- Joined
- Jun 13, 2017
Someone posted about Al's poetry a couple of pages back and it inspired me to go back through and find a couple of more gems:
"Creamy cheeses is a shimmer to an outlet"
"The life I lead is somewhere near grey tragic"
"There's physical pain that needs a never ending band aid"
"Magical goosebumps rise as you take me into the ecstasy of the night"
"Misguided romance ghosts have been placed in my path"
"Catching feelings like a trapped radiant rose in a dusty daisy garden"
It's seriously hard to believe that Amber is a native English speaker. She can't pronounce words correctly and she makes some ridiculous grammar mistakes like ''you has''. She sounds like someone who's been learning English for maybe four years, found a dictionary and decided to become an edgy poet. Although it's better to have shitty English as your second or third language than having it as your first.