Ooookay... I watched your movie!
First impression: Very good! You do a good job at telling the CWC mythology in its entirety. I could learn a few things from it I didn't yet know about CWC.
My favorite part: When Liquid plays his own interpretation of "So Need a Cute Girl" and you superimpose images of Chris over him with an increasingly angry expression.
I also enjoyed the interview with the Special Ed teacher, he seems to be a pleasant, intelligent man. Maybe there could even have been more from him.
There are some minor details I would change:
* At the beginning you say something along the lines of: "put yourself in his shoes... without empathy". That's a bit of
contradictio in adjecto I think, because putting oneself in another person's shoes is the definition of empathy.
* You spell Leonard Bearstein's name wrong ("-stien" instead of "-stein" which is derived from the RL conductor Leonard Bernstein).
* I think you should explain Chris's pickle phobia so viewers know why the trolls dunked the medallion into a pickle jar.
* The image of the Nazi newspaper at the end is a bit much, but I may be oversensitive here because I'm German.
* Maybe you should emphasize how much Chris's view on homosexuality changed (...or did it?!...) during the Tomgirl Saga, he now claims he's an LGBT supporter... and a lesbian! Maybe it should also be pointed out that the Tomgirl Saga divides into two parts: The first, when he just crossdressed and still claimed to be a heterosexual male, and the second, recent, more extreme one which had him come out as a "Transgender Lesbian".
* I think there could be a little bit more emphasis on Chris's Sonic fandom. After all, the hedgehog became a defining leitmotiv of his life. Also, more about the plot of Sonichu could be said.
But these details aside, I like the movie, I enjoyed watching it. Great work!
mm, yeah.
