in fanfiction.
Anyway, this is because claiming to be a man, or some special other gender that doesn't exist, doesn't actually make you that thing. A female still tends towards female hobbies. Using "he/they" pronouns doesn't change that.

 

[Chandelier]

Someone decided to write Irish Viktor getting topped by Jayce while being demanded to be fucked like a dog. No trans Viktor this time around - they're both male in this one. The author would like you to know she's asexual.

Spoiler

> Jayce was not white
There is actually debate in the fandom on whether or not Jayce is white; he is in the games, but he's a light-skinned Latino in the show. In any case, interesting how this was the first thing brought up.
> Don't think about Viktor's hips, or do
Oh fuck, we've got more queercatfan sentence structure where new sentences are started when they don't need to be. I don't know if this was betaed but if it was, they need to be fired.
> Took two dicks with what looked like great enthusiasm
So Viktor is getting fucked by no less than six men, with double anal penetration and oral sex, and he's got 'globs' of semen pouring out of his anus. To make it worse, Jayce wants to 'follow that glob' with his tongue - with is both disgusting, unhygienic, and screams cuck. Why you sucking up the sperm of other men, bro?


No, of course not. You don't often see Dom Viktor but when you, he's either a massive slut or a professional. I prefer the latter because his ass doesn't look like a Walmart checkout aisle.

> Considering how to answer. He was thoughtful, was Viktor.
"Viktor hummed, playing with a strand of hair, considering how to answer. He was always thoughtful, and Jayce liked and admired that about him."

Wasn't so hard, now was it?

> Forget I'm a human being
So you want to be treated like a human fuck doll? Nice. I'd say this is demeaning but a lot of gay men choose this, so it really is par the course for them. Call it a candid admission.
> Of that kind of dynamic. That excitement.
"Surely you can understand that kind of dynamic, no? The excitement."
Not that great but still better than what this bitch wrote. Pay me.

Why did you write 'wink'? You can just write that he did it, vs saying it. That's dumb, yo.

Forgotten cigars are 'warm and muggy'? OK, then.

> Something about it irked him, treating him like a Zaunite street whore
Don't know if this needs to be said, but Viktor IS a Zaunite street whore, at least in this fic. You might as well take the L and accept that - and btw, Viktor never actually cleaned that used sperm out his ass. You'll be seeing that soon enough.
> Didn't understand the weight of what they were doing
Enough with the fucking queercatfan writing. Her fic was shit and so is yours.
> Like a specimen
What kind of specimen?
> Of you, in our time together in the lab.
God, I hate how this dialogue is formatted. It doesn't sound sleek or easy, it sounds like they're stuttering like a bad NPC. Get better programming.

> As much as he wanted to correct him, he wasn't wrong
There, it's a complete sentence now. Disjointed sentences aren't complete sentences. Get that through your head right now.
> But Jayce still felt, wrong somehow
Why is there a comma there?
> His words coming out like vomit
Now THIS is a simile. Like projectile vomit? Are they spraying everywhere? What an interesting word choice, homie.

> Smashed into so many pieces of old, grey concrete
This could be added to the previous sentence and it would still read fine.

> The biting it, hard
Again, doesn't need a comma.
> Are you a dog, Jayce
> I could be
Now we need Caesar Milan on the job.

> I've imagine this before: you collared and at my feet, your throat full
There, much better. Pay me.
> I want you to fuck me like a dog. Rough
Bark.

> Ass glistening with lube and other men's cum
That's right: when Viktor was cleaning up in the bathroom and was washing his face, he didn't clean out the old sperm from his ass. So he has hours old sperm swimming up there, still oozing out of him, and Jayce is doing to fuck that. Gross.
> Then Viktor added
You didn't actually need to add this.
> Watching. Hungrily
These can be connected to form one sentence.
> It was a deep red colour, girthy, twice the size of any of the guys from earlier, and 6.5 inches in length
So...was Viktor getting gangbanged by guys with 5'' and below dicks? 6'5 is above average, but not 'large' per se. 7 and above is considered large. You mean to tell me he was getting fucked by chuds? Poor taste! And why is Jayce's dick as red as a Staples' button? It's said a man's genitalia (and by extension a woman's) is around the same shade as your lips. It shouldn't be that red. Hispanic Hog Jayce got nerfed here.

It's also shocking that Viktor's the one with the big dick. He's usually written with a small dick when canonically he was packing. That's rare.

Gross. Clean that shit up. Nothing more disgusting - and cuck-worthy - than fucking into a man's ass with other men's semen still inside. Be a bit more proper next time.
> The obscene amounts of lube and cum squelched around his cock
And he didn't bother to clean that out. You'll be heading to the vet with an STD soon enough.
> JAYCE WAS DEFINITELY NOT GOING TO LAST
WHY ARE WE YELLING?!
> Moaned like a wanton whore
I read this a lot, and lemme tell you: it's just so fucking fake to read. Whores aren't moaning genuinely. They're faking it. So are you telling me you're moaning like someone faking it? Nice.
> Twitching and leaking sticky cum around his cock
Why do I get the mental image of a Philly cheese steak reading this?

