Can someone give me more info on who ginger is? I don't know enough about her to confidently say Lily inducted ginger into her cult...I mean life, the same way lily did it to Lizzy.
Jerry Peet / Lily Orchard / Lily Peet / Valkyrstudios / Bhaalspawn / Tara Callie / "Mod Ebara" - Sociopath writer of pedophile fanfiction and cartoon reviews, faked getting raped to force a divorce, then mobbed and gaslit their ex off Tumblr, satanist neoliberal of the MovieSlob variety, also wants to fuck dogs and/or pokemon
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Ginger is Lily’s girlfriend who has another boyfriend (she’s either bi or is a lesbian like lily and mikaila)
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Ginger claims she's lesbian and that boyfriend is most likely out of the picture for a while since she posted something near the start of the relationship saying the boyfriend didn't like Lily.
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If that is true we know of at least one example in which Liliana succesfully managed to separate the fuck toy from people she cared about, one less source of emotional support outside of Liliana's own circle.
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To quote a phrase:"da fuq?" Also I meant to only do what DemiBoy say but I screwed up and just decided to go with it.
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4 incest stories. You’re forgetting that short about a toddler having a crush on her mom and how she is super focused on her mom’s ass and the therapist tells the mom at the end “this is completely normal and stop wearing tight pants around your daughter, can you blame her?”
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pretty sure there was at least one incest angle in "Stockholm Syndrome" somewhere but I'm not reading to find out. and there's nothing "all of a sudden about it"
I'm pretty sure some of the very old Tara Callie skype logs also discussed incest discussions.
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Rainbow Dash constantly fantasize about fucking Scootaloo even after adopting her as her daughter and sexually abuses her, with the little preteen girl calling her mommy in such fantasies. Later on in the series, Rainbow also sexually abuses his biological son, who is described as extremely femenine, and their relationship is seen as cute by other characters. Before Stockholm there was also a story about Pinkie Pie fucking her older sister while she was fourteen. Sometime during or after Stockholm, I don't really know already, she also published a story about a mother fucking her adopted daughter through a Tara account. Plus the story about how Tara was in a romantic relationship with a younger sister that died while trying to go reunite with her.
I agree, the incest fixation is a long running theme when it comes to Liliana. It's one of the things that makes me doubt she ever had a younger sister at all, because if she does have one and Liliana is constantly fantasizing about sisters fucking, that is a red flag if I ever saw one.
Would anyone be interested on me doing a breakdown of Stockholm just like people have done for the Sith fic? The fic is long, but it's really interesting to see what a Liliana on her natural habitat looks like.
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It would be a good thing to have, given how often the fic is brought up but not what’s specifically in it.
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if you want to, be my guest. I'm still struggling with even wanting to try carrying on with TSR
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she's one of
Knew her as a pre 18-year-old fan (i think when ginger was 16?). talked to her when she was underage, then nabbed her when she was 19 (barely legal in lily's eyes as she believes the age of consent should be 19).
Ginger is the better of the two tbh. i hope lily doesnt fuck over her young, still developing mind with her toic bullcrap. Plus her art is way better than mikaila's so idk why she doesn't use ginger to make her stupid comic
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I'll do it considering i'm possibly the one who's most aware about mlp shit among us all. But i might be slower than Emmens at the starwars fic because of personal life n shit, but I'll get it done when i manage to get it done.
ok just found a SegaSister archive link to all the stockholm related fanfics and theyre about a 50+ hour read in its entirety.
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Alright, seems that people want this so I’m not going to be the only one suffering with the knowledge of this dreadful thing.
First, I recommend taking a brief look over the TVTropes page of the fic in which we can learn a couple of interesting things, namely:
+“Stockholm is a series of Comedy/Grimdark Romance fanfics of My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic written by Nintendogal55 and Lily Orchard. “You’ll be surprised to know that the comedy is bad.
+“While Nintendogal is experienced with it, Lily has long been uncomfortable writing smut. Something that 40% of the story consists of.” I haven’t read any of other Liliana’s works so I don’t know how many smut scenes are on them or how explicit they become. If they aren’t that many, this could be the reason why.
+“Lily has a well documented hatred of people who take the law into their own hands and flat out ignore the justice and rehabilitation system.” There is no comment like this about what Nintendogal55 thinks or feels about anything on this story beyond she knows how to write smut and only to refer back to something about Liliana.
+The sections for The Littlest Dazzle and Illicit Disco were never made, which is note worthy because someone spend a lot of work into including every single trope possible into the other sections, even those that are questionable when reading the actual text.
Here is the summary for the first fic, simply called Stockholm:
When out on a retreat in a family cabin, Fluttershy discovers that Rainbow Dash had been carrying a torch for her for quite a while. Feeling like things are going stale in her relationship with Big Macintosh, Fluttershy opts to have an affair with her. However, Rainbow's own personal issues start to get in the way of what she thought was supposed to be a sexual bliss. While having to deal with Rainbow's sexual kink for teenagers, she also finds herself being the rock for Twilight's abusive marriage.
Chapter 1: The Real Estate Agent of Poker
There is really no need to know anything about MLP beyond the description of the characters because this all happens on AU in which there is no magic and everyone is a human. Anyone can get into it, if they are willing to read "185,126 words: Estimated 12 Hours, 21 Minutes" into this.
First, I recommend taking a brief look over the TVTropes page of the fic in which we can learn a couple of interesting things, namely:
+“Stockholm is a series of Comedy/Grimdark Romance fanfics of My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic written by Nintendogal55 and Lily Orchard. “You’ll be surprised to know that the comedy is bad.
+“While Nintendogal is experienced with it, Lily has long been uncomfortable writing smut. Something that 40% of the story consists of.” I haven’t read any of other Liliana’s works so I don’t know how many smut scenes are on them or how explicit they become. If they aren’t that many, this could be the reason why.
+“Lily has a well documented hatred of people who take the law into their own hands and flat out ignore the justice and rehabilitation system.” There is no comment like this about what Nintendogal55 thinks or feels about anything on this story beyond she knows how to write smut and only to refer back to something about Liliana.
+The sections for The Littlest Dazzle and Illicit Disco were never made, which is note worthy because someone spend a lot of work into including every single trope possible into the other sections, even those that are questionable when reading the actual text.
Here is the summary for the first fic, simply called Stockholm:
When out on a retreat in a family cabin, Fluttershy discovers that Rainbow Dash had been carrying a torch for her for quite a while. Feeling like things are going stale in her relationship with Big Macintosh, Fluttershy opts to have an affair with her. However, Rainbow's own personal issues start to get in the way of what she thought was supposed to be a sexual bliss. While having to deal with Rainbow's sexual kink for teenagers, she also finds herself being the rock for Twilight's abusive marriage.
Chapter 1: The Real Estate Agent of Poker
+Fluttershy and Rainbow are playing poker on the family cabin of Fluttershy. Dash is winning and staring at the ass/tits of Fluttershy whenever she is not looking and wishing it was strip poker. The name of the chapter is dropped and this is going to be a thing for every other chapter on the entire saga, many times as forceful and awkard as one can imagine.
