I'm not a comic guy, but I think the coloring is somewhere between okay and mediocre. The line art is still bad, and the anatomy is strange and inconsistent. I wonder if he fixed those jarring perspective mistakes (probably not). He's still late, though.
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Something as simple as lowering the values in the background could make a big difference in the final product by drawing more attention to the character.
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(for example, a quick modification)
I'd also consider using a different light source color, like blue, instead of a bland white light. But that's up to the artist.