> His Viktor. His
Maybe italicize the second his? Would add more drama and emphasis.
> You're so big Jayce
He's slightly above average. Big would be 8 inches or above, which is what Viktor is, haha (no I'm not kidding on that last part). Of course there'd be a belly bulge, but you'd expect that from someone a few inches bigger. Was he getting a belly bulge from the other guys or because they were below average it didn't count?
> Fucking him like a dog in heat
> Filling him up so much better than any of the others could
Viktor got a gangbang and he chose the smallest dicks to be involved? What a loser. He could've picked the Hispanic Hogs from that one fic where the sports captain had a 12 inch dick.


Are you having a heart attack there, Jayce? Sounds like it. And the irony of calling Jayce, a mixed-race Latino, a 'mutt' is not lost on me.

Jayce sure does sob a lot for someone who wants to so desperately top. It gets annoying real fucking quick. He moans like a common whore again, snaps at Viktor twice, and fucks like a dog in heat again. Nice.

> Couldn't. Didn't think to. Used him through his orgasm
> He couldn't and didn't think to stop. Viktor used him through his orgasm
Still not good but I tried to save it. Pay me.
> Half screaming half moaning
Wow, everybody is crying, sobbing and shitting themselves in this. We're gonna need a bigger mop.
> Mmm so ngh
Do I need the defibrillator?

> Adding to the mess of white inside him and leaking around the edge of his dick
All that and Viktor couldn't clean up properly for this man. Gross. You're gonna need a gonorrhea test after this, Jayce.


> Has a giant bathroom for cleanup
> Doesn't clean his ass from the sperm dump of six different men inside him
> Only washes his face
> Doesn't care if he gives his 'love' an STD
And all we got was a big dicked Viktor. All this was written by an asexual, because remember: they don't like sex, but they sure do write, draw, and consume lots of gay porn but don't you dare point this out because that's offensive and it's a spectrum and and and -

Just wash your ass, OK?

I don't think you're wrong. Most people who write fanfics are girls and women, so, in a numbers game, female authors will come up on top.

It kinda surprises me that, as much gender fuckery as there's been in the last decade, I haven't really noticed much of a shift regarding overall demographics in this kind of stuff. There's a lot of pooners and gender specials writing fanfic, but not a sudden influx of trannies. There's been a few featured on the thread, but not really enough for them to "take over" or even make a significant dent. Has anyone had a different experience? (To be fair, my fandoms don't tend to overlap with tranny preferences).

I have. Centreoftheselights has the data that I posted back in July, but the gender fuckery has increased since 2015 onwards. Around 15-20% of those writing fic are 'enbies' and there's around 10-15% or so of 'trans men' writing fic, so we have an increase of women writing fic who do not want to be seen as women. As for actual males writing fic, it's around 5%. Troons will be in the modding community like Lilith Walther, while pooners will be in fanart and fanfic because their 'dainty female brains' won't do coding.

My fandom, Arcane, has a LOT of trans Viktor content, where it's almost 15-17% of the total. That's a massive increase.

 

[hind matches ltd]

My fandom, Arcane, has a LOT of trans Viktor content, where it's almost 15-17% of the total. That's a massive increase.

I misspoke: I meant I hadn't seen an increase in trans identified males creating fanfic or fanart. I'd thought that, since it's so associated with women, they might have tried to latch on to it, if only to score "I'm totally a real woman" points. I appreciate the thread's insight, however: it seems if there's no sexual pleasure being derived from it, they're not interested.

However, just like you, I've absolutely seen a deep increase of the topic in fanfics. Sometimes it seems as if it's the only plot being written. Thank you so much for the statistics —it's always nice to see your perceptions confirmed in numbers.

(As an aside: funnily enough, you mentioned people writing trans Viktor that haven't actually seen Arcane or have gotten into it through fanfics, and I've observed the same phenomena in the Marauders fandom, also full of gender ideology. They get into it through friends or TikTok and don't bother with the source material. Of course gender bullshit's on the upwards: it seems to be the only draw for some people).

 

[Digital Thunder]

As an aside: funnily enough, you mentioned people writing trans Viktor that haven't actually seen Arcane or have gotten into it through fanfics, and I've observed the same phenomena in the Marauders fandom, also full of gender ideology. They get into it through friends or TikTok and don't bother with the source material.

It's gotta be an issue of degrading fandom culture in general. I've seen "Author hasn't played (or read, or so on) [X]" tags and header notes on fanfics for games that take 2-3 hours to beat if you're playing them as slowly as possible, and preemptive apologies for mischaracterization to match them that could be solved by reading a wiki page or two. Asking people to get into the sources for the new characters they fixate on is apparently asking too much.

 

[behindyourightnow]

It's gotta be an issue of degrading fandom culture in general. I've seen "Author hasn't played (or read, or so on) [X]" tags and header notes on fanfics for games that take 2-3 hours to beat if you're playing them as slowly as possible, and preemptive apologies for mischaracterization to match them that could be solved by reading a wiki page or two. Asking people to get into the sources for the new characters they fixate on is apparently asking too much.

Personally I find the willing admission more shocking than the laziness. That's like writing "I don't know Excel" on a resume. Or handing in a college essay with "I wrote all of this the night before it was due!" in the header. If you can't bring yourself to lie, at least lie by omission for god's sake.