+Fluttershy takes out her sweater and Rainbow Dash creepily stares at her. She blushes, crosses her legs, but we still don’t know why exactly.
+Fluttershy takes notices of Rainbow Dash being all red and assumes she must be too hot for the clothing. When realizing that is not the case, Rainbow confess that she really wants that strip poker and Fluttershy accepts to do it because “we’re both girls here.” Dash confesses she’s a lesbian. Fluttershy didn’t know that, despite they being friends since kindergarten and this:
“I’m not ashamed of it, Shy,” Rainbow smiled weakly, “Equestria’s pretty progressive. I mean, Granny Smith’s always been pretty skittish about it, but she’s not mean about it. She’s just old and doesn’t know better. I was just… a little embarrassed. You were joking around about playing strip poker and… well you’re really beautiful.”
+Dash starts telling Fluttershy that she has a nice ass. Fluttershy say she doesn’t mind this since Dash can’t help who she feels attracted to (foreshadowing?) and she thinks Dash is attractive too even if she says she is not gay. They hug.
+ “Why did you never tell me? You know I wouldn’t have judged you.”
“I guess it’s the environment,” Rainbow shrugged, “When all of your friends are girls, and you come out of the closet to them, they all start wondering if and when you’re gonna start hitting on them.”
This normally would be a pretty reasonable train of thought. But the logic is completely thrown out on the next parragraphs.
“Oh, that’s not true,” Fluttershy said softly, wringing her fingers, “Twilight came out to us back in Middle School and we’ve always been friends.”
“What about that time she got all touchy feely with Rarity?” Rainbow asked, “Remember? When she went all punk-rock and tried to get us to call her Dusk?”
“Hey, she was going through a rough patch and needed a… you’re right, she went completely off the rails. Nonetheless, I am glad you told me. And you know I won’t tell anybody. It isn’t my secret to tell, anyway. Don’t you worry about that.”
“Oh, I’m not worried about that,” Rainbow smiled, sitting up in the chair, “Look at Lyra Heartstrings, she’s openly gay. Same with that Donut guy in Canterlot. Hell, look at Pound Cake and Pumpkin Cake. They’re siblings and they were welcomed pretty well when they started telling people they were a thing.”
+This is the very first chapter and we already have a incest couple. One that everyone just accepts. I didn’t even remembered this from my first reading because these characters never appear. They have zero relevance for the entire plot. Liliana just felt like including this line about a couple of siblings fucking simply because.
+They hug some more. Rainbow comments the hair of Fluttershy smells good, like a creep, and Fluttershy says she doesn’t mind. Somehow the next conversation about still wanting to cuddle with Dash leads to Fluttershy saying she didn’t want to move on with Big Mac, with whome she is engaged with, and go on about how she is bored with Big Mac because it’s always the same thing with him. She has considered breaking up with him but doesn’t. She is very sad about this, but appreciates that Rainbow listened to her.
+For some reason this is the moment in which Rainbow decides to confess to her that she has a penis. The way in which she does this is by pulling down her shorts and revealing a full erection to her, like a creep.
+Somehow Fluttershy is okay with this and assures Dash that she is still her friend, even if she has a cock, and hugs her, which causes Rainbow to get more horny to the point she has to ask Fluttershy to get off or else she was going to. Fluttershy is just sorry for teasing her.
+They talk about how Rainbow would take Fluttershy to the bed if it wasn’t because of her boyfriend, which leads to Fluttershy admitting she gets hot at the thought of Rainbow wanting her. After Rainbow finally puts her shorts back on again, Fluttershy suggest strip poker. They play.
+Fluttershy wins so asks Rainbow to take off her socks first. Rainbow wins next and ask Fluttershy to take off her pants. She does. There is a description of her underwear. This is supposed to be very hot. Rainbow wins again so Fluttershy has to take out her shirt and she does, having only her underwear and bra. Fluttershy wins and ask Rainbow to take out her shirt and later her bra. She does. There is a description of Rainbow’s breasts and Fluttershy wants to touch them, despite never wanting to touch a woman’s chest before. Next Rainbow wins and that is goodbye to Fluttershy’s bra. This is just as boring and monotonous as I’m making it out to be. They finally decide that is enough and go completely naked. Apparently Rainbow has a big cock, just not as big as Big Mac, according to Fluttershy.
+“All of this… I… I never felt this way around another woman before, much less one of my friends,” Fluttershy confessed, looking at her with mild distress, “I-I don’t know what I should do. I’m… I’m… I’m attracted to you, more than I think I should be… I don’t know why, you’re just… looking at you now, I… If you took me to bed with you, I wouldn’t stop you… And I don’t know why. I just… oh goodness, what do I do? I’m confused! I’ve never been confused! I always liked men, I was attracted to Mac… but now I’m confused.”
“Fluttershy… do you want me?” Rainbow asked, shaking nervously.
+Fluttershy says yes so they go to bed. They kiss, but Fluttershy still has doubt so they stop the fucking so they cuddle together naked in bed and this is how Rainbow thinks about her best friend as the final line:
‘Aw, look at the little cheating bitch. You almost make breaking someone’s heart look cute, Flutters.’
+True romance right here.
The next chapter is called: What Did I Say About Saddershy
+Fluttershy takes out her sweater and Rainbow Dash creepily stares at her. She blushes, crosses her legs, but we still don’t know why exactly.
+Fluttershy takes notices of Rainbow Dash being all red and assumes she must be too hot for the clothing. When realizing that is not the case, Rainbow confess that she really wants that strip poker and Fluttershy accepts to do it because “we’re both girls here.” Dash confesses she’s a lesbian. Fluttershy didn’t know that, despite they being friends since kindergarten and this:
“I’m not ashamed of it, Shy,” Rainbow smiled weakly, “Equestria’s pretty progressive. I mean, Granny Smith’s always been pretty skittish about it, but she’s not mean about it. She’s just old and doesn’t know better. I was just… a little embarrassed. You were joking around about playing strip poker and… well you’re really beautiful.”
+Dash starts telling Fluttershy that she has a nice ass. Fluttershy say she doesn’t mind this since Dash can’t help who she feels attracted to (foreshadowing?) and she thinks Dash is attractive too even if she says she is not gay. They hug.
+ “Why did you never tell me? You know I wouldn’t have judged you.”
“I guess it’s the environment,” Rainbow shrugged, “When all of your friends are girls, and you come out of the closet to them, they all start wondering if and when you’re gonna start hitting on them.”
This normally would be a pretty reasonable train of thought. But the logic is completely thrown out on the next parragraphs.
“Oh, that’s not true,” Fluttershy said softly, wringing her fingers, “Twilight came out to us back in Middle School and we’ve always been friends.”
“What about that time she got all touchy feely with Rarity?” Rainbow asked, “Remember? When she went all punk-rock and tried to get us to call her Dusk?”
