CrimsonKnight
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- May 6, 2015
I remember Dobson reacting as you expected when someone on dA showed him the Webcomic Relief review.A bit off topic, but after watching a webseries called webcomic relief (which talks about different webcomics, their qualitis and even featured SYAC at one point) I came to realize something in regard of Alex ze Pirate I wasn't even aware up to this point directly.
Alex ze Pirate is so bad as a comic and "story" in itself, it doesn't even have a premise.
Short explanation what I mean: Pretty much every story or entertainment media (except music) has some sort of premise to it. A motivation for a character to do certain things or a very basic idea that e.g. sparks the plot of a story or is the recurring motife of something on which things are build up on.
Simple example from cartoons: Pinky and Brain. Premise: Two genetically altered mice try to take over the world. Story: Pretty much none existent. Source of humor: How in each episode, based on the premise, they will come up with a scheme that backfires on them, how it plays out and how it backfires.
Even Garfield has some sort of premise, because the "roles" Davis characters have are very easily to define. Garfield is sarcastic and reacts to the stupidity of the world (and his owner) around him, Oddie is an idiot and Jon is a naive goody two shoes nerd. the humor is then pretty much to see characters react to a certain situation or how they wrap up a trian of thoughts.
BUT in Alex ze Pirate, not only do the character have no clear role all for their own (everyone is sooner or later the buttmonkey or asshole, though Sam is obviously the buttmonkey more often) but none of the characters has a motivation for the things they are doing, nor a "goal" to achieve.
Alex and Co exist in a "bubble" so to speak where they are just necessary cardboard cut outs for one random punchline that has come to Dobson's greasy head.
To put in perspective how bad it is: US Angel Corps, a comic whose "premise" is that each "episode" (2-7 pages) a female character is raped and brutally killed (not even in that chain of events) has more defined roles for the characters and a premise to follow, than AzP where everything is pretty much "lol, so random".