 

[soft breathing]

I've seen "Author hasn't played (or read, or so on) [X]" tags and header notes on fanfics

I just noticed that this shit is probably one reason why there's so much misrepresentation of the characters in some fandoms.

Like the whole babygirlification in the COD fandom; those guys are grown-ass military men (ever met a guy the size of Ghost irl? they're not cute, they're fucking scary). But some writers might not even really realise that (not having played the game and never leaving the house in general, probably), and think that Ghost is a complete autist who only sucks his thumb on his days off, while Soap is trying to entice him to mate with him by wearing a pink thong. (I made this scenario up - but I wouldn't be surprised if there's a story with that exact plot out there somewhere).

But no, seriously. If you don't play a game, watch a movie, read a book etc and just go by whatever the fandom's projecting into it, there's going to be so many misinterpretations and lost nuances, now that I think about it.

I'm probably late as fuck with that thought and it's been obvious to everyone but me lmao.

 

[Sexy Peach Emoji]

One AO3, there are 5277 works for Neon Genesis Evangelion (4321 if you don't include crossovers). 103 works have the trans character tag, and 50 have a tag for trans Shinji ikari. This is less than I was expecting, to be honest.

There are 1898 works tagged for Shinji/Kaworu, and 1967 works in the m/m catagory. There are 267 in the other category. The next largest ship is Shinji/Asuka at 663 (721 if you include Asuka Shikinami), and the f/f catagory has 939 works, to give you an idea of how much the fujos dominant the ao3 NGE scene. The 'other' catagory edges out f/f at 1017 works.

I would need to do more research to see how many authors self ID as trannys/gender specials, but it looks to be more in favor of 'normal' fujos on the face of it.

Edit: there are 28 works for trans male character. Most of them don't list which (un)lucky character is getting the treatment, but of the few who do list, it's 4 shinji, 4 kaworu, 2 Asuka, 1 rei. Most fics have multiple trans characters. There are 21 works listed for alpha/beta/omega dynamics. I think that pooner participation in Evangelion is limited, compared to what we've seen in the Arcane fandom.

 

[behindyourightnow]

Like the whole babygirlification in the COD fandom; those guys are grown-ass military men (ever met a guy the size of Ghost irl? they're not cute, they're fucking scary). But some writers might not even really realise that (not having played the game and never leaving the house in general, probably), and think that Ghost is a complete autist who only sucks his thumb on his days off

In 2009 MWII (which I am more familiar with because I am old and cringe and gay) there's a cutscene where he's literally torturing a guy with a blowtorch lol

That's probably not canonical anymore but it's still funny to come to this thread and read about how he definitely leaves romantic love notes pinned to his boyfriend's door because he's too shy to talk about his feelings. At least when fandom was going mad over Draco/Harry and Draco/Hermione fics they had the excuse of Draco actually turning out kind of normal at the end of the books.

But you're right, maybe a big part of this is people just learning about characters from Tumblr gifsets (or whatever is popular with the kids these days) and being satisfied to base their own fic characterizations on that. So then the majority of locust fanworks turn out to be fanworks of other fanworks (or fanworks of fanworks of fanworks)

One AO3, there are 5277 works for Neon Genesis Evangelion (4321 if you don't include crossovers). 103 works have the trans character tag, and 50 have a tag for trans Shinji ikari. This is less than I was expecting, to be honest.

Maybe it was just released too early for troon madness, even the new version of the films. If they did another reboot that number would probably change to 35,000 overnight.

(Also why do pooners almost always trans the smaller prettier male characters, but MtFs never imagine themselves as huge butches?)

 

[Chandelier]

Call Me By My Name has been finished - or at least for now, as this was originally a one-shot the author wrote before she got carried away with it. You can tell it was meant to be a one-shot as the plot unravels the more the chapters go on. I'll be covering the rest of the chapters here.

Spoiler: Chapter 5

We get the impression that Silco is a cold, pragmatic man in this who is trying to uphold his end of the bargain in the PnZ peace deal - that Viktor almost threw away by fucking Jayce the moment he saw him. Instead of holding Viktor accountable for that, or using it as leverage, he decides to play these mind games and make Viktor worry if he pissed off his dad at staying Topside for too long. Don't ask me why the author repeats some of these phrases; she's trying to highlight the necessity and desperation, but it comes off as simply repetitive.

> He wants to make an example of Viktor falling in love with a Piltie
Five chapters in? Huh, I didn't get the impression Viktor was in love with Jayce at all. I got the impression it was a FWB relationship, especially since Viktor only started allowing Jayce to kiss him last chapter.
> There is love Viktor is not yet ready to confess
He more or less confessed it in Chapter 4.
> Vanity, looks
Redundant, but the treatment of Zaun is that they're 'no different' from Piltover is misleading. Viktor gets decked out in golden chains and rich colours that would out him in Zaun and would most likely get him robbed. Even Renata doesn't dress with that much drip and she's a Chem-Baroness. Zaunites prefer function over form, hence the steampunk/cyberpunk style. There's none of that here.

> Level of comfort in otherness
Viktor has spent the last few chapters complaining about being othered by Piltovans. This is inconsistent characterization, and you'll be seeing a lot of this.