“Hey, she was going through a rough patch and needed a… you’re right, she went completely off the rails. Nonetheless, I am glad you told me. And you know I won’t tell anybody. It isn’t my secret to tell, anyway. Don’t you worry about that.”
“Oh, I’m not worried about that,” Rainbow smiled, sitting up in the chair, “Look at Lyra Heartstrings, she’s openly gay. Same with that Donut guy in Canterlot. Hell, look at Pound Cake and Pumpkin Cake. They’re siblings and they were welcomed pretty well when they started telling people they were a thing.”
+This is the very first chapter and we already have a incest couple. One that everyone just accepts. I didn’t even remembered this from my first reading because these characters never appear. They have zero relevance for the entire plot. Liliana just felt like including this line about a couple of siblings fucking simply because.
+They hug some more. Rainbow comments the hair of Fluttershy smells good, like a creep, and Fluttershy says she doesn’t mind. Somehow the next conversation about still wanting to cuddle with Dash leads to Fluttershy saying she didn’t want to move on with Big Mac, with whome she is engaged with, and go on about how she is bored with Big Mac because it’s always the same thing with him. She has considered breaking up with him but doesn’t. She is very sad about this, but appreciates that Rainbow listened to her.
+For some reason this is the moment in which Rainbow decides to confess to her that she has a penis. The way in which she does this is by pulling down her shorts and revealing a full erection to her, like a creep.
+Somehow Fluttershy is okay with this and assures Dash that she is still her friend, even if she has a cock, and hugs her, which causes Rainbow to get more horny to the point she has to ask Fluttershy to get off or else she was going to. Fluttershy is just sorry for teasing her.
+They talk about how Rainbow would take Fluttershy to the bed if it wasn’t because of her boyfriend, which leads to Fluttershy admitting she gets hot at the thought of Rainbow wanting her. After Rainbow finally puts her shorts back on again, Fluttershy suggest strip poker. They play.
+Fluttershy wins so asks Rainbow to take off her socks first. Rainbow wins next and ask Fluttershy to take off her pants. She does. There is a description of her underwear. This is supposed to be very hot. Rainbow wins again so Fluttershy has to take out her shirt and she does, having only her underwear and bra. Fluttershy wins and ask Rainbow to take out her shirt and later her bra. She does. There is a description of Rainbow’s breasts and Fluttershy wants to touch them, despite never wanting to touch a woman’s chest before. Next Rainbow wins and that is goodbye to Fluttershy’s bra. This is just as boring and monotonous as I’m making it out to be. They finally decide that is enough and go completely naked. Apparently Rainbow has a big cock, just not as big as Big Mac, according to Fluttershy.
+“All of this… I… I never felt this way around another woman before, much less one of my friends,” Fluttershy confessed, looking at her with mild distress, “I-I don’t know what I should do. I’m… I’m… I’m attracted to you, more than I think I should be… I don’t know why, you’re just… looking at you now, I… If you took me to bed with you, I wouldn’t stop you… And I don’t know why. I just… oh goodness, what do I do? I’m confused! I’ve never been confused! I always liked men, I was attracted to Mac… but now I’m confused.”
“Fluttershy… do you want me?” Rainbow asked, shaking nervously.
+Fluttershy says yes so they go to bed. They kiss, but Fluttershy still has doubt so they stop the fucking so they cuddle together naked in bed and this is how Rainbow thinks about her best friend as the final line:
‘Aw, look at the little cheating bitch. You almost make breaking someone’s heart look cute, Flutters.’
+True romance right here.
The next chapter is called: What Did I Say About Saddershy
There is really no need to know anything about MLP beyond the description of the characters because this all happens on AU in which there is no magic and everyone is a human. Anyone can get into it, if they are willing to read "185,126 words: Estimated 12 Hours, 21 Minutes" into this.
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pornos has more believable interaction than that
but with the context that practically everything that Lily writes comes from projection I would not be surprised if this fanfic portrays some real events in Lily's life that she tries to reimagine as "how it really should have happened"
I just think it's funny that with Equestria being so progressive, the only way for Rainbow to suffer prejudice is to be a pedophile, because Lil-I mean Rainbow needs to be the victim of discrimination for the story not to leave Lily's comfort zone
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Chapter 2: What Did I Say About Saddershy
+Fluttershy wakes up cuddling to Rainbow Dash. Rainbow questions why they are both naked and Fluttershy has to explain they almost fucked but didn’t. Rainbow say she could tell because she has a literal case of blueballs that she makes it seems as if someone kicked her, wincing and saying she wouldn’t recommend a sex change.
+Fluttershy is still confused about liking a woman, but talks herself into how it’s normal for women to be friends with benefit with other women. Yes, this is meant to be her just being in denial of both her feelings for Rainbow and being gay so it gets a pass for at least having a purpose on the narrative. No, I don’t understand either why she had to be in denial if she was already friends with gay people and Equestria is so progressive that they even accept sibling fucking. Rainbow tries to remind her about Big Mac, but Fluttershy say he doesn’t need to know.
+Fluttershy is obviously nervous and uncertain about how to go about this, so the way Rainbow chose to go about this is direct Fluttershy to her cock so she can give her a blowjob, like a creep. But thankfully Big Mac came through to bring her more fire. He finds Fluttershy naked on the bed and wants to fuck. Fluttershy tells him to leave the wood downstairs and runs to give Rainbow, who is in the closet, a robe to cover herself up. Rainbow jokes that she is fine about looking through the keyhole how Fluttershy and Big Mac fuck, like a creep.
+There is a weird formatting here in which it’s implied that they did fucked but the only clue about it is the fact that Big Mac is pulling his pants on again. Just read it yourself:
Big Mac pulled Fluttershy against him, kissing her neck, “My, you were certainly cute this morning.”
Fluttershy managed a little smile, “Well, I had a very good sleep last night…”
Big Mac nuzzled her, stroking her sides, “Really? That’s good, I know you’ve been having trouble sleeping lately.”
‘I don’t even really know why… But last night was one of the best nights of sleep I’ve had in weeks. It was… wonderful…’ Fluttershy mused. “Yeah… so it was refreshing. I do… well, feel a bit better from that.”
Big Mac kissed her neck, “Hey, where’d Rainbow go anyway? I thought you were staying here with her?”
“Huh? Oh! Um, she… she went for a stroll out in the woods for a bit,” Fluttershy said, trying to hide the nervousness in her voice.
“Alright, listen I hate to be ‘that guy’ but I do have to get back to work,” Big Mac said, stroking her stomach, as he got up and pulled his jeans back on, kissing her forehead, “I love you, Shy.”
+Maybe Nintengogal was supposed to put a sex scene here and just forgot? I understand not having an interest to describe this particular scene but at least put some extra space to suggest some time has passed, unless the implication is that this was the quickest sex in history.
