"Post your Art" Thread

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i need some feedback
1st do you think i need background on last 2 frames
2nd does it look like the same person
3rd did i fuck up the anatomy? cause i feel like i did
edit i probably did the upper body bigger then it should be
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1st: No. In general, it's not necessary to include a background in every panel. Overloading the page with backgrounds can feel cluttered and make it hard to read. I still suggest adding some shading to the empty areas in the bottom two panels to break up the large white spaces.

2nd: Yeah, they do look the same. I actually thought it was the same person before reading your post. Make their hair different if you could. That's the main thing making them look alike.

3rd: The arms look a little too long, but otherwise the anatomy looks fine to me.

Amazing art as always, my man. I don't know how you have the patience for all that detailed hatching.
 
Im suffering art style crisis
im biased towards 1st version, but its probably because its somewhat similar to mine. makes it look more serious.
I actually thought it was the same person before reading your post
it supposed to be the same person, i just wasnt sure about consistency between frames. never had to deal it with it before. at least on this scale.
The arms look a little too long
i think you are right
heres a fix now i think it looks just right
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I don't know how you have the patience for all that detailed hatching.
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i need some feedback
1st do you think i need background on last 2 frames
2nd does it look like the same person
3rd did i fuck up the anatomy? cause i feel like i did
1. No, I don't think you do. Especially since the focus is her expression.
2. Yes, but I think that the hair looks darker in the second frames vs the first. Like she looks blonde in the first brunette in the second.
3. A little, but your edit already made it look much better. In case you're curious I will still include my feedback though.

So this is kind of how her body reads under the clothing.
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Mainly the left hip doesn't look quite right and the crotch looks too short. The Right thigh also reads a bit long.

Here is a modified wire frame which I think reads a bit better.
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Then here is the difference in terms of how it would somewhat rendered:
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Though obviously yours's looks much more nicely rendered :).
In case you want to play around with the layers I included a krita and photoshop file in the zip.

Btw it's really cool seeing your work! Your linework/rendering skill are really great!
 

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So this is kind of how her body reads under the clothing.
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Mainly the left hip doesn't look quite right and the crotch looks too short. The Right thigh also reads a bit long.

Here is a modified wire frame which I think reads a bit better.
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Then here is the difference in terms of how it would somewhat rendered:
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Though obviously yours's looks much more nicely rendered :).
In case you want to play around with the layers I included a krita and photoshop file in the zip.

Btw it's really cool seeing your work! Your linework/rendering skill are really great!
Thank you it was very helpful
i did 2 versions and not sure which one is better
progress so far
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the "blond" version
and my first attempt at the dude
i originally wanted to give him simple baggy clothes but it ended up look like some sort of jumpsuit
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and "brunette" version and my second attempt at his clothes that looks much nicer imo
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