+Scootaloo is complaining about how there is nothing to do with her friends. Sweetie Belle suggest go to the arcade machines and to pay for both of them with her tips, that she apparently has earned by singing on the lobby of her new shop.
+Scootaloo brags about being good at pinball, Apple Bloom accuses her of cheating and Sweetie Belle suggest they bet on it. Sweetie Belle won since she’s the only one with money to buy ice cream, the prize, and this whole thing was nothing else but set up to have Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo suggest they go to visit the creep, I mean Rainbow, to help Fluttershy move her stuff.
+Apple Bloom’s still not happy and both of her “best friends” completely ignore her wishes to insist that she has to move on. When that doesn’t work these friends “jokingly” go about literally dragging Apple Bloom by her hair to the place. There is a comment about Applejack greeting them at a store so I guess that’s one way to deal with how one of the “best friends” reacted to the cheating.
+When they decide that won’t work because Apple Bloom’ll fight back, Sweetie Belle decide to emotionally blackmail Apple Bloom by reminding her that Rainbow, the pedophile creep, gave them her house to have sex, and wasn’t that so nice of her? Wasn’t it nice when Fluttershy used to babysit them? She does this until Apple Bloom is actually crying and admitting she does miss them. Scootaloo then says that they should go to make up, but then Apple Bloom grabs Sweetie Belle and kiss her because that’s exactly what you want to do after your girlfriend made you cry. Scootaloo says that if they’re going to have sex she want to join.
+At first the two of them are surprised, but they agreed to and they decide to just have sex there on the treehouse. They have sex and agreed to have a threeway relationship. Since the moment Sweetie Belle said “We have here” until they ends finish with “More cutastic Crusader Threesome sex coming up!”, that I guess Sweetie Belle said, the whole scene was 2043 words longs. I don’t know what Scootaloo’s pussy taste like because I refuse to read that again, but I assume it’s some candy because all pussies taste like that here.
+In front of the Creepow’s door, the two girls are still insisting on Apple Bloom entering. Finally she knows and Pedophilash is there, saying that Fluttershy has been feeling sick on bed but she’ll be happy to hear about Apple Bloom accepting them again.
+Despite just telling us that Fluttershy has been sick on bed, and therefore should probably be left alone in order to rest, Creebow’s an established selfish stupid cunt she decides to put the girls in risk anyway by sending Apple Bloom to her room where Fluttershy is. Fluttershy looks awful. She first says that it’s “grownup stuff” why she’s like that and then says it’s food poisoning, because apparently only grownups can have that.
+If you aren’t five or read some spoilers about this fic, then you know this set up for Fluttershy discovering that she’s pregnant but they’re all idiots who don’t realice it yet. The timeline doesn’t make any sense since nausea’s usually a third month sympton of pregnancy, but vomiting is the established tropes to signal pregnancy and Liliana couldn’t be bothered to think anything else so this’s what we have.
+Apple Bloom and Fluttershy made up and hug, despite Fluttershy supposedly being sick. Apple Bloom then ask her if it’s normal to have a relationship with two people and Fluttershy tells her that it’s natural for girls their age to experiment. She think it’s “sweet”. Apple Bloom’s still concerned about her grandma’s opinion and I honestly do not care anymore because that never amounts to anything at all. But then Fluttershy vomits on a can and Apple Bloom leaves her alone.
+Downstairs Scootaloo is talking to the creep about some game where she helped her team win. Scootaloo teases her friends about how they were making out so much she almost expected them to fuck right there, and the pedophile decides to joke too about how AppleJack should put sedatives on their cider because they’re in too much sugar. Sweetie Belle does notice how disgusting that sounds coming out of her, but not the other since they aren’t aware of her “secret” yet.
+Then they talk about how’s Fluttershy and Sweetie Belle, the fourteen year old girl, has to suggest to this 23 year old woman about pregnancy because apparently the adult never even thought about it. When Scootaloo calls her attention (which I don’t get why, I guess Scootaloo got jelous for a second or something), Sweetie Belle speculate that maybe Fluttershy’s on her period. Scootaloo’s confused because apparently she never imagined that period cramps could get so bad that make you vomit. Sweetie Belle says that sometimes hers does. Despite these being two fourteen year old girls, they react like ten year old boys with a big EW.
“I know, I know, gross!” Sweetie Belle laughed sheepishly, waving it off. “You know, some girls get bad cramps? I get bad… throwing up! Yuck!”
Scootaloo made a face and held her stomach, “Can we talk about something else before I start to throw up?”
