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Well, looks like we can add fic #4 (or is it three?) to the Frankendong files. This one is very long - I am not kidding, this is why it's spoilered in parts - and is titled after the tagline for 'The Thing'. This T4T pairing is trapped in an Antarctic base, and must use other methods of warmth to survive. An archive of it is here.
So, here's what happened: Viktor was so distracted by wet-dreams of Jayce being an Adonis that he forget to refuel the generations that keep the base warm and the equipment functioning. When the power goes out, he doesn't notice - despite all of their equipment relying on said generator - and doesn't even notice his breath puffing out. You'd think Antarctic researchers studying polar physics should be well aware of the climate and how nasty it could get, but no. The author clearly doesn't know much about the climate down there and even The Thing, which this fic is based on, couldn't give a clue.
They don't use jeeps down there, they use heavy-duty track vehicles, skidoos, or modified Fords. Jeeps would not survive the cold. All vehicles they use down there are specifically built to withstand the cold.
That said, it's also written that the smaller outpost is hooked to a wind turbine generator, and the closest one would be the Ross Island wind farm. So they're already relying on a diminishing power source and Viktor conveniently forgot to refuel the generators before a fucking snowstorm all because he was distracted by the 'big muscles' of fellow pooner Jayce.
> His testosterone injections had not yet taken hold of his...everything
Well it won't give him the grip strength or the actual muscles of a man, let alone intelligence - they actually keep fucking talking and having mental breakdowns while their base starts freezing up. Very competent!
> There is something powerful and dense to his frame now
And yet, he still can't out-grip a methhead, lmao.
> Jayce is divinely gorgeous
> Fuck, Viktor's throat is dry just thinking about him
And this is enough for you to forget your duties and just let your base fall into disrepair all because he made that Frankendong flop around. If you were still a woman, everyone on that base would be holding you accountable. I guess trans men really DO keep some privilege, eh?
> They were in a predicament because of him
That's an understatement. You have no power in a facility that is currently in a snowstorm with wind speeds that can get up to 100 km/h and temperatures that can hit -60C. You not doing your duties by keeping the base powered is a surefire way to get your ass sued. Emergency heat packs are not going to do much if your base turns into a freezer box and your own breath starts freezing up the walls.
> Jayce looks like a perfectly chiseled Adonis
This is the 'man' that tanked an entire base, let that be known.
> He is often tired or distracted, given the nature of their work. Like right now
Sounds like the job isn't for you, then.
> Matured early to be the man of the household
AKA the girl who was expected to take on chores and be a doting daughter until she decided to shed those nasty stereotypes and expectations and just 'become a guy' - and then turn out to be an even more incompetent man.
> Cluttered, but largely clean
Pick one.
> I didn't remember to fill it and everything in this base is going to be ruined plz forgive me you were just so hot
Yeah, this was a legitimate plot point used by a 'transmasc' author. Oh, honey, all you did was make everyone here retarded.
For the record, even inside any of these bases, the max temperature can only be -20. AKA frostbite in under 5 minutes. This is NOT something you want to sleep on.
> Unfairly large hands
You are both pooners. Who the hell gave him the bitch-slapping mittens?
Ah, I'm so glad you built walls around yourself to protect yourself from trauma, Viktor. Your solution to it is to...endanger everyone and all your research on the base because you got a hard-on. Incredible.
> Controllable workplace crush and completely disastrous attachment
Just a reminder that this pooner destroyed a fuckton of research by not refilling the generator because now only essential systems can be powered - if that. I'm waiting for someone to start screaming on the radio on what happened and why these retards just 'conveniently' let millions of dollars worth of research get frozen over - literally.
> It's bad enough he's fantasizing about Jayce so much that it's intruding on his work ethic
Talk about adhering to the worst stereotypes. Can pooners be professional in a workplace setting? Clearly not - they will always want to jump a fellow hot man just to get some dick (or pussy, in this case).
> Cock
That limp flesh tube is not a penis, and it's gonna be hella interesting to see how this fic decides to use it.
> I can handle a bit of chill
Spoilers: his fingernails are blue from the cold. And you can see his breath because of how fast the temperature dropped. Just no big deal, homie.
Now, the tidbit about Viktor suffering a ton of oppression when he's young and his father dying to get him proper medical treatment did raise some eyebrows. Was he hated because he was a cripple, or hated because he was trans? Clearly, Viktor could afford to get a phalloplasty, but his dad died to get him medical care - Czechia has a public and private healthcare system that is based on compulsory insurance. This makes it seem as if they lived in the US, which WOULD bankrupt a lot of working-class families trying to get healthcare.
>Ruinous catastrophe that is caring for Viktor
I mean, he did just ruin an entire Antarctic base, causing millions in damage...catastrophe is an understatement.
> Rolodex of information
He has all these metaphorical filing cabinets on Jayce and how special he is, and yet he has known for remembering to refuel a necessary generator that provides power to an Antarctic base. There's nothing dumber than that, and I'm not getting over it.
> Why does Jayce seem so bothered by Viktor being cold
Spoiler: because it reminds him of his mom and he gets triggered. This is all happening while the base is freezing up; that's OK because they're having a tender moment.
> Alchemizing icy alabaster to flushed pink granite
Fancy. Now, is there anyone else on this base? Aren't they cold? How come anyone hasn't started radioing in yet?
> Disastrously, Viktor wonders how warm he might be able to get if his fingers were inside
You 'forgot' to refuel the generators and now you're thinking of warming yourself up by fingering Jayce's vagina. Priorities.
> Tickling static space between their atoms as their skin shifts the thin fibres of air
...what?
> Dangerous for me to sleep with my own thermals and hot packs?
Buddy it's gonna dip to -20 C in there. You are going to freeze. Staying with someone else because of your fuck-up increases your risk of survival.
Imagine that: the strong, proud True and Honest Man immediately has a panic attack and has to be comforted while the base freezes over. At least we have a tender moment, yeah?
> He never thought in his life that he would have this close intimacy with another person
Did it have to involve destroying millions of dollars worth of taxpayer funded data?
> Until it was all darkness and there was no one left for Viktor to love
Keep up with not refueling generators and you'll be making love to a bunch of corpses, dood.
> Viktor's heart pounds to think of him tangling with Jayce is another fashion
Should've thought of that after making sure your base was sufficiently powered. This is not an amateur mistake, btw; this was a PHYSICIST making this mistake - and he's been there before!
> Tinged with blood and trailing viscera
Ew. You should get that checked if you're sighing like AM after he went Hotline Miami mode.
> Viktor's throat cramps with vicious, traitorous tears
Yeah, crying and shitting and sobbing is nice and all...but you still should've refilled the diesel engines, bro! You just killed a bunch of people and a bunch of projects, bro!
This tidbit about Viktor being the 'worst pervert in the world' after seeing a smidgen of flesh from a naked, showering Jayce is par the course, but I cannot stop comparing it to how incompetent Viktor is as a scientist and a person that he'd rather masturbate to another pooner taking a hot shower than keeping essential systems online. That's like the pipeline issue a while back where NONE of the employees knew how the computer systems work and only the retired engineers did. It's systemic FUBAR. And no, it isn't POTENTIAL danger...it is ACTUAL danger, because you 'forgot' to do it because you were too busy being horny! Go to horny jail!
