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well, Lily kill God in her other fanfic for being a fascist tyrant so I hope the Force will be the Final Bossafter Palpatine (if he will still be part of the story)
Jerry Peet / Lily Orchard / Lily Peet / Valkyrstudios / Bhaalspawn / Tara Callie / "Mod Ebara" - Sociopath writer of pedophile fanfiction and cartoon reviews, faked getting raped to force a divorce, then mobbed and gaslit their ex off Tumblr, satanist neoliberal of the MovieSlob variety, also wants to fuck dogs and/or pokemon
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There is something really off putting about the way she write’s children’s dialogue. It tries so hard to be cute it just comes off as unrealistic and kind of creepy.View attachment 1195495
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Oh my God this is fuckin Lucifer
Why is Gardevoir sleeping in the same bed as you and your canon fiance
Why isn't Ginger there.
Why the fuck is the 3 year old there.
Why is Gardevoir in the same bed as you?
You said she has her own room!
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Exactly. I've been around children and, while they do tend to pronounce certain words wrong from time to time, they don't talk like they have a speech impediment.
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How old is supose to be Bonnie? I know she was just born, but because an actual baby would be too demanding for her I remember reading somewhere Liliana put her intelligence somewhere on toddler level so she is small enough to be cute but independent enough Liliana doesn't have to do any real parenting, like changing diapers or teaching her not to put her tongue where could kill her.
She is old enough to play Minecraft on her own and the game is rated for 7+, so 7?
Seven year olds is way too old for be talking like that.
She is old enough to play Minecraft on her own and the game is rated for 7+, so 7?
Seven year olds is way too old for be talking like that.
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It's....nothing...but also something...and annoying.
Three of these characters are effectively the same allignment. but all of them are basically miscast in the allignments. The Fact that G is somehow the fucking neutral slot proves that Lily has no fucking clue how this meme is even supposed to work, and I already know any attempt at pointing it out to her would result in "G only cares about what makes Lily happy so she's neutral" and that so fucking stupid.
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Pretty much all of Lily's interactions with or towards children are creepy.
When she's not fetishizing them as incestuous and/or lesbian sex objects, they're cute novelty pets she can fawn over without having to deal with the unpleasant sides of parenting.
Hence stuff like Bonnie being born as a 3-year-old who only ever does "cute" and "quirky" things, and shit like that dialogue post where she gets a scare that Bonnie ate the butterfly pokemon, because Comic!Lily can't be bothered to actually supervise her child and teach her what things she should and should not eat.
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It sounds like Lily's ideal child is one who has had their teeth bashed out so they speak with a speech impediment for as long as possible because 'ish adowable when childwen talk wike thish 0w0'
Basically, a slightly more intelligent pet chimpanzee
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We're enduring another round of SU smug over at Fort Lily.
I would archive it all but I don't wanna
Here's a highlight
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"If someone doesn't kill that fascist twink"
I assume referring to Rebecca Sugar.
Hoo boy
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"Lmfao girl, your one-liners are amazing"
Can you really call a run on sentence a one liner?
I would archive it all but I don't wanna
Here's a highlight
Lily Orchard's Official Tumblr, Okay so?? Steven brought her back wit…
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"If someone doesn't kill that fascist twink"
I assume referring to Rebecca Sugar.
Hoo boy
Lily Orchard's Official Tumblr, It’s weird that SU Future seems to go…
archived 21 Mar 2020 02:00:19 UTC
"Lmfao girl, your one-liners are amazing"
Can you really call a run on sentence a one liner?
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Does she know that SU is officially ending next week?We're enduring another round of SU smug over at Fort Lily.
I would archive it all but I don't wanna
Here's a highlight
View attachment 1196500Lily Orchard's Official Tumblr, Okay so?? Steven brought her back wit…
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"If someone doesn't kill that fascist twink"
I assume referring to Rebecca Sugar.
Hoo boy
View attachment 1196516Lily Orchard's Official Tumblr, It’s weird that SU Future seems to go…
archived 21 Mar 2020 02:00:19 UTC
"Lmfao girl, your one-liners are amazing"
Can you really call a run on sentence a one liner?
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We're enduring another round of SU smug over at Fort Lily.