+Despite we, the readers, having no idea of how this scene went down, Rainbow describes it like this: “Drop dead gorgeous girl, bare-ass naked, getting plowed bright and early in the morning and I had front row seats.” Meanwhile Fluttershy described it like this: “Rainbow… in case you didn’t notice, I was practically sleepwalking through it. I wasn’t all there… Sure, my body enjoyed it, but if not for having to pay attention, I felt as if I were laying back and having to make out my grocery list.” I don’t know what does this say about Rainbow Dash that she sees her best friend forcing herself to have sex she doesn’t really want and all she could think about is how hot and bothered it makes her.
+I don’t know if anyone here cares about the cheating. I don’t, because that is frankly the least disgusting thing anyone does on this entire story. But there is some consequences for it later down the line so at least there is that.
+Fluttershy asks Rainbow to kiss her. She does. Then they have sex. Fluttershy mentions she could never go on her hands and knees with Big Mac because he is too big, so my assumption is anal. But Rainbow Dash’s cock is not that big, so they can go anal no problem. It’s not really clear since the narration only talks about “Fluttershy’s nethers”. Then Rainbow say she is about to cum and Fluttershy say this is fine because she is is on contraceptive, so I guess it’s not really anal?
+Rainbow says that her hormonal imbalance is such that contraceptives are less effective with her (this is foreshadowing), so she can’t cum inside Fluttershy and can’t make her finish her that way either. The solution of Rainbow is have Fluttershy give her a blowjob (here is where I hope it wasn’t anal) and Rainbow finishes yelling Celestia’s name which… is weird considering that in this world Celestia is a human princess. No powers or magic. Just a princess with a royal tittle, not a goddess like she is on the original universe, so I don’t understand why that is a thing. It’s like the equivalent of someone yelling “Princess Diana!” during climax.
+Rainbow reveals that she has never been with a woman before, except for the time in which she went to some bar where she could get a blowjob through a glory hole. This is going to get retconned later on in the worst way possible.
+Fluttershy mentions that she likes to be submissive so Rainbow can take charge and Rainbow ask if she means submissive bottom or submissive of the “kind of freaky shit Twilight gets up to with her wife”. Rainbow also talks about how Twilight would show her her collection of hammers when visiting her. It’s implied that those hammers are used on Ascentia, Twilight’s wife, and also the only original character of Liliana that appears on this fic. This will become obvious later on but just to make it shorter: everyone knows about the abuse that Twilight submits to Ascentia, even the authorities, but they masked it all with it being BDSM and consensual so nobody does anything even when Ascentia has bones broken and ends up in the hospital. Twilight will face no consequences for this on this fic, not just because Ascentia won’t dennounce her to the police but also because of her title as a princess.
+They have sex again, Rainbow says “Get ready to ride the rainbow,”, like a cheesy creep, and the next moment Fluttershy’s on the kitchen making soup and sandwiches. Rainbow comes complaining about kids playing hockey because she got hit with a hockey puck on the balls while passing by. Apparently this happened more than one time. But Rainbow is fine immediately after saying this so I guess it was supposed to be a comedic moment? Anyway, they have some cutesy banter and then this happens:
“You know, this just reminded me of the first time we met,” Fluttershy reminisced, her eyes twinkling, “Do you remember?”
“Uhhhhhhhhhh,” Rainbow’s eyes rolled up as she tried to recall, “Not a clue.”
Not the least bit offended, Fluttershy sat down and poured them some apple juice, “It was at the Cloudsdale Nursery school. I was sitting by myself, just playing with some toys, but a couple of meanies started bothering me. I tried telling them to stop, but they didn’t. Then you ran over, telling them to leave me alone, and they challenged you to a race around the racer carpet. Then you beat them, by a longshot, and did a cute little victory dance. After that, I started following you around like a little puppy. You didn’t mind, you just kind of showed off your cool toys and little tricks,” she recalled, giggling at the memory.
Rainbow’s expression was blank for a moment, “Uh-huh…”
“...Well, anyway, that’s what I remember,” Fluttershy looked away awkwardly, testing her soup. Her hair hid any signs of her disheartened expression, but decided not vocalize it either. Satisfied with the temperature of her soup, she took a few more gentle slurps off the spoon.
+This goes completely nowhere because after this Rainbow changes the subject to Twilight possibly visiting them later, mentioning she doesn’t know if she is going to bring her “pet” or not. They banter. Then they have sex there on the kitchen after Rainbow suggested a quickie.
+Twilight and Ascentia enter the scene. Ascentia immediately knows that Fluttershy had sex and looks like she is already suspicious of Rainbow, but Twilight yanks her collar so she drops the subject. This is a thing on their relationship: Ascentia will say something inappropiate and Twilight will punish her for it, sometimes in quite painful ways, in front of anyone who cares to watch. Twilight many times seems quite angry about Ascentia’s remarks and comments.
+Anyway, back to the scene. Twilight notices a bulge on Rainbow’s pants, but she insist that is just her shorts, which makes me question how come Rainbow wasn’t found out before since they all have known each other for years now.
+Rainbow talks about how the geetaway has been good. Ascentia makes a comment that earns her a smack from Twilight’s hand on the mouth. Nobody has any reaction to this. Rainbow is talking about jumping from a high altitud into a snowbank and Ascentia makes another comment that makes Twilight pull on her ear. This is the response then:
“Oh, come on, Twilight… she can crack a joke if she wants to,” Fluttershy cringed a bit.
“She needs to learn how to make appropriate jokes, doesn’t she?” Twilight asked with a haughty look on her face.
“Yes,” Ascentia said, looking at her with a surprisingly warm expression all things considered.
“Don’t question it, Shy,” Rainbow said, returning to her soup, “Those two were made for eachother.”
+Take of that what you will. Fluttershy ask how they are going and Twilight talks about doing some embassy job and how she is going to be gone for two weeks, which leads to Twilight commenting that the only one getting her panties on a bunch is Ascentia and Rainbow almost chokes on her soup. I imagine this is supposed to be funny. It’s not.
+Rainbow asks Twilight if she and Ascentia were friends with benefit before marrying while Fluttershy is preparing tea. Twilight say that no, they were high school sweethearts and that all of her friends did a lot in order to get them together. Rainbow slaps herself on the head at the obvious info dumping that required her to forget her own past.
+Ascentia comes in to say friends with benefit always fail because someone will catch feelings and Twilight actually agrees with her without slapping her first. Rainbow lies about asking because some guy she knows wants to fuck her, and Ascentia recieves a slap when saying that sounds like a booty call. But it’s okay because this one was just because Twilight felt like it, not because she did anything wrong.
+This scene made me cringe:
Rainbow shrugged, sipping her tea, “Whatever. He’s a handsome manly man. You know me, I love me some manliness. Manly! Manly, I tell you! See, that’s why I’m so jealous of Flutters right now. She’s strapping Big Mac, oh man, I hear he lives up to his name.”
Fluttershy snorted discreetly behind her hand, then sipped her tea, “Mm-hmm.”
Ascentia and Twilight both looked Rainbow flat in the eye for a moment, then said in unison, “Okay, so you’re a raging lesbian.”
