Redesigning Floraverse - Because PK is a fucking idiot

[sad cowboy cat]

guys i just realized, what if glip and/or eevee find(s) out this exists?

What are they gonna do, passive-agressively tweet about it?

 

[RADICALGOBLIN]

What are they gonna do, passive-agressively tweet about it?

To be honest, that's just free promotion for us. If glip or Eevee scream about it, more of the farms will know about it, people who don't like Floraverse could promote it. It's not like she can commit to legal action because she made Floraverse so people could add to it however they want.

 

[Bernard Buttfart]

Doodled retcon girl's demon dad because why not
He's an Oni/guardian lion type demon who used to be a big shot businessman, but alcoholism and poor financial decisions sent his life down the shitter. He took out his aggression on his kids.
Post-retcon, he's a lonely alcoholic troon who hasn't changed at all except now he goes by feminine pronouns, since this is Floraverse after all

Also, her mom is a normal Flowercat, but I don't feel like drawing her since she's not plot-relevant lol

 

[BipolarPon]

Doodled retcon girl's demon dad because why not
He's an Oni/guardian lion type demon who used to be a big shot businessman, but alcoholism and poor financial decisions sent his life down the shitter. He took out his aggression on his kids.
Post-retcon, he's a lonely alcoholic troon who hasn't changed at all except now he goes by feminine pronouns, since this is Floraverse after all

Also, her mom is a normal Flowercat, but I don't feel like drawing her since she's not plot-relevant lol

All of you are so talented, you don't have to put my character in the story it was more for fun.

 

[hambulocetus]

aight, did it

Spoiler: smells a little ghey

name: locetus, but called hammy for bein a fat lard
species: gelbeast/turf tiger
pronoun: he/him, but is usually called she/her despite his protests
birthday: drath 14
astrological sign: cetus
affinity: acid
languages: common, prattle
age: Adult (definitely over 1
place of origin: treefall lake
quirks: weird hand fetish idk

Spoiler: backstory

most of this was already covered, but from a young age ham presented as male. his parents refused and instead tried to push a more feminine identity onto him. everywhere he went, people tried to force androgynous, female or neopronouns onto him, which only made him more frustrated in society. this worsened when he came out as gay, and ham began to try and escape what society had tried to push on him in an ihop(/b). while suffering through soggy pancakes, nearly getting kicked out, and terrible music that sounded like someone put chainsaws through a blender, he found out through tablemates that there were predator lurking around. ham found it hard not to help the ones trying to take the creeps down and thus decided to join the cause, and maybe make funny t-shirts on the way.

 

[RADICALGOBLIN]

Alright fuckers, specifically @Purple Stuff , i decided to take a swing at messing with Not-Mineta.

Spoiler: bio

Name: Mementa
Title: The Depression's Romeo
Sex: Intersex
Gender: Demiboy
Pronouns: He/Him
Species: Gelbeast Imp x Fruit Frog
Age: 16 1/2
Birthdate: Roosoth 8
Sign: Chamaleo
Languages: Common, Prattle, Plant
Affinity: Acid, later Psi
Main Powers: Acidic goo/hair, later gains minor control of Time due to the meddling with the retcons from the party.
Place of origin: Citrico Island
Quirk: Tentacle fetish

Despite his childishness and occasional cowardice, Mementa had wanted to be a preacher at the Masked Sun ever since his parents dropped him off at one of it's many orphanages, never to return. A church full of perversion, Mementa was exposed to the supposedly unseen and became corrupted because of it. Some children, feeling pity for the situation the world put him under, befriended and trained alongside him, the one Mementa getting to know the best was Zuudou, who shared that dream of preaching the well-meaning gospel. While his friends sighed at his perversion, they worked as hard as they could to help him and his addiction, and they formed a bond.

The Troupe couldn't tolerate this. A horny, straight boy with friends and a happy life? No, such a thing could NOT be allowed in their world.

The Trope set it motion that the straight men of the church sexually abuse his female and intersex friends, to the point they had Mementa's friends begin to loathe his attitudes, and treat it like his fault. They found his lust disgusting, all while fantasizing about gay/lesbian sex themselves. This, of course, confused them. After all, they too were children like he was. How were they to reconcile their feelings? So...Mementa's friends lashed out at him. They called him stupid, ugly, a failure, even the mere sight of him enraged them.
It all reched it's climax when Mementa's was brutally attacked by his former friends. He managed to escape with his life, but they succeeded in mauling his penis beyond all repair.

Zuudou was the only one who stuck with him, having enough transcendence to realize what the Masked Sun wanted to be is not what it was, and they grew to become the best friends.