I would archive it all but I don't wanna
Here's a highlight
View attachment 1196500Lily Orchard's Official Tumblr, Okay so?? Steven brought her back wit…
archived 21 Mar 2020 01:54:42 UTC
"If someone doesn't kill that fascist twink"
I assume referring to Rebecca Sugar.
Hoo boy
View attachment 1196516Lily Orchard's Official Tumblr, It’s weird that SU Future seems to go…
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"Lmfao girl, your one-liners are amazing"
Can you really call a run on sentence a one liner?
First, I assume she's talking about Steven.
Second, no.
Side Note: I kinda want to see Lily pop a blood vessel.
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Ironically, I loved the episode with Jasper and loathed the episode with Greg.We're enduring another round of SU smug over at Fort Lily.
I would archive it all but I don't wanna
Here's a highlight
View attachment 1196500Lily Orchard's Official Tumblr, Okay so?? Steven brought her back wit…
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"If someone doesn't kill that fascist twink"
I assume referring to Rebecca Sugar.
Hoo boy
View attachment 1196516Lily Orchard's Official Tumblr, It’s weird that SU Future seems to go…
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"Lmfao girl, your one-liners are amazing"
Can you really call a run on sentence a one liner?
It’s funny how the crew was suddenly listening to her with Shep and then we’re back to square one. Guess they didn’t watch her videos after all.
It’s going to be insufferable to hear her beat a dead horse like she did with MLP. Then after a few months she’ll attach herself to a new fandom and repeat the cycle. I dread to know what she’ll come after next...
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Best case scenario she'll only mention SU in the past tents and at worse her tumblr and videos will STILL have her complaining about it years after the show has ended.
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Did that anon actually watched the episode or only saw spoilers on the tags? That moment when Jasper bows to him is clearly shown to be something BAD, with that everything is so dark, there is sound of a storm outside, Steven crying and then saying slowly oh no with a look that seem pure horror at what he has done. This is all the worst thing that could happen. This is Steven on the aftermath of his worst moment yet. The first time he killed someone.
Only the biggest moron could somehow miss all of that to turn it into a restablishment of hyerarchy that Steven helped destroy.
How much obvious could have been? Do they want Sunstone to come to tell them another psa about how bowing to fascist is wrong?
Only the biggest moron could somehow miss all of that to turn it into a restablishment of hyerarchy that Steven helped destroy.
How much obvious could have been? Do they want Sunstone to come to tell them another psa about how bowing to fascist is wrong?
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I mean keep in mind, Lily hates it when a show doesn’t spoon feed their audiences and often tells plot points of her stories rather than show them. If anything, Sunstone would be too subtle for her.
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Poke-Madhouse, Sooo … why is that universe so "bad"? They seem to...
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These characters only exist for a collective of 5 pages in the comic. Everyrthing about them is "informed traits" that the author has told us about them and "environmental story telling" What little evidence we have based on their personalities comes from those few pages. we have no true evidence that they're actually doing anything illegal in their own home universes other than the authors word, which might mean something if it weren't for the fact the author has shown the level of priotization in writing where they're willing to show off the floor plan for the house the characters all live in, despite the background being so bare and basic that with out the most obvious background evidence (couch= living room, blender = kitch) that it's pointless to even worry about what room the characters are in, but immediately says "This is a slice of life anime, we don't do deep lore here" when asked about the wider reaching impact of the PokeHuman Hybrid that they shoehorned into the story completely because "this is cute and I want it."
I will bang this fucking drum until my fist breaks the damn thing. If any of these things were actually SHOWN to us instead of TOLD to us. then I might actually think it was worth calling it cursed for reasons other than the characters just being off putting and creepy
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We're enduring another round of SU smug over at Fort Lily.
I would archive it all but I don't wanna
Here's a highlight
View attachment 1196500Lily Orchard's Official Tumblr, Okay so?? Steven brought her back wit…
archived 21 Mar 2020 01:54:42 UTC
"If someone doesn't kill that fascist twink"
I assume referring to Rebecca Sugar.
Hoo boy
View attachment 1196516Lily Orchard's Official Tumblr, It’s weird that SU Future seems to go…
archived 21 Mar 2020 02:00:19 UTC
"Lmfao girl, your one-liners are amazing"
Can you really call a run on sentence a one liner?
