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- Sep 3, 2018
I would want the God Valley flashback to have a narrative and not just be a random exposition dump in the middle of a different flashback.Wait now you wanted it to be longer? I'm confused now.
How would you do it then? I'm curious how you would fix this part of the story.
Honestly, God Valley should have been told during a conversation between Blackbeard and Garp. Blackbeard giving the version that involved his father and his father's crew, and Garp giving his version of events. Maybe Blackbeard is angry because he thinks Garp is the man who killed his father and prevented Rocks from freeing the government from Imu's control. Garp could apologize and give Rocks' final words to Blackbeard. And in the process of telling the story, we would have learned more about each character and their worldview and motivations.
You know, something that involves telling a story and not just vomiting lore.