Jerry Peet / Lily Orchard / Lily Peet / Valkyrstudios / Bhaalspawn / Tara Callie / "Mod Ebara" - Sociopath writer of pedophile fanfiction and cartoon reviews, faked getting raped to force a divorce, then mobbed and gaslit their ex off Tumblr, satanist neoliberal of the MovieSlob variety, also wants to fuck dogs and/or pokemon

[Chapter Master Tu'Shan]

>Hell, look at Pound Cake and Pumpkin Cake. They’re siblings and they were welcomed pretty well when they started telling people they were a thing

Oh no, aren't those characters literally babies? And here she is imagining older versions of those babies shagging each other. Isn't this kinda like the thing people on Twitter get mad about now? Drawing older, sexualized 18+ versions of canonically underaged characters? Boy, sure would be a shame if anyone actually read that line and gave her the Shadman treatment.

I'm pretty sure Lily is one of those people too.
Cause I'm fairly sure I remember at least one post of her angrily ranting about how aging child characters up to 18+ for porn still makes you a pedophile.

 

[Son Goku Baku]

These first chapters are rather short so I thought it was best to get them out of the way sooner. The more we advance the longer and more convoluted it will get so I can’t make promises about keeping up any sort of rythm.

Chapter 3: This Is Now My Song

Spoiler

+Ascentia is driving Fluttershy and Rainbow back home. Only things noteworthy here: one, Ascentia is sitting on a cushion ring and she was just joking last chapter when said that they knew already they were fucking. Ascentia say this “Two best friends spending a lovely winter weekend at a cabin in the woods? One of them is gay? Tell me that’s not the plot to one of Twilight’s crappy romance novels?” I guess kudos for the self-awareness?

+Ascentia adds that she thinks they are cute and appreciates that they were worried about her last night. Despite knowing already that her friend was in fact a wife beater, Rainbow say that "Twi’s not evil or anything, but ya know… We were just kinda concerned, that’s all”. Ascentia is glad that they listened because most would call the police on her, which is exactly what they did but the police didn’t cared. They don’t mention this to her.

+Ascentia ask what they are going to do, they say that the same as always with just a bit of fucking added too. Ascentia comments that they are an “unusual family” and they all agreed. Ascentia hit a bump in the road and complains about how her ass was ripped by Twilight that morning and that is why she needed the “rectal donut.” Rainbow finds this very funny because rectal donut. Fluttershy also find it funny because that is the level of humour we are dealing with here. Liliana was an adult when she wrote this.

+Fluttershy mentions she doesn’t like anal, Ascentia say that is a shame because “Twi” is good at it. Rainbow comments she thinks she can get Fluttershy into anal, finally solving the mistery of the last chapter and giving me this idea: Liliana thinks that vaginas get smaller or something like that when women are in fours, because Fluttershy talked about how the only time she tried to do that with Big Mac it hurt way too much because of his size and that is why they never tried again. You’ll find that there is a lot of questionably biology in this fic. But now Ascentia comments that thin girls like Fluttershy could get hurt trying to do that, contradicting herself from how it was a shame before. Rainbow say that she was kidding.

+Another bump. Ascentia is hurting from torn tissue. Rainbow almost jokes about it, like a sociopathic creep, but instead turns on the radio. Apparently Twilight likes dubstep that is described as this: “A loud, indiscernible thumping sound filled the car, as if someone had mixed gravel and scrap metal in a blender and turned it onto Frappe.” Ascentia changes it to a rock station. She hates people touching the knobs on her car and there is a song on the radio about the singer hating people touching the knobs of his car, so now that is the song of Ascentia and the name was dropped.

+All the songs are too self referencial so Ascentia wants to change to a rap cannel because “there’s no songs about women like us there” and the song that follows is one that say “Bitch got a penis! Bitch got a penis! Bitch got a-“ until Rainbow breaks the knob, which allows Ascentia to know Rainbow has a penis. Ascentia is jelous of this because Rainbow can get someone pregnant and adds “You’ve got a situation most gay women can only dream about”, which I find doubtful somehow. Rainbow think she’d only let Fluttershy carry her babies but it doesn’t matter because Fluttershy has Big Mac and they are not in love anyway. From her mouth only comes out she has no one to have babies with.

+This:

"Ascentia looked back and forth between Rainbow and Fluttershy, then stopped on Rainbow, “Really? You said you only have a guy’s parts. You didn’t say you were as blindly naive as one too.”



“What are you talking about?” Rainbow asked.



“This car is full to the brim with sexual tension,” Ascentia said with a smirk, “And only some of it has to do with the fact that Twilight ruptured my ass so badly it’s only hanging on by one straining tendon. The two of you are like characters in those silly cartoons that Spike watches, you’re not gonna admit it, but you’ve got starry eyes for each other.”

+Rainbow and Fluttershy ge tinto an argument of if Fluttershy would fuck Rainbow if she didn’t had a cock. Rainbow think she wouldn’t because they didn’t fucked before she pulled her pants down in front of her and Fluttershy insisted she would have because Rainbow is her exception. Ascentia tells them to cut it out because doesn’t matter and then this:

“Just let it go… hey where’d all this ice come from?”



She slowed the car on the suddenly ice covered road that totally wasn’t a Disney reference, honest!

+Fluttershy insist that she is not gay, Ascentia insists that she is and somehow this lead her to say they have the most fucked up relationship story she ever heard, “AND THAT’S COMING FROM ME!” she said, lowering her sunglasses to show a black eye on her already reddened face.” A girl is cheating on her boyfriend with a girl that has a cock. It’s not that impressive. I feel like this is how Liliana felt about her own writing during this.

+Ascentia is really like a self insert really pushing her favourite ship of the show together and is annoying. She keeps pushing that they are in love and won’t admit, pointing out that they cuddle a lot and that must mean they are in love because she and Twilight cuddled a lot when they were “friends with benefits”, despite how in the last chapter she said they weren’t. They turn the radio again and the song “I Won’t Say I’m In Love” of Hercules plays. Ascentia laugh like a villain and someone, doesn’t say who, is disturbed at ther laugh. This is not funny.

+They reach Twilight. She and Ascentia keep talking about them being in love. Twilight smacks Ascentia again. Ascentia say Fluttershy would break if she tried to go what she goes through and Twilight say Rainbow wouldn’t hurt Fluttershy. Ascentia is still being annoying so Twilight tells her she was going to get her “another dose of medicine”, which is code for something that makes Ascentia having to sit on a donut for hours (must have been a magic donut or something to cure her that fast) and she groans. She lets out a “thanks a lot guys!”, Rainbow responds “you were asking for it”, like a sociopathic creep again and everyone reacts like this:


The three of them all turned to give Rainbow incredulous looks.



“Too far, Rainbow,” Twilight said, making a tutting noise.



“Fine, whatever! I didn’t mean it like that.”



“Um… maybe we should all just calm down and not get so over-excited…”



“Alright, cya later guys!” Ascentia grinned, jumping into the car and starting the engine, “Love you guys!”


+I must ask once again what is light-hearted about any of this.

+Fluttershy and Rainbow are on her cottage still denying everything. Fluttershy talks about they are just friends “making love” and Ascentia uses the phone to say only this: “SHE JUST CALLED IT MAKING LOVE! CLUE IN!”



“HOW DO YOU KNOW THESE THINGS!” Rainbow yelled into the phone and slamming it down”

+This is a thing on this fic that makes a good chunk of the comedy. Characters will have just the perfect comedic timing with information they had no way of knowing. On this fic those are Ascentia and Pinkie Pie, with Pinkie Pie becoming a worse and worse case of this the more we advance because Liliana thought having the whore of the group also knowing everything was funny.

+Rainbow talks about the decorations on Fluttershy’s house and there is a Hills Have Eyes reference because Liliana recently saw the movie, I suppose.

+Banter. Sex. This phrase: “Nah, as long as I get to fuck something attached to you, I’m good,” Rainbow smirked, “That sounded a lot less slimy in my head.” The creep sometimes is almost self-aware.

+Fluttershy visits Sweet Apple Acres. Nothing happens except Apple Bloom talks with her and Fluttershy notice “The preteen had grown on Fluttershy as she spent more time around the Apple Family, and she was arguably her favorite of the four Apples.” Applejack can fuck off I guess. Also remember that part: Apple Bloom and her friends are preteens, not teens. So we are talking about 12-13 years olds, I don’t remeber right now, but younger than teenagers.

+Apple Bloom talks to Fluttershy about how Sweetie Bell came out to her and asked her out, but she ran away. I still don’t understand how this makes sense on a town where nobody even cares about sibling fucking or wife beating, but somehow they still care about lesbians to the point that the younger generation is afraid of being so, but whatever. I guess Liliana wanted to have a progressive town and also the drama of coming out. Anyway, Apple Bloom is asking advice about this and Fluttershy is asking her if they are were best friends, to which she say yes, and then this question that just feels weird to me: “Second, are you willing to be kind if she does make you upset?” Apple Bloom still say yes. Fluttershy ask if Apple Bloom is willing to take care of Sweetie Bell. Yes. If she willing to communicate openly and honestly? Yes. Then ask this: “are you willing to apologize if you ever somehow mess up on the first four?” I don’t know first four what. Apple Bloom still say yes.

