RWBY - The Hindenburg on which Rooster Teeth rests its hopes, dreams and future

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Random Internet Person said:
-The cold opening has White Fang members scrambling and talking about their next move. When Adam comes to, one of them approaches him and says “Adam, thank God you’re awake! The police are coming and we don’t know what to do” before Adam cuts him down, before he leaves the hideout on a motorcycle.

-A week has passed since the attack at Haven, and Ruby and company are going to a festival, though Jaune stays behind to look after Qrow.

-Roman and Neo leave to do their own thing, and Blake still holds Roman responsible for the death of Tukson.


-There’s a montage of Team RWBY having fun, although there’s an undercurrent feeling of things not being right (despite how pleasant they are), including an almost humorous moment where Ruby offers Blake a Grimm mask, which only makes Blake feel uncomfortable.

-Weiss mentions her frustration over trying to find Winter only to find that her sister went back to Atlas, and that they could stay in Mistral a little longer, but Ruby cheers her up saying that the team is together, and buys Weiss a shawl.

-Blake drags Yang to a shooting gallery, tries to win her a prize, but comes up short. Yang steps up, hits the target score, and leaves before claiming anything.

Sun is at the festival, with Ilia cuffed with him. Team SSSN and Team ABRN are there too. Sun says he has to keep watch on Ilia before she goes back to Menagerie to serve out her sentence, though Kali suggested that going to the festival is some kind of reward reward for Ilia for her help in trying to bring Adam to justice, and the cuffs are a compromise, though Ilia says she’d rather be in jail.

-Qrow is puking drunk and tells Jaune that he’s proud of the kids for what they’ve done and for sticking by Ruby.

-The teams are hanging out, but Arslan is still incensed and trying to look for Cinder, but Yang says she has no clue where Cinder is. When Ruby looks at her scroll, she freaks out and says she, Weiss, Blake, and Yang have to leave, with Weiss saying they have a train to catch in the morning.

-Jaune asks if Team RWBY have seen Nora and Ren, and the episode ends showing the two of them relaxing on a bench and sharing a kiss under the moon.
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How incredibly banal. I'll have to watch it later.
 

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What all these writers don't get is that you don't need to rewrite RWBY to make it good, you need to go back in time and rewrite fucking history to keep RT from shitting up everything they touch with their reverse Midas touch.
 
Tom Honks said:
Kdins “boyfriend” just did a new 3d model for ruby and its well…
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We're reaching new dimensions of "men pretending to be women" so unheard of that it may as well have come from the twisted mind of H.P. Lovecraft.
 
Decepticon Spy said:
This is Autistic and doesn't solve anything, did you really just made an account just to share what I assume is your fix fic? If so, have you not back read the previous posts here? The thread is not here to "fix" RWBY, nor it is a council whose members stamp "THIS GUD" on things RWBY related.
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It ain't mine; it's some asshole's. His name's on the script. I've read the threads and I never implied this thread was here to "fix" RWBY. This is another rewrite you make fun of.


Would you believe me if I said it's even worse than Celtic Phoenix's?
 
Sleazy Car Salesman said:
I ain't reading that shit nigger, give me a tl;dr in bullet point form and make it less than 250 characters.
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Calm your tits:
  • Winter, despite having Maiden's powers, couldn't save herself.
  • The Ace-Ops all die along with most of the Happy Huntresses in incredibly shallow ways similar to Ultimate Marvel's Ultimatum
  • Robyn Hill gets blown the fuck up by an explosion, and somehow, Jacques Schnee survived said explosion.
TL;DR - A shitty rewrite trying too hard to be edgy.
 
Les Lyons III said:
Calm your tits:
  • Winter, despite having Maiden's powers, couldn't save herself.
  • The Ace-Ops all die along with most of the Happy Huntresses in incredibly shallow ways similar to Ultimate Marvel's Ultimatum
  • Robyn Hill gets blown the fuck up by an explosion, and somehow, Jacques Schnee survived said explosion.
TL;DR - A shitty rewrite trying too hard to be edgy.
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Sounds like something Jerry Freeman would do.
 
Les Lyons III said:
Calm your tits:
  • Winter, despite having Maiden's powers, couldn't save herself.
  • The Ace-Ops all die along with most of the Happy Huntresses in incredibly shallow ways similar to Ultimate Marvel's Ultimatum
  • Robyn Hill gets blown the fuck up by an explosion, and somehow, Jacques Schnee survived said explosion.
TL;DR - A shitty rewrite trying too hard to be edgy.
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I'll give you a challenge:

Make your own series.
 
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