Burned Docs Japan WW2 Paper

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garbageraider

Give me asspats, I stole a retard's garbage
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"very confusing and unclear"

Just like all of Chris's writing.
 
"This was a very tragic event with guns, insults and... yuck!"

:cryblood:

ETA: he turned in an English paper as Ricardo (Christian) W Chandler, and the teacher was having none of it. Good for them.
 
"In Summation, the Japanese Peoples In 1998 Created Pokemon, So I, Christian Weston Chandler, being True and Honest, forgive Them for All Atrocities This Day, May the 5th, 1999.
 
"The war was a very tragic event with guns, insults, and... yuck!"

"So, the US and Japan really wanted to get it on." KIMMAYYYYYYYYY
 
Those look like blood-stains next to the staple marks.
 
Most essays:
1. Introduction.
2. Main idea.
3. Supporting arguments and additional detail.
4. Conclusion.
Chris, on the other hand, just rambles. He can't organize his thoughts on paper. To make matters worse, his grammar and word choice, along with sentence structure, are horrible. This is what I would expect out of a third or maybe fourth grader, not a high school Junior. It seems like Chris's mental age has been stuck at about 6-8 years old for quite a while.
 
By the way, let's all make note of the fact that Chris offhandedly called the entire nation of Japan barbarians.
 
I find it amusing that he inserted Spanish wherever he could. "Trabajar" cited is especially painful.
 
Ricardo el Historiador said:
So, the war was started only because the privacy of US was invaded.

Poor Chris. Finding that ED page must have been his own personal Pearl Harbor.
 
Tl:dr version of Chris's paper:

"War happened, then everything turned out fine. The end. By Ricardo."
 
"this essay is about the second World War. . . ."
"at near the end of the war, president Woodrow Wilson tried. . . . ."
:stupid:
 
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