> Quickly discovered how different tastes really are Topside and it still fills him with distaste at how bright everything is here
Because they...aren't underground? Zaun is dark because it is heavily polluted and is quite literally under Piltover. That's why everything is highlighted in neon colours. Piltover has access to fresh air and sunshine; that's why it's so goddamned bright. Duh!

> A business with
Don't you mean 'business with'?
> Because you know nothing about our fashion
Well apparently Viktor doesn't either, despite him traveling back and forth between the two cities. Jayce here is really written as a gaping-mouthed retard who has no idea how the outside works when he himself has taken trips to the Undercity for his research. He's literally a knuckle-dragging Neanderthal with a big dick in this.
> A fashion advice
You need grammar advice.
> You are so cocky. Are you part crow?
I get she wanted to make reference to crows being obsessed with shiny things and stealing them, but I think of swagger when I see crows over cockiness. Crows are bold and intelligent; cockiness implies confidence without skill. She can't even get her animal allegories right.

> Viktor is attracted to Jayce and Jayce is attracted to Viktor
Funny. They don't have much chemistry. They just fucked in the first chapter and that was it; they fuck again and then Viktor realizes he's in love. Ho hum.
> Haircut
Don't you mean 'hair cut'?

There's being pretentious and being a prick, and Viktor is the latter. You'd never know he was a genius unless the author said so, because he doesn't act like it. Recall in the first chapter he didn't know the equations Jayce was working with until he somehow did, and is working on cleaning the air in Zaun and yet they haven't produced anything but speeches. Pretentious may indeed be accurate; it's that unwarranted pooner self-importance coming through.

Later, Viktor says it is 'unfair' to be protected from the world because Silco protected him from it...which is contradicted by Viktor's own attitude and behaviour. It's written that Viktor has been between both cities and knows how both operate, but he also doesn't know how the Council works or its members, and he's somehow trusted to be Silco's middleman in all of this despite...not knowing anything.

This is what happens when you add contradictory plot into your porn without planning it out.

> Go to Zaun with me
Don't you mean, 'Come to Zaun with me?'

> Go to see Silco with me
Is this author ESL or something else?
> Wetness on his cheeks seeps on Jayce's dress shirt
Pretentious one moment and having a mental breakdown the next because he doesn't want to disappoint Silco (spoiler: he does). Must be those trans hormones acting up.

Yeah, that's an easy way to get robbed, and NOT Zaunite fashion. They're all about checkered shirts and hues of greens, purples and blues. Again, it's the steampunk/cyperpunk aesthetic. You being expensive gold chains is just going to lead to a knife to your gut.

> All of his migrations between Zaun and Piltover allowed him to spot such patterns
And yet he doesn't know who the Council members are, doesn't know what the fashion is, and doesn't act like he knows anything about either. Some genius. Canonically he was the one who showed Jayce around the Council building.

> He doesn't need weakness right now
Right now? You've been crying just at the thought of him.
> How was I manipulative?
Well, you did dance with Jayce, snuck into his lab, fucked him, got a partnership, and thought yourself a traitor when you considered what Silco would think of it. So he is right there.
> Jayce's Piltovian descent
Silco is supposed to be a Chem-Baron and knows all the people Topside, and yet he doesn't know Jayce is from a lesser house and actually worked in a forge. He would at least have some respect as Jayce does manual labour.

We are supposed to believe Silco is so prejudiced as to not bite at the bit at this idea. His goal is to enrich and empower Zaun; he would absolutely see the business aspect of getting tech to clear out the Fissues and put him ahead of the other Chem-Barons. He's not so prejudiced as to toss out the value of the Almighty Dollar.
> I just want to make sure no one has to suffer like I do
Oh? Funny you mention that; that's the first time Viktor has ever talked about his people. He's been too busy fucking Jayce with his pussy in order to think about the things that actually matter.
> You have lost your mind, Viktor
Again, Silco isn't this dumb. He wouldn't like the alliance, but he'd recognize Viktor's genius and his loyalty to Zaun and agree to it provided he gets a cut. This is cheap drama and, shocker, the commenters absolutely love it.

> You have been capable for many years now
He is right, there. They haven't done shit for years. He's right to be skeptical of Jayce, but where is his faith in Viktor? He's his adopted son in this. Why doesn't he trust his genius and his word?

Again, why doesn't Silco trust Viktor? Can Viktor not do the job? Or is he too busy thinking with his pu-Nevermind, I just answered that.

Spoiler: Chapter 6

Funny. Just a chapter ago he was wondering why everything was so bright in Piltover.
> The attention he is determined to Viktor
Uh, what? Please tell me this bitch doesn't have a beta.
> The irritation that had been stewing in his viscera
What the absolute fuck? Who thought this was a good line to write? 'Viscera' implies gore. Do you have a pile of gore somewhere that hides your irritation?
> Their lab is full of noise and smoke
Where there's smoke there's fire. You better address where the smoke is coming from.
> He cannot allow them to malfunction
If they're smoking they already are, but Viktor is too busy laser-focused on Jayce being a rugged, knuckle-dragging hottie. You'd never know he was an inventor in this, either; he's incompetent at everything.