+Somehow this convinces Fluttershy that Apple Bloom feels the same as Sweetie Bell despite Apple Bloom being rightfully confused about it. Fluttershy didn’t asked anything if she think she could like Sweetie Bell that way, only asked her if she is willing to be a doormat and a caregiver, and apparently that is what love is all about. That explain an uncomfortable amount of things.

+Applejack appears and when asked about what they were talking about, Apple Bloom says “sex” before running away. Applejack is alarmed, of course, but Fluttershy tells her the truth and Applejack say “we can’t have that sort of thing around Granny Smith. Old gal’s got ‘great-grandkids’ fever, and… well I think you can do the rest of the math yourself!” Fluttershy tries to argue that they should be able to live their lives how they want and Applejack say that her grandma is going to die soon since she is that old so that means no gay allowed. I don’t remember any scene in which the granny is punished for thinking like that in the future, for reference.

+Apple Bloom comes back announcing she invited Sweetie Bell over and asking Fluttershy, the guest of the house, to make hot cocoa for them. She does and both preteens go to Apple Bloom’s room. Fluttershy sexts Rainbow Dash and Big Mac comes asking her what is so funny. Big Mac thinks Apple Bloom and Sweetie Bell have been gone a long time and Fluttershy goes to check on them.

+She finds them asleep on a couch. The narration implies that they made out. She thinks this is very cute. The phrase “trying to contain a Fluttersgasm” was used. Fluttershy tells Big Mac that they are fine, just tired, and when Big Mac asks tired from what, Fluttershy thinks this way:

‘Making out like hungry wolves?’ the little shipper in Fluttershy said, “I don’t know. Kids have a lot to do, and Apple Bloom’s a farmer.”

+I want to remind people that Rainbow Dashs is supposed to be the pedophile in this story, so I can only asume that Liliana thinks this is a totally normal way to think about the kids on one’s life.

+Big Mac comments that Apple Bloom has been on the closet a long time. Sure, whatever. They keep talking and come to Twilight’s marriage. Fluttershy say they have no right to judge. Big Mac is understandably concerned and doesn’t get it. He thinks Ascentia is only lying she likes it to cover up for Twilight, proving he is the only character on this whole place with a brain. Fluttershy ends up telling to him the same story Twilight told her, finally saying that they can’t do anything unless Ascentia press charges. She also comments the state Ascentia was in when going to pick her up and they both lament how awful it is.

+Big Mac tells her that he is glad that she is back, that he loves her and inviting her to go upstairs to have sex. Despite not really feeling the love or any desire for it, Fluttershy accepts and Big Mac carries her. The end.

+After second hand reading what Kylo goes through on her fic, I actually appreciate the characterization of Big Mac here. He is never demonized or treated as less to make the choice of Fluttershy to cheat on him any easier. There is an actual conflict here because he is a good man that never did anything bad to her, she just doesn’t like him that way. The best part is that when everything blows up, there are consequences that last for more than a page that the character have to deal with. This all goes away on the next fic on the series, but at least for now I’m pleasantly surprised. I like this.

Next Chapter: Only Got One Good Arm.

Estimated time remaining: 10 Hours, 45 Minutes

 

[thebananaonion]

These first chapters are rather short so I thought it was best to get them out of the way sooner. The more we advance the longer and more convoluted it will get so I can’t make promises about keeping up any sort of rythm.

Chapter 3: This Is Now My Song

Spoiler

+Ascentia is driving Fluttershy and Rainbow back home. Only things noteworthy here: one, Ascentia is sitting on a cushion ring and she was just joking last chapter when said that they knew already they were fucking. Ascentia say this “Two best friends spending a lovely winter weekend at a cabin in the woods? One of them is gay? Tell me that’s not the plot to one of Twilight’s crappy romance novels?” I guess kudos for the self-awareness?

+Ascentia adds that she thinks they are cute and appreciates that they were worried about her last night. Despite knowing already that her friend was in fact a wife beater, Rainbow say that "Twi’s not evil or anything, but ya know… We were just kinda concerned, that’s all”. Ascentia is glad that they listened because most would call the police on her, which is exactly what they did but the police didn’t cared. They don’t mention this to her.

+Ascentia ask what they are going to do, they say that the same as always with just a bit of fucking added too. Ascentia comments that they are an “unusual family” and they all agreed. Ascentia hit a bump in the road and complains about how her ass was ripped by Twilight that morning and that is why she needed the “rectal donut.” Rainbow finds this very funny because rectal donut. Fluttershy also find it funny because that is the level of humour we are dealing with here. Liliana was an adult when she wrote this.

+Fluttershy mentions she doesn’t like anal, Ascentia say that is a shame because “Twi” is good at it. Rainbow comments she thinks she can get Fluttershy into anal, finally solving the mistery of the last chapter and giving me this idea: Liliana thinks that vaginas get smaller or something like that when women are in fours, because Fluttershy talked about how the only time she tried to do that with Big Mac it hurt way too much because of his size and that is why they never tried again. You’ll find that there is a lot of questionably biology in this fic. But now Ascentia comments that thin girls like Fluttershy could get hurt trying to do that, contradicting herself from how it was a shame before. Rainbow say that she was kidding.

+Another bump. Ascentia is hurting from torn tissue. Rainbow almost jokes about it, like a sociopathic creep, but instead turns on the radio. Apparently Twilight likes dubstep that is described as this: “A loud, indiscernible thumping sound filled the car, as if someone had mixed gravel and scrap metal in a blender and turned it onto Frappe.” Ascentia changes it to a rock station. She hates people touching the knobs on her car and there is a song on the radio about the singer hating people touching the knobs of his car, so now that is the song of Ascentia and the name was dropped.

+All the songs are too self referencial so Ascentia wants to change to a rap cannel because “there’s no songs about women like us there” and the song that follows is one that say “Bitch got a penis! Bitch got a penis! Bitch got a-“ until Rainbow breaks the knob, which allows Ascentia to know Rainbow has a penis. Ascentia is jelous of this because Rainbow can get someone pregnant and adds “You’ve got a situation most gay women can only dream about”, which I find doubtful somehow. Rainbow think she’d only let Fluttershy carry her babies but it doesn’t matter because Fluttershy has Big Mac and they are not in love anyway. From her mouth only comes out she has no one to have babies with.

+This:

"Ascentia looked back and forth between Rainbow and Fluttershy, then stopped on Rainbow, “Really? You said you only have a guy’s parts. You didn’t say you were as blindly naive as one too.”



“What are you talking about?” Rainbow asked.



“This car is full to the brim with sexual tension,” Ascentia said with a smirk, “And only some of it has to do with the fact that Twilight ruptured my ass so badly it’s only hanging on by one straining tendon. The two of you are like characters in those silly cartoons that Spike watches, you’re not gonna admit it, but you’ve got starry eyes for each other.”

+Rainbow and Fluttershy ge tinto an argument of if Fluttershy would fuck Rainbow if she didn’t had a cock. Rainbow think she wouldn’t because they didn’t fucked before she pulled her pants down in front of her and Fluttershy insisted she would have because Rainbow is her exception. Ascentia tells them to cut it out because doesn’t matter and then this:

“Just let it go… hey where’d all this ice come from?”



She slowed the car on the suddenly ice covered road that totally wasn’t a Disney reference, honest!

+Fluttershy insist that she is not gay, Ascentia insists that she is and somehow this lead her to say they have the most fucked up relationship story she ever heard, “AND THAT’S COMING FROM ME!” she said, lowering her sunglasses to show a black eye on her already reddened face.” A girl is cheating on her boyfriend with a girl that has a cock. It’s not that impressive. I feel like this is how Liliana felt about her own writing during this.

+Ascentia is really like a self insert really pushing her favourite ship of the show together and is annoying. She keeps pushing that they are in love and won’t admit, pointing out that they cuddle a lot and that must mean they are in love because she and Twilight cuddled a lot when they were “friends with benefits”, despite how in the last chapter she said they weren’t. They turn the radio again and the song “I Won’t Say I’m In Love” of Hercules plays. Ascentia laugh like a villain and someone, doesn’t say who, is disturbed at ther laugh. This is not funny.

+They reach Twilight. She and Ascentia keep talking about them being in love. Twilight smacks Ascentia again. Ascentia say Fluttershy would break if she tried to go what she goes through and Twilight say Rainbow wouldn’t hurt Fluttershy. Ascentia is still being annoying so Twilight tells her she was going to get her “another dose of medicine”, which is code for something that makes Ascentia having to sit on a donut for hours (must have been a magic donut or something to cure her that fast) and she groans. She lets out a “thanks a lot guys!”, Rainbow responds “you were asking for it”, like a sociopathic creep again and everyone reacts like this:


The three of them all turned to give Rainbow incredulous looks.



“Too far, Rainbow,” Twilight said, making a tutting noise.



“Fine, whatever! I didn’t mean it like that.”



“Um… maybe we should all just calm down and not get so over-excited…”



“Alright, cya later guys!” Ascentia grinned, jumping into the car and starting the engine, “Love you guys!”


+I must ask once again what is light-hearted about any of this.

