Kiwi Farms: The Animated Series - I multi-episode series based on the farms

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CephalopodEnthusiast said:
Okay, okay. You really seem set on trying to convince me it's a bad idea. I get that it is. Imagine how much it's going to be mocked, and it'll be worse than that.

You all are right. The advice people have given me is good. I know I should be taking it- and look, I have actually considered giving up on making it. Multiple times. Creating art is a stressful procedure in general, and it's really not worth the payoff.

Tell you what. I'll stop after the first episode is made. If kiwis hate it to an insane degree, then I won't continue. But if they like it, I'll keep making episodes.
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You are either very very brave or very very foolish to continue making this series even after having several people tell you its a bad idea. Still, you seen like a semi decent person so lets hope this won't blow up in your face as much as I (and probably everyone else) think it will
 
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Often times a talented artist pairs up with other artists and talented writers to create something memorable... something that rings true with its intended audience. Like I said, you are clearly a talented artist. The characters sketches are adorable. I think as a writer you are lacking the right voice to honestly connect. I think this could have potential with you having creative control of the visuals. In all honesty, for a crowd like KF, you need sharp, concise, acerbic commentary. You would want people like Fagnasty, Cat Party, Audit the Autist, AnOminus, April Skies, and the like on your writing staff. Know your strengths and weaknesses. The most successful projects are collaborative efforts.

One more thing and this is the last thing I am going to say on it. Please listen, because I’m genuinely reaching out to you. I’ll use an analogy.

You are in love with someone that does not love you back. You send chocolates, flowers, etc. Sometimes you get their attention and they deign to give you a little vague approval. Bolstered by this you start pouring your heart and soul into poems and love letters in hopes to win their love. Unbeknownst to you they show all their friends and laugh at you. When you continue the pursuit they gather their friends to publicly humiliate you, then leave. You are left there alone and broken hearted. And when you look back on it years from now, you realize that people tried to talk you out of it every step of the way, but you shut them down. And worst thing of all you had missed countless opportunities for real love.
 
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J A N D E K said:
You are in love with someone that does not love you back. You send chocolates, flowers, etc. Sometimes you get their attention and they deign to give you a little vague approval. Bolstered by this you start pouring your heart and soul into poems and love letters in hopes to win their love. Unbeknownst to you they show all their friends and laugh at you. When you continue the pursuit they gather their friends to publicly humiliate you, then leave. You are left there alone and broken hearted. And when you look back on it years from now, you realize that people tried to talk you out of it every step of the way, but you shut them down. And worst thing of all you had missed countless opportunities for real love.
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Well there's some genuine fuckin poetry.

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