You know if Jerry actually watched the episode instead of hearing about it second or third hand from incendiary anons that want to watch him sperg out he'd know nothing that happened with Jasper in the episode is framed as a good thing.
View attachment 1196566Poke-Madhouse, Sooo … why is that universe so "bad"? They seem to...
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These characters only exist for a collective of 5 pages in the comic. Everyrthing about them is "informed traits" that the author has told us about them and "environmental story telling" What little evidence we have based on their personalities comes from those few pages. we have no true evidence that they're actually doing anything illegal in their own home universes other than the authors word, which might mean something if it weren't for the fact the author has shown the level of priotization in writing where they're willing to show off the floor plan for the house the characters all live in, despite the background being so bare and basic that with out the most obvious background evidence (couch= living room, blender = kitch) that it's pointless to even worry about what room the characters are in, but immediately says "This is a slice of life anime, we don't do deep lore here" when asked about the wider reaching impact of the PokeHuman Hybrid that they shoehorned into the story completely because "this is cute and I want it."
I will bang this fucking drum until my fist breaks the damn thing. If any of these things were actually SHOWN to us instead of TOLD to us. then I might actually think it was worth calling it cursed for reasons other than the characters just being off putting and creepy
You know, and this might be a bit of a stretch, but I think World of Warcraft is partly to blame for this habit of hers.
Here me out as a former WoW fag, back in the day, World of Warcraft was fairly well written for an MMO, but a good chunk of the story was only lightly touched up on in the game itself. If you wanted to know exactly what was happening you had two options; 1. Buy and play through/ read a bunch of old video games and official WoW books -or- 2. read the wiki, which is what most people who played WoW did. Now, to the Wiki's credit, it was actually a solid read for a fan wiki (this was back in the late 2000's where nerds on the internet had little else to do with their time) and served as a good way to know exactly what was happening and who that orc bossing you around was. Again, I know it's a stretch, but considering how obsessed with WoW Lily was it's within the realm of possibility that she got this thought pattern of "well it worked for Blizzard's story so it should work for mine!".
However, the mix-up with this thought pattern is that, while leaving things for players to look up on a wiki can be acceptable in a video game, it's not for...literally almost any other form of media. A video game can have a terrible story or no story what so ever, but if the game play is fun people will still enjoy it, the game is why many people play video games. However, people read a story to, well, enjoy the story. As people here have pointed out many times, if a reader needs to go on a website to know what's going on, then what you've made as a writer is an incomplete experience. But to hearken back on WoW, even Blizzard started getting some shit back then when they started releasing books to help "explain Warcrafts story" because, as people rightly pointed out, they were paying $15 dollars a month to fucking play their game, they shouldn't pay more because Blizzard didn't feel like explaining that stuff in said game.
So, yeah, there it is. Maybe I'm wrong, but I don't think it's a bad guess considering who Lily is.
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so 2-82Lily is an arrogant jerkass who ridicules anyone who doesn't follow their lifestyle and doesn't care much about the morality of what they do and 2-82G gaslight people to manipulate them into believing what she wantsPoke-Madhouse, Sooo … why is that universe so "bad"? They seem to...
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basically they act like real life Lily, and was it supposed to be wrong in the comic? Someone please explain irony to Lily and give her a mirror
and calling her relationship with Mikaila "healthier" is hilarious and a little bit correct since she spends almost no time around Lily which is always good, at least Lily is self-conscious
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As I said in a previous post, but to elaborate further, Mikaila only serves three purposes:
1. Mediate between Liliana and her pet or interact with Bunny to mediate between her and G or her and Liliana.
2. Act stupid and kinda clingy so that Liliana can look down on her for "comedic purposes". When they were walking some street and Mikaila was suddenly concerned Liliana would leave her for a stupid joke, which doesn't sound very healthy to me, and when Mikaila was so dumb she didn't understand when Liliana was proposing them live together. This includes being a doormat that doesn't even react more than with a look of surprise at being insulted and can't defend herself.
