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This chapter is 95% pure dialogue and I didn't liked it.
Chapter 8: That Silly Nutcase With The Flashy Thing
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Chapter 8: That Silly Nutcase With The Flashy Thing
+Fluttershy is doing Twilight’s nails and they are talking. This how we found out that Ascentia is on the hospital for braking her leg, but Twilight had nothing to do with it “this time” because Ascentia just tripped and fell down the stairs. We also get to know that the baby Twilight is pregnant with is growing and they don’t know how to call it yet. “Speaking of reproduction”, Twilight asks about inviting little girls to Rainbow’s house so they can fuck and Fluttershy say it was all fine, that they both said they had a lovely time. This makes Twilight reminiscent about her first time on the library and how “she” (we asume Ascentia, not clear) made her see stars. Fluttershy comments she never saw stars until Rainbow fucked her, which is the segway we use to find out that Rainbow has been working on the “weather centre” and this must mean that she is concerned about something because she never work overtime otherwise.
+Twilight doesn’t know yet that Rainbow is a pedophile since Fluttershy just say to ask her about what is bothering her.
+Sweetie Belle appears. She ask how Fluttershy and Rainbow have been and Twilight just repeats the information that was already established before about Rainbow and her job, just adding that now it’s clear it’s a coping mechanism in case you didn’t realized already.
+Sweetie Belle ask Fluttershy if Rainbow got her panties without saying it was her panties. Fluttershy say she didn’t mentioned recieving anything, and then Sweetie Belle lies that it was just the note thanking her. She adds that Rarity yelled at her for two hours straight, and when the others are weirded out, she say it was because she didn’t do a task instead of being because she came home without panties. It’s never explained how Rarity found out and why her response to seeing her 14 year old little sister coming home late at night without underwear is yell at her.
+Rainbow appears. Sweetie Belle immediately goes to hug her and Rainbow reciprocate despite being a creep. I guess she is just too tired from work. We are repeated for the third time that there is something that concerns Rainbow and while Fluttershy is massaging her shoulders, she just let out that she is “a teen pedophile”, which implies that she is a teenager and a pedophile but nobody minds here. Fluttershy remarks she hasn’t done anything illegal yet and Rainbow concede, but she still has fantasies about teenagers and find them sexy.
+Rather than being disgusted or concerned that this woman who invited little girls to her house to have sex just admitted to being a pedophile, Twilight just wants to know why does that bother her and Rainbow say she hates herself, as she should.
“But I thought you were feeling better?” Sweetie Belle asked, “When we had that talk? You were joking around with me by the end of it.”
“Wait, you know about it?” Twilight asked in surprise.
“Fluttershy explained it to me last week. I kinda turned Rainbow on by accident,” Sweetie Belle said, shrinking down at Twilight’s look.
+ Why is Twilight here reacting like she did something wrong?
+Rainbow say that being a creepy pedophile is not something you just get over with or can avoid, and when Sweetie Belle almost compares it at how she felt when she find out she was a lesbian through looking at her sister naked, Rainbow say this:
“Don’t even dare make that comparison, Sweetie Belle,” Rainbow said sternly, “Being gay and having desires toward minors are two completely different things. You’re not hurting anyone being gay. I’m not hurting anyone being gay. And we can both express that with people we care about. But I can’t express this with anyone without hurting someone.”
Shrinking back, Sweetie Belle bit her lip nervously, “You’re right, I’m sorry…”
+This is just what the gay movement needed: for an ethical pedophile to say they not all gay people are pedophiles. Liliana probably caused gay marriage to happen thanks to this PSA.
+After this, Rainbow say she doesn’t know how to control being a pedophile and Sweetie Belle keeps comforting her by saying that she doesn’t want her to hate herself and it’s not her fault.
“Believe me, kiddo, I know that,” Rainbow sighed, patting her on the back, “What I can do about it is what I’m wondering about.”
“Why don’t you just… you know,” Sweetie Belle tapped Rainbow’s hand.
“I do, I just feel dirty afterward.”
“But masturbation, regardless of what you’re pleasuring yourself to, is harmless,” Fluttershy threw in.
+Sweetie Belle asks why she feels dirty about masturbating fantasizing about children she knows in real life.
“I just do, okay? Besides, I watched you girls grow up from being little squirts and now you’re teens. That can’t possibly be anything but creepy,” Rainbow griped, not looking at anyone.
Twilight and Fluttershy didn’t know what they could say to make her feel better. However, Sweetie Belle just decided to keep going.
“I don’t mind,” she said, hugging Rainbow tightly, “If it makes you feel good and helps you relax, I don’t mind you thinking about me…”
‘Everyone in this town is messed up in the head,’ Twilight thought as she tried her best to hold her poker face.
+I don’t know what is the point of this self-awareness thing. It’s not particularly funny and it doens’t add anything to any given conflict. They’re all bad people who know it and will only feel bad about it only when Liliana cares to remember that hurting people is supposed to be bad, but the only thing it does is make it all the more exhausting to go through on the text.