Ahh...there's that oh, oh, that's so famous.
> He's strong enough that he could reasonably overpower Viktor
But not your average Florida Man. All that testosterone can't improve grip strength, lmao.
> We have all night
You have all night to freeze, you dumb fucks.
> Man is the warmest place to hide
Funny. But you aren't men. I also wonder: how would The Thing react to a trans person? Would it be affected by exogenous hormones or try to assimilate the original form? Gender dysphoria via a hostile alien, imagine that.
> Gooey affection in his warm eyes
But is his face like a s'more?
> Jayce might never want to be with the pitiable cripple
Viktor being a cripple isn't a problem. Him being a retarded pooner who 'forgot' to refuel the generator before a snowstorm because he was having sexual daydreams IS. I can't even think of something that dumb and yet this author just straight up did it, good job.
> I asked you if you would like to study my anatomy
Spoiler: he's got the RFF phalloplasty, where they sliced it from the arm, and Jayce never noticed the scar tissue.
> The effect is hazardous for Viktor's health
But not you freezing to death because of your own shitty decisions. Nah, we'll just forget about that.
> Squeaks out an exhale
Are you a rubber chicken?
> His hands are unfairly large
Clearly not that big, since he isn't actually a man.
> The cold kiss of the air is harsh
Indeed, it'd be around -15 C to -20 C. That's cold for us Leafs. That's INSIDE the building, btw.
> Nothing in Viktor's spine or leg dislodges with the landing
Imagine if it did and we have to deal with another added trauma dump of Viktor becoming a quadriplegic all because Jayce piledrived him onto the bed, lmao.
> Lovely arm muscles and rippling abs
I've seen them on pooners. Ever seen them on 'Elliot' Page? Weak. Even a starved meth head has better muscle tone.
> If I could get hard from blood flow, that would've done it
1. That's literally what an erection IS
2. That flesh tube you call a penis can't do that, so no wonder you're confused.
Oh yeah, show us that scarred arm where you got that Lamprey dick carved out. Satiate my curiosity!
I swear, Jayce turns so many colours he might as well be a lava lamp with how much he's blushing. Why not use him as the generator?
> Rich caramel eyes
Viktor's eyes are golden.
> Jayce would paint him if he could
Too bad all the paint would be rock solid in ice, thanks to Viktor not refueling the generator.
> Lets himself feel held and protected
Something something female-coded something something
> Jay-bird
> Baby-doll
> Makes him feel small and precious
Funny, because none of those are male pet names. I could call you Bud Dwyer and it'd be far more masculine.
> Are you cold
...yeah? You didn't fucking restore the generators! THE WHOLE BASE IS GODDAMN COLD, YOU RETARD!
> Marginally less satisfying for Jayce
What, that roid clit ain't working? Say it ain't so. And good lucking getting 'underneath' that hood unless it's detached. It's not like a male foreskin.
I wonder how the vibrator is even charged when there isn't even an emergency power system anymore. They're doing this in a freezer box and don't seem to care.
> Vibrations pulse into his femoral artery
That artery is pretty deep...you saying that vibrator is THAT good? Interesting.
All this 'Papi' talk is because Jayce sees Viktor as a better 'father figure' and male figure than he did his own father. I'm not kidding. This is some weird psycho-sexual shit where a woman is upset her father left her, she went to take on his role, and is now having sex with another woman who got an arm flesh tube attached.
Yeah, I'd think I'd rather take my chances with The Thing. Least it can get creative.
All this talk about Viktor 'pummeling his dick' up Jayce's vagina and trying to breach his cervix does absolutely nothing for me, because once the author made it clear this was an arm flesh tube that has to be supported by a steel rod to remain hard, it's difficult to take it seriously. This smut ain't smut'in.
> Possessed and held and loved and coveted
All very female-coded. Actual men don't give a shit because they only think with their (actual) dicks - that they can be proud of that they don't need a steel rod to use.
> Feel like his whole life might be worth something
Interesting that trans men are the only ones who have internal monologues like these, and not trans women.
> He feels puny and insigificant
If trans men are men, why don't you feel proud and dominant? Shouldn't you feel like you're at the top of the world? Where's all this self-doubt coming fro- oh.
> You're safe with me
Not really, he fucked over the base and now it's a freezer box.
I sincerely doubt that. My dood had a better time with the shower head.
> I can't fucking breathe
St. Floyd wants nothing to do with your crusty ass, boy.
> Cums so hard his eyes cross
I am to believe that he got the 'ahegao' face that's seen in hentai, or the 'fucked silly' look, but all I got was the impression of a Down's Syndrome person trying to track a bee with their eyes.
> Spearing himself wide
Hard to tell if that's the case because Viktor's arm flesh tube is of an indeterminate size and girth. It's no Hispanic Hog Jayce, that's for sure.
> Ruined, sore hole
How can it be ruined when it doesn't even have the 'give' of a real penis? You're getting spread open by a Magic Sac!
> Chasing his hard won orgasm
The fact it took him this long shows that A) he isn't a man and B) he doesn't actually get one. It's hard to see why because the clit effectively gets snipped and rerouted.
> He wants Viktor to cum so hard in his pussy it fucking breaks him down
Well you aren't going to get it, sweaty, because the arm flesh tube is physically incapable of ejaculating.
> He wants to make Viktor see whatever version of God exists when he cums
Spoiler: he doesn't because he can't.
Can't be stretched open by something the equivalent of a dough of bread. It's only the steel rod that gives support; otherwise, it'd just be a floppy thing shoved in there.
> You're so wet around me it's filthy
He can only note that because of how much Jayce is leaking onto his thighs. Otherwise, he physically cannot tell.
> Embarrassing amount of wetness
Gavin Newsom should hire him.
> His voice rises his in his throat with a strangled yelp
Imagine getting clocked because of that, LMAO
> Clenching hole
If you can use pussy, you can just use that. You're not actually offended by the word 'vagina'.
> Swollen t-dick
2 inches of growth. Even your pinky is larger.
> Absurd about of slick squishing
My man really IS a lava lamp.
> Coarse hair of his groan
Ah, there's the Rapunzel pubes! I missed you!
Baby-doll is not a masculine pet name, let alone one would call a male person at all. It's a distinctly feminine term, and Jayce later wants to be called by the feminine version of it in Spanish, because suddenly that's not dysphoric anymore.
> Owned, protected
Not female-coded at all.
> Are you a pretty little doll for your Papi?
Is he going to be stored in Demi Moore's house?
> Enchantingly delicate
Funny how this language is reserved for pooners, and never men.
> Seating him on his cock so harshly it holts against the upper wall of his cunt
Guaranteed it's the steel rod he feels, vs the honest, firm flesh of an actual penis. That's gotta hurt.