> Having a Zaunite by their man of progress would indicate some breakthrough
Yeah well he already tanked that in Chapter 1 when he fucked him on a whim despite this 'fragile peace'. Glad to see they can work together and still be seen as a couple - before Viktor ruins that, too.

> Viktor is so tired
And moody, too. Wonder why that is.

> He knows what Jayce's morning breath is like
Lemme guess. It smells like your cum, because that's all you two are capable of doing.
> Awkward phrase
You mean, 'awkward phase'?
> His hands are engulfing Viktor's waist entirely
Oh for fuck's sakes. They really gotta run with the tiny uwu trans boi thing here. Jayce's hands are not that big and Viktor is not that small.

> Having Jayce is a good thing, a steady thing...it's doing something to Viktor
Such as making you an incompetent scientist and, in your view, a traitor? Funny how that works.

"The palms"? You mean Jayce's palms?
> It is a tight fight and he could feel all of Jayce's callouses
If they're fucking regularly, why is this a problem? He had no issue taking the Hispanic Hog in the first chapter.

> It is offensive that Jayce would talk to him like that
Fuck's sake, even in a shitty smut fic we cannot escape accusations of offending the pooner. Fuck off! No one is here for that!
> He does not care
You don't need to repeat this. He's not that much of a retard - well not yet, anyways.
> Cover in Viktor, and it is all too little, too much
If you have a beta they need to get another fucking job, because holy shit is this trashy writing.

Now this reminds me of the character 'Jimmy Two-Times' from Goodfellas: he's gonna read this fic, read this fic.
> Here is a thing. Viktor is a wild thing, in bed most of all
Yeah he's so great he was willing to throw out a shoddily negotiated peace treaty by fucking Jayce in his lab after their first meeting. Smart of him to think with his 'man pussy' there.
> It's not you, I like you so much
I honestly couldn't tell. Jayce is like a walking chalkboard; someone else has to write his personality for him.
> Viktor initially takes it as a jab...because Jayce did not mean to offend him
Look at that, the pooner loses his shit over things his misinterprets. Guess that testosterone wasn't able to give him that 'superior male IQ'.

> He is too sad

Man, I couldn't tell he was Too Sad until you wrote that he was Too Sad. That's Too Bad!
> Silco has borderline disinherited him
Maybe if you were actually the genius you were and gave him a reason to have faith in you, he wouldn't disinherit you. Since these people are Retard Deluxe, they will lose their shit over the smallest things. Silco wouldn't toss out a bad business deal and a chance to improve Zaun. It's ultimately Viktor, the trans man, who is responsible.

He's traveled from both cities and is still shocked at sunlight. Ho hum.
> He wishes he could say what he wants
You already did when you fucked Jayce the first chance you got. No point in playing the 'OMG does he like me omg he totally likes me' plot. God, I fucking hate these plots.

> Has trouble believing Piltover is as pretty as Jayce says it is
He's traveled there a few times. You'd think he'd know from the Academy that it is a nice place.
> Zaun is ugly, does that make him ugly?
Zaun is a product of Piltover's pollution. It is in fact a complex city with its own culture, landmarks, and economy. Viktor thinking his home city is trashy and ugly is par the course for someone who has never researched the lore or even watched a single video. And why is she suggesting a trans man is ugly?

> Has lived in Piltover for however many weeks or months
> Has no idea who the Kirammans are, one of the founding houses of Piltover
Ho hum.
> He likes getting to know Jayce
Really? Because he sure didn't when he wanted that dick. Funny how all the romance and pining happens off screen. Jut like S2!

> It's Viktor who is being difficult
I'll say. He's being a moody, stereotypical pooner who cannot decide on what she wants and proceeds to lash out at anyone showing an inch of kindness, revealing them to be the BPD emotional drains that they are. Viktor is such an emotional drain; I don't understand how Jayce can even tolerate him. He's so out of character it's insane, but hey, write badly written trans porn and you, too, can get 358 bookmarks (as of this writing). No one will ever call you out (see comments).

> Hates the politics of Piltover
> Nearly ruined a peace treaty by fucking the first guy who made his pussy wet
> Gets disowned for creating shitty things and not actually acting or behaving as the genius you are
> Constantly have mood swings because True and Honest Men absolutely sound like they're post menopausal.
> doesn't want to be a shiny thing on Jayce's arm, wears expensive clothing and golden chains to signify he's his
Fucking hell.

> He despises how he sounds so wobbly
Maybe try not being a bitch and stand up for yourself? Typical that the trans man is the one who is meek and tiny compared to the actual male, and the actual male is the one who gets things done. They really don't catch their own stereotypes.

Spoiler: Chapter 7

> He's attentive to Viktor
And yet he's learned nothing about him. He's managed to be both a completely alien person in this relationship while also being completely familiar.
> Met with an opportunity, Viktor studies
...What is this sentence?
> Jayce is a grown man
Yeah, but he sure doesn't act like it. He's like a knuckle-dragging baby. If you had never told me he was an inventor and didn't put him in the lab, I'd think he was just some dumber, weirder version of Mark Zuckerberg mixed with Zayne from One Direction.
> Decided what they could to finish their work in their apartment
Do they have a lab? Do they have proper ventilation and equipment? No? Well then that's a disaster waiting to happen. How dumb can you be to take potentially explosive and dangerous materials TO YOUR SHARED APARTMENT?! And without proper equipment, to boot!