+Fluttershy and Rainbow are on her cottage still denying everything. Fluttershy talks about they are just friends “making love” and Ascentia uses the phone to say only this: “SHE JUST CALLED IT MAKING LOVE! CLUE IN!”



“HOW DO YOU KNOW THESE THINGS!” Rainbow yelled into the phone and slamming it down”

+This is a thing on this fic that makes a good chunk of the comedy. Characters will have just the perfect comedic timing with information they had no way of knowing. On this fic those are Ascentia and Pinkie Pie, with Pinkie Pie becoming a worse and worse case of this the more we advance because Liliana thought having the whore of the group also knowing everything was funny.

+Rainbow talks about the decorations on Fluttershy’s house and there is a Hills Have Eyes reference because Liliana recently saw the movie, I suppose.

+Banter. Sex. This phrase: “Nah, as long as I get to fuck something attached to you, I’m good,” Rainbow smirked, “That sounded a lot less slimy in my head.” The creep sometimes is almost self-aware.

+Fluttershy visits Sweet Apple Acres. Nothing happens except Apple Bloom talks with her and Fluttershy notice “The preteen had grown on Fluttershy as she spent more time around the Apple Family, and she was arguably her favorite of the four Apples.” Applejack can fuck off I guess. Also remember that part: Apple Bloom and her friends are preteens, not teens. So we are talking about 12-13 years olds, I don’t remeber right now, but younger than teenagers.

+Apple Bloom talks to Fluttershy about how Sweetie Bell came out to her and asked her out, but she ran away. I still don’t understand how this makes sense on a town where nobody even cares about sibling fucking or wife beating, but somehow they still care about lesbians to the point that the younger generation is afraid of being so, but whatever. I guess Liliana wanted to have a progressive town and also the drama of coming out. Anyway, Apple Bloom is asking advice about this and Fluttershy is asking her if they are were best friends, to which she say yes, and then this question that just feels weird to me: “Second, are you willing to be kind if she does make you upset?” Apple Bloom still say yes. Fluttershy ask if Apple Bloom is willing to take care of Sweetie Bell. Yes. If she willing to communicate openly and honestly? Yes. Then ask this: “are you willing to apologize if you ever somehow mess up on the first four?” I don’t know first four what. Apple Bloom still say yes.

+Somehow this convinces Fluttershy that Apple Bloom feels the same as Sweetie Bell despite Apple Bloom being rightfully confused about it. Fluttershy didn’t asked anything if she think she could like Sweetie Bell that way, only asked her if she is willing to be a doormat and a caregiver, and apparently that is what love is all about. That explain an uncomfortable amount of things.

+Applejack appears and when asked about what they were talking about, Apple Bloom says “sex” before running away. Applejack is alarmed, of course, but Fluttershy tells her the truth and Applejack say “we can’t have that sort of thing around Granny Smith. Old gal’s got ‘great-grandkids’ fever, and… well I think you can do the rest of the math yourself!” Fluttershy tries to argue that they should be able to live their lives how they want and Applejack say that her grandma is going to die soon since she is that old so that means no gay allowed. I don’t remember any scene in which the granny is punished for thinking like that in the future, for reference.

+Apple Bloom comes back announcing she invited Sweetie Bell over and asking Fluttershy, the guest of the house, to make hot cocoa for them. She does and both preteens go to Apple Bloom’s room. Fluttershy sexts Rainbow Dash and Big Mac comes asking her what is so funny. Big Mac thinks Apple Bloom and Sweetie Bell have been gone a long time and Fluttershy goes to check on them.

+She finds them asleep on a couch. The narration implies that they made out. She thinks this is very cute. The phrase “trying to contain a Fluttersgasm” was used. Fluttershy tells Big Mac that they are fine, just tired, and when Big Mac asks tired from what, Fluttershy thinks this way:

‘Making out like hungry wolves?’ the little shipper in Fluttershy said, “I don’t know. Kids have a lot to do, and Apple Bloom’s a farmer.”

+I want to remind people that Rainbow Dashs is supposed to be the pedophile in this story, so I can only asume that Liliana thinks this is a totally normal way to think about the kids on one’s life.

+Big Mac comments that Apple Bloom has been on the closet a long time. Sure, whatever. They keep talking and come to Twilight’s marriage. Fluttershy say they have no right to judge. Big Mac is understandably concerned and doesn’t get it. He thinks Ascentia is only lying she likes it to cover up for Twilight, proving he is the only character on this whole place with a brain. Fluttershy ends up telling to him the same story Twilight told her, finally saying that they can’t do anything unless Ascentia press charges. She also comments the state Ascentia was in when going to pick her up and they both lament how awful it is.

+Big Mac tells her that he is glad that she is back, that he loves her and inviting her to go upstairs to have sex. Despite not really feeling the love or any desire for it, Fluttershy accepts and Big Mac carries her. The end.

+After second hand reading what Kylo goes through on her fic, I actually appreciate the characterization of Big Mac here. He is never demonized or treated as less to make the choice of Fluttershy to cheat on him any easier. There is an actual conflict here because he is a good man that never did anything bad to her, she just doesn’t like him that way. The best part is that when everything blows up, there are consequences that last for more than a page that the character have to deal with. This all goes away on the next fic on the series, but at least for now I’m pleasantly surprised. I like this.

Next Chapter: Only Got One Good Arm.

Estimated time remaining: 10 Hours, 45 Minutes

welp, you're handling these pretty well so might as well step back and wish you the best.

I've read some chapters ahead so won't spoil anything. just wishing you luck.

Also this lack/little to no activity from lily is weird. it aint like her not being a gabbby mouthed wamin on her tumblr. asks are still off.

Considering she reads the farms may be our guess of a week (average) at best put her in a spiteful mood so we might see her last longer just to please his raging hate boner or something.

 

[Prophetic Spirit]

welp, you're handling these pretty well so might as well step back and wish you the best.

I've read some chapters ahead so won't spoil anything. just wishing you luck.

Also this lack/little to no activity from lily is weird. it aint like her not being a gabbby mouthed wamin on her tumblr. asks are still off.

Considering she reads the farms may be our guess of a week (average) at best put her in a spiteful mood so we might see her last longer just to please his raging hate boner or something.

I really have doubts if someday gonna DMCA one of us.
I mean, in Momokun thread THOT Hunter Alice was DMCA'd by her, and Null gives info about that... yesterday?
I was a bit extreme in my "it" comment, so probably i'm under the list but i don't care, that thing can suck my hairy ass every day.

 

[thebananaonion]

I really have doubts if someday gonna DMCA one of us.
I mean, in Momokun thread THOT Hunter Alice was DMCA'd by her, and Null gives info about that... yesterday?
I was a bit extreme in my "it" comment, so probably i'm under the list but i don't care, that thing can suck my hairy ass every day.

i'd be surprised if i'm on the list. All ive really said is she's a weirdo for doing weird things like dating barely legal (in her eyes) people, and writing cp. that aint incriminating, that's just suspect behavior.

She cant moan and cry transphobia too as i'm only one of few who gender her correctly and not out of a necessity to not have her complain about transphobica. i just do it just because.

if you go missing my dude we can blame her for it no doubt tho

 

[Son Goku Baku]

This is the fourth chapter and only now we’ll be getting into the actual shit anyone remembers this fic for. It’s light for now but it’s only downfall from here.

Chapter 4: Only Got One Good Arm

Spoiler

+A week has passed, which is a irrelevant timestamp but fine. Fluttershy is horny and goes to Rainbow Dash to have sex. Rainbow has Fluttershy sucking her off first. Then they go upstairs and fuck. There is a little conversation about how Fluttershy doesn’t like recieve everything without giving and Rainbow says this:

“Yeah Shy, but what I mean is you shouldn’t think of it as some kind of obligation,” Rainbow said, “If you’re going to suck my cock, do it because you like sucking it. If you don’t want to in the moment, just say so. I’m alright with just giving once in a while if that’s what you need. Sometimes I may ask you do so me a favor and not feel like reciprocating. You get what I’m saying?”

+I like the implication here that the only reason Rainbow makes Fluttershy finish is so she can later ask her a favor without her having to give anything in return, like a creep, rather than frame it as “I like to make you happy even if you don’t suck my cock.” True romance.

+Fluttershy says she wants to suck her off while Rainbow reads a book and so she does. After swallowing the cum, Fluttershy kisses Rainbow. Rainbow say that if she wants to stay the night she can’t wear any clothing, but Rainbow can use clothing if she wants because it’s her house. Fluttershy then discovers she really likes playing with the tits of Rainbow and Liliana reveals what she thinks growing up female and lesbian is like:

“Yeah, when they first came in, I couldn’t keep my hands off them,” Rainbow chuckled, “Mom used to yell at me to stop fondling my own tits.”

+In any case, none of them feel anything especial even while rubbing their tits together, but Fluttershy stills likes touching Rainbow’s. Some banter about Fluttershy being gay and not admitting, and then she calling herself “Flutterbaby” when she start sucking on Rainbow’s nipple. Rainbows ask if she is a pedophile, and when Fluttershy, obviously thinking she is just joking, tells her to stop being silly, Rainwbow reacts this way:

“Shame, Scootaloo was always pretty cute,” Rainbow laughed, “Oh, I’m going to hell for that.”



