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1st: No. In general, it's not necessary to include a background in every panel. Overloading the page with backgrounds can feel cluttered and make it hard to read. I still suggest adding some shading to the empty areas in the bottom two panels to break up the large white spaces.i need some feedback
1st do you think i need background on last 2 frames
2nd does it look like the same person
3rd did i fuck up the anatomy? cause i feel like i did
edit i probably did the upper body bigger then it should be
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im biased towards 1st version, but its probably because its somewhat similar to mine. makes it look more serious.Im suffering art style crisis
it supposed to be the same person, i just wasnt sure about consistency between frames. never had to deal it with it before. at least on this scale.I actually thought it was the same person before reading your post
i think you are rightThe arms look a little too long
AutismI don't know how you have the patience for all that detailed hatching.
1. No, I don't think you do. Especially since the focus is her expression.i need some feedback
1st do you think i need background on last 2 frames
2nd does it look like the same person
3rd did i fuck up the anatomy? cause i feel like i did
Cars were art back then. The steering wheels alone are pretty cool looking. Wouldn’t wanna slam my face into one going 90 though.
Thank you it was very helpfulSo this is kind of how her body reads under the clothing.
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Mainly the left hip doesn't look quite right and the crotch looks too short. The Right thigh also reads a bit long.
Here is a modified wire frame which I think reads a bit better.
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Then here is the difference in terms of how it would somewhat rendered:
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Though obviously yours's looks much more nicely rendered.
In case you want to play around with the layers I included a krita and photoshop file in the zip.
Btw it's really cool seeing your work! Your linework/rendering skill are really great!