+Anyway, Sweetie Belle kisses her cheek and hugs her. Despite this being a big issue just the past chapter, now Rainbow is just thinking outloud about going to a shrink and supposes she must be crazy or something. That is when Ascentia appears, “stumbling in the room and sitting on a chair”, no mention of crutches or a cast for her broken leg because I guess Liliana forgot, to say that there are programs to help people with those desires but only if they are offenders. Rainbow hasn’t done anything yet so they won’t help her.
+It’s in this moment that we find out that the age of consent on Equestria is 14, something Twilight, the princess, forgot because the age of consent of each area are the jurisdiction of princess Luna. Despite Ascentia telling Rainbow she has nothing to feel guilty about, Rainbow rationalize “they are kid even if the law say they aren’t”, which isn’t how age of consent works.
+Ascentia continues saying that nobody is going to strike Rainbow down for a moral transgression, which is going to be completely forgotten on the next part of this fic, but for now Rainbow keeps insisting that she won’t do anything even if it’s illegal. Sweetie Belle celebrates that she doesn’t have to feel guilty now. Rainbow has an almost fourth wall breaking moment by saying that most people wouldn’t encourage that behaviour and no one would in a sane world.
+Sweetie Belle clarifies that she doesn’t plan to share herself or her girlfriend, contradicting herself from the last chapter. They might talk about fucking adults but it’s not like they will actually do it and this is foreshadowing for later. Then there is a little tangent about them talking about celebrities they would fuck and Ascentia say a name that makes her name drop the chapter, gaining odd looks from everyone else.
“Oh what? The woman who assaults her wife, the woman who’s cheating on her boyfriend, and the woman who fantasizes about teenagers are about to give me funny looks?”
“You’re cheating on Big Mac?!” Sweetie Belle yelled out, wide-eyed.
+They confess to her that Rainbow and Fluttershy are indeed fucking. Sweetie Belle makes to Fluttershy the same questions that she did for Apple Bloom, which means that for the second time we hear her say yes to everything to let us confirm that she is willing to be a doormat and a caregiver for Rainbow. They admit they love each other. Sweetie Belle has to comment that they are cute together, but now it’s the problema of what to do about Big Mac. Sweetie Belle that Rainbow goes too for support when she does to break up with him so they agreed to go tomorrow morning to tell him.
+Everyone is happy about this decision. Before Rainbow goes to sleep, Sweetie Belle ask her if she recieved her note and Rainbow say she did.
+She tries to rest but has an erection that won’t let her. She tries to convince “the voice on her head” that she doesn’t need to take out the panties to masturbate to them. She does in the end and the voice goes quiet. The narration makes a point to mention she doesn’t feel dirty or guilty this time, so I guess that is over with that conflict. After masturbating to a little girl’s panties, Rainbow is sad that she is alone in bed but at least she is glad Fluttershy admitted to love her. The end.
+Twilight doesn’t know yet that Rainbow is a pedophile since Fluttershy just say to ask her about what is bothering her.
+Sweetie Belle appears. She ask how Fluttershy and Rainbow have been and Twilight just repeats the information that was already established before about Rainbow and her job, just adding that now it’s clear it’s a coping mechanism in case you didn’t realized already.
+Sweetie Belle ask Fluttershy if Rainbow got her panties without saying it was her panties. Fluttershy say she didn’t mentioned recieving anything, and then Sweetie Belle lies that it was just the note thanking her. She adds that Rarity yelled at her for two hours straight, and when the others are weirded out, she say it was because she didn’t do a task instead of being because she came home without panties. It’s never explained how Rarity found out and why her response to seeing her 14 year old little sister coming home late at night without underwear is yell at her.
+Rainbow appears. Sweetie Belle immediately goes to hug her and Rainbow reciprocate despite being a creep. I guess she is just too tired from work. We are repeated for the third time that there is something that concerns Rainbow and while Fluttershy is massaging her shoulders, she just let out that she is “a teen pedophile”, which implies that she is a teenager and a pedophile but nobody minds here. Fluttershy remarks she hasn’t done anything illegal yet and Rainbow concede, but she still has fantasies about teenagers and find them sexy.
+Rather than being disgusted or concerned that this woman who invited little girls to her house to have sex just admitted to being a pedophile, Twilight just wants to know why does that bother her and Rainbow say she hates herself, as she should.
“But I thought you were feeling better?” Sweetie Belle asked, “When we had that talk? You were joking around with me by the end of it.”
“Wait, you know about it?” Twilight asked in surprise.
“Fluttershy explained it to me last week. I kinda turned Rainbow on by accident,” Sweetie Belle said, shrinking down at Twilight’s look.
+ Why is Twilight here reacting like she did something wrong?