Both of them aren't seen until Session Six. The Troupe and The Masked Sun start to merge, and all the creatures come together in a conference. The announcement is made, and they order everyone who is for and against the merger to stand in different rooms. The ones who want the merger are given no struggle. The people who don't want it are forcefully murdered by the forces. Memeta and Zuudou hear of this and freak out, reasonably. They escape the orphanage and try to find anyone who will help them, finding nothing in their town and the Troupe in the outskirts of the forests, joining their forces in Session Nine.

 

[Purple Stuff]

Alright fuckers, specifically @Purple Stuff , i decided to take a swing at messing with Not-Mineta.

Spoiler: bio

Name: Mementa
Title: The Depression's Romeo
Sex: Intersex
Gender: Demiboy
Pronouns: He/Him
Species: Gelbeast Imp x Fruit Frog
Age: 16 1/2
Birthdate: Roosoth 8
Sign: Chamaleo
Languages: Common, Prattle, Plant
Affinity: Acid, later Psi
Main Powers: Acidic goo/hair, later gains minor control of Time due to the meddling with the retcons from the party.
Place of origin: Citrico Island
Quirk: Tentacle fetish

Despite his childishness and occasional cowardice, Mementa had wanted to be a preacher at the Masked Sun ever since his parents dropped him off at one of it's many orphanages, never to return. A church full of perversion, Mementa was exposed to the supposedly unseen and became corrupted because of it. Some children, feeling pity for the situation the world put him under, befriended and trained alongside him, the one Mementa getting to know the best was Zuudou, who shared that dream of preaching the well-meaning gospel. While his friends sighed at his perversion, they worked as hard as they could to help him and his addiction, and they formed a bond.

The Troupe couldn't tolerate this. A horny, straight boy with friends and a happy life? No, such a thing could NOT be allowed in their world.

The Trope set it motion that the straight men of the church sexually abuse his female and intersex friends, to the point they had Mementa's friends begin to loathe his attitudes, and treat it like his fault. They found his lust disgusting, all while fantasizing about gay/lesbian sex themselves. This, of course, confused them. After all, they too were children like he was. How were they to reconcile their feelings? So...Mementa's friends lashed out at him. They called him stupid, ugly, a failure, even the mere sight of him enraged them.
It all reched it's climax when Mementa's was brutally attacked by his former friends. He managed to escape with his life, but they succeeded in mauling his penis beyond all repair.

Zuudou was the only one who stuck with him, having enough transcendence to realize what the Masked Sun wanted to be is not what it was, and they grew to become the best friends.

Both of them aren't seen until Session Six. The Troupe and The Masked Sun start to merge, and all the creatures come together in a conference. The announcement is made, and they order everyone who is for and against the merger to stand in different rooms. The ones who want the merger are given no struggle. The people who don't want it are forcefully murdered by the forces. Memeta and Zuudou hear of this and freak out, reasonably. They escape the orphanage and try to find anyone who will help them, finding nothing in their town and the Troupe in the outskirts of the forests, joining their forces in Session Nine.

ooh, that's really good. i didn't put much effort into the original backstory becuase well, i wasn't being very serious cuz i still thought the story would be more shitpost-like when i had thought it up. but i like this a lot more! although, i feel a little bad that someone else put in more effort than i did. you're pretty much doing most of the work.

 

[RADICALGOBLIN]

ooh, that's really good. i didn't put much effort into the original backstory becuase well, i wasn't being very serious cuz i still thought the story would be more shitpost-like when i had thought it up. but i like this a lot more! although, i feel a little bad that someone else put in more effort than i did. you're pretty much doing most of the work.

I think that this story is like a cocktail. My writing is the gin, you guys are tonic. Both are equally important.
But don't worry, there will be some comedy, dark or otherwise.

 

[The Great Pancake]

I think that this story is like a cocktail. My writing is the gin, you guys are tonic. Both are equally important.
But don't worry, there will be some comedy, dark or otherwise.

Regardless, I love it so much already.

Also I made this.

I had an idea that on every double Monday he hides away to not become a werewolf-thing like Heidi and Lily, but instead of the fact P.K. made them actually decent looking, he becomes this bloodthirsty, destructive, and hideous beast. However, I thought the idea was stupid.

 

[RADICALGOBLIN]

Regardless, I love it so much already.

Also I made this.
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I had an idea that on every double Monday he hides away to not become a werewolf-thing like Heidi and Lily, but instead of the fact P.K. made them actually decent looking, he becomes this bloodthirsty, destructive, and hideous beast. However, I thought the idea was stupid.

