Artcow rcdart / Rory Cummings-Dise - Tranny Fetishist who Torpedoed a Potential Animation Career

I like a couple of those animations, as simple as they are, but Rory still hasn't figured out that lips shouldn't look like chin tumors.
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Imagine the size of those nostrils.
 
She got...a bit better? Don't get me wrong her proportions are still all over the place but from what I see, there was some marginal improvements, the movements of the characters are much more smoother than the last animations. Granted the other animation was longer, but I'll praise effort when I see it.

The main problem with the shorts is that the character expressions don't line up with the words well. You can see the characters talking, but they barely emote! One character is supposed to be angry, but they don't FEEL angry. Her simplistic style really just holds her back.
 
She's gonna be a good or at least decent story board artist if she can ever learn to play well with others, since it's almost exclusively a co-op job. Not on anything good, though. Probably on a shitty show for babies that no one over the age of six watches.
 
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She's gonna be a good or at least decent story board artist if she can ever learn to play well with others, since it's almost exclusively a co-op job. Not on anything good, though. Probably on a shitty show for babies that no one over the age of six watches.
Queer Kids Stuff: The Animated Series.
 
This still looks very messy. Frankly, if she wants to doodle in Animate/Flash, her style would look better in raster form with TV Paint, Toon Boom, Clip Studio, etc. Otherwise you get this lazy, unsmoothed Animate look. There's even tutorials and tools she could use to easily fix the shaky lines.

She's better off doing more examples like the shoe lace tying scene, I think that was the most successful. Her overly simplistic drawing style coupled with weak poses in limited frames keeps her character acting shots from being engaging. Her keys are very similar.
 
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