“Dashie, I love you, but please be quiet now,” Fluttershy whispered, poking her side.



“Oh fine, I’ll just sit here in my mind with imaginary adult Scootaloo,” Rainbow pouted, turning her head away.

+For some reason Fluttershy sees nothing wrong about a grown adult woman talking about imagining a real 13 year old preteen they both know as an adult she can fuck with, and instead of confronting Rainbow about it, she confesses that now everytime she fucks with Big Mac imagines that is actually Rainbow Dash. Rainbow somehow thinks this means now she doesn’t have to feel guilty about imagining a threeway with Fluttershy and Adult Scootalooo, and even weirder is that Fluttershy say she would be into that. The latent pedophilia in Fluttershy goes entirely unadressed during the entire fic by the way.

+Rainbow comments that if Scootaloo could hear her now talking about fucking she would jump in joy because she has a big crush on her. She says this laughing, as creep. Fluttershy, again, finding nothing weird about this, tells her that Sweetie Bell and Apple Bloom are “going to get to her first.”

“Well, the girl is… what, 13?” Rainbow asked, “Of course they’d get her first.”

+I don’t know what to say about that. Anyway, Fluttershy tells Rainbow about what happened on the last chapter with Apple Bloom and they have this exchange:

“Awwwwwwwwwwwww!” Rainbow cooed, “That’s adorable!”



“Oh, I know! The cutest little thing!” Fluttershy gushed, beaming, “They’re so sweet together!”

+These are two grown women gushing about preteens they know making out.

+They decide to sleep. Fluttershy questions if she is in love with Rainbow while she sleeps. Next morning Fluttershy makes breakfast. Rainbow mention her cock is starting to chafe even though they haven't fucked in hours at this point. Rainbow makes Fluttershy remembers that she was invited to a Apple Family Reunion, something Fluttershy apparently has been talking about for weeks.

+This goes absolutely nowhere because the next scene is Fluttershy going to a psychologist sesion with Dr. Firebrand to decide what to do. I won’t go through every thing they say because it’s boring and irrelevant, but in the end Fluttershy realizes she is in love with Rainbow Dash and decides she has to cut the thing they have before it’s too late because she doens’t want to hurt Big Mac. It’s clear that after reaching this conclusion Liliana lost interest on the whole scene because it ends rather clunky with the doctor telling her that she paid for the full hour and Fluttershy just strugles to have anything else to say.

+Next scene is Ascentia coming to the house of Fluttershy because it’s raining outside and she has nowhere to go. Ascentia has one arm broken and drops the name of the chapter. Fluttershy thinks about how Ascentia always has something broken whenever she sees her. Reminder that it has been just a week since the last chapter and Twilight mentioned that she was going to be away for two weeks, but apparently Liliana forgot about that.

+Anyway, Fluttershy looks sad so Ascentia asks her what is wrong. Fluttershy tells her about her decision. Ascentia tells her “for someone with a Ph.D in Veterinary Physicism, you’re surprisingly dense” for not realizing Rainbow want to “go to the next level with her”. Fluttershy react by smacking her on the broken arm and this is her reaction:

“Sorry…” Fluttershy pulled her hand back, “But please stop saying things like that. This is serious.”



Ascentia’s face was locked in a mixture of shock and horror as she felt the pain running up her arm, “Ahhhhhhhhhh…..” she squeaked, “That’s… cheating… okay, I call no shots to broken limbs.”



“I didn’t mean to,” Fluttershy groaned, pulling her hand further away, “I mean it though, this is not the time to joke. I just need to figure out how to go about this.”

+Is this supposed to be funny? I don’t know anymore.

+Ascentia keeps insisting that they should be together and Fluttershy is still in denial, and this keeps going until the end of the chapter with Ascentia literally mentioning they are getting closer to Flutterdash, and says that the painkiller she hasn’t taken since entering the scene are starting to kick in.

+Ascentia then says she would fuck Fluttershy is she wasn’t married, because Liliana thinks all lesbians want to fuck all attractive women on their proximity. Then it ends.

Next Chapter: P.S. We're Out Of Carrots

Estimated time remaining: 10 Hours, 15 Minutes

 

[Prophetic Spirit]

This is the fourth chapter and only now we’ll be getting into the actual shit anyone remembers this fic for. It’s light for now but it’s only downfall from here.

Chapter 4: Only Got One Good Arm

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+A week has passed, which is a irrelevant timestamp but okay. Fluttershy is horny and goes to Rainbow Dash to have sex. Rainbow has Fluttershy sucking her off first. Then they go upstairs and fuck. There is a little conversation about how Fluttershy doesn’t like recieve everything without giving and Rainbow says this:

“Yeah Shy, but what I mean is you shouldn’t think of it as some kind of obligation,” Rainbow said, “If you’re going to suck my cock, do it because you like sucking it. If you don’t want to in the moment, just say so. I’m alright with just giving once in a while if that’s what you need. Sometimes I may ask you do so me a favor and not feel like reciprocating. You get what I’m saying?”

+I like the implication here that the only reason Rainbow makes Fluttershy finish is so she can later ask her a favor without her having to give anything in return, like a creep, rather than frame it as “I like to make you happy even if you don’t suck my cock.” True romance.

+Fluttershy says she wants to suck her off while Rainbow reads a book and so she does. After swallowing the cum, Fluttershy kisses Rainbow. Rainbow say that if she wants to stay the night she can’t wear any clothing, but Rainbow can use clothing if she wants because it’s her house. Fluttershy then discovers she really likes playing with the tits of Rainbow and Liliana reveals what she thinks growing up female and lesbian is like:

“Yeah, when they first came in, I couldn’t keep my hands off them,” Rainbow chuckled, “Mom used to yell at me to stop fondling my own tits.”

+In any case, none of them feel anything especial even while rubbing their tits together, but Fluttershy stills likes touching Rainbow’s. Some banter about Fluttershy being gay and not admitting, and then she calling herself “Flutterbaby” when she start sucking on Rainbow’s nipple. Rainbows ask if she is a pedophile, and when Fluttershy, obviously thinking she is just joking, tells her to stop being silly, Rainwbow reacts this way:

“Shame, Scootaloo was always pretty cute,” Rainbow laughed, “Oh, I’m going to hell for that.”



“Dashie, I love you, but please be quiet now,” Fluttershy whispered, poking her side.



“Oh fine, I’ll just sit here in my mind with imaginary adult Scootaloo,” Rainbow pouted, turning her head away.

+For some reason Fluttershy sees nothing wrong about a grown adult woman talking about imagining a real 13 year old preteen they both know as an adult she can fuck with, and instead of confronting Rainbow about it, she confesses that now everytime she fucks with Big Mac imagines that is actually Rainbow Dash. Rainbow somehow thinks this means now she doesn’t have to feel guilty about imagining a threeway with Fluttershy and Adult Scootalooo, and even weirder is that Fluttershy say she would be into that. The latent pedophilia in Fluttershy goes entirely unadressed during the entire fic by the way.

+Rainbow comments that if Scootaloo could hear her now talking about fucking she would jump in joy because she has a big crush on her. She says this laughing, as creep. Fluttershy, again, finding nothing weird about this, tells her that Sweetie Bell and Apple Bloom are “going to get to her first.”

“Well, the girl is… what, 13?” Rainbow asked, “Of course they’d get her first.”

+I don’t know what tos ay about that. Anyway, Fluttershy tells Rainbow about what happened on the last chapter with Apple Bloom and they have this exchange:

“Awwwwwwwwwwwww!” Rainbow cooed, “That’s adorable!”



“Oh, I know! The cutest little thing!” Fluttershy gushed, beaming, “They’re so sweet together!”

+These are two grown women gushing about preteens they know making out.

+They decide to sleep. Fluttershy questions if she is in love with Rainbow while she sleeps. Next morning Fluttershy makes breakfast. Rainbow mention her cock is starting to chafe even though they fucked in hours at this point. Rainbow makes Fluttershy remembers that she was invited to a Apple Family Reunion, something Fluttershy apparently has been talking about for weeks.

+This goes absolutely nowhere because the next scene is Fluttershy going to a psychologist sesion with Dr. Firebrand to decide what to do. I won’t go through every thing they say because it’s boring and irrelevant, but in the end Fluttershy realizes she is in love with Rainbow Dash and decides she has to cut the thing they have before it’s too late because she doens’t want to hurt Big Mac. It’s clear that after reaching this conclusión Liliana lost interest on the whole scene because it ends rather clunky with the doctor telling her that she paid for the full hour and Fluttershy just strugles to have anything else tos ay.

+Next scene is Ascentia coming to the house of Fluttershy because it’s raining outside and she has nowhere to go. Ascentia has one arm broken and drops the name of the chapter. Fluttershy thinks about how Ascentia always has something broken whenever she sees her. Reminder that it has been just a week since the last chapter and Twilight mentioned that she was going to be away for two weeks, but apparently Liliana forgot about that.

+Anyway, Fluttershy looks sad so Ascentia asks her what is wrong. Fluttershy tells her about her decision. Ascentia tells her “for someone with a Ph.D in Veterinary Physicism, you’re surprisingly dense” for not realizing Rainbow want to “go to the next level with her”. Fluttershy react by smacking her on the broken arm and this is her reaction:

“Sorry…” Fluttershy pulled her hand back, “But please stop saying things like that. This is serious.”