“The hell?! No! I’m not!” Rainbow blushed and scooted away, “I’m not into chicks! I like men! Men! Maybe I’m bi at best, but I like men! Manly! I want a manly hunk plowing me into next week!”
“Rainbow, you’re so deep in the closet you’re finding Christmas presents,” Ascentia smirked, then flinched. A few seconds passed, she looked up at Twilight.
“Oh no, I’m gonna let that one slide, that was good,” Twilight smiled.
+How bad are these friends if they never noticed this before? Rainbow comes out the closet, and Ascentia rightfully points out that hiding in the first place was stupid because she and Twilight are already gay. I’ll have you all have the fun of speculating if Ascentia is a self-insert of Liliana or not. Meanwhile, Twilight threatens to smack Ascentia for another comment and then actually does when she suggest Rainbow is fucking Pinkie Pie. Twilight say that is dumb, but Ascentia say Pinkie has had sex with everyone on the village and Twilight is then convinced that it’s totally Pinkie Pie.
+Then this happens out of nowhere:
Twilight was about to speak when a loud rumble came from outside, getting louder, until a scraping sound came by the door and the rumbling drifted off.
“Ascentia, please tell me a plow didn’t just trap us in here,” Twilight groaned.
Ascentia got up and looked out the window, “Yeah, we’re stuck.”
“I am going to tan your hide for that, later,” she growled.
“Why? It’s not her fault,” Fluttershy defended, “Look, it’s okay. We have plenty of room for you two, anyway. You can stay in the other guest room if you want.”
+I swear I haven’t cut a single sentence. They were talking about Rainbow fucking Pinkie Pie and suddenly this. Liliana has some terrible sense of pacing. The idea of having to stand Ascentia and Twilight staying there until the morning makes Rainbow depressed because she won’t be able to fuck Fluttershy all she wants. Fluttershy talks about how once she stayed on the house of Twilight and couldn’t sleep all night because of all the “borderline abusive sex.”
“If it weren’t consensual and I didn’t know any better… I would have sworn she was a battered girlfriend of an abuser…” Fluttershy moaned at the memory, shaking her head.
+According to the TvTropes pages it’s supposed to be surprising when we find out that Twilight is actually abusive and Ascentia only pretends to like it.
“Take That, Audience!: Rainbow Dash's pedophilia and Twilight's abuse of Ascentia are played rather light-heartedly (even having entire smut scenes dedicated to them) before the story turns around and portrays both these issues very seriously and the situation get's highly disturbing very fast.”
“Romanticized Abuse: Twilight's repeated beating and raping of Ascentia is initially played as this before the Mood Whiplash kicks in.”
+I don’t know who wouldn’t find Twilight smacking and yelling at her wife for every single thing that comes out of her mouth disturbing from the very start, or what is “light-heartedly” about it. Even the characters on the story cringe at it. Do you see what I mean when I say some tropes seems to be put there just because they vaguely relate to the story but aren’t actually relevant when knowing the text? Maybe Liliana wrote it with that intention but if that is the case then she did a horrible job getting it across.
+Back to the fic, it’s night and Fluttershy just asked about why they take the BDSM on their relationship to such extremes since Ascentia looks like a battered victim. I want to clarify that they were just siting in front of the fire so there was no prompting for this. In any case, Twilight admits that their relationship actually started as just abuse because she was stressed for work. She abused Ascentia so frequently that some guards caught her doing it so they took her away, but Ascentia had the charges dropped and once they were back home she insisted she likes being a battered wife.
+Fluttershy and Rainbow are understandably disturbed by this. Ascentia insist that she might have bruises and cuts but she’s fine . Then this exchange happens where we casually drop the name of the fic because Liliana thought that was a funny moment on Family Guy she wanted to replicate with her readers:
“Nothing… Just that it makes me a little uncomfortable, that’s all,” Fluttershy looked away awkwardly. “I mean, I don’t mind getting a little bit rough during sex, but that’s too much for me.”
“A lot of people feel that way,” Ascentia chuckled, “You have no idea how many times Rarity’s tried dragging me to see her psychologist. Says I have ‘Stockholm Syndrome.’”
“Uh, dude… You kinda do,” Rainbow pointed out with a snort. Receiving a glare from Twilight, she rolled her eyes, “Don’t give me that look! I said ‘you do’, I didn’t say ‘get help’, there’s a difference.”
Twilight blinked, then sat back, “...Good point.”
Ascentia smiled and leaned back against Twilight’s legs, “In that case, I like my Stockholm Syndrome.”
+Despite being weirded out, Rainbow and Fluttershy encourage them to go all out, to be as loud as possible and do whatever they want, because they think that is going to make it easier for them to fuck. Twilight is touched that her friends accept her weird relationship.
“Yeah! Just… don’t come out, okay? Like, at all. Stay in there and just do what you want,” Rainbow nodded, “But don’t break anything. Fluttershy’s Mom would have a fit if you made a mess. So keep bloodshed and gut spewing to a minimum.”
“Hey! I’ve never spewed any guts,” Twilight said, offended.
“Actually, there was that one time…” Ascentia said with a smirk, which earned her a slap.
Rainbow cringed, “...Yeah, I think I’m gonna have to thank you for not finishing that sentence.”
“I’m kidding, Rainbow,” Ascentia said.
“Please don’t do that,” Fluttershy looked like she was about to vomit, “That was not funny.”
+Rainbow and Fluttershy go to the kitchen so they can talk about how sick all of this is for them, but don’t know what to do about it. Fluttershy is concerned that Twilight could try to kill them if they dennounce her to the authorities, but Rainbow decides that is enough and does call to the Equestrian Royal Guard to denounce a case of domestic abuse. Problem is that as soon she mentions is about Twilight, the royal guard say that is the fith time in the month that they got a call like that and everytime they went to investigate Ascentia told them it was fine so they won’t waste more resources investigating more about it. The royal guard hangs up. Rainbow is pissed and goes to the pair, but she find this scene happening:
She stopped as she opened the door to the living room and found Ascentia seated in Twilight’s lap, the two of them nuzzling their noses together. A warm smile was painted across both their faces and they had their arms around each other, snuggling.
“I love you, my little Kitten.”
“I love you too.”
In that moment, it was as if any and all abuse was nonexistent. They looked more like an actual couple who loved each other. But every bit of it was genuine, not an ounce of deceit or irony was present.
+This is enough for Fluttershy to be convinced that it can’t be that bad and Rainbow agrees, saying that this is adorable.
+At night Twilight and Ascentia have loud sex. Fluttershy and Rainbow sixty-nine each other. Rainbow doesn’t know what to do with a pussy since she doesn’t have one but she still makes Fluttershy moan and tell her she is very good at fingering. On the background we hear Twilight still yelling and smacking while these two keep fucking. They cum together. And then this happens:
A loud ‘CRACK’ sounded from across the hall and the two of them whipped around.
“The hell was that?” Rainbow asked.
“...I sincerely hope that wasn’t broken bones…” Fluttershy whimpered.