> He is under Viktor's impure language
That means swearing because Jayce is such a golden boy he hasn't even heard a rich person mutter, 'motherfucker'.
> They suit him and show life lead with laughter
With crow's feet? At 30? Homie you need some anti-wrinkle cream and some Retinol.
> You are frustrated because of me
Precisely. But no blame will be put on the pooner because who needs accountability? Not them, because fuck you trans men are perfect and you better not say shit you fucking transphobe.

*Tic

Silco is still being unreasonable regarding Viktor's plan to introduce cleaner air into Zaun. That's something he can absolutely get behind because it solves his problem of a freer Zaun. But he doesn't even seem to want that because we need a cheap antagonist and he serves as one. As pointed out earlier, Silco may be ruthless but he's also pragmatic; such a deal he wouldn't be able to resist and would actually support, especially if he knows Viktor is the one leading it.

And why Shoola? The Kirammans were the ones who BUILT the pipes into Zaun. Guess you need to tick off that 'hey, I brought SOME black people into this!' box.

> You have to know what it entails
> Degrading, ridiculous, humiliating, as he would not be seen only by Piltover, but by Zaun
And? What's the problem? You're there as part of a treaty to create something that benefits both cities. This unnecessary drama doesn't serve any purpose. They're mad but he's also there to help but they're still mad because...they actually have one of their own, and a genius to boot, there to actually make a difference?
> As if she does not know what to do with him here
Is the black woman being transphobic? Raise your hand if yes.
> Wonders if he should buy something similar himself
I thought that shit was tacky and not your style, Viktor? Guess bourgeoise taste really is great after all.

> Why should we care
They don't, but Viktor brings about a proposal that, you know, benefits that so-called peace treaty the author seemingly forgot about. And this is the only time I've seen Viktor do research about anything at all - before, he's acted absolutely retarded regarding his surroundings. He did research on this, but not what the Councilors' names are? Ho hum.

> Going public would make you a traitor to your people
Literally why? He's already there as is as an inventor. The fuck you mean he's a traitor? He's there to represent your interests and is the only fucking Zaunite there to do so! The only one who considers him a traitor is Viktor himself, and that is because he fucked Jayce on the first try.
> He paints back a very sorry image
I'll say. He was always pathetic but this takes the cake.
> He has to be humble
First time I've seen him act like that, TBH. Before he's wearing green velvet and has nice green sheets, now he's gotta be 'one with the crowd' and remember his roots. Be consistent, please.

> Makes him look smaller somehow
I wonder why that is? It's not because he's a 5'2 uwu smol trans boi is he?
> Viktor preferred it because it is intricate, complicated, has something to admire
Don't know why those are separate sentences but whatever. Queercatfan strikes again.
> Viktor wonders if this is codependency already
Yes, yes it is. He is virtually not a person outside of Jayce and Jayce has no personality. None. The irony of him not wanting to 'stop being his own person' when he has stopped being his own person, lmao
> Always be in fashion in Zaun
Oh, so NOW we remember the fashion.
> It is objectively dirty. It is ugly.
You're saying it's a shithole, then. Nice.

I don't know why Silco is being more hysterical than the pooner, but we need that cheap drama so people can keep reading, so...enjoy this shit while it's still steaming.

> I will not tell it to a traitor
He's done nothing wrong aside from fuck Jayce - which I'm sure is not public knowledge - and Zaun needs one of their own there to represent its interest. Instead of being seen as a potential ally, Viktor is a criminal when he would not be. Silco would absolutely use him as leverage because of the benefits he provides. This plot point is just fucking stupid.

> Silco is so important to him
> Disinherits him for no good reason
> Refuses to hear his end of the deal
> Viktor retaliates by wearing gold chains and gold chains in his braids
Man, with style like that I'd be pissed too. You're wearing the wrong colours, homie.

It doesn't have to be a stalemate. You're just being stupid for no reason. Silco may have no reason to trust Piltover, but he can absolutely trust a Zaunite. He's not using the one leg-up he has over his enemies because...? Because Plot, that's why.
> Because it is true, Viktor is in love
Really? Because aside from those two smut scenes there's literally no chemistry between these two. They manage to be both friends and stranger at exactly the same time.
> Your dreams are manic
Not really. Silco just isn't being smart here because the author would rather insult the intelligence of three male characters just so she can write about pooner Viktor. Never fails.

Oh look, Sevika finally has a voice line! Of course, she has to be the one to say what Silco means to say, even when she would understand that Viktor is trying to help his people. Instead, they want to point the finger and accuse Viktor of selling them out which, while true, doesn't negate his attempts to help them.

This really was meant to be a one-shot because anything other than a PWP just fails as a plot.

> I will only sell myself to give you everything you have been asking for
Should have thought about that when you fucked Jayce, just saying. Silco didn't have a problem with that, I noticed.

LMAO at the suit being 'too big' for Viktor. Ah, we love a good, classic clocking.