> Burst a capillary in his nose
IRL Tumblr nose, go figure. My man's becoming a reindeer.
> Feminine form feels closer to baby-doll for me
Because both are FEMININE terms of endearment. You're a True and Honest Man going by feminine endearments yet want to be seen and referred to as a man. Pick a struggle.
> It's more like calling me beautiful, in a romantic way
And most actual men don't give a shit. Macready sure didn't.
> His tight hole
Which one? You're basically using a steel rod to do all the work. That ain't no real man meat there, son.
> Ungh god
My exact reaction to how fucking long this is.
> Letting me use your pretty pussy like I own it
I bet it costs next to nothing on eBay. I need that money to buy some diesel to actually refuel the generators.
> Jayce knows Viktor is cumming
...he isn't? He's physically incapable of it? You wouldn't even 'feel' any thud in that arm flesh tube because there are no veins, no nerves, no nothing. You just have a blood supply there to keep it from rotting off - which half of them do.
> He squirts again in an exhausted, steadily weakening stream
Glad to see Jayce is doing all the carrying in the ejaculation department.
There's no power PERIOD, you forgot to REFUEL THE GODDAMN GENERATORS, ALL YOU HAVE IS EMERGENCY POWER. Christ Almighty. At least the guys in The Thing had a reason why the power was out vs deliberate incompetence.
> I'll make sure my doll gets his pretty pussy cleaned up
I mean, it'd just be from his own ejaculate and now yours, which really dumbs down the whole 'creampie' and 'breeding' thing. It's a steel rod in a piece of rolled up flesh like a burrito. That's not hot.
What stretch? You wrote it isn't that big. The showerhead would've done more work.
> Sucks and licks him clean
Well, you wouldn't be cleaning yourself out of him, now would you?
> Cunt
> Leaking hole
Pick one.
> He-aaah
The sound I make when I finally get on the merry-go-round, hell yeah!
Again, all this talk about using feminine pet names, and the desire to be loved, validated and protected...that's all female-coded. If this was anything like The Thing, the guys would at least try to FIX THE GODDAMN GENERATORS before getting down and dirty. Even a gay man wants to be warm and have some hot water, and as much as he would love to get his ass reamed - getting his ass reamed by a superior over millions of dollars of destroyed equipment hurts more. Priorities, sweaty!
> Praying in the fragile sanctuary of his own mind for kindness and safety
My man ruined a bunch of equipment because he was horny. If that's not a condemnation of how stupid trans men are, I don't know a better example. That's pretty fucking hilarious.
> He certainly let Jayce see every bit of him
He didn't know you had a phalloplasty. He masturbated to the thought of you having an actual penis.
You're a poor, hopeless romantic. Sorry, bud. And your love just fucked everyone over on that base.
You can cuddle with your Papi but that isn't turning the lights back on. Hell is that snowstorm still going on outside? Imagine what will happen once their superiors find out. Their asses will actually get reamed by more than just steel this time around.
TL;DR two pooners get trapped in a base because Viktor didn't refuel the generators because he was too hot and bothered by naked Jayce in the shower. They end up banging with Viktor's arm flesh tube with a steel rod inside. It goes on forever. You're welcome.
So, here's what happened: Viktor was so distracted by wet-dreams of Jayce being an Adonis that he forget to refuel the generations that keep the base warm and the equipment functioning. When the power goes out, he doesn't notice - despite all of their equipment relying on said generator - and doesn't even notice his breath puffing out. You'd think Antarctic researchers studying polar physics should be well aware of the climate and how nasty it could get, but no. The author clearly doesn't know much about the climate down there and even The Thing, which this fic is based on, couldn't give a clue.
They don't use jeeps down there, they use heavy-duty track vehicles, skidoos, or modified Fords. Jeeps would not survive the cold. All vehicles they use down there are specifically built to withstand the cold.
That said, it's also written that the smaller outpost is hooked to a wind turbine generator, and the closest one would be the Ross Island wind farm. So they're already relying on a diminishing power source and Viktor conveniently forgot to refuel the generators before a fucking snowstorm all because he was distracted by the 'big muscles' of fellow pooner Jayce.
> His testosterone injections had not yet taken hold of his...everything
Well it won't give him the grip strength or the actual muscles of a man, let alone intelligence - they actually keep fucking talking and having mental breakdowns while their base starts freezing up. Very competent!
> There is something powerful and dense to his frame now
And yet, he still can't out-grip a methhead, lmao.
> Jayce is divinely gorgeous
> Fuck, Viktor's throat is dry just thinking about him
And this is enough for you to forget your duties and just let your base fall into disrepair all because he made that Frankendong flop around. If you were still a woman, everyone on that base would be holding you accountable. I guess trans men really DO keep some privilege, eh?
> They were in a predicament because of him
That's an understatement. You have no power in a facility that is currently in a snowstorm with wind speeds that can get up to 100 km/h and temperatures that can hit -60C. You not doing your duties by keeping the base powered is a surefire way to get your ass sued. Emergency heat packs are not going to do much if your base turns into a freezer box and your own breath starts freezing up the walls.
> Jayce looks like a perfectly chiseled Adonis
This is the 'man' that tanked an entire base, let that be known.
> He is often tired or distracted, given the nature of their work. Like right now
Sounds like the job isn't for you, then.
> Matured early to be the man of the household
AKA the girl who was expected to take on chores and be a doting daughter until she decided to shed those nasty stereotypes and expectations and just 'become a guy' - and then turn out to be an even more incompetent man.
> Cluttered, but largely clean
Pick one.
> I didn't remember to fill it and everything in this base is going to be ruined plz forgive me you were just so hot
Yeah, this was a legitimate plot point used by a 'transmasc' author. Oh, honey, all you did was make everyone here retarded.
For the record, even inside any of these bases, the max temperature can only be -20. AKA frostbite in under 5 minutes. This is NOT something you want to sleep on.
> Unfairly large hands
You are both pooners. Who the hell gave him the bitch-slapping mittens?
Ah, I'm so glad you built walls around yourself to protect yourself from trauma, Viktor. Your solution to it is to...endanger everyone and all your research on the base because you got a hard-on. Incredible.
> Controllable workplace crush and completely disastrous attachment
Just a reminder that this pooner destroyed a fuckton of research by not refilling the generator because now only essential systems can be powered - if that. I'm waiting for someone to start screaming on the radio on what happened and why these retards just 'conveniently' let millions of dollars worth of research get frozen over - literally.
> It's bad enough he's fantasizing about Jayce so much that it's intruding on his work ethic
Talk about adhering to the worst stereotypes. Can pooners be professional in a workplace setting? Clearly not - they will always want to jump a fellow hot man just to get some dick (or pussy, in this case).
> Cock
That limp flesh tube is not a penis, and it's gonna be hella interesting to see how this fic decides to use it.
> I can handle a bit of chill
Spoilers: his fingernails are blue from the cold. And you can see his breath because of how fast the temperature dropped. Just no big deal, homie.