“Nah, we wouldn’t hear that,” Rainbow said, “You can barely hear bones snap when you’re right next to the person.”
Fluttershy nodded, though still looked toward the door worriedly. “I stand corrected… I just hope nothing broke.”
“We’ll find out in the morning,” Rainbow said, snuggling down with her, yawning.
+I like how they didn’t cared about anything while fucking, but as soon they were finished they did and then didn’t again. Such good friends.
+Next morning Ascentia looks awful, limping all over the place with marks on her neck.
Twilight looked a bit sheepish, “I think maybe it was a little much…”
Ascentia looked at her with a cocked eyebrow, “Are you feeling okay?”
Twilight shook her head quickly, “Yeah, don’t mind me.”
+This awkward conversation goes nowhere, though, because Fluttershy notices the path is clear now and they are free to go, not without Twilight giving Ascentia one last smack on the right cheek that is obviously not happy with “for getting lippy with me.” Just when Fluttershy and Rainbow think they are safe, Ascentia comes back again to tell them that they know they are fucking and advicing them to be more careful because of Big Mac. This is big funny for her and Twilight.
+Fluttershy and Rainbow have a brief moment of panic because if they found out, then everyone else could find out. But Rainbow notices that if Twilight can slap her wife and nobody cares, then they can pretend that nothing is different between them, so Fluttershy calms down and everything is fine again.
Next Chapter: This Is Now My Song
Estimated time remaining: 11 Hours, 11 Minutes
+Fluttershy wakes up cuddling to Rainbow Dash. Rainbow questions why they are both naked and Fluttershy has to explain they almost fucked but didn’t. Rainbow say she could tell because she has a literal case of blueballs that she makes it seems as if someone kicked her, wincing and saying she wouldn’t recommend a sex change.
+Fluttershy is still confused about liking a woman, but talks herself into how it’s normal for women to be friends with benefit with other women. Yes, this is meant to be her just being in denial of both her feelings for Rainbow and being gay so it gets a pass for at least having a purpose on the narrative. No, I don’t understand either why she had to be in denial if she was already friends with gay people and Equestria is so progressive that they even accept sibling fucking. Rainbow tries to remind her about Big Mac, but Fluttershy say he doesn’t need to know.
+Fluttershy is obviously nervous and uncertain about how to go about this, so the way Rainbow chose to go about this is direct Fluttershy to her cock so she can give her a blowjob, like a creep. But thankfully Big Mac came through to bring her more fire. He finds Fluttershy naked on the bed and wants to fuck. Fluttershy tells him to leave the wood downstairs and runs to give Rainbow, who is in the closet, a robe to cover herself up. Rainbow jokes that she is fine about looking through the keyhole how Fluttershy and Big Mac fuck, like a creep.
+There is a weird formatting here in which it’s implied that they did fucked but the only clue about it is the fact that Big Mac is pulling his pants on again. Just read it yourself:
Big Mac pulled Fluttershy against him, kissing her neck, “My, you were certainly cute this morning.”
Fluttershy managed a little smile, “Well, I had a very good sleep last night…”
Big Mac nuzzled her, stroking her sides, “Really? That’s good, I know you’ve been having trouble sleeping lately.”
‘I don’t even really know why… But last night was one of the best nights of sleep I’ve had in weeks. It was… wonderful…’ Fluttershy mused. “Yeah… so it was refreshing. I do… well, feel a bit better from that.”
Big Mac kissed her neck, “Hey, where’d Rainbow go anyway? I thought you were staying here with her?”
“Huh? Oh! Um, she… she went for a stroll out in the woods for a bit,” Fluttershy said, trying to hide the nervousness in her voice.
“Alright, listen I hate to be ‘that guy’ but I do have to get back to work,” Big Mac said, stroking her stomach, as he got up and pulled his jeans back on, kissing her forehead, “I love you, Shy.”
+Maybe Nintengogal was supposed to put a sex scene here and just forgot? I understand not having an interest to describe this particular scene but at least put some extra space to suggest some time has passed, unless the implication is that this was the quickest sex in history.
+Despite we, the readers, having no idea of how this scene went down, Rainbow describes it like this: “Drop dead gorgeous girl, bare-ass naked, getting plowed bright and early in the morning and I had front row seats.” Meanwhile Fluttershy described it like this: “Rainbow… in case you didn’t notice, I was practically sleepwalking through it. I wasn’t all there… Sure, my body enjoyed it, but if not for having to pay attention, I felt as if I were laying back and having to make out my grocery list.” I don’t know what does this say about Rainbow Dash that she sees her best friend forcing herself to have sex she doesn’t really want and all she could think about is how hot and bothered it makes her.
+I don’t know if anyone here cares about the cheating. I don’t, because that is frankly the least disgusting thing anyone does on this entire story. But there is some consequences for it later down the line so at least there is that.
+Fluttershy asks Rainbow to kiss her. She does. Then they have sex. Fluttershy mentions she could never go on her hands and knees with Big Mac because he is too big, so my assumption is anal. But Rainbow Dash’s cock is not that big, so they can go anal no problem. It’s not really clear since the narration only talks about “Fluttershy’s nethers”. Then Rainbow say she is about to cum and Fluttershy say this is fine because she is is on contraceptive, so I guess it’s not really anal?
+Rainbow says that her hormonal imbalance is such that contraceptives are less effective with her (this is foreshadowing), so she can’t cum inside Fluttershy and can’t make her finish her that way either. The solution of Rainbow is have Fluttershy give her a blowjob (here is where I hope it wasn’t anal) and Rainbow finishes yelling Celestia’s name which… is weird considering that in this world Celestia is a human princess. No powers or magic. Just a princess with a royal tittle, not a goddess like she is on the original universe, so I don’t understand why that is a thing. It’s like the equivalent of someone yelling “Princess Diana!” during climax.
+Rainbow reveals that she has never been with a woman before, except for the time in which she went to some bar where she could get a blowjob through a glory hole. This is going to get retconned later on in the worst way possible.
+Fluttershy mentions that she likes to be submissive so Rainbow can take charge and Rainbow ask if she means submissive bottom or submissive of the “kind of freaky shit Twilight gets up to with her wife”. Rainbow also talks about how Twilight would show her her collection of hammers when visiting her. It’s implied that those hammers are used on Ascentia, Twilight’s wife, and also the only original character of Liliana that appears on this fic. This will become obvious later on but just to make it shorter: everyone knows about the abuse that Twilight submits to Ascentia, even the authorities, but they masked it all with it being BDSM and consensual so nobody does anything even when Ascentia has bones broken and ends up in the hospital. Twilight will face no consequences for this on this fic, not just because Ascentia won’t dennounce her to the police but also because of her title as a princess.
+They have sex again, Rainbow says “Get ready to ride the rainbow,”, like a cheesy creep, and the next moment Fluttershy’s on the kitchen making soup and sandwiches. Rainbow comes complaining about kids playing hockey because she got hit with a hockey puck on the balls while passing by. Apparently this happened more than one time. But Rainbow is fine immediately after saying this so I guess it was supposed to be a comedic moment? Anyway, they have some cutesy banter and then this happens:
“You know, this just reminded me of the first time we met,” Fluttershy reminisced, her eyes twinkling, “Do you remember?”