Ascentia’s face was locked in a mixture of shock and horror as she felt the pain running up her arm, “Ahhhhhhhhhh…..” she squeaked, “That’s… cheating… okay, I call no shots to broken limbs.”



“I didn’t mean to,” Fluttershy groaned, pulling her hand further away, “I mean it though, this is not the time to joke. I just need to figure out how to go about this.”

+Is this supposed to be funny? I don’t know anymore.

+Ascentia keeps insisting that they should be together and Fluttershy is still in denial, and this keeps going until the end of the chapter with Ascentia literally mentioning they are getting closer to Flutterdash, and says that the painkiller she hasn’t taken since entering the scene are starting to kick in.

+Ascentia then says she would fuck Fluttershy is she wasn’t married, because Liliana thinks all lesbians want to fuck all attractive women on their proximity. Then it ends.

Next Chapter: P.S. We're Out Of Carrots

Estimated time remaining: 10 Hours, 15 Minutes

This is atrocious.

Spoiler: Probably commentaries you don't want

I remember writing a sex scene in my novel but nothing special (consensual and warm) but i scrapped writing those scenes because i'm not good detailing those things (writing a 1 vs. 1 duel hand-to-hand is my strong point actually).

My real nightmare in all of this is how this crap have 117k+ words, even my novel reached the half of the entire plot with 101k words in my mother language. How you can writing based of a sexual behavior? That's the thing i will never understand from Lily.

 

[Ben Laden]

>the next scene is Fluttershy going to a psychologist sesion with Dr. Firebrand

...Isn't 'Firebrand' the name of Josh's pony avatar? Is this a cameo? Bringing Josh into this mess...for shame, Lily.

 

[Devil-Man]

Jerry has continued his Star Wars Episode III splooge-fest.

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Writing the In A Minute for Revenge of the Sith. Gonna be livetweeting just like I did for Attack of the Clones since people got a giggle out of it.
Fucking 12 years later and I still go "This is the crawl! Crawl! Opening crawl!"
Okay... I never appreciated before just how big those fucking cruisers are.
Can you imagine if they'd actually re-released this in theatres in 3D? That opening shot would have been even cooler!
Anakin handles missles like a pro and Obi-Wan's floundering like a dying fish lol
"I'm not leaving without you, Master." The very last 'precious child' moment we'll ever see.
I know the technical reason is "different lightsaber forms" but I still always appreciated that in the prequels everyone swings their lightsaber in a different fashion. Anakin doesn't fight the same as Obi Wan, who doesn't fight the same as Dooku, it's a neat touch
Why'd they cut Obi Wan and Anakin mocking the droids "Roger Roger" bit? That's a crying shame.
I love just how completely fucking unnecessary it was for Anakin to jump into the elevator shaft.
Droid 1 - "Hands up, Jedi!"
Droid 2 - Just looks at his buddy in silent condemnation.
"He's trying." AWWWWWWW! Anakin loves that damn droid and that's valid.
"My powers have doubled since the last time we met, Count." After Clone Wars I believe that's "two months ago."
I know the real reason Palpatine goes "Yeah! Yeah!" during the fight, but just think about how rare it would be for a real Senator to see a lightsaber fight with their own eyes. That would have to be an awesome sight.
I hate when people go "You can tell it's a stunt double!"
If they didn't use a stunt double, the fight would look like shit. If the Sequel Trilogy taught us anything it's that the reflexive backlash to the Prequel's choreography was really dumb.
"Yes, but he was unarmed prisoner"
Somehow Palpatine survived falling down an elevator shaft.
"How did this happen, we're smarter than this."
"Apparently not."

Anakin accepts himself for the himbo he is.
"Don't worry, R2 will save us!"
R2 did not save them.
"General Grevious. You're shorter than I expected."
Well the only information you had on him came from a 14 year old girl, Annie.
I'm not attracted to men all that much, but honestly Obi Wan, Anakin, Poe and Finn are the most beautiful men in Star Wars.
That sequence of Obi Wan slamming the electrostaff into the console and beheading the guard droid is fucking AMAZING! I love the swordplay in this film, it's so GOOD!
That whole bridge fight is SO GOOD!
"Somebody needs to be the Poster Boy" Obi Wan, that's not a good argument to avoid publicity. You are a LOT prettier than he is.
"That business on Cato Neimodia doesn't count"
Fun Fact: Obi Wan lost his rebreather, got high on fungus, fought some battle droids, and giggled about it when Anakin showed up to save him.

True story.
I stand by what I said: Christensen is the best actor in all twelve films.
This romance dialogue is fucking cheesy and corny and awkward and cringey and I fucking LOVE. EVERY. SECOND. OF. IT. Inject this cheesy crap directly into my veins!
Real talk: Anakin and Padme's relationship was always written in the vein of "this is a bad idea. They shouldn't be doing this" but it's also the only romantic plotline in a trilogy that actually feels heartfelt. Like they're trying. And you want it to work but you know it won't.
Compare that to the OT and Sequel Trilogy which went with one character creeping, perving or outright being violently hostile to the other and then "I unno, like... hetero nonsense?"
Anakin being violent toward Padme signifies the end of their relationship and that seems like a memo that Empire and TROS didn't.
People say Lucas can't direct romance, but honestly I think he did the best job out of the other directors.
I like that Padme's alarmed by the dream as well. People forget this, but Anakin has had dreams like this before and they've come true and he's understandably freaked out by it.
On reflection I think better of Yoda in the counselling scene. It really looks like he's trying to tell Anakin that someone is playing on his attachments to make him vulnerable. But the lack of compassion for how upset Anakin is ultimately causes it to flounder.
Anakin's dismissal of Democracy in AotC comes back in full force when he sees Palpatine's growing executive power as a good thing because "less deliberating and more action." Anakin's dislike of Democracy is understandable because Democracy didn't get him out of slavery.
"I'm overwhelmed, sir."
The deadpan makes it really funny.
"You're on this council, but we do not grant you the rank of Master."
People act like nobody can tell that Palpatine's a Sith Lord, but the entire film the Jedi are like "Palpatine is sus."
"Sometimes I wonder what's happening to the Jedi Order."
"Maybe the Republic has become the very evil we're trying to destroy."

Amazing how some people think this element of the trilogy was accidental.
I love the scene where Anakin and Palpatine are just discussing philosophy about the Force. It's my favorite thing in any Star Wars property. KOTOR 2, SWTOR, any time characters are discussing the nature of the Force is really interesting to me.
This is a very long movie and going through it to write for IAM takes a long time. I need a break to work on the next GOW.
Anakin - "I've been arrogant."
Obi Wan - *Raises eyebrows sarcastically*

The acting in this movie is fucking great.
This is the last time they ever see each other as friends. The next time they meet is on Mustafar. I just...
"Obi Wan's been here hasn't he?"
Fun fact: There's a deleted scene in the script where Obi Wan's visit to Padme involves him revealing that he knows about their relationship.
The galaxy has advanced cybernetics and an keep people alive in mobile iron lungs but they can't figure out this whole "dying in childbirth" thing.
"Hello there."
"General Kenobi."
The most iconic moment in Star Wars. Ewan McGregor is a fucking gift to humanity.
Nerds in 2015: "How come Finn and Rey can use a lightsaber?!"
George Lucas in 2005: "Hey, what if a droid was using a lightsaber? That'd be sweet."
I guess they DID make a fine addition to his collection
Obi Wan is like the best duellist ever.
I love how Anakin is able to figure out that Palpatine's a Sith Lord, and yet not figure out that everything about their interactions is a fucking con.
Ten minutes into a street brawl and Obi Wan remembers "Oh right! I have Space Magic!"
Can you imagine how quickly this would have been over if Obi Wan had just electrocuted the damn droid?
The first hour of ROTS is
Anakin - "I wanna do the right thing!"
Mace Windu - "No."
Credit to Kit Fisto, he lasted longer than the other two chumps.
As much as I like the recent looks into the film as the Jedi being the bad guys, I roll my eyes when some people characterize Windu's actions as "Trying to kill the democratically elected leader because he's the wrong religion."
Sidious was pulling the strings of a galactic war on both sides to consolidate power. Some people act like it was a bad ideo to kill Space Trump because "democracy" yeah no. Kill Space Trump. In a democracy, the head of state is expendable.
Actually shit I remember years ago people were like "How was Palpatine too weak to keep fighting, but then suddenly gets his strength back right away?" This was an actual criticism of the film's writing, despite what we all know about Palpatine.
Out of all the Jedi executions in this film, why the fuck is Aayla Secura so... gruesome? None of the others are that gruesome.

George, WTF?!
That scene in the Council Chambers is a perfect representation of OT Star Wars fans whenever they see children anywhere.
Padme thinking Anakin was killed in the attack on the Jedi Temple just got me right in the fucking gut.
Jedi Temple - Under attack and on fire
Bail Organa - "Well I gotta go investigate this!"
The Jedi would have gone extinct if it hadn't been for Bail Fucking Organa.
Anakin Saurfang
People complain about there always being more surviving Jedi in the galaxy like Ahsoka and Not!Starkiller from Fallen Order, but in this film Obi Wan and Yoda set up a beacon telling surviving Jedi to stay away so they always set up the idea that there are surviving Jedi.
The films did a really good job setting up Anakin's fall to the Dark Side that isn't really appreciated.