+I’m not an expert, but I feel like this reveals a lot about how Liliana didn’t had female friends growing up. Or a girlfriend. They're fourteen. They should know this stuff already. She was on her twenties when she wrote this.
+Anyway, Apple Bloom then apoligizes for… having perfectly normal feelings and doing nothing else about it, asking if Raincreep can forgive her for having feelings. Raincreep says that of course since she wasn’t the one to kick her on the nads. Sweetie Belle tries to deflect the issue, but then Rainpedo realized Scootaloo didn’t know about her penis so decides to just drop that information just like that. She also mentions she has balls and can get women pregnant because foreshadowing?
+Scootaloo repeats what Ascentia said on the first chapters about how Creephile is a lesbian’s fantasy and fangirls a little bit about it.
...If they didn’t mind that,” Scootaloo made a face, “Oh well… I guess that’s kinda cool, though! I mean, you’re Rainbow Dash! You make everything look cooler! I bet you’re bigger than most guys!”
A blush crossed Rainbow’s face, “I’m okay…”
“Cool!” Scootaloo laughed a bit, “Hey, that’ll be handy! If you guys don’t want to adopt again, I can have a brother or sister! That’d be cool!”
+This is when Raincreephile tells her that she has been approved for the adoption so she can call her mom and get her stuff already. She mentions about being visited by a social worked for a few months but this won’t have any importance on the story, never mind. Scootaloo’s so happy and they all hug congratulating them. Apple Bloom actually thanks her for “helping her out and all that”.
+Fluttershy then asks for an antiacid from uptsetairs, and Scootaloo “made a face” (what face, I don’t know) offering to take care of her while Rcreep’s gone. She calls her mom no problema instantly. So the creep goes to buy the medicine while they stay on the home.
+Fluttershy is soon sleeping and the three girls are bored without nothing to do. Suddenly Sweetie Belle suggest that they should all take out their panties and leave them as a thank you for the pedophile for “helping us so much”. Helping with what, I don’t know. Apple Bloom and Scootaloo are, of course, confused and Sweetie Belle tells them about how the creep was always a pedophile. She still think giving her panties’s a good idea, but Apple Bloom and Scootaloo are very uncomfortable with the idea. After Sweetie Belle assures them that Fluttershy knows about it and doesn’t mind, only then Scootaloo realices she’s going to be living with a pedophile and how creepy it is.
+This goes nowhere, as you can imagine.
“Scootaloo, calm down!” Sweetie Belle said softly, “Rainbow would never do that to you or anyone. When she told me, she was really upset because she thought she made me uncomfortable. She’d never try and make you do anything. It’s just that… she’s really nervous about the whole thing, and after she told me I… left a pair here for her. Sort of a way of telling her that I still love her. Ya know?”
“Ya left her some?!” Apple Bloom burst. She bit her lip, not sure if she liked that idea or not.
“...Well, okay…” Scootaloo sighed a bit, “Still, she’s gonna be my Mom now, and all. I know we were never related and all, but… Oh, fine. But just this once! The only other time is if I need ‘em washed!”
+Sweetie Belle assures them that it’s harmless and keeps telling Scootaloo that the creep won’t ever do anything to her, that she loves her and truly wants the best for her. If you all remember, and it’s fine if you don’t, Apple Bloom already had doubts about the creep because she had noticed the way she stared at them. Now she has comfirmation that it wasn’t her imagination, that the adult woman that they had trusted did actually want to fuck them the entire time. But now Apple Bloom is there with Sweetie Belle:” Ah’ve seen tha way she’s been like a big sister to ya all these years, Scoot. Ah don’t doubt she still cares for ya.”
+Scootaloo feels a little better about her new mom being a pedophile, and now they talk about how if Rainbow was going to fuck her she’d have done so when Scootaloo went through a obssessed fan phase in which she was telling everyone she was going to lose her virginity to Rainbow. Considering we all know that Liliana keeps dating her fans, this makes me uncomfortable.
+After this big pile of nothing, they decide to make up while Apple Bloom watches. They all praise each other for how cute and pretty they are, about how they all had crushes on each other since before and it’s all so cute, pretty and adorable.
+The creep is back complaining about a sudden storm that froze her nuts off. With how often the subject of her dick or balls comes out, I genuelly can’t imagine how she went years keeping the secret to anyone at all.
