Nigga, do you want your pilot to be stuck in an eternal development hell? This clash of cynical milennial smugness you call humour with child-friendly aesthetics will guarantee to turn everyone off.
I've lurked around the author's Tumblr blog and, of course, she's one of those tards who likes to put lesbians in mahou shoujo, a genre that's all about friendship, platonic bonds between female characters and cool male love interests. Libfems who got raised on Sailor Moon and Utena are such soulless npcs, it's insane how they mock and twist what they claim to love.