Clone Wars spent a lot of time "foreshadowing" Anakin's fall to the Dark Side, but ultimately doing everything it could to make his fall as unbelievable as possible.
Side Note, is it foreshadowing when you

1. Already know it's going to happen
2. Is literally just playing the Imperial March melody and vaguely throwing up images of Vader's helmet?

Clone Wars was a good show, but how they handled Anakin was... not.
"So this is how liberty dies. With thunderous applause" is the most raw fucking line ever written.
The more I watch these movies, the more I dislike Clone Wars.
"Send me to kill the Emperor. I will not kill Anakin."
I always liked the whole "He ceased to be Anakin Skywalker and became Darth Vader" because it's always shown just how in-denial Obi Wan is that his friend could be manipulated into evil. Treating Anakin and Vader as seperate characters has always been a fallacy
And this goes double for his Darth-Revan cosplaying grandson.

After which, he began to simp for Moviebob again, defend his Bonnie character, and trying to make himself look humble by saying he's "not desperate for popularity" and just wants to "settle down and enjoy time with his friends and family."

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Over the last three years I've come to the realization that all I'm interested in as a Youtuber is making a living. I'm not interested in constant growth, I'm not interested in building a business or getting deals, I just want to get by.
I've always held the goal that if one of my revenue streams (Ad Revenue or Patron) consistently broke 50k a year, I'd flat out disable the other. Either go ad free or delete Patreon.
I've never been all that interested in joining communities or cranking up the production value. This is my job. It's how I pay to do the things I love to do, but the two are very seperate.
People try to psychoanalyze me with shit like "You need to watch more adult media" but the thing is... I do. It's just not part of my job so I don't discuss it on social media. I keep a lot of the stuff I watch secret simply because I don't want to be nagged about them.
When I think about my achievements in my career, they're all really small things. Like... my videos are sometimes shown in college lectures. That's pretty neat.
My name's in the credits of a @the_moviebob video. That's pretty neat too.
But when I think about my goals? Where I want to be?

I want to be in a cottage out by the woods with my fiance, my girlfriend, her datemate and three puppies with a vegetable garden and an archery range.

That's my goal.
I've never been invested in making Youtube my entire life. Pretty much from the start I was trying to carve out a living. I didn't fall into Youtube, I actively prusued it. But I've always stopped at "paying the rent."
At some point I looked at other creators I was watching at the time and thought "I don't want to be where you are." I don't think I'll ever reach the point some Youtubers are at where they have millions of subscribers, pull in over $150k a year...
...and have elaborately, luxuriously created videos. My wheelhouse, children's animation, has a cap. It's a small community. I'll never reach that kind of height.

And truth be told I don't want to.
I'm content making a reasonable salary. I'm content being a 1-2 woman operation. That's why I've been so skittish about accepting sponsorships and why eschew a lot of the expected behavior of a Youtuber (opinion reassurances, begging for subs, ect).
People give me crap for not doing those things and not making the viewer feel valued, but truth be told I never liked having that stuff spewed at me by Youtubers I watched. It always felt so condescending when Youtubers treat their audiences like children.
I've been thinking about it lately because growth on the channel has slowed an a small number of people have jumped ship and unsubbed, and I've been finding myself rather unbothered by that.
Sometimes I'll get Patreon exit surveys that say "I just stopped enjoying her content" and I'm like "fair enough, happy trails."

I've always been bothered when people tell lies about me, but when people look a what I'm selling and go "Not for me" I've never had an issue.
And I've always thought it's because I'm not desperate for popularity. I'm not here to be liked by "my colleagues" in the latest clique that's formed.

I'm fine with where my channel is at.
For me the "next step" for my life has nothing to do with my Youtube channel. It's getting married. Moving in with my wife. Settling down and enjoying time with my friends and family.

My dreams are very small in the grand scheme of things.

 

[Duine In Cudromach]

First, I recommend taking a brief look over the TVTropes page of the fic in which we can learn a couple of interesting things, namely:

+“Stockholm is a series of Comedy/Grimdark Romance fanfics of My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic written by Nintendogal55 and Lily Orchard. “You’ll be surprised to know that the comedy is bad.

+“While Nintendogal is experienced with it, Lily has long been uncomfortable writing smut. Something that 40% of the story consists of.” I haven’t read any of other Liliana’s works so I don’t know how many smut scenes are on them or how explicit they become. If they aren’t that many, this could be the reason why.

+“Lily has a well documented hatred of people who take the law into their own hands and flat out ignore the justice and rehabilitation system.” There is no comment like this about what Nintendogal55 thinks or feels about anything on this story beyond she knows how to write smut and only to refer back to something about Liliana.

+The sections for The Littlest Dazzle and Illicit Disco were never made, which is note worthy because someone spend a lot of work into including every single trope possible into the other sections, even those that are questionable when reading the actual text.

Lily 100% wrote the TVTropes page for this garbage and it's really funny.

I had a look at it back when Opal posted that video arguing with one of Lily's stans and he revealed he had only read the TVTropes page on Stockholm and came away thinking it was a completely different story than it actually is. I headed over to see if that was actually possible and while it explicitly mentions RD's pedophilia the page is written so carefully as to make it seem like it's a commentary on these things and that she takes them super-serious and really digs in to the horrors of what she's writing about, and of course attributes a lot of intent that isn't actually IN the stories.

If you just read the TVTropes page you'd come away thinking Stockholm was one of those stories that uses taboo subject matter openly and in your face in order to force you confront the ugly truths of the world, how people can wind up in such a dark place, and how they can overcome their circumstances. Then you actually open the fic and it's obvious that any 'commentary' Lily might have intended to make is just window dressing to excuse writing some real terrible subject matter and then saying 'but don't worry you guys I'm not getting off to this it's c o m m e n t a r y'

“Lily has a well documented hatred of people who take the law into their own hands and flat out ignore the justice and rehabilitation system.” - Unless they're her own self-inserts, of course. Then they're fully justified.

I'm pretty sure Lily is one of those people too.
Cause I'm fairly sure I remember at least one post of her angrily ranting about how aging child characters up to 18+ for porn still makes you a pedophile.

You know, weirdly enough, in her 'writing tips' thread she actually didn't specifically touch on this when she gave her tips about 'don't sexualize teenagers'/'don't make up anime excuses'. It seems like this would be an obvious thing, for her to be against and yet I'm not sure if she is. She's made some... real weird arguments regarding age and mental age and her argument against it really boils down to 'it's illegal', not... I dunno, the physical and psychological impact on victims?

I don't doubt that she's hopped on the 'aging them up is no excuse' bandwagon before, but on the other hand I feel like she would also accept it if the characters were aged up because then it's no longer illegal-- assuming, of course, the characters happened to be consistent with her interests.


EDIT:
Getting away from Stockholm for a moment, in regards to what DevilsAdvocate just post, this jumped out at me:

People try to psychoanalyze me with shit like "You need to watch more adult media" but the thing is... I do. It's just not part of my job so I don't discuss it on social media. I keep a lot of the stuff I watch secret simply because I don't want to be nagged about them.

She talks about all kinds of personal bullshit but apparently doesn't care when people 'nag' her about it, which she knows they do and somehow didn't figure that if she didn't want people asking her about other stuff she watches, maybe she shouldn't tell them about her personal life to the same end.

Anyway, more important is that it's obvious she doesn't actually consume different media. Maybe she watches certain kid's shows she doesn't want to talk about on her channel, but the thing is, when you actually make discussions and commentary about things, you're going to cite a lot of your diverse sources. You're building a full repertoire of sources out of everything you consume and even if they aren't necessarily in the same genre or age rage you can still pull up different examples and cite different sources to make your point.

But when it comes to Lily she literally only talks about a few children's shows (and not even that diverse of a portfolio), World of Warcraft, and Star Wars. Maybe an argument could be made that these have enough pop culture standing to be universally understood (by her target audience, at least), but even so it's the same four or five sources. That's it. Her 'Writing Tips' thread is kind of infamous for how every person who responded to it could instantly say 'She's talking about Steven Universe. She's talking about World of Warcraft. Steven Universe again. She-ra. SU. Kim Possible. SU. Star Wars. She-ra.' The one time she talked about books she'd read, it was just a short list of common high school reading requirements.

Since she says 'I don't tell you because I don't wat to be bothered', she can get away with not backing up her statement, but it's blatantly obvious that the only thing she talks about -- even when vagueposting -- are a handful of properties, and her analysis is hyper-fixated on properties only as pertinent to a perceived demographic. When she complains about more 'mature' subject matter, it's almost always in context of fanfiction.

I don't really think there's anything wrong with focusing on one thing and understanding it in and out-- children's media has very different needs than stuff made for adults. But it's abundantly clear that she doesn't even understand children's media and can't even support her arguments and theories beyond that by citing more mature and well-respected work. I think this is really well codified in that video she just made about 'LGBT representation'... and the only things she talked about were well-known cartoons (plus one semi-obscure one). No YA books or movies that would fall in the same demographic, no wandering into more obscure works, certainly nothing aimed at adults... and this wasn't just a case of 'these popular shows could be doing better for the community'. When you look at how she seems to think that LGBT representation is almost nonexistent, where her doing 'romance trope but gay' is worthy of praise, when she makes insane statements like how the romance genre is 'underserved', it's obvious that she only consumes children's media, only mainstream Western children's media, and has probably never so much as walked into a bookstore in her life.