Now, the tidbit about Viktor suffering a ton of oppression when he's young and his father dying to get him proper medical treatment did raise some eyebrows. Was he hated because he was a cripple, or hated because he was trans? Clearly, Viktor could afford to get a phalloplasty, but his dad died to get him medical care - Czechia has a public and private healthcare system that is based on compulsory insurance. This makes it seem as if they lived in the US, which WOULD bankrupt a lot of working-class families trying to get healthcare.
>Ruinous catastrophe that is caring for Viktor
I mean, he did just ruin an entire Antarctic base, causing millions in damage...catastrophe is an understatement.
> Rolodex of information
He has all these metaphorical filing cabinets on Jayce and how special he is, and yet he has known for remembering to refuel a necessary generator that provides power to an Antarctic base. There's nothing dumber than that, and I'm not getting over it.
> Why does Jayce seem so bothered by Viktor being cold
Spoiler: because it reminds him of his mom and he gets triggered. This is all happening while the base is freezing up; that's OK because they're having a tender moment.
> Alchemizing icy alabaster to flushed pink granite
Fancy. Now, is there anyone else on this base? Aren't they cold? How come anyone hasn't started radioing in yet?
> Disastrously, Viktor wonders how warm he might be able to get if his fingers were inside
You 'forgot' to refuel the generators and now you're thinking of warming yourself up by fingering Jayce's vagina. Priorities.
> Tickling static space between their atoms as their skin shifts the thin fibres of air
...what?
> Dangerous for me to sleep with my own thermals and hot packs?
Buddy it's gonna dip to -20 C in there. You are going to freeze. Staying with someone else because of your fuck-up increases your risk of survival.
Imagine that: the strong, proud True and Honest Man immediately has a panic attack and has to be comforted while the base freezes over. At least we have a tender moment, yeah?
> He never thought in his life that he would have this close intimacy with another person
Did it have to involve destroying millions of dollars worth of taxpayer funded data?
> Until it was all darkness and there was no one left for Viktor to love
Keep up with not refueling generators and you'll be making love to a bunch of corpses, dood.
> Viktor's heart pounds to think of him tangling with Jayce is another fashion
Should've thought of that after making sure your base was sufficiently powered. This is not an amateur mistake, btw; this was a PHYSICIST making this mistake - and he's been there before!
> Tinged with blood and trailing viscera
Ew. You should get that checked if you're sighing like AM after he went Hotline Miami mode.
> Viktor's throat cramps with vicious, traitorous tears
Yeah, crying and shitting and sobbing is nice and all...but you still should've refilled the diesel engines, bro! You just killed a bunch of people and a bunch of projects, bro!
This tidbit about Viktor being the 'worst pervert in the world' after seeing a smidgen of flesh from a naked, showering Jayce is par the course, but I cannot stop comparing it to how incompetent Viktor is as a scientist and a person that he'd rather masturbate to another pooner taking a hot shower than keeping essential systems online. That's like the pipeline issue a while back where NONE of the employees knew how the computer systems work and only the retired engineers did. It's systemic FUBAR. And no, it isn't POTENTIAL danger...it is ACTUAL danger, because you 'forgot' to do it because you were too busy being horny! Go to horny jail!
Ahh...there's that oh, oh, that's so famous.
> He's strong enough that he could reasonably overpower Viktor
But not your average Florida Man. All that testosterone can't improve grip strength, lmao.
> We have all night
You have all night to freeze, you dumb fucks.
> Man is the warmest place to hide
Funny. But you aren't men. I also wonder: how would The Thing react to a trans person? Would it be affected by exogenous hormones or try to assimilate the original form? Gender dysphoria via a hostile alien, imagine that.
> Gooey affection in his warm eyes
But is his face like a s'more?
> Jayce might never want to be with the pitiable cripple
Viktor being a cripple isn't a problem. Him being a retarded pooner who 'forgot' to refuel the generator before a snowstorm because he was having sexual daydreams IS. I can't even think of something that dumb and yet this author just straight up did it, good job.
> I asked you if you would like to study my anatomy
Spoiler: he's got the RFF phalloplasty, where they sliced it from the arm, and Jayce never noticed the scar tissue.
> The effect is hazardous for Viktor's health
But not you freezing to death because of your own shitty decisions. Nah, we'll just forget about that.
> Squeaks out an exhale
Are you a rubber chicken?
> His hands are unfairly large
Clearly not that big, since he isn't actually a man.
> The cold kiss of the air is harsh
Indeed, it'd be around -15 C to -20 C. That's cold for us Leafs. That's INSIDE the building, btw.
> Nothing in Viktor's spine or leg dislodges with the landing
Imagine if it did and we have to deal with another added trauma dump of Viktor becoming a quadriplegic all because Jayce piledrived him onto the bed, lmao.
> Lovely arm muscles and rippling abs
I've seen them on pooners. Ever seen them on 'Elliot' Page? Weak. Even a starved meth head has better muscle tone.
> If I could get hard from blood flow, that would've done it
1. That's literally what an erection IS
2. That flesh tube you call a penis can't do that, so no wonder you're confused.
Oh yeah, show us that scarred arm where you got that Lamprey dick carved out. Satiate my curiosity!
In which the smut properly begins.
> Flaccid dick out
You'll never guess how large this thing is.
> You obviously know I'm trans, but I didn't really talk to you about my parts?
> You are on testosterone, you don't plan for bottom surgery
So glad we're discussing boundaries and surgical techniques. Makes me feel like I'm on the SRS thread. Jayce gets to keep his T-addled vagina and Viktor has the arm-flaying rotdog. How romantic.
> His joints hurt so profoundly
Yeah I wonder why that is. Couldn't be that because you didn't refuel the generator, that the internal temperature of the building is now approaching -20 C. Your bones hurt because you're literally freezing to death. Fucking your fellow pooner isn't going to help once your limbs begin to match the numbness of your rotdog.
> Under his pecs
What pecs?
> Beautiful pink and tan flesh
Is he a rainbow fish?
> Happy to follow Jayce anywhere on Earth, and then beyond it
Hopefully he refuels the diesel generators next time.
> The nerves in his cock flaring to life
In actuality, the nerves in the rotdog are either nonexistent or don't work; all that shit about 'nerve hookup' is just bullshit. It literally is a limp tube of flesh inflated by saline solution, thanks to a pump inserted in the leftover labia (modified into a ball sac). If it sounds weird and 'what the hell' territory, it is. It functions just like that in real life - but worse.
> Augmented physiology
Nah, if it really were augmented, you'd get a robo-dick or something. That at least would be interesting.
OK, so we discover that Viktor's rotdog somewhat hardens - but only if manually done - and that he spent a lot of money, time, and blood on numerous surgical procedures to get the phalloplasty he wanted just as actual pooners do. Masculinization surgery is offered, but involves breaking the jaw and thickening it up to add a more 'masculine' appearance and whatnot. It does not surprise me that his hips give him dysphoria and he cannot shed the other sexually dimorphic parts of him. He wants to feel validated in his own skin, but doesn't want to be categorized as an 'Other'. Sorry, lad, the rotdog already did the job for you.
