Redesigning Floraverse - Because PK is a fucking idiot

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You're right @sad cowboy cat this is very theraputic and calmed me down.

Warning self indulgent doodle.

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Her mere existence attracts salt from everywhere she goes, so she now collects it. Glip and Eevee espcially hate her for caring more about abuse victims, than the abusers feelings.
 
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So I guess I'd be, like, a merchant who sells cursed trinkets that turn you into a mahou shoujo or something? ... That actually fits Flora better than it should. The trinkets probably turn you into a magical dickgirl. Shit

I don't know if Glip or Eevee have in-universe counterparts, but they'd probably give the most powerful people in their military that stuff.
 
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Ok, im sorry if i keep posting in this damn thread, but the guy i am i almost always have ideas in my head so

Here's my ideal structure for the plot. Full disclosure, i structured it around the Sonichu issues, but not to the point they're just straight up clones. Keep in mind this, obviously, will most likely be changed. But i'm gonna throw it out there and see how y'all react.

Session Zero (When You Were Young) - A buildup to the start of the story, shows off everyone's backstory before they meet up at the Waffle House / iHob.

Session One (Get Ready For Action) - They start talking to eachother and grow a kinship and begin their first attack on The Troupe & Masked Sun.

Session Two - (From Under The Cock Tree) Their first attack wraps up, The middle of this session acts as somewhat of a training montage, showing off their newly earned skills and affinities in a comedic lens, before ending introducing the next target for the resistance, particularly one of the original Floraverse cast.

Session Three - (Six Hundred and Twenty One Reasons Why) The TBA Flora entity, controlled by the Troupe with the angels, attacks them at their base, one of the group members is consumed, but not controlled just yet. After running off the TBA Flora, they try to study how to bring back the consumed member.

Session Four - (Tour Song) The group starts on a sort of mini-road trip to find people willing to bring back the member's consciousness, which is revealed to be still in there, tucked in the back of the cerebral cortex (or whatever equivilent for his species.) We also learn about the angels and what they do to consumed and controlled victims. (or "patients" as they're called.)

Session Five - (Welcome From Hell)The consumed member of the party comes back, but Traumatized, and scared of fighting. They try to get him back to shape, and more fights with Flora characters.

Session Six - (The Nation That Can't Be Moved) The group enters what they believe to be their final assault on the Troupe, entering their home base. A lot of fighting.

Session Seven - (Start Over) The group tries to fix the retcons The Troupe created, with some results working out and others ending horribly. The Troupe sees it's defeat, before running to merge with the religion of the Masked Sun to fight the rebellion, which is slowly growing.

This concludes LP I of Floraverse: The Loveless.

Session Eight (Session 7.5) - A interlude from Shmoopy, giving a small recap of the plot and some exposition regarding the Masked Sun.

Session Nine - The Masked Sun / Troupe (now called SUNBATHER, as a union.) quickly seize it's surrounding areas in an alarmingly WWII-esque fashion. , including Triste's hometown. Most of the party continues with it's training and missions, but harrowed immensely.

Session Ten (Anna Begins) - Bernard's childhood sweetheart returns, but becomes SUNBATHER's main weapon, becoming a demigod controlling the Angels, and becomes their second in command, causing Bernard to go into a mental breakdown.

Session Twelve - (How To Save A Life) The group starts to finally plan it's last siege against SUNBATHER, and a lot of soul search happens within the group. Some hardcore fights happen here, and one of the group members might die.

Session Thirteen (Session 12.9) Another interlude from Shmoopy, with another small recap, this time showing the life for the resistance hiding in plain sights in the world SUNBATHER controls.

Session Fourteen - (It All Comes Together For The Final Act) The resistance reveals itself amongst the masses, starting riots and giving the party ample time to invade SUNBATHER's offices. Most of the previously controlled Flora characters appear here and die, either by the Party, like Belieth, or by their own accord, like FurFur.)

Session Fifteen (Goath and Everything After) - The final fight. Bernard and [retcon-girl] are forced to battle. SUNBATHER is finally defeated, and most of the characters get closure.

This ends LP II of Floraverse: The Loveless.
 
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Joytail's date at iHob is going horribly.

God your art is too good for this thread.

that being said, if we're actually gonna go through with your concept of writing a short story about everything (then seeing if we wanna take it any further), how would it be done? Like a novel, or some sort of comic? Both?
 
God your art is too good for this thread.

that being said, if we're actually gonna go through with your concept of writing a short story about everything (then seeing if we wanna take it any further), how would it be done? Like a novel, or some sort of comic? Both?
Probably a comic in the same format and style as Floraverse, just to mock it further. That being said, I’m already swamped with personal projects so I probably shouldn’t undertake an entire satire webcomic.
 
Probably a comic in the same format and style as Floraverse, just to mock it further. That being said, I’m already swamped with personal projects so I probably shouldn’t undertake an entire satire webcomic.

Well, of course it'd most likely be a team of writers. I'd definitely part of it. Maybe we could use that to make some system so we're not swamped with work?
 
I haven't posted in a long time for reasons (pertaining to promises made to others) but I come out of the dark to say one thing:

Don't you all wreck my damn Waffle House.

In all seriousness, I'm liking the designs guys- and the bios too. Also love what's going on in the main thread- be assured that I'm still around if you miss my long ass rants/posts.
Oh, and I used one of your pics for my current icon @Bernard Buttfart. Hope you don't mind.
 
I haven't posted in a long time for reasons (pertaining to promises made to others) but I come out of the dark to say one thing:

Don't you all wreck my damn Waffle House.

In all seriousness, I'm liking the designs guys- and the bios too. Also love what's going on in the main thread- be assured that I'm still around if you miss my long ass rants/posts.
Oh, and I used one of your pics for my current icon @Bernard Buttfart. Hope you don't mind.
Welcome back! And it’s fine, thanks for crediting me bruv
 
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