Redesigning Floraverse - Because PK is a fucking idiot

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hm, for ideas... long before our thing started, i had the idea of pk replacing the troupe and changing things on a whim, puking magneta on everything and making everyone bitchy horndogs. and the equivalent of angels would be giant magneta dickmonsters with beanmouths (something resembling this, probably). it would probably have worked better if this was more shitposty but we're taking a more serious route so nah. but some pk knockoff could still be the supreme ultimate final boss i guess
that's all i have for now. maybe i could come up with something more if i actually read floraverse but the comic sucks so i shouldn't waste my time like that.
OH WAIT I KNOW are we gonna use buttfart's beleth and lilit in any way? and like, are the canon characters gonna be involved in this?
not-mineta x lilit 4lyfe
 
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Purple Stuff said:
hm, for ideas... long before our thing started, i had the idea of pk replacing the troupe and changing things on a whim, puking magneta on everything and making everyone bitchy horndogs. and the equivalent of angels would be giant magneta dickmonsters with beanmouths (something resembling this, probably). it would probably have worked better if this was more shitposty but we're taking a more serious route so nah. but some pk knockoff could still be the supreme ultimate final boss i guess
that's all i have for now. maybe i could come up with something more if i actually read floraverse but the comic sucks so i shouldn't waste my time like that.
OH WAIT I KNOW are we gonna use buttfart's beleth and lilit in any way? and like, are the canon characters gonna be involved in this?
not-mineta x lilit 4lyfe
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I think that there's an analouge for PK in the troupe already, as well as Eevee and maybe Marl. I could probably include something like that in the shmoopy interludes though.

And don't worry, I want to write in a way that allows seriousness but also can air out some comedy as well. A dramedy or Tragicomedy is what i think this will end up as.
Also, Beleth and Lilit are probably going to be in the story, but as angel-controlled slaves. Maybe not mineta's crush on Lilit is what drives him to join the rebellion?
 
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I think that there's an analouge for PK in the troupe already, as well as Eevee and maybe Marl. I could probably include something like that in the shmoopy interludes though.

And don't worry, I want to write in a way that allows seriousness but also can air out some comedy as well. A dramedy or Tragicomedy is what i think this will end up as.
Also, Beleth and Lilit are probably going to be in the story, but as angel-controlled slaves. Maybe not mineta's crush on Lilit is what drives him to join the rebellion?
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ah, i see then.

what drives not-mineta to join the rebellion is to fullfill his dreams and save his friends, i'm not sure if he'd really crush on lilit. or anyone, cuz he mostly feels lust more than actual love. but you're the one writing the story, so really i think i'd be cool with anything. as i said before, i'm happy he's getting included at all.
wait, not-mineta falling in love for the first time and wanting someone for more than just being hot would likely be something important in his character arc. and it's not like he could fuck lilit anyway, his dick is ruined and she's a doll. but i'm not sure how it would happen. do the slaves still have their own personalities?
oh and i forgot about cochran and his frog girlfriend, what about these two?
 
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ah, i see then.

what drives not-mineta to join the rebellion is to fullfill his dreams and save his friends, i'm not sure if he'd really crush on lilit. or anyone, cuz he mostly feels lust more than actual love. but you're the one writing the story, so really i think i'd be cool with anything. as i said before, i'm happy he's getting included at all.
wait, not-mineta falling in love for the first time and wanting someone for more than just being hot would likely be something important in his character arc. and it's not like he could fuck lilit anyway, his dick is ruined and she's a doll. but i'm not sure how it would happen. do the slaves still have their own personalities?
oh and i forgot about cochran and his frog girlfriend, what about these two?
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That's fair. We'd have to see if who created him wants to get in on this too.

Besides, a relationship doesn't have to be sexual to count as one. Maybe he's expected a straight up pool noodle but actually has to get used to no sexual contact or some alternative between the two.
 
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That's fair. We'd have to see if who created him wants to get in on this too.

Besides, a relationship doesn't have to be sexual to count as one. Maybe he's expected a straight up pool noodle but actually has to get used to no sexual contact or some alternative between the two.
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yeah i thought of something like that.
but enough about my oc, we should talk about the other things. uhhh, any ideas?
 
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yeah i thought of something like that.
but enough about my oc, we should talk about the other things. uhhh, any ideas?
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Maybe who's gonna do the art? I myself ain't that great of an artist, especially with the gear i have. (My mouse is terrible.)
I don't expect anyone to bend over backwords for it all, hell i might work at coloring it on the good ol MS Paint or something.
 
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Maybe who's gonna do the art? I myself ain't that great of an artist, especially with the gear i have. (My mouse is terrible.)
I don't expect anyone to bend over backwords for it all, hell i might work at coloring it on the good ol MS Paint or something.
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I might offer some drawings, but I really can't make any promises. soz
 
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oh shit lad that's pretty stellar! good going dude!

uhhh in terms of art output I might be able to chip in here and there but my job leaves me precious little time to myself and personal projects, but I'll definitely try to make myself useful when and if I can though
 
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im afraid i wouldn't be able to draw some comic pages myself. i'm not a very good artist, and i have no idea of how to make a good comic page. sorry about that
 
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im afraid i wouldn't be able to draw some comic pages myself. i'm not a very good artist, and i have no idea of how to make a good comic page. sorry about that
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While personally I think you're a great artist, I can understand not wanting to work on that part of the process, if at all. Besides, we're probably not even gonna consider starting the art until I finish Session 1. This is just me getting a preparation for when it's completely done.
 
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Also, I had an idea for the story.

Basically, the Angels, y'know the black fuzzy eyeball mother fuckers, they're like, housing the victim and trapping them in this psuedo-existential haze full of sex toys inside the suit to keep them quiet and further into a catatonia...

But we're not revealed that until like the 3rd fight with one of the Angel-infected persons (I'll call them "Archangels" from now on). Basically, the party doesn't know what's going on with the Archangels until they've been forced to kill a fair amount of them, which obviously creates a lot of issues for them.
 
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