“Uhhhhhhhhhh,” Rainbow’s eyes rolled up as she tried to recall, “Not a clue.”
Not the least bit offended, Fluttershy sat down and poured them some apple juice, “It was at the Cloudsdale Nursery school. I was sitting by myself, just playing with some toys, but a couple of meanies started bothering me. I tried telling them to stop, but they didn’t. Then you ran over, telling them to leave me alone, and they challenged you to a race around the racer carpet. Then you beat them, by a longshot, and did a cute little victory dance. After that, I started following you around like a little puppy. You didn’t mind, you just kind of showed off your cool toys and little tricks,” she recalled, giggling at the memory.
Rainbow’s expression was blank for a moment, “Uh-huh…”
“...Well, anyway, that’s what I remember,” Fluttershy looked away awkwardly, testing her soup. Her hair hid any signs of her disheartened expression, but decided not vocalize it either. Satisfied with the temperature of her soup, she took a few more gentle slurps off the spoon.
+This goes completely nowhere because after this Rainbow changes the subject to Twilight possibly visiting them later, mentioning she doesn’t know if she is going to bring her “pet” or not. They banter. Then they have sex there on the kitchen after Rainbow suggested a quickie.
+Twilight and Ascentia enter the scene. Ascentia immediately knows that Fluttershy had sex and looks like she is already suspicious of Rainbow, but Twilight yanks her collar so she drops the subject. This is a thing on their relationship: Ascentia will say something inappropiate and Twilight will punish her for it, sometimes in quite painful ways, in front of anyone who cares to watch. Twilight many times seems quite angry about Ascentia’s remarks and comments.
+Anyway, back to the scene. Twilight notices a bulge on Rainbow’s pants, but she insist that is just her shorts, which makes me question how come Rainbow wasn’t found out before since they all have known each other for years now.
+Rainbow talks about how the geetaway has been good. Ascentia makes a comment that earns her a smack from Twilight’s hand on the mouth. Nobody has any reaction to this. Rainbow is talking about jumping from a high altitud into a snowbank and Ascentia makes another comment that makes Twilight pull on her ear. This is the response then:
“Oh, come on, Twilight… she can crack a joke if she wants to,” Fluttershy cringed a bit.
“She needs to learn how to make appropriate jokes, doesn’t she?” Twilight asked with a haughty look on her face.
“Yes,” Ascentia said, looking at her with a surprisingly warm expression all things considered.
“Don’t question it, Shy,” Rainbow said, returning to her soup, “Those two were made for eachother.”
+Take of that what you will. Fluttershy ask how they are going and Twilight talks about doing some embassy job and how she is going to be gone for two weeks, which leads to Twilight commenting that the only one getting her panties on a bunch is Ascentia and Rainbow almost chokes on her soup. I imagine this is supposed to be funny. It’s not.
+Rainbow asks Twilight if she and Ascentia were friends with benefit before marrying while Fluttershy is preparing tea. Twilight say that no, they were high school sweethearts and that all of her friends did a lot in order to get them together. Rainbow slaps herself on the head at the obvious info dumping that required her to forget her own past.
+Ascentia comes in to say friends with benefit always fail because someone will catch feelings and Twilight actually agrees with her without slapping her first. Rainbow lies about asking because some guy she knows wants to fuck her, and Ascentia recieves a slap when saying that sounds like a booty call. But it’s okay because this one was just because Twilight felt like it, not because she did anything wrong.
+This scene made me cringe:
Rainbow shrugged, sipping her tea, “Whatever. He’s a handsome manly man. You know me, I love me some manliness. Manly! Manly, I tell you! See, that’s why I’m so jealous of Flutters right now. She’s strapping Big Mac, oh man, I hear he lives up to his name.”
Fluttershy snorted discreetly behind her hand, then sipped her tea, “Mm-hmm.”
Ascentia and Twilight both looked Rainbow flat in the eye for a moment, then said in unison, “Okay, so you’re a raging lesbian.”
“The hell?! No! I’m not!” Rainbow blushed and scooted away, “I’m not into chicks! I like men! Men! Maybe I’m bi at best, but I like men! Manly! I want a manly hunk plowing me into next week!”
“Rainbow, you’re so deep in the closet you’re finding Christmas presents,” Ascentia smirked, then flinched. A few seconds passed, she looked up at Twilight.
“Oh no, I’m gonna let that one slide, that was good,” Twilight smiled.
+How bad are these friends if they never noticed this before? Rainbow comes out the closet, and Ascentia rightfully points out that hiding in the first place was stupid because she and Twilight are already gay. I’ll have you all have the fun of speculating if Ascentia is a self-insert of Liliana or not. Meanwhile, Twilight threatens to smack Ascentia for another comment and then actually does when she suggest Rainbow is fucking Pinkie Pie. Twilight say that is dumb, but Ascentia say Pinkie has had sex with everyone on the village and Twilight is then convinced that it’s totally Pinkie Pie.
+Then this happens out of nowhere:
Twilight was about to speak when a loud rumble came from outside, getting louder, until a scraping sound came by the door and the rumbling drifted off.
“Ascentia, please tell me a plow didn’t just trap us in here,” Twilight groaned.
Ascentia got up and looked out the window, “Yeah, we’re stuck.”
“I am going to tan your hide for that, later,” she growled.
“Why? It’s not her fault,” Fluttershy defended, “Look, it’s okay. We have plenty of room for you two, anyway. You can stay in the other guest room if you want.”
+I swear I haven’t cut a single sentence. They were talking about Rainbow fucking Pinkie Pie and suddenly this. Liliana has some terrible sense of pacing. The idea of having to stand Ascentia and Twilight staying there until the morning makes Rainbow depressed because she won’t be able to fuck Fluttershy all she wants. Fluttershy talks about how once she stayed on the house of Twilight and couldn’t sleep all night because of all the “borderline abusive sex.”
“If it weren’t consensual and I didn’t know any better… I would have sworn she was a battered girlfriend of an abuser…” Fluttershy moaned at the memory, shaking her head.
+According to the TvTropes pages it’s supposed to be surprising when we find out that Twilight is actually abusive and Ascentia only pretends to like it.
“Take That, Audience!: Rainbow Dash's pedophilia and Twilight's abuse of Ascentia are played rather light-heartedly (even having entire smut scenes dedicated to them) before the story turns around and portrays both these issues very seriously and the situation get's highly disturbing very fast.”
“Romanticized Abuse: Twilight's repeated beating and raping of Ascentia is initially played as this before the Mood Whiplash kicks in.”
+I don’t know who wouldn’t find Twilight smacking and yelling at her wife for every single thing that comes out of her mouth disturbing from the very start, or what is “light-heartedly” about it. Even the characters on the story cringe at it. Do you see what I mean when I say some tropes seems to be put there just because they vaguely relate to the story but aren’t actually relevant when knowing the text? Maybe Liliana wrote it with that intention but if that is the case then she did a horrible job getting it across.