> Winces as his cock hardens
Yeah, that's a problem. Normal men would be moaning. The fact the inflated flesh tube has fraying nerves that send shockwaves of pain isn't an indication all is well. It just made me wince.
> Nerves at the end stages of healing
Oh, lad. They aren't coming back. They're friend and done. You'll never experience the same feeling as a natal male will with his erection. Too bad, so sad.
> Stroking Viktor's cock
It'd be like stroking a tube of Pillsbury dough - I mean it feels nice, but it ultimately gives you nothing in return.
> Easily Jayce flutters against his fingertips
I'm glad the labia is all twitchy and stuff like a vibrator.
> Hot, puffy lips of Jayce's gorgeous folds
Where are all the Booktubers mocking this line?
> Behind the twin scars below his pectorals, just dusky enough to disappear
If you can see them, then they haven't disappeared. They just faded against his skin.
> The soaked, throbbing heat of Jayce's hole
Who needs a diesel generator when this boy will suffice?
> Nudging the side of Jayce's small dick
Small indeed. 1-2 inches is the rule.
> His own blood is practically boiling out of him in bursts of lustful heat
But none of it goes to your dick. Shame you can't even get that.
> Every inch of his partner's stunning, perfect body
That he had to modify heavily with testosterone.
> I need your cock in your pussy, I'm clean, you can fuck me raw
...not like you needed to worry about being impregnated, because Viktor doesn't even produce sperm. Even a rotdog and the labia-reshaped testicles do not produce sperm. It's an odd thing to say when you're both functionally sterile.
> Half convinced he might cum just like this
I'd be interested to see the mechanics of this, mostly because the 'cum' is just leftover vaginal ejaculate or urine. That of course implies there's been a total vaginectomy and the clitoris has been removed for said phalloplasty, so good luck ever getting aroused with the clit cut off.
> Want my cock in your pretty pink pussy so you can milk me the way you're milking my fingers?
Man, this really needs to be mocked like Booktok trends. He can't really 'milk' your cock because it's a lifeless flesh tube. He'd be better off with a dildo because that's really what your phalloplasty is.
> His cock isn't massive
Of course not. Hispanic Hog Jayce isn't in this universe so we all mourn his loss for at least offering some spice to this. Instead, we have to deal with an arm flesh tube that's maybe approaching 5 inches. Better than a metoidioplasty, but still. Goofy to read.
> Rolling his tongue over surgical scars
I thought he couldn't see them?
What's fascinating about this is that, later, Viktor admits that he can't actually ejaculate - which is predictable, really, because he doesn't have any sperm and anything produced by his clit would be so miniscule as to be nonexistent. I wonder if Jayce knew about this beforehand; did he fantasize about a true and honest man dick, or the flesh tube that Viktor had? I doubt it was the latter.
Also, fucking yourself with a showerhead is one of those WTF things that absolutely gets mocked in Booktok circles. The showerhead, really? You're that desperate for something hard?
> Swollen, pink t-dick
2 inches growth, defeated by a goddamn showerhead.
> The way his cock visibly throbs
How is it throbbing when it's that small?
> Dangerously whiny. He sounds petulant, like he's moments away from hitting his fists into the mattress
You'll never guess what happens: he ends up clocking himself from the pitch of his moans.
I thought the cold was so bitter and painful he was wincing constantly? The cold isn't good for your joints as it fucks with the fluids in-between them, so if anything, he'd be in more pain. We are talking about temperatures so cold steel cracks in half. I wonder if this transmasc author has lived anywhere cold, like ever.
> The blunt intrusion of Viktor's cock-head
Well, it wouldn't be blunt, but a weird approximation of what a dorsal head looks like. They tend to look like weird cupcakes with the 'flaps' looking like icing. They nowhere near resemble the real thing.
> Inch by delicious inch
Which isn't much, by the author's admission - which she later retcons by saying he is indeed big because of the size of the RFF scars on his arms.
> His pussy is glistening in the dim light
I'm surprised it isn't freezing up, given how cold it is.
> Initial stretch too early
Why is this a problem when he's literally dripping everywhere? It shouldn't be hard at all.
Now, the bit where Viktor has to explain how Jayce feels around him is a little bit ironic. Frankendongs don't actually have feeling, because the nerves are all destroyed. It can't even retain body heat - only near the base - so you really are getting fucked by a limp bit of arm flesh that cannot even let the owner know it's inside somebody. So all this talk about 'psychological need' and physical feeling is pure fantasy. You know the author is trying to sell phalloplasty to an ignorant audience, because the real thing is even more horrifying. You'd choose The Thing instead.
> His arm scar is impressive
Earlier the author wrote that Viktor was 'not massive', but now he is, because he's stretching Jayce so much.
> Jayce's hole is tight
Interesting how the Frankendong gets all the male glory, while the vagina is just a hole. I've also never heard of a clitoris being referred to as a 'hardened pearl' so that's new for me.
And why do these people cry so much during sex? I'd be crying that some fucktard physicist forgot to refuel the diesel generators and now we have no heat!
Man, Jayce really is a rainbow fish with all the shades of red he's blushing!
What I do find interesting, though, is that all the physical reaction and desire is coming from Jayce here. All the clenching, fluttering, wetness and what have you is all from the vagina - the Frankendong is just there. Limp and lifeless like the flesh tube it is.
> Arching his spine in a sinful curve that drives partners wild whenever he bottoms
Glad to see he still kept his gymnast body. Look at those contortions! And glad to see he's had other people to...experiment with.
> Fucks his cock upwards into that bundle of sensitive nerves
Well, at least someone has their nerves fully functional - Jayce, that is.
> Grind his own cock
There's very little to grind, my dear.
> Your cunt, fucking you, making love to this incredible body
That's nice, but you literally cannot feel anything in that arm flesh tube. How hard is it just to keep Viktor male? Or both of them male?
> Half hysterical sobs
I'm still crying more that this dumbfuck didn't refuel the diesel generators and now everyone is going to be getting frostbite in their own beds.
> Jayce just feels so fucking good
Except he literally can't feel him. That's the thing - there are no nerves at the end, only near the base. If that. The fact he's getting more pleasure out of Jayce by using the heel of his hand is really something.
> Past the barrier of futile resistance
Was there even resistance to begin with? My man was 'as wet as a waterslide'. What issues were there? Glad to see Jayce can squirt, though.
> He gushes all over the both of them
Hopefully that shit doesn't freeze up, too. Imagine having to explain that to your superiors - the very people who are going to come calling soon.
> I wanna melt you in my mouth, swallow every bit of you down, you're a goddamn wet dream, baby
"I wanna eat you like you're a marshmellow. You're a goddamn dream!"
God even on the second typing that shit makes me snicker. Christ Almighty.
> Resists the building need to fuck Jayce brutally hard
...You mean you weren't earlier? What was that about?
> Hnng Nnnng
Oh God, it's the heart-attack sex noises again.
> His cunt is better than anything on the planet
Apparently it's better than functional heating, but do go on.
