A decent human being should pay for the time based on what was done and demonstrable during the time they were employed. But I'd not be shocked if it was totally rewritten to avoid paying by the page and any chance of royalties too.
If he did, then there's a royalty factor for any future works (lol unlikely) and a price tag for the IP itself should it be demonstrable. Which given the shitshow and lack of documentation means good luck.
This new kiwi comment editor sucks ass.
Even if the script was rewritten, unless the entire story changed then it's still Nasser's creation. Changing the words to tell the same story isn't enough. That is easy enough to figure out if provided the original Nasser draft.
Nasser surrendered the IP and gave it to Donal for future works outright in exchange for the previously agreed-upon 50/50 split on this issue. I still maintain my opinion that their implicit agreement said nothing about one getting a larger cut than the other by way of a separate fee for drawing or valuing one side's contribution more than the other. "50/50" means 50/50. Even if they shared the creation of the characters that doesn't change the implicit meaning of "50/50" that we've seen in their communications.
I know nothing about the business side of the mainstream comic book industry but neither will a judge (nor will I think they would care). This whole agreement exists to circumvent that mainstream in the first place. I'm willing to bet that after reading everything provided here a judge would agree: 50/50, each side walks away with the same amount after documented expenses are excluded.
It's reasonable to draw the conclusion that 50/50 split refers to profits, and those don't include the cost of making the comic book.
Not if the communication between the two that constitutes their business agreement makes zero mention of it. "50/50" means both side's contributions are to be valued equally. If Donal would've said in the beginning "We'll split 50/50 of the profits after I pay myself a rate for drawing and you a lesser rate (if any) for writing", then yes. But they didn't.
"I like the way lettering, coloring and printing all fall under "expenses". But the art, the stuff that's being lettered, colored and printed, doesn't. That's appearing out of nowhere, for free."
[Fuck this editor sucks] Don't blame the poster for that, Nasser/Donal are the ones who didn't include the art under expenses. Writing is also "art" to a layman, by the way. You assume that they both knew that when everyone else seems to understand the exact opposite. The story and characters are what that art is based on. You're arguing that that appeared out of nowhere for free too. The agreement implies that one contribute the story and the other contribute the art, with the proceeds received after producing a combination of the two be split 50/50.
EDIT: Nasser, right about now you should say "Oh, by the way my rate for concept writing (before final editing) is $1,000/page. Not my fault you didn't know that Ethan!" That's essentially what they seem to be doing to you.