+Rainbow say that being a creepy pedophile is not something you just get over with or can avoid, and when Sweetie Belle almost compares it at how she felt when she find out she was a lesbian through looking at her sister naked, Rainbow say this:
“Don’t even dare make that comparison, Sweetie Belle,” Rainbow said sternly, “Being gay and having desires toward minors are two completely different things. You’re not hurting anyone being gay. I’m not hurting anyone being gay. And we can both express that with people we care about. But I can’t express this with anyone without hurting someone.”
Shrinking back, Sweetie Belle bit her lip nervously, “You’re right, I’m sorry…”
+This is just what the gay movement needed: for an ethical pedophile to say they not all gay people are pedophiles. Liliana probably caused gay marriage to happen thanks to this PSA.
+After this, Rainbow say she doesn’t know how to control being a pedophile and Sweetie Belle keeps comforting her by saying that she doesn’t want her to hate herself and it’s not her fault.
“Believe me, kiddo, I know that,” Rainbow sighed, patting her on the back, “What I can do about it is what I’m wondering about.”
“Why don’t you just… you know,” Sweetie Belle tapped Rainbow’s hand.
“I do, I just feel dirty afterward.”
“But masturbation, regardless of what you’re pleasuring yourself to, is harmless,” Fluttershy threw in.
+Sweetie Belle asks why she feels dirty about masturbating fantasizing about children she knows in real life.
“I just do, okay? Besides, I watched you girls grow up from being little squirts and now you’re teens. That can’t possibly be anything but creepy,” Rainbow griped, not looking at anyone.
Twilight and Fluttershy didn’t know what they could say to make her feel better. However, Sweetie Belle just decided to keep going.
“I don’t mind,” she said, hugging Rainbow tightly, “If it makes you feel good and helps you relax, I don’t mind you thinking about me…”
‘Everyone in this town is messed up in the head,’ Twilight thought as she tried her best to hold her poker face.
+I don’t know what is the point of this self-awareness thing. It’s not particularly funny and it doens’t add anything to any given conflict. They’re all bad people who know it and will only feel bad about it only when Liliana cares to remember that hurting people is supposed to be bad, but the only thing it does is make it all the more exhausting to go through on the text.
+Anyway, Sweetie Belle kisses her cheek and hugs her. Despite this being a big issue just the past chapter, now Rainbow is just thinking outloud about going to a shrink and supposes she must be crazy or something. That is when Ascentia appears, “stumbling in the room and sitting on a chair”, no mention of crutches or a cast for her broken leg because I guess Liliana forgot, to say that there are programs to help people with those desires but only if they are offenders. Rainbow hasn’t done anything yet so they won’t help her.
+It’s in this moment that we find out that the age of consent on Equestria is 14, something Twilight, the princess, forgot because the age of consent of each area are the jurisdiction of princess Luna. Despite Ascentia telling Rainbow she has nothing to feel guilty about, Rainbow rationalize “they are kid even if the law say they aren’t”, which isn’t how age of consent works.
+Ascentia continues saying that nobody is going to strike Rainbow down for a moral transgression, which is going to be completely forgotten on the next part of this fic, but for now Rainbow keeps insisting that she won’t do anything even if it’s illegal. Sweetie Belle celebrates that she doesn’t have to feel guilty now. Rainbow has an almost fourth wall breaking moment by saying that most people wouldn’t encourage that behaviour and no one would in a sane world.
+Sweetie Belle clarifies that she doesn’t plan to share herself or her girlfriend, contradicting herself from the last chapter. They might talk about fucking adults but it’s not like they will actually do it and this is foreshadowing for later. Then there is a little tangent about them talking about celebrities they would fuck and Ascentia say a name that makes her name drop the chapter, gaining odd looks from everyone else.
“Oh what? The woman who assaults her wife, the woman who’s cheating on her boyfriend, and the woman who fantasizes about teenagers are about to give me funny looks?”
“You’re cheating on Big Mac?!” Sweetie Belle yelled out, wide-eyed.
+They confess to her that Rainbow and Fluttershy are indeed fucking. Sweetie Belle makes to Fluttershy the same questions that she did for Apple Bloom, which means that for the second time we hear her say yes to everything to let us confirm that she is willing to be a doormat and a caregiver for Rainbow. They admit they love each other. Sweetie Belle has to comment that they are cute together, but now it’s the problema of what to do about Big Mac. Sweetie Belle that Rainbow goes too for support when she does to break up with him so they agreed to go tomorrow morning to tell him.
+Everyone is happy about this decision. Before Rainbow goes to sleep, Sweetie Belle ask her if she recieved her note and Rainbow say she did.
+She tries to rest but has an erection that won’t let her. She tries to convince “the voice on her head” that she doesn’t need to take out the panties to masturbate to them. She does in the end and the voice goes quiet. The narration makes a point to mention she doesn’t feel dirty or guilty this time, so I guess that is over with that conflict. After masturbating to a little girl’s panties, Rainbow is sad that she is alone in bed but at least she is glad Fluttershy admitted to love her. The end.
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