Piltovan and Zaunite should be capitalized as they are proper nouns. Basic grammar.
> He has sold his morals for clean air in Zaun
No, you did that when you decided to fuck Jayce because pussy power am I right? You couldn't resist. He doesn't want to be reduced to a 'weird token'...while acting like a weird token, lmao.
> This subservience is alien
Bullshit. Every time Jayce's beard gets put in your head you want to drop your pants and fuck him. You are subservient to your sex drive and it fucking shows.

Oh wow, we already have a marriage proposal this far in? I would've expected more drama.
> Impossible cultural differences
They aren't that impossible. And you've already taken to wearing gold chains and repeating yourself like a Martin Scorsese character, so what's the problem?

I'll be reviewing more chapters later. For now, I'm taking a short break.

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Like the whole babygirlification in the COD fandom; those guys are grown-ass military men (ever met a guy the size of Ghost irl? they're not cute, they're fucking scary). But some writers might not even really realise that (not having played the game and never leaving the house in general, probably), and think that Ghost is a complete autist who only sucks his thumb on his days off, while Soap is trying to entice him to mate with him by wearing a pink thong. (I made this scenario up - but I wouldn't be surprised if there's a story with that exact plot out there somewhere).

But no, seriously. If you don't play a game, watch a movie, read a book etc and just go by whatever the fandom's projecting into it, there's going to be so many misinterpretations and lost nuances, now that I think about it.

Even if you cannot play a game, there are walkthroughs you can watch on YouTube and plenty of lore videos. These authors straight up admit they don't do it because they are lazy. Several times I have seen authors admit that they do no research for, say, a detective fic and get basic forensic science facts wrong because they 'just wanted to post the story'. It's all about the attention, kudos and bookmarks for them rather than being accurate/creating a good story. I saw one comment where this author, a huge TikTok fan, admitted to favouriting 400 JayVik edits but wouldn't do any research for her Arcane-Bridgerton spinoff. She got angry when told that research was a must because it was 'just a fanfic' and that she 'did not care'. AO3 really is a test of which author is actually intelligent and willing to be true to the source material.

And to answer your question, yes I have read some fics like that. They're usually trans Soap fics, lmao.

I'm probably late as fuck with that thought and it's been obvious to everyone but me lmao.

Nah it's common enough that it gets annoying. They're tourists, not fans. Hell I just read one that wasn't even formatted properly and the author admitted she hated the fuck out of Arcane, and any fandom she wrote for. One has to wonder what the fuck she's doing there, then.

One AO3, there are 5277 works for Neon Genesis Evangelion (4321 if you don't include crossovers). 103 works have the trans character tag, and 50 have a tag for trans Shinji ikari. This is less than I was expecting, to be honest.

For some fandoms like Arcane, if the trans tag is big enough you can separate it from the main pairing. The Jayce/Viktor tag, if you are looking for just the two of them, is 6200 fics, but 9200 for every fic containing that tag, even those with multiships in them. There are 1200+ trans Viktor fics as of this writing. Usually, trans men are more popular than trans female characters because no one likes writing about stink ditches and I've only seen a handful of Frankendongs. Even pooners would rather stick with penis-in-vagina sex because it's familiar to them.

 

[Sexy Peach Emoji]

Maybe it was just released too early for troon madness, even the new version of the films. If they did another reboot that number would probably change to 35,000 overnight

That's the delimma, isn't it? Have new content to consume in both Canon and fan works, but then you have to deal with the influx of tourists and pooners.

One has to wonder what the fuck she's doing there, then

It's all about the attention, kudos and bookmarks

She's making herself miserable chasing that dopamine hit, tale as old as time.

These authors straight up admit they don't do it because they are lazy.

The bar for decent fan writing is so low, not doing the bare minimum of research to make your story stand out is really pathetic. I'm saything this as someone who did very little foward plotting and planning on my initial work, which was reasonably well received in the community, despite its issues.

 

[Chandelier]

Medium sized one before I finish the rest of that Call Me By My Name fic.

Spoiler

Wait until you get a load of this existential dialogue.

Why not? It would save the world, but we need this PWP so that's out of the question.

>Or exactly where we were always meant to go?
Where is this 'where'? You're talking about progress here. Do you mean metaphorically or literally?

Fun fact: even with that Hexcore body he's still dying, as confirmed by Singe in Ep 6. So he really is back at square one, lmao

> The Arcane isn't something we were meant to wield
Nah but mages can no problem and they can fuck you over no matter what. The entire purpose of Hextech is to put non-mages on the same level as mages, so the playing field is equalized. This is just a leftover of the season's shitty writing so just ignore that point.

> Says Jayce has resisted change
> Jayce is literally the man of progress and Viktor still has no idea what Jayce is blabbering about aside from cryptic messages
Oh, and you'll see 'cold resolve' and 'cold adjective' used a LOT here.

> Words cutting deeper than any wound
> Detached calmness (this keeps being repeated)
> Deliberate blade carving into wounds (redundant, see 'words cutting deeper' above)
> Jayce had tried to bury
...where?

> Cool, detached
Like I said, this keeps getting repeated because the author literally cannot conceive of any other word choice.