> Including the toys Viktor used to swear by when he could finally drive his cock into one
Oh, so fleshlights. He worked that limp-wristed dingdong into a fleshlight. Wow.
>I want you to cum in me... Please please please let me feel it
Sorry lad, it's physically impossible and he just admitted it. No creampie for you.
> Fill me like I'm your fucking toy
Uh, you're gonna have to make do with a replacement, because that boy doesn't have anything to fill you with. Best I can do is Dawn dish soap.
> Nnnh
Are you a human or an animal? Maybe you are The Thing.
> Made me cum so hard it hurts
It's not nice to lie. It's almost impossible for Viktor to ejaculate at all.
> Finds Jayce's cock with his own thumb instead
> Presses against the swollen nub
Not that big if it's just a nub, is it?
I also highlighted all the times 'pleasure' is used, and it's a LOT - a whopping 43 times. Wew, lad.
> His fit waist
Huh, thought it was nice and curvy earlier. Must've been me.
> Wet, clenching hole
> Like his pussy is meal
So his hole is his pussy is a meal. Guess we might as well call it an Air BnB.
> Fucking his fingers in and out of Jayce's hole
But have they froze yet? The generator's still out, bud.
> Deceptively strong grasp
But not memory, because the whole base is fucked up because he was too distracted by a flash of skin to not refuel the generators. Man I can't wait to see the write-up on that.
> Aching cunt
> Hole
> Labia
Why is labia OK but not vagina? Also notice how perineum is used no problem, but the V word is persona non grata.
> Swollen t-dick
It's barely 2 inches, calm down. You can 'jerk it off' between your fingers. Sad!
> Slurping obscenely
Are you drinking the last dregs of soup out of your bowl? Sounds like it.
> Flaccid dick out
You'll never guess how large this thing is.
> You obviously know I'm trans, but I didn't really talk to you about my parts?
> You are on testosterone, you don't plan for bottom surgery
So glad we're discussing boundaries and surgical techniques. Makes me feel like I'm on the SRS thread. Jayce gets to keep his T-addled vagina and Viktor has the arm-flaying rotdog. How romantic.
> His joints hurt so profoundly
Yeah I wonder why that is. Couldn't be that because you didn't refuel the generator, that the internal temperature of the building is now approaching -20 C. Your bones hurt because you're literally freezing to death. Fucking your fellow pooner isn't going to help once your limbs begin to match the numbness of your rotdog.
> Under his pecs
What pecs?
> Beautiful pink and tan flesh
Is he a rainbow fish?
> Happy to follow Jayce anywhere on Earth, and then beyond it
Hopefully he refuels the diesel generators next time.
> The nerves in his cock flaring to life
In actuality, the nerves in the rotdog are either nonexistent or don't work; all that shit about 'nerve hookup' is just bullshit. It literally is a limp tube of flesh inflated by saline solution, thanks to a pump inserted in the leftover labia (modified into a ball sac). If it sounds weird and 'what the hell' territory, it is. It functions just like that in real life - but worse.
> Augmented physiology
Nah, if it really were augmented, you'd get a robo-dick or something. That at least would be interesting.
OK, so we discover that Viktor's rotdog somewhat hardens - but only if manually done - and that he spent a lot of money, time, and blood on numerous surgical procedures to get the phalloplasty he wanted just as actual pooners do. Masculinization surgery is offered, but involves breaking the jaw and thickening it up to add a more 'masculine' appearance and whatnot. It does not surprise me that his hips give him dysphoria and he cannot shed the other sexually dimorphic parts of him. He wants to feel validated in his own skin, but doesn't want to be categorized as an 'Other'. Sorry, lad, the rotdog already did the job for you.
> Winces as his cock hardens
Yeah, that's a problem. Normal men would be moaning. The fact the inflated flesh tube has fraying nerves that send shockwaves of pain isn't an indication all is well. It just made me wince.
> Nerves at the end stages of healing
Oh, lad. They aren't coming back. They're friend and done. You'll never experience the same feeling as a natal male will with his erection. Too bad, so sad.
> Stroking Viktor's cock
It'd be like stroking a tube of Pillsbury dough - I mean it feels nice, but it ultimately gives you nothing in return.
> Easily Jayce flutters against his fingertips
I'm glad the labia is all twitchy and stuff like a vibrator.
> Hot, puffy lips of Jayce's gorgeous folds
Where are all the Booktubers mocking this line?
> Behind the twin scars below his pectorals, just dusky enough to disappear
If you can see them, then they haven't disappeared. They just faded against his skin.
> The soaked, throbbing heat of Jayce's hole
Who needs a diesel generator when this boy will suffice?
> Nudging the side of Jayce's small dick
Small indeed. 1-2 inches is the rule.
> His own blood is practically boiling out of him in bursts of lustful heat
But none of it goes to your dick. Shame you can't even get that.
> Every inch of his partner's stunning, perfect body
That he had to modify heavily with testosterone.
> I need your cock in your pussy, I'm clean, you can fuck me raw
...not like you needed to worry about being impregnated, because Viktor doesn't even produce sperm. Even a rotdog and the labia-reshaped testicles do not produce sperm. It's an odd thing to say when you're both functionally sterile.
> Half convinced he might cum just like this
I'd be interested to see the mechanics of this, mostly because the 'cum' is just leftover vaginal ejaculate or urine. That of course implies there's been a total vaginectomy and the clitoris has been removed for said phalloplasty, so good luck ever getting aroused with the clit cut off.
> Want my cock in your pretty pink pussy so you can milk me the way you're milking my fingers?
Man, this really needs to be mocked like Booktok trends. He can't really 'milk' your cock because it's a lifeless flesh tube. He'd be better off with a dildo because that's really what your phalloplasty is.
> His cock isn't massive
Of course not. Hispanic Hog Jayce isn't in this universe so we all mourn his loss for at least offering some spice to this. Instead, we have to deal with an arm flesh tube that's maybe approaching 5 inches. Better than a metoidioplasty, but still. Goofy to read.
> Rolling his tongue over surgical scars
I thought he couldn't see them?
What's fascinating about this is that, later, Viktor admits that he can't actually ejaculate - which is predictable, really, because he doesn't have any sperm and anything produced by his clit would be so miniscule as to be nonexistent. I wonder if Jayce knew about this beforehand; did he fantasize about a true and honest man dick, or the flesh tube that Viktor had? I doubt it was the latter.
Also, fucking yourself with a showerhead is one of those WTF things that absolutely gets mocked in Booktok circles. The showerhead, really? You're that desperate for something hard?
> Swollen, pink t-dick
2 inches growth, defeated by a goddamn showerhead.
> The way his cock visibly throbs
How is it throbbing when it's that small?
> Dangerously whiny. He sounds petulant, like he's moments away from hitting his fists into the mattress
You'll never guess what happens: he ends up clocking himself from the pitch of his moans.
I thought the cold was so bitter and painful he was wincing constantly? The cold isn't good for your joints as it fucks with the fluids in-between them, so if anything, he'd be in more pain. We are talking about temperatures so cold steel cracks in half. I wonder if this transmasc author has lived anywhere cold, like ever.