+Back to the fic, it’s night and Fluttershy just asked about why they take the BDSM on their relationship to such extremes since Ascentia looks like a battered victim. I want to clarify that they were just siting in front of the fire so there was no prompting for this. In any case, Twilight admits that their relationship actually started as just abuse because she was stressed for work. She abused Ascentia so frequently that some guards caught her doing it so they took her away, but Ascentia had the charges dropped and once they were back home she insisted she likes being a battered wife.
+Fluttershy and Rainbow are understandably disturbed by this. Ascentia insist that she might have bruises and cuts but she’s fine . Then this exchange happens where we casually drop the name of the fic because Liliana thought that was a funny moment on Family Guy she wanted to replicate with her readers:
“Nothing… Just that it makes me a little uncomfortable, that’s all,” Fluttershy looked away awkwardly. “I mean, I don’t mind getting a little bit rough during sex, but that’s too much for me.”
“A lot of people feel that way,” Ascentia chuckled, “You have no idea how many times Rarity’s tried dragging me to see her psychologist. Says I have ‘Stockholm Syndrome.’”
“Uh, dude… You kinda do,” Rainbow pointed out with a snort. Receiving a glare from Twilight, she rolled her eyes, “Don’t give me that look! I said ‘you do’, I didn’t say ‘get help’, there’s a difference.”
Twilight blinked, then sat back, “...Good point.”
Ascentia smiled and leaned back against Twilight’s legs, “In that case, I like my Stockholm Syndrome.”
+Despite being weirded out, Rainbow and Fluttershy encourage them to go all out, to be as loud as possible and do whatever they want, because they think that is going to make it easier for them to fuck. Twilight is touched that her friends accept her weird relationship.
“Yeah! Just… don’t come out, okay? Like, at all. Stay in there and just do what you want,” Rainbow nodded, “But don’t break anything. Fluttershy’s Mom would have a fit if you made a mess. So keep bloodshed and gut spewing to a minimum.”
“Hey! I’ve never spewed any guts,” Twilight said, offended.
“Actually, there was that one time…” Ascentia said with a smirk, which earned her a slap.
Rainbow cringed, “...Yeah, I think I’m gonna have to thank you for not finishing that sentence.”
“I’m kidding, Rainbow,” Ascentia said.
“Please don’t do that,” Fluttershy looked like she was about to vomit, “That was not funny.”
+Rainbow and Fluttershy go to the kitchen so they can talk about how sick all of this is for them, but don’t know what to do about it. Fluttershy is concerned that Twilight could try to kill them if they dennounce her to the authorities, but Rainbow decides that is enough and does call to the Equestrian Royal Guard to denounce a case of domestic abuse. Problem is that as soon she mentions is about Twilight, the royal guard say that is the fith time in the month that they got a call like that and everytime they went to investigate Ascentia told them it was fine so they won’t waste more resources investigating more about it. The royal guard hangs up. Rainbow is pissed and goes to the pair, but she find this scene happening:
She stopped as she opened the door to the living room and found Ascentia seated in Twilight’s lap, the two of them nuzzling their noses together. A warm smile was painted across both their faces and they had their arms around each other, snuggling.
“I love you, my little Kitten.”
“I love you too.”
In that moment, it was as if any and all abuse was nonexistent. They looked more like an actual couple who loved each other. But every bit of it was genuine, not an ounce of deceit or irony was present.
+This is enough for Fluttershy to be convinced that it can’t be that bad and Rainbow agrees, saying that this is adorable.
+At night Twilight and Ascentia have loud sex. Fluttershy and Rainbow sixty-nine each other. Rainbow doesn’t know what to do with a pussy since she doesn’t have one but she still makes Fluttershy moan and tell her she is very good at fingering. On the background we hear Twilight still yelling and smacking while these two keep fucking. They cum together. And then this happens:
A loud ‘CRACK’ sounded from across the hall and the two of them whipped around.
“The hell was that?” Rainbow asked.
“...I sincerely hope that wasn’t broken bones…” Fluttershy whimpered.
“Nah, we wouldn’t hear that,” Rainbow said, “You can barely hear bones snap when you’re right next to the person.”
Fluttershy nodded, though still looked toward the door worriedly. “I stand corrected… I just hope nothing broke.”
“We’ll find out in the morning,” Rainbow said, snuggling down with her, yawning.
+I like how they didn’t cared about anything while fucking, but as soon they were finished they did and then didn’t again. Such good friends.
+Next morning Ascentia looks awful, limping all over the place with marks on her neck.
Twilight looked a bit sheepish, “I think maybe it was a little much…”
Ascentia looked at her with a cocked eyebrow, “Are you feeling okay?”
Twilight shook her head quickly, “Yeah, don’t mind me.”
+This awkward conversation goes nowhere, though, because Fluttershy notices the path is clear now and they are free to go, not without Twilight giving Ascentia one last smack on the right cheek that is obviously not happy with “for getting lippy with me.” Just when Fluttershy and Rainbow think they are safe, Ascentia comes back again to tell them that they know they are fucking and advicing them to be more careful because of Big Mac. This is big funny for her and Twilight.
+Fluttershy and Rainbow have a brief moment of panic because if they found out, then everyone else could find out. But Rainbow notices that if Twilight can slap her wife and nobody cares, then they can pretend that nothing is different between them, so Fluttershy calms down and everything is fine again.
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Lmfao. Lily is going a bit hard on the projection. Also, if this dialogue is directly quoted, these people should not be writing fiction.
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good lord you got there before me
but tbh if you just want to read it all for yourself, here; https://segasister.tumblr.com/post/172067793080/the-stockholm-series-masterpost
I might still go through it all as last time i did i only read the first story and at best skimmed read it. Maybe if i read it in more detail i'll pick something else up other than the surface level projection of lily clearly wanting to fuck teens *cough ginger, cough*
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>Hell, look at Pound Cake and Pumpkin Cake. They’re siblings and they were welcomed pretty well when they started telling people they were a thing
Oh no, aren't those characters literally babies? And here she is imagining older versions of those babies shagging each other. Isn't this kinda like the thing people on Twitter get mad about now? Drawing older, sexualized 18+ versions of canonically underaged characters? Boy, sure would be a shame if anyone actually read that line and gave her the Shadman treatment.
Oh no, aren't those characters literally babies? And here she is imagining older versions of those babies shagging each other. Isn't this kinda like the thing people on Twitter get mad about now? Drawing older, sexualized 18+ versions of canonically underaged characters? Boy, sure would be a shame if anyone actually read that line and gave her the Shadman treatment.
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- Mar 5, 2019
i mean she can have the argument of 'but they were shown as aged up adults in the show!'
wich, is true. we see an olderversion of them in the season 9 finale (or maybe second to last episode. idk but they were a thing)
but this fanfic predates the finale by like, half a decade ish