> Outdated beliefs
Such as? All he's got are cryptic messages that you can call him out on. Otherwise you both have the same goals, albeit different results.
> Cold, silver eyes
You know there are other adjectives than 'cold', right?

See point above.

> Like a blade
Also see point above
> If you can't kill me, then kiss me
Wait until you see how fast trans Viktor folds once Jayce goes full Man vs Bear.

Mechanized or not, the Mercury Hammer can crush bones. That hit should've crippled Viktor, same as Viktor's Hexclaw should've torched Jayce's clothing. Looks like both of their signature weapons are nerfed.

"I only pissed you off so you could fuck me harder, see!"

> Weight of Jayce's dominance, both physical and emotional
Doesn't have anything to do with him being male, does it? Because it's pretty damn predictable that he makes the True and Honest Man fold like a deck of cards once that true male testosterone kicks it. One would even say...it's hetero-upsetero sex.

"I got you mad so you could fuck me harder, see?!"

> His pride warred with his vulnerability
Buddy you knew full well this was bait. You wanted that robo-pussy filled up to the max and punched out like a 90s Arcade. Might as well stop beating around the bush - literally.

> Clash of dominance and submission
We would call this a cliché were it a normal het fic, but since it's a pooner fic it's A-OK. I's fresh and new. And it is fucking GAY I MEAN LOOK AT IT


Ugh, again with the sex talk that sounds like they're choking on Cheez-its. Give it a break.

" I could eat you like Nicocado Avocado eats a mukbang, baby."

> Equal parts defiance and surrender
You sure this isn't your basic BookTok romance? Because it sure reads like it.

"Don't compliment me on my pristine pussy! I'm insecure, you know!"

His Hexclaw sure does spasm a lot. Should we ask if it has photosensitivity and epilepsy?
> I think you'll feel even better if I take you the way we both want
Ah, so you meant traditional penis-in-vagina sex but it's suddenly gay because the vagina owner identifies as male. In the end, it's just a classic 'female gets fucked hardcore by sexy male' but make it ~progressive~ by adding a trans man.

> Tone laced with dominance
OK this really is your basic BookTok recommendation. Nothing to see here.

So...porn without penetration. Interesting. In any case, I'll give the author kudos for NOT using 'hole', because that word will tank any smut fic if you are referring to the vagina with it. Always.

> I want to see you dirty
Uh...check his feet?

I forgot to highlight all the times 'silver eyes' was used, and it's a lot. But this is one of the few Explicit rated fics that doesn't actually have explicit penetration, which is odd; usually Explicit goes all out as you can see from my countless examples. This one is a curious one, I'll give it that.

Verdict: a cliched Booktok style fic, nothing worth remembering. Not great, not terrible. Moving on to worse ones now.

Oh, the author also posted fanart:


Had to post it like this because it kept showing up as a broken image. In any case, what's up with Viktor's nose? My man has a Smiling Friends nose.

The bar for decent fan writing is so low, not doing the bare minimum of research to make your story stand out is really pathetic. I'm saything this as someone who did very little foward plotting and planning on my initial work, which was reasonably well received in the community, despite its issues.

We've gone full circle: despite the Internet being pervasive, people are back where they were in the 90s just when the Internet was taking off with fic. Despite all the information, all the social media, all the easily accessed textbooks from Anna's Archive or wherever, people just don't do the work because they don't want to. Nor does their audience expect them do; the most popular Arcane fic I reviewed, Coming Home, has thousands of comments of people pissing and shitting and crying themselves over predictable plot lines. Other times I see people 'thank you for the food' for badly written smut. And these are young adult women/enbies/whatever writing it. The bar is fucking low.

 

[jray4559]

We've gone full circle: despite the Internet being pervasive, people are back where they were in the 90s just when the Internet was taking off with fic. Despite all the information, all the social media, all the easily accessed textbooks from Anna's Archive or wherever, people just don't do the work because they don't want to. Nor does their audience expect them do; the most popular Arcane fic I reviewed, Coming Home, has thousands of comments of people pissing and shitting and crying themselves over predictable plot lines. Other times I see people 'thank you for the food' for badly written smut. And these are young adult women/enbies/whatever writing it. The bar is fucking low.

All it has to do is hit the trope points. Whatever character they're drooling over gets mapped to the nearest trope, or sometimes really just whatever they get off to, and as long as you hit those benchmarks and always do the thing they've seen in the other thousands of fics they've read, they shower you with ASAJSJAKJSJSJSJSJJJAKSJAKKS kinds of praise. It's never about actually making the person think or bend storytelling, it's just gotta hit the notes, just gotta have the men overexplaining their problems in a way they never ever do in real life, only in those sitcoms and dramas and things they're already completely hooked to.

I myself have seen a few (like this one) that honestly did surprise me, so there is the once in a blue moon that they go outside their trope prisons, but it's very very rare. I've honestly come to appreciate older crackfics on FFN much more than what the vast majority of AO3 currently is.

 

[soft breathing]

All it has to do is hit the trope points.

I read your post, went to Xitter, and saw this fic being promoted.



I guess this is hitting all the important plot points & tags. All it's missing is some long pubes, piss or other bodily fluids.

Fucking end me, really.