+Sweetie Belle goes upstair to give Fluttershy her antiacid. They talk a bit about how cute it’s that Scootaloo is having fun calling the pedophile Mom. Then Sweetie Belle goes back to the others to assured them that she was doing okay and just needed to rest. Raphile tells them that Fluttershy also had a high fever and clarifies to Scootaloo that she adopted her as a single parent, but can ask Fluttershy if she can call her mom when she wakes up. Then she notices the panties and starts shaking she she realizes that now everyone knows she’s a pedophile.
Scootaloo tensed, but went over to her, “Um, Rainbow Dash? Yeah, I was… kinda freaked out for a minute when she told us. But… I know you’d never hurt me, or any of us. And… And I know you adopted me because you cared about me… not because you… well, wanted me to do stuff.”
Rainbow sat up and looked at her, “Scootaloo, I promise I would never do anything like that to you. This is your home now, it’s safe for you here.”
Grinning, Scootaloo hugged her, “I know… I shouldn’t have doubted you!”
“Just promise me that if I do end up trying anything, you’ll kick me really hard in the nuts.”
“Well, okay! I will!”
“I love you, Scootaloo,” she said, hugging the girl tightly.
Scootaloo giggled, “...Okay, I love you too, Mom.”
Rainbow felt her heart flutter at that, and a big smile crept onto her face as she snuggled Scootaloo close to her. Both Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle looked on with happy smiles, while giggling with amusement.
+I just want to add that expect the fourteen year old orphan kid to defend herself against a pedophile mother is sick, disgusting and would never work in reality. A fourteen year old kid shouldn’t have to kick anyone on the balls in order to not be abused by a parental figure. That’s all.
+They still celebrate about adoption and how cool’s to have two mom and how excited Scootaloo’s about having a brother or sister. The creepdash reminds her that they aren’t getting married or thinking about having kids, but the three girls just laughs and says it’s still a cute idea. Despite supposedly being a storm outside, the pedobow tells the girls to go back home and come help Scootaloo move her stuff tomorrow.
+Scootaloo says that her Uncle and Auntie’ll be thrilled to hear the news, which again is not the reaction you’d expect of people who raised someone that is their relative with all the love and care they could. Scootaloo must be more than aware that her current guardian don’t mind about her at all if that is the reaction she expect from them. But instead of thinking of how sad that is, she thinks about how good it’s that she won’t be changing diapers… which she’s going to do anyway if she had a sibling but never mind that.
+When they’re going out, Sweetie Belle lift her dress to the pedorain so she can see her bare ass and the creep’s just surprised, commenting that she’s almost as bad as Fluttershy which… it’s a lie, because Fluttershy was never established as the type of character to do something like that.
+She goes to Fluttershy to tell her the news, both about Scootaloo moving in and Sweetie Belle revealing she’s a pedophile. Fluttershy’s glad that they took it well and asks about the date, but just goes back to sleep as the creep goes to sleep at another room, already with a boner because seeing your girlfriend lay sick, tired and shaking with a cough is so hot, amirite.
+The pedophile wonders for just a bit if she should masturbate with the panties, especially now that Scootaloo’s going to move soon. She decides that she’ll do it since it felt nice the previous time.
+What follows nows is a entire fantasy in which Scootaloo and Rainbow fuck, all the while Scootaloo calls her mommy and Rainbow tells her stuff like “suck Mommy’s cock.” On this fantasy Fluttershy joins and she’s also called other mommy. This scene lasts 1691 words.
+Then the creep has another conversation with her pervy side and ends up having another fantasy with her. All the voices of Rainbow look like her “but on different ways”, so Pervy’s just another Rainbow with the only difference that she has a cunt. They fuck and Pervy acts and talks like the worst porn actor ever:
“YES! Fucking A! Yeah! Ooohhhgghh! YES!” Pervy screeched in pleasure, grabbing hold of her shoulders, digging her fingernails into her skin, “You horny, sexy beast! Fuck me hard!”
+I hate these sex scenes but sometimes there are these phrases that almost make it worth it. They just crack me up.
“Wow… I love women, teenagers, and the back of my own head,” Rainbow pondered, “The cult of Marea is gonna view me as public enemy number one.”
+And there there’s phrases like these that makes it not worth it. Pervy's an very obnoxiously chirpy character whose literal entire purpose is to want to fuck. Not here nor in the second fic she ever gains a more complex personality than that.
+They tell each other I love you because, again, that phrase means nothing on this story and the creep is shocked that it’s look as if she fucked someone because there’s no cum anywhere.
+The pedophile says it was fun, they should do it again. Then goes to sleep.