3. Be there like a good little pet that loves Liliana, but with whom Liliana never has to do anything. In reality we know is likely that Liliana pays her some money behind the scene, but in the comic there is nothing of that. Besides offering her live with her and kiss her on that damn couch, they don't do anything as a couple. They don't go out on dates just the two of them, they don't give presents to each other, they don't have those little rituals that couples have when living together, they don't even have especial petnames besides maybe "sweetie" or something generic like that. You'd believe Mikaila was nothing more but a roomate that sometimes is there but most of the time isn't. Her only reaction to Liliana bringing a hybrid thing and claiming now they were going to raise her was to be happy for Liliana, as if it wasn't going to mean any huge responsability for her too but that would meant stop being a doormat so they can't haver her thoughts of her own.
If my fiancee decided to portray me like that I'd be pissed. The fact that Mikaila is allegedly fine with this doesn't matter, it's still not a very flattering image to showcase a real human being that Liliana supposedly loves. It's dowright insulting that at this point Bunny has more of a personality and prevalence than Mikaila. If this is how Liliana thinks healthy looks like, then no wonder she thinks the universe where her version is on a happy and estable relationship where they do go out, where they have shown more chemistry and commadery in a single panel than Mikaila and Liliana have ever shown, is the cursed version.
Edit: I looked into the comic to find the reaction of Mikaila to make sure and found out Ginger didn't even found out about the hybrid thing until she saw it on the tabloids. What kind of girlfriend lets that happen? I understand the character was on a "tech-free" event, but Liliana shouldn't have recieve her when she came back? Leave her a message? Something instead of letting her know that way?
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It's like Liliana in the comic likes to neglect all her partners, not just Mikaila. I thought only Lizzy did that, interesting.
1. Mediate between Liliana and her pet or interact with Bunny to mediate between her and G or her and Liliana.
2. Act stupid and kinda clingy so that Liliana can look down on her for "comedic purposes". When they were walking some street and Mikaila was suddenly concerned Liliana would leave her for a stupid joke, which doesn't sound very healthy to me, and when Mikaila was so dumb she didn't understand when Liliana was proposing them live together. This includes being a doormat that doesn't even react more than with a look of surprise at being insulted and can't defend herself.
3. Be there like a good little pet that loves Liliana, but with whom Liliana never has to do anything. In reality we know is likely that Liliana pays her some money behind the scene, but in the comic there is nothing of that. Besides offering her live with her and kiss her on that damn couch, they don't do anything as a couple. They don't go out on dates just the two of them, they don't give presents to each other, they don't have those little rituals that couples have when living together, they don't even have especial petnames besides maybe "sweetie" or something generic like that. You'd believe Mikaila was nothing more but a roomate that sometimes is there but most of the time isn't. Her only reaction to Liliana bringing a hybrid thing and claiming now they were going to raise her was to be happy for Liliana, as if it wasn't going to mean any huge responsability for her too but that would meant stop being a doormat so they can't haver her thoughts of her own.
If my fiancee decided to portray me like that I'd be pissed. The fact that Mikaila is allegedly fine with this doesn't matter, it's still not a very flattering image to showcase a real human being that Liliana supposedly loves. It's dowright insulting that at this point Bunny has more of a personality and prevalence than Mikaila. If this is how Liliana thinks healthy looks like, then no wonder she thinks the universe where her version is on a happy and estable relationship where they do go out, where they have shown more chemistry and commadery in a single panel than Mikaila and Liliana have ever shown, is the cursed version.
Edit: I looked into the comic to find the reaction of Mikaila to make sure and found out Ginger didn't even found out about the hybrid thing until she saw it on the tabloids. What kind of girlfriend lets that happen? I understand the character was on a "tech-free" event, but Liliana shouldn't have recieve her when she came back? Leave her a message? Something instead of letting her know that way?
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ginger-snaps-art: “Comic! Ginger getting home after a tech-free trainer retreat ”
It's like Liliana in the comic likes to neglect all her partners, not just Mikaila. I thought only Lizzy did that, interesting.
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Here's the latest of this schlock
The comic is slowly getting more aimless as both Lily and Mikail lose interest. It's kind of sad.
Anyway, Lily's so damaged guys, a friend touches her on the back and she wants to hit something. That's not at all like Aliana or any other OC she's written. Blah blah you get it.
Edit: also this
Lily Orchard's Official Tumblr, In retrospect, what would have been t…
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