 

[SubarashiiRage]

Good for her to have realistic expectations with her YouTube career
but this thread just shows how Lily has zero passion in what she does, not having the goal of growing the channel doesn’t justify having such low and inconcistent quality standards on average, such a lack of creativity that each video becomes a drag to watch and you can see how Lily repeats herself so much that the subjects she gets stuck in calling bad are already predictable, and adding all the virtue of signaling makes her audience and who is willing to pay for this very scarce content

what's more, constantly insulting your fans by saying that they are worse than the people who send you death threats, throwing tantrums on artists that are out of proportion and being condescending to fandoms for petty reasons

Lily should be grateful to still have an audience but she says:
"People give me crap for not doing those things and not making the viewer feel valued, but truth be told I never liked having that stuff spewed at me by Youtubers I watched. It always felt so condescending when Youtubers treat their audiences like children."

saying "thank you" to the people who give you money is not an act of manipulation it is just good manners and a sign of character, who does this does not do it because they aim for the top, the audience does not want to feel like they are wasting time and money with someone who has no passion or gratitude for their content

Lily only shows a positive attitude towards her audience when they inflate her ego by saying how everything she says is correct and how everyone who criticizes her is wrong, cultivating this type of fan only alienates her community in a cult of personality.

even if Lily had bigger aspirations she wouldn’t get far, imagine Lily trying to collaborate with other Youtubers outside her comfort zone or having to do more frequent and relevant content, having to do all this work and research to not get stale

so it's good that she only wants to pay the rent, she already says that her current career is just stress

 

[Typical Anime Trap]

+Twilight and Ascentia enter the scene. Ascentia immediately knows that Fluttershy had sex and looks like she is already suspicious of Rainbow, but Twilight yanks her collar so she drops the subject. This is a thing on their relationship: Ascentia will say something inappropiate and Twilight will punish her for it, sometimes in quite painful ways, in front of anyone who cares to watch. Twilight many times seems quite angry about Ascentia’s remarks and comments.

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Wait, how? The last comment gives me a logical crisis existence.
She make a bad joke and later says "please don't leave me"? what the actual fuck?

 

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I can't tell if this Lily just not appreciating a dark joke or implying something more serious.
On that note, is there a lot known about her real-life father?

 

[Typical Anime Trap]

I can't tell if this Lily just not appreciating a dark joke or implying something more serious.
On that note, is there a lot known about her real-life father?

Its not even a dark joke, its stupid and light hearted if anything. I mean its completely normal for two grown adults to make stupid sexual jokes/puns, maybe a little bit immature but nothing to scared about ending a relationship over.

Also from what I've seen, no. I would assume Lily writes him off as being just like her mother in ideology if not a bit more distant. Especially since whenever she mentions familial abuse she mentions both of her parents and usually doesn't single out her mother or father. Father figures are also never blamed or even so much as given a second glance in most of her works so if I were to say what Lily probably thinks of her father it would be that she thinks he's abusive and cold/emotionally unavailable. She definitely has mommy issues/issues with women in general but for the most part I think she's actually a lot more OK with the men in her life than she would ever care to admit.

 

[thebananaonion]

Its not even a dark joke, its stupid and light hearted if anything. I mean its completely normal for two grown adults to make stupid sexual jokes/puns, maybe a little bit immature but nothing to scared about ending a relationship over.

Also from what I've seen, no. I would assume Lily writes him off as being just like her mother in ideology if not a bit more distant. Especially since whenever she mentions familial abuse she mentions both of her parents and usually doesn't single out her mother or father. Father figures are also never blamed or even so much as given a second glance in most of her works so if I were to say what Lily probably thinks of her father it would be that she thinks he's abusive and cold/emotionally unavailable. She definitely has mommy issues/issues with women in general but for the most part I think she's actually a lot more OK with the men in her life than she would ever care to admit.

hell im suprised mikaila would say a joke like that considering she's asexual like... being choked wouldnt be a turn on for her as why would anything turn you on when you dont want sex?

and the comic is just bad because lily already hates pokephilia (despite writing it once and softcore madhouse shit) and this implies even jokeing abut it is a nono... even tho in the pokemon universe at one point dating pokemon like Gardevour was a legit thing. but i'm trying to logic out a poormanswoman attemt at a fanfiction so what do i know

 

[Typical Anime Trap]

hell im suprised mikaila would say a joke like that considering she's asexual like... being choked wouldnt be a turn on for her as why would anything turn you on when you dont want sex?

and the comic is just bad because lily already hates pokephilia (despite writing it once and softcore madhouse shit) and this implies even jokeing abut it is a nono... even tho in the pokemon universe at one point dating pokemon like Gardevour was a legit thing. but i'm trying to logic out a poormanswoman attemt at a fanfiction so what do i know

Asexual does not equal a lack of a sex drive. Its hard to describe but asexual people can enjoy sexual activities/get turned on but they dont actually like participating in the act of having sex. Also Mikaila thirtsts after Sylvanas, Jaina, and Eda from the owl house a lot. She makes sexually explicit comments and remarks outside of the comic all the time, it's really not that farfetched.

 

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Writing the In A Minute for Revenge of the Sith. Gonna be livetweeting just like I did for Attack of the Clones since people got a giggle out of it.
Fucking 12 years later and I still go "This is the crawl! Crawl! Opening crawl!"
Okay... I never appreciated before just how big those fucking cruisers are.
Can you imagine if they'd actually re-released this in theatres in 3D? That opening shot would have been even cooler!
Anakin handles missles like a pro and Obi-Wan's floundering like a dying fish lol
"I'm not leaving without you, Master." The very last 'precious child' moment we'll ever see.
I know the technical reason is "different lightsaber forms" but I still always appreciated that in the prequels everyone swings their lightsaber in a different fashion. Anakin doesn't fight the same as Obi Wan, who doesn't fight the same as Dooku, it's a neat touch
Why'd they cut Obi Wan and Anakin mocking the droids "Roger Roger" bit? That's a crying shame.
I love just how completely fucking unnecessary it was for Anakin to jump into the elevator shaft.
Droid 1 - "Hands up, Jedi!"
Droid 2 - Just looks at his buddy in silent condemnation.
"He's trying." AWWWWWWW! Anakin loves that damn droid and that's valid.
"My powers have doubled since the last time we met, Count." After Clone Wars I believe that's "two months ago."
I know the real reason Palpatine goes "Yeah! Yeah!" during the fight, but just think about how rare it would be for a real Senator to see a lightsaber fight with their own eyes. That would have to be an awesome sight.
I hate when people go "You can tell it's a stunt double!"
If they didn't use a stunt double, the fight would look like shit. If the Sequel Trilogy taught us anything it's that the reflexive backlash to the Prequel's choreography was really dumb.
"Yes, but he was unarmed prisoner"
Somehow Palpatine survived falling down an elevator shaft.
"How did this happen, we're smarter than this."
"Apparently not."

Anakin accepts himself for the himbo he is.
"Don't worry, R2 will save us!"
R2 did not save them.
"General Grevious. You're shorter than I expected."
Well the only information you had on him came from a 14 year old girl, Annie.
I'm not attracted to men all that much, but honestly Obi Wan, Anakin, Poe and Finn are the most beautiful men in Star Wars.
That sequence of Obi Wan slamming the electrostaff into the console and beheading the guard droid is fucking AMAZING! I love the swordplay in this film, it's so GOOD!
That whole bridge fight is SO GOOD!
"Somebody needs to be the Poster Boy" Obi Wan, that's not a good argument to avoid publicity. You are a LOT prettier than he is.
"That business on Cato Neimodia doesn't count"
Fun Fact: Obi Wan lost his rebreather, got high on fungus, fought some battle droids, and giggled about it when Anakin showed up to save him.

True story.
I stand by what I said: Christensen is the best actor in all twelve films.
This romance dialogue is fucking cheesy and corny and awkward and cringey and I fucking LOVE. EVERY. SECOND. OF. IT. Inject this cheesy crap directly into my veins!
Real talk: Anakin and Padme's relationship was always written in the vein of "this is a bad idea. They shouldn't be doing this" but it's also the only romantic plotline in a trilogy that actually feels heartfelt. Like they're trying. And you want it to work but you know it won't.
Compare that to the OT and Sequel Trilogy which went with one character creeping, perving or outright being violently hostile to the other and then "I unno, like... hetero nonsense?"
Anakin being violent toward Padme signifies the end of their relationship and that seems like a memo that Empire and TROS didn't.
People say Lucas can't direct romance, but honestly I think he did the best job out of the other directors.
I like that Padme's alarmed by the dream as well. People forget this, but Anakin has had dreams like this before and they've come true and he's understandably freaked out by it.
On reflection I think better of Yoda in the counselling scene. It really looks like he's trying to tell Anakin that someone is playing on his attachments to make him vulnerable. But the lack of compassion for how upset Anakin is ultimately causes it to flounder.
Anakin's dismissal of Democracy in AotC comes back in full force when he sees Palpatine's growing executive power as a good thing because "less deliberating and more action." Anakin's dislike of Democracy is understandable because Democracy didn't get him out of slavery.
"I'm overwhelmed, sir."
The deadpan makes it really funny.
"You're on this council, but we do not grant you the rank of Master."
People act like nobody can tell that Palpatine's a Sith Lord, but the entire film the Jedi are like "Palpatine is sus."
"Sometimes I wonder what's happening to the Jedi Order."
"Maybe the Republic has become the very evil we're trying to destroy."

