Newman's Own
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- Joined
- Apr 10, 2020
Don't get your hopes up.Fuck, you just reminded me that I have Downcast 1 here, somewhere, unread. I lost almost all interest between backing and receipt.
If the second book was no better than the first then a third book would be a complete waste.The second half felt very rushed. There could have easily been a third book, but instead He introduced new plot points like a resistance group on watch’s surface and then having them not doing too much to further the story’s plot.
Most of CG and indie writers in general have no idea about pacing or how to write a three act structure in a single book and/or a multi-book arc.
Indie means amateur mostly and the biggest weakness in CG is that even most pros lack the necessary craft to write compelling stories as @TheCosmicWarrior pointed out about @FROG before he cucked like a bitch and supplicated himself for the sheckles. He couldn't pull those videos down fast enough.