> The blunt intrusion of Viktor's cock-head
Well, it wouldn't be blunt, but a weird approximation of what a dorsal head looks like. They tend to look like weird cupcakes with the 'flaps' looking like icing. They nowhere near resemble the real thing.
> Inch by delicious inch
Which isn't much, by the author's admission - which she later retcons by saying he is indeed big because of the size of the RFF scars on his arms.
> His pussy is glistening in the dim light
I'm surprised it isn't freezing up, given how cold it is.
> Initial stretch too early
Why is this a problem when he's literally dripping everywhere? It shouldn't be hard at all.
Now, the bit where Viktor has to explain how Jayce feels around him is a little bit ironic. Frankendongs don't actually have feeling, because the nerves are all destroyed. It can't even retain body heat - only near the base - so you really are getting fucked by a limp bit of arm flesh that cannot even let the owner know it's inside somebody. So all this talk about 'psychological need' and physical feeling is pure fantasy. You know the author is trying to sell phalloplasty to an ignorant audience, because the real thing is even more horrifying. You'd choose The Thing instead.
> His arm scar is impressive
Earlier the author wrote that Viktor was 'not massive', but now he is, because he's stretching Jayce so much.
> Jayce's hole is tight
Interesting how the Frankendong gets all the male glory, while the vagina is just a hole. I've also never heard of a clitoris being referred to as a 'hardened pearl' so that's new for me.
And why do these people cry so much during sex? I'd be crying that some fucktard physicist forgot to refuel the diesel generators and now we have no heat!
Man, Jayce really is a rainbow fish with all the shades of red he's blushing!
What I do find interesting, though, is that all the physical reaction and desire is coming from Jayce here. All the clenching, fluttering, wetness and what have you is all from the vagina - the Frankendong is just there. Limp and lifeless like the flesh tube it is.
> Arching his spine in a sinful curve that drives partners wild whenever he bottoms
Glad to see he still kept his gymnast body. Look at those contortions! And glad to see he's had other people to...experiment with.
> Fucks his cock upwards into that bundle of sensitive nerves
Well, at least someone has their nerves fully functional - Jayce, that is.
> Grind his own cock
There's very little to grind, my dear.
> Your cunt, fucking you, making love to this incredible body
That's nice, but you literally cannot feel anything in that arm flesh tube. How hard is it just to keep Viktor male? Or both of them male?
> Half hysterical sobs
I'm still crying more that this dumbfuck didn't refuel the diesel generators and now everyone is going to be getting frostbite in their own beds.
> Jayce just feels so fucking good
Except he literally can't feel him. That's the thing - there are no nerves at the end, only near the base. If that. The fact he's getting more pleasure out of Jayce by using the heel of his hand is really something.
> Past the barrier of futile resistance
Was there even resistance to begin with? My man was 'as wet as a waterslide'. What issues were there? Glad to see Jayce can squirt, though.
> He gushes all over the both of them
Hopefully that shit doesn't freeze up, too. Imagine having to explain that to your superiors - the very people who are going to come calling soon.
> I wanna melt you in my mouth, swallow every bit of you down, you're a goddamn wet dream, baby
"I wanna eat you like you're a marshmellow. You're a goddamn dream!"
God even on the second typing that shit makes me snicker. Christ Almighty.
> Resists the building need to fuck Jayce brutally hard
...You mean you weren't earlier? What was that about?
> Hnng Nnnng
Oh God, it's the heart-attack sex noises again.
> His cunt is better than anything on the planet
Apparently it's better than functional heating, but do go on.
> Including the toys Viktor used to swear by when he could finally drive his cock into one
Oh, so fleshlights. He worked that limp-wristed dingdong into a fleshlight. Wow.
>I want you to cum in me... Please please please let me feel it
Sorry lad, it's physically impossible and he just admitted it. No creampie for you.
> Fill me like I'm your fucking toy
Uh, you're gonna have to make do with a replacement, because that boy doesn't have anything to fill you with. Best I can do is Dawn dish soap.
> Nnnh
Are you a human or an animal? Maybe you are The Thing.
> Made me cum so hard it hurts
It's not nice to lie. It's almost impossible for Viktor to ejaculate at all.
> Finds Jayce's cock with his own thumb instead
> Presses against the swollen nub
Not that big if it's just a nub, is it?
I also highlighted all the times 'pleasure' is used, and it's a LOT - a whopping 43 times. Wew, lad.
> His fit waist
Huh, thought it was nice and curvy earlier. Must've been me.
> Wet, clenching hole
> Like his pussy is meal
So his hole is his pussy is a meal. Guess we might as well call it an Air BnB.
> Fucking his fingers in and out of Jayce's hole
But have they froze yet? The generator's still out, bud.
> Deceptively strong grasp
But not memory, because the whole base is fucked up because he was too distracted by a flash of skin to not refuel the generators. Man I can't wait to see the write-up on that.
> Aching cunt
> Hole
> Labia
Why is labia OK but not vagina? Also notice how perineum is used no problem, but the V word is persona non grata.
> Swollen t-dick
It's barely 2 inches, calm down. You can 'jerk it off' between your fingers. Sad!
> Slurping obscenely
Are you drinking the last dregs of soup out of your bowl? Sounds like it.
I swear, Jayce turns so many colours he might as well be a lava lamp with how much he's blushing. Why not use him as the generator?
> Rich caramel eyes
Viktor's eyes are golden.
> Jayce would paint him if he could
Too bad all the paint would be rock solid in ice, thanks to Viktor not refueling the generator.
> Lets himself feel held and protected
Something something female-coded something something
> Jay-bird
> Baby-doll
> Makes him feel small and precious
Funny, because none of those are male pet names. I could call you Bud Dwyer and it'd be far more masculine.
> Are you cold
...yeah? You didn't fucking restore the generators! THE WHOLE BASE IS GODDAMN COLD, YOU RETARD!
> Marginally less satisfying for Jayce
What, that roid clit ain't working? Say it ain't so. And good lucking getting 'underneath' that hood unless it's detached. It's not like a male foreskin.
I wonder how the vibrator is even charged when there isn't even an emergency power system anymore. They're doing this in a freezer box and don't seem to care.
> Vibrations pulse into his femoral artery
That artery is pretty deep...you saying that vibrator is THAT good? Interesting.
All this 'Papi' talk is because Jayce sees Viktor as a better 'father figure' and male figure than he did his own father. I'm not kidding. This is some weird psycho-sexual shit where a woman is upset her father left her, she went to take on his role, and is now having sex with another woman who got an arm flesh tube attached.
Yeah, I'd think I'd rather take my chances with The Thing. Least it can get creative.
All this talk about Viktor 'pummeling his dick' up Jayce's vagina and trying to breach his cervix does absolutely nothing for me, because once the author made it clear this was an arm flesh tube that has to be supported by a steel rod to remain hard, it's difficult to take it seriously. This smut ain't smut'in.
