Accepting input on this blog entry before I shill it.
I'm on it
Will give you input asap
The strongest part in the article is your breakdown of the transaction pipeline. That information alone will absolutely redpill people who had no idea how many points of failure exist between the buyer and seller
What I'd change most is the moral framing and emphasizing the gap between what the bill claims to do and what it actually enables
In the current version, the language around "access", "denial", and "relief" make it sound like these networks just need to reined in by good rules, but shifts the focus away from how rigged and protected the payment processor cartel really is. I'd state it plainly: Visa, Mastercard etc. are not simply misbehaving private companies, they are state-protected oligopolies. Their chokehold and veto power exists only because of legal insulation, limited liability, and regulatory entrenchment from the state itself
The section on penalties is quite good, but I'd go one step further by calling the structure what it is, not weak enforcement, but public theater. Capped fines that are basically rounding errors for these trillion-dollar networks are not deterrents, they're just ceremonial gestures
And that is a recurring pattern in regulatory democracies, they just love setting up formal complaint systems that are structurally useless. The OCC's enforcement isn't just weak, it's discretionary by design and only triggers when it happens to be politically useful. That's not some flaw, that's the entire point of the bill
The same goes for the section at the end about reforms, you list good fixes, but I'd reframe them as conditionals. As in, "if this bill were serious about stopping financial censorship, then here is the bare minimum it would do". That alone helps bring the deeper point into plain sight, namely that the bill in its current form wasn't built to solve the problem, and that tells you everything about what it was designed to protect
One more thing: If your goal is to shift the terms of the debate, rather than merely inform, I'd make it clear that the same political system that helped build this financial chokehold is now pretending to regular it. You can't fix cartel behavior by protecting the cartel and punishing no one