That wouldn't be a bad idea, if he was being controlled by the troupe or the angels. Admittedly i don't know how to make him a consistent secondary member of the party, unless he ends up an anti-villain / anti-hero character working for neither side.

His character in my mind reminds me of Goro Akechi from Persona 5, except a little different. I imagine him being brought in by a representative of The Troupe into this war he knows nothing about t0 jail the party, but secretly kept on a leash, which ties into his transformation into a feral creature. When he learns too much about it after confronting the party, they trigger the angel in the collar, which turns him into a creature like you described, and also reveals the true nature of the Archangels. They were fought before, but no clue they were housing live specimen which most likely end up dead when the party takes care of them.

After he's freed, he can't really pick a side due to disagreeing with both of their tactics, and ends up being kind of a trickster character caught between two worlds and trying to figure out which one leads to the better life for the people he tries to work for.

I'll try to reread what you wrote for him and see if it lines up.

 

[The Great Pancake]

That wouldn't be a bad idea, if he was being controlled by the troupe or the angels. Admittedly i don't know how to make him a consistent secondary member of the party, unless he ends up an anti-villain / anti-hero character working for neither side.

His character in my mind reminds me of Goro Akechi from Persona 5, except a little different. I imagine him being brought in by a representative of The Troupe into this war he knows nothing about t0 jail the party, but secretly kept on a leash, which ties into his transformation into a feral creature. When he learns too much about it after confronting the party, they trigger the angel in the collar, which turns him into a creature like you described, and also reveals the true nature of the Archangels. They were fought before, but no clue they were housing live specimen which most likely end up dead when the party takes care of them.

After he's freed, he can't really pick a side due to disagreeing with both of their tactics, and ends up being kind of a trickster character caught between two worlds and trying to figure out which one leads to the better life for the people he tries to work for.

I'll try to reread what you wrote for him and see if it lines up.

I see.. that could work. He would probably just want the best for the most people possible. He could tried to trade himself for Minia's health but failed and now they control Were-Emmett? I don't know, we'll have to think.
But for him being a neutral anti-hero? I'm down with that.

 

[RADICALGOBLIN]

I see.. that could work. He would probably just want the best for the most people possible. He could tried to trade himself for Minia's health but failed and now they control Were-Emmett? I don't know, we'll have to think.
But for him being a neutral anti-hero? I'm down with that.

Yeah, that or it's some all binding contract they have him sign.

Spoiler: A lot of Text VI

 

[The Great Pancake]

Yeah, that or it's some all binding contract they have him sign.

Tried to sign a deal with the Angels that ended up tricking him into being controlled until others eventually let him free? Sounds like a plan.

 

[RADICALGOBLIN]

Tried to sign a deal with the Angels that ended up tricking him into being controlled until others eventually let him free? Sounds like a plan.

Yeah, the party. They get into what's essentially a boss battle (Some of the fights in Flora are obviously structured off jrpg games so it works. I don't know how we'd express that idea, if at all.)

 

[RADICALGOBLIN]

@sad cowboy cat 's character Triste has a full chapter written, but on the computer i have right now i can't seem to screencap. Just know that it's done and Luxgay's will get written, then @hambulocetus 's character (I don't think you gave him a name, i gave him Wraps as a WIP name) and then Ameer's, then Session Zero will be done.

 

[sad cowboy cat]

oh hell I wasn't getting notifications for this post, good going as always dude!

 

[RADICALGOBLIN]

oh hell I wasn't getting notifications for this post, good going as always dude!

Thanks! Admittedly it's getting harder to write. School's kind of piling up on me and a lot of mental issues make it seem all like one of those old fashioned Sensory Overloads. I'll try not to :powerlevel: about it too much but I want to try and keep writing it for you guys.

 

[hambulocetus]

@sad cowboy cat 's character Triste has a full chapter written, but on the computer i have right now i can't seem to screencap. Just know that it's done and Luxgay's will get written, then @hambulocetus 's character (I don't think you gave him a name, i gave him Wraps as a WIP name) and then Ameer's, then Session Zero will be done.

his name is locetus/ham, but wraps is a pretty cool name!

 

[RADICALGOBLIN]

his name is locetus/ham, but wraps is a pretty cool name!

Locetus is actually a cool name! That's probably gonna be his real name while Wraps is the name his cruel family gave him before they excommunicated him.

But you'll see that part of Session Zero soon enough.

Spoiler: A lot of text VII

@sad cowboy cat

 

[Meowthkip]

This is some high-effort postings going on here.