> Possessed and held and loved and coveted
All very female-coded. Actual men don't give a shit because they only think with their (actual) dicks - that they can be proud of that they don't need a steel rod to use.
> Feel like his whole life might be worth something
Interesting that trans men are the only ones who have internal monologues like these, and not trans women.
> He feels puny and insigificant
If trans men are men, why don't you feel proud and dominant? Shouldn't you feel like you're at the top of the world? Where's all this self-doubt coming fro- oh.
> You're safe with me
Not really, he fucked over the base and now it's a freezer box.
I sincerely doubt that. My dood had a better time with the shower head.
> I can't fucking breathe
St. Floyd wants nothing to do with your crusty ass, boy.
> Cums so hard his eyes cross
I am to believe that he got the 'ahegao' face that's seen in hentai, or the 'fucked silly' look, but all I got was the impression of a Down's Syndrome person trying to track a bee with their eyes.
> Spearing himself wide
Hard to tell if that's the case because Viktor's arm flesh tube is of an indeterminate size and girth. It's no Hispanic Hog Jayce, that's for sure.
> Ruined, sore hole
How can it be ruined when it doesn't even have the 'give' of a real penis? You're getting spread open by a Magic Sac!
> Chasing his hard won orgasm
The fact it took him this long shows that A) he isn't a man and B) he doesn't actually get one. It's hard to see why because the clit effectively gets snipped and rerouted.
> He wants Viktor to cum so hard in his pussy it fucking breaks him down
Well you aren't going to get it, sweaty, because the arm flesh tube is physically incapable of ejaculating.
> He wants to make Viktor see whatever version of God exists when he cums
Spoiler: he doesn't because he can't.
Can't be stretched open by something the equivalent of a dough of bread. It's only the steel rod that gives support; otherwise, it'd just be a floppy thing shoved in there.
> You're so wet around me it's filthy
He can only note that because of how much Jayce is leaking onto his thighs. Otherwise, he physically cannot tell.
> Embarrassing amount of wetness
Gavin Newsom should hire him.
> His voice rises his in his throat with a strangled yelp
Imagine getting clocked because of that, LMAO
> Clenching hole
If you can use pussy, you can just use that. You're not actually offended by the word 'vagina'.
> Swollen t-dick
2 inches of growth. Even your pinky is larger.
> Absurd about of slick squishing
My man really IS a lava lamp.
> Coarse hair of his groan
Ah, there's the Rapunzel pubes! I missed you!
Baby-doll is not a masculine pet name, let alone one would call a male person at all. It's a distinctly feminine term, and Jayce later wants to be called by the feminine version of it in Spanish, because suddenly that's not dysphoric anymore.
> Owned, protected
Not female-coded at all.
> Are you a pretty little doll for your Papi?
Is he going to be stored in Demi Moore's house?
> Enchantingly delicate
Funny how this language is reserved for pooners, and never men.
> Seating him on his cock so harshly it holts against the upper wall of his cunt
Guaranteed it's the steel rod he feels, vs the honest, firm flesh of an actual penis. That's gotta hurt.
> Burst a capillary in his nose
IRL Tumblr nose, go figure. My man's becoming a reindeer.
> Feminine form feels closer to baby-doll for me
Because both are FEMININE terms of endearment. You're a True and Honest Man going by feminine endearments yet want to be seen and referred to as a man. Pick a struggle.
> It's more like calling me beautiful, in a romantic way
And most actual men don't give a shit. Macready sure didn't.
> His tight hole
Which one? You're basically using a steel rod to do all the work. That ain't no real man meat there, son.
> Ungh god
My exact reaction to how fucking long this is.
> Letting me use your pretty pussy like I own it
I bet it costs next to nothing on eBay. I need that money to buy some diesel to actually refuel the generators.
> Jayce knows Viktor is cumming
...he isn't? He's physically incapable of it? You wouldn't even 'feel' any thud in that arm flesh tube because there are no veins, no nerves, no nothing. You just have a blood supply there to keep it from rotting off - which half of them do.
> He squirts again in an exhausted, steadily weakening stream
Glad to see Jayce is doing all the carrying in the ejaculation department.
There's no power PERIOD, you forgot to REFUEL THE GODDAMN GENERATORS, ALL YOU HAVE IS EMERGENCY POWER. Christ Almighty. At least the guys in The Thing had a reason why the power was out vs deliberate incompetence.
> I'll make sure my doll gets his pretty pussy cleaned up
I mean, it'd just be from his own ejaculate and now yours, which really dumbs down the whole 'creampie' and 'breeding' thing. It's a steel rod in a piece of rolled up flesh like a burrito. That's not hot.
What stretch? You wrote it isn't that big. The showerhead would've done more work.
> Sucks and licks him clean
Well, you wouldn't be cleaning yourself out of him, now would you?
> Cunt
> Leaking hole
Pick one.
> He-aaah
The sound I make when I finally get on the merry-go-round, hell yeah!
Again, all this talk about using feminine pet names, and the desire to be loved, validated and protected...that's all female-coded. If this was anything like The Thing, the guys would at least try to FIX THE GODDAMN GENERATORS before getting down and dirty. Even a gay man wants to be warm and have some hot water, and as much as he would love to get his ass reamed - getting his ass reamed by a superior over millions of dollars of destroyed equipment hurts more. Priorities, sweaty!
> Praying in the fragile sanctuary of his own mind for kindness and safety
My man ruined a bunch of equipment because he was horny. If that's not a condemnation of how stupid trans men are, I don't know a better example. That's pretty fucking hilarious.
> He certainly let Jayce see every bit of him
He didn't know you had a phalloplasty. He masturbated to the thought of you having an actual penis.
You're a poor, hopeless romantic. Sorry, bud. And your love just fucked everyone over on that base.
You can cuddle with your Papi but that isn't turning the lights back on. Hell is that snowstorm still going on outside? Imagine what will happen once their superiors find out. Their asses will actually get reamed by more than just steel this time around.
TL;DR two pooners get trapped in a base because Viktor didn't refuel the generators because he was too hot and bothered by naked Jayce in the shower. They end up banging with Viktor's arm flesh tube with a steel rod inside. It goes on forever. You're welcome.
Nah, I could see the point. But like I said, when I discuss it in that matter it's less to do with being genuinely miffed (unless the author actually IS portraying it in a way that really does come off offensive) than just abrasive, tongue-in-cheek humour on my part. No harm done. Misunderstandings happen.
Yeah, it's actually normal in ABO. They have a very short refractory period, and basically produce enough sperm to put stud horses and bulls to shame. I read one ages ago that was just as long as the fic I posted above, and there was so much ejaculate Jayce had started resembling a water balloon. It was wild.View attachment 6926261
Maybe I should really take a break from Xitter for a while.
I'm not familiar at all with ABO bullshittery, so I have no idea if this 'plot' is something that's completely normal & common in their world.
But man, imagine the SMELL of bucketloads of cum. It's so vile lmao.
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) after trying to lick at the cream like he's simulating licking off cum. Hope it wasn't McDonald's coffee hot.
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