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- Aug 7, 2014
Honestly, I don't think Connor's story concept is a bad one. The idea of a person doing something drastic to become their "dream self" sounds interesting.
However, by the looks of his current work, he seems to borrow, if not outright steal, elements from other stories instead of giving his own unique take on things. And that's not even mentioning the amateurish writing.
I guess for the sake of fairness I have to say that most writers do tend to start off 'cribbing' stylistic elements from other writers/works of art that they like. It's most common when a writer hasn't developed their 'voice' yet.
But that shouldn't happen after like two years of writing, or be greatly reduced. The fact that it's still happening shows just how much he doesn't write.
tl;dr: He likes the idea of being a writer, but misses that being a writer requires fucking writing.