Amazing how some people think this element of the trilogy was accidental.
I love the scene where Anakin and Palpatine are just discussing philosophy about the Force. It's my favorite thing in any Star Wars property. KOTOR 2, SWTOR, any time characters are discussing the nature of the Force is really interesting to me.
This is a very long movie and going through it to write for IAM takes a long time. I need a break to work on the next GOW.
Anakin - "I've been arrogant."
Obi Wan - *Raises eyebrows sarcastically*

The acting in this movie is fucking great.
This is the last time they ever see each other as friends. The next time they meet is on Mustafar. I just...
"Obi Wan's been here hasn't he?"
Fun fact: There's a deleted scene in the script where Obi Wan's visit to Padme involves him revealing that he knows about their relationship.
The galaxy has advanced cybernetics and an keep people alive in mobile iron lungs but they can't figure out this whole "dying in childbirth" thing.
"Hello there."
"General Kenobi."
The most iconic moment in Star Wars. Ewan McGregor is a fucking gift to humanity.
Nerds in 2015: "How come Finn and Rey can use a lightsaber?!"
George Lucas in 2005: "Hey, what if a droid was using a lightsaber? That'd be sweet."
I guess they DID make a fine addition to his collection
Obi Wan is like the best duellist ever.
I love how Anakin is able to figure out that Palpatine's a Sith Lord, and yet not figure out that everything about their interactions is a fucking con.
Ten minutes into a street brawl and Obi Wan remembers "Oh right! I have Space Magic!"
Can you imagine how quickly this would have been over if Obi Wan had just electrocuted the damn droid?
The first hour of ROTS is
Anakin - "I wanna do the right thing!"
Mace Windu - "No."
Credit to Kit Fisto, he lasted longer than the other two chumps.
As much as I like the recent looks into the film as the Jedi being the bad guys, I roll my eyes when some people characterize Windu's actions as "Trying to kill the democratically elected leader because he's the wrong religion."
Sidious was pulling the strings of a galactic war on both sides to consolidate power. Some people act like it was a bad ideo to kill Space Trump because "democracy" yeah no. Kill Space Trump. In a democracy, the head of state is expendable.
Actually shit I remember years ago people were like "How was Palpatine too weak to keep fighting, but then suddenly gets his strength back right away?" This was an actual criticism of the film's writing, despite what we all know about Palpatine.
Out of all the Jedi executions in this film, why the fuck is Aayla Secura so... gruesome? None of the others are that gruesome.

George, WTF?!
That scene in the Council Chambers is a perfect representation of OT Star Wars fans whenever they see children anywhere.
Padme thinking Anakin was killed in the attack on the Jedi Temple just got me right in the fucking gut.
Jedi Temple - Under attack and on fire
Bail Organa - "Well I gotta go investigate this!"
The Jedi would have gone extinct if it hadn't been for Bail Fucking Organa.
Anakin Saurfang
People complain about there always being more surviving Jedi in the galaxy like Ahsoka and Not!Starkiller from Fallen Order, but in this film Obi Wan and Yoda set up a beacon telling surviving Jedi to stay away so they always set up the idea that there are surviving Jedi.
The films did a really good job setting up Anakin's fall to the Dark Side that isn't really appreciated.

Clone Wars spent a lot of time "foreshadowing" Anakin's fall to the Dark Side, but ultimately doing everything it could to make his fall as unbelievable as possible.
Side Note, is it foreshadowing when you

1. Already know it's going to happen
2. Is literally just playing the Imperial March melody and vaguely throwing up images of Vader's helmet?

Clone Wars was a good show, but how they handled Anakin was... not.
"So this is how liberty dies. With thunderous applause" is the most raw fucking line ever written.
The more I watch these movies, the more I dislike Clone Wars.
"Send me to kill the Emperor. I will not kill Anakin."
I always liked the whole "He ceased to be Anakin Skywalker and became Darth Vader" because it's always shown just how in-denial Obi Wan is that his friend could be manipulated into evil. Treating Anakin and Vader as seperate characters has always been a fallacy
And this goes double for his Darth-Revan cosplaying grandson.

After which, he began to simp for Moviebob again, defend his Bonnie character, and trying to make himself look humble by saying he's "not desperate for popularity" and just wants to "settle down and enjoy time with his friends and family."

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Over the last three years I've come to the realization that all I'm interested in as a Youtuber is making a living. I'm not interested in constant growth, I'm not interested in building a business or getting deals, I just want to get by.
I've always held the goal that if one of my revenue streams (Ad Revenue or Patron) consistently broke 50k a year, I'd flat out disable the other. Either go ad free or delete Patreon.
I've never been all that interested in joining communities or cranking up the production value. This is my job. It's how I pay to do the things I love to do, but the two are very seperate.
People try to psychoanalyze me with shit like "You need to watch more adult media" but the thing is... I do. It's just not part of my job so I don't discuss it on social media. I keep a lot of the stuff I watch secret simply because I don't want to be nagged about them.
When I think about my achievements in my career, they're all really small things. Like... my videos are sometimes shown in college lectures. That's pretty neat.
My name's in the credits of a @the_moviebob video. That's pretty neat too.
But when I think about my goals? Where I want to be?

I want to be in a cottage out by the woods with my fiance, my girlfriend, her datemate and three puppies with a vegetable garden and an archery range.

That's my goal.
I've never been invested in making Youtube my entire life. Pretty much from the start I was trying to carve out a living. I didn't fall into Youtube, I actively prusued it. But I've always stopped at "paying the rent."
At some point I looked at other creators I was watching at the time and thought "I don't want to be where you are." I don't think I'll ever reach the point some Youtubers are at where they have millions of subscribers, pull in over $150k a year...
...and have elaborately, luxuriously created videos. My wheelhouse, children's animation, has a cap. It's a small community. I'll never reach that kind of height.

And truth be told I don't want to.
I'm content making a reasonable salary. I'm content being a 1-2 woman operation. That's why I've been so skittish about accepting sponsorships and why eschew a lot of the expected behavior of a Youtuber (opinion reassurances, begging for subs, ect).
People give me crap for not doing those things and not making the viewer feel valued, but truth be told I never liked having that stuff spewed at me by Youtubers I watched. It always felt so condescending when Youtubers treat their audiences like children.
I've been thinking about it lately because growth on the channel has slowed an a small number of people have jumped ship and unsubbed, and I've been finding myself rather unbothered by that.
Sometimes I'll get Patreon exit surveys that say "I just stopped enjoying her content" and I'm like "fair enough, happy trails."

I've always been bothered when people tell lies about me, but when people look a what I'm selling and go "Not for me" I've never had an issue.
And I've always thought it's because I'm not desperate for popularity. I'm not here to be liked by "my colleagues" in the latest clique that's formed.

I'm fine with where my channel is at.
For me the "next step" for my life has nothing to do with my Youtube channel. It's getting married. Moving in with my wife. Settling down and enjoying time with my friends and family.

My dreams are very small in the grand scheme of things.

I like that Lily is to MovieBob as MovieBob is to Lindsay Ellis.
A kiss-ass no one wants to acknowledge.

Also, what do you say when no one respects you? "Eh, at least the money's good."
Boy that's fucking sad. I hope skipping college was worth it.

 

[thebananaonion]

Asexual does not equal a lack of a sex drive. Its hard to describe but asexual people can enjoy sexual activities/get turned on but they dont actually like participating in the act of having sex. Also Mikaila thirtsts after Sylvanas, Jaina, and Eda from the owl house a lot. She makes sexually explicit comments and remarks outside of the comic all the time, it's really not that farfetched.

pardon my ignorance then. i dont follow mikaila's shinanigans enough to know that factoid about her. lesson is to maybe take more interest in lily's gfs as it may void me of confusion, and others, later on

 

[Son Goku Baku]

>the next scene is Fluttershy going to a psychologist sesion with Dr. Firebrand

...Isn't 'Firebrand' the name of Josh's pony avatar? Is this a cameo? Bringing Josh into this mess...for shame, Lily.

It is and I didn't even know that until you mentioned it. I didn't cared a lot about that scene because there is nothing especial about it except that Firebrand just keep writing on his pad the whole time. No description of him or anything particular, beyond the fact he makes the right questions and comes to the right conclusions to help Fluttershy on that one single scene.

I know that later on the psychologist who treats Rainbow Dash for her pedophilia is Silver Quill and that is the only name I recognized from the people on the MLP commentary community Liliana had a fall out with. Back then obviously Liliana was in better relationship with all these people, I can only imagine this is the way she thought was appropiate to simp for them.

I can't imagine what would feel like to be included on something like this without permission.