Inactive SYRSA - Tit Milking Fetishist/Game Developer

John Freeman said:
Fair enough. I didn't mean to be so mean about it. Well, if you want to be in my favor, at least, you could pass on the comment about rib cages. He desperately needs to address that. They need to be bigger. Oh and tell him that quality beats out quantity.
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Sorry I forgot to answer you. But yeah, don't worry about being mean, my self esteem is hardened by the cold forges of the world wide web, and it's notorious rusemen. I'll mention the ribcage thing to him, but I'm pretty sure that he makes them like that on purpose.
 
Eldritch said:
I'm not going to say the guy's art is particularly "impressive" but for the last few minutes, I've witnessed freeman dig into it in such a hilariously autistic manner.This is like watching professional film critics tear apart an episode of the teletubbies. "Oh, the special effects were horrendous, and the dialogue sounds like it was written by a kindergardner." At least find something more significant than a lack of ribcages to hold against him.
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The rib cages are the main thing that appeared the most. I would offer to redline a few of his works if I had a functional drawing tablet.

His composition is just really boring too, I suppose. He could do a better job giving the viewer's eyes something to "walk" through in the painting. Look at this thing, more specifically, really observe it. Do you notice your eyes not having an idea where to look? Probably not, that is because this person did a good job, in this case, using the path and high contrast in color and values, that guided my eye from the dark low contrast buildings on the right to the more colorful buildings on the left, resting to the intense sunset, and then back around again with the building cluster in the left background.

He doesn't really do anything like that.
http://syrsa.deviantart.com/art/Guardflirt-374466366
http://syrsa.deviantart.com/art/Nomad-347717995

the only real thing that he can count on for focus is breasts or ass.

http://syrsa.deviantart.com/art/Dudusuth-326651209
in this particular one there is no atmospheric perspective.

However, there was an exception. The clear differences in contrast of color intensity in the cliffs give this a good sense of depth. Uh his poses are usually quite static.

and then there is uh, this

Another thing, his color pallets are really boring and uninspired too. He needs to use more vivid colors, or even better: use vivid colors as a way of making a focus for the work. His color theory knowledge needs some brushing up on. Something that got me out of my shell for that was making landscapes with limited color pallets, usually of contrasting or split-complement color schemes. Then I discovered Chromaa. They have great color pallet ideas.

idk boobs are a clutch that he relies on way too much, I suppose. Without the breasts, his entire gallery would all be a lot less interesting.

A real art teacher wouldn't hold any punches, they tear students apart. I don't have to here either. As a fellow 23 year old man critiquing an art peer, I rate him a: 9/11 two twin towers way down

Mookenstein said:
Sorry I forgot to answer you. But yeah, don't worry about being mean, my self esteem is hardened by the cold forges of the world wide web, and it's notorious rusemen. I'll mention the ribcage thing to him, but I'm pretty sure that he makes them like that on purpose.
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Don't get me wrong, I know why he does it, tiny rib cages are sexier to him. The biggest thing is the old "don't make a video game out of your fetish fuel" really overrules here.
 
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Mookenstein said:
Sorry I forgot to answer you. But yeah, don't worry about being mean, my self esteem is hardened by the cold forges of the world wide web, and it's notorious rusemen. I'll mention the ribcage thing to him, but I'm pretty sure that he makes them like that on purpose.
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I kinda thought he did that on purpose too. They are non-human, after all. Not only that but he doesnt seem to use many details like that.
 
Eldritch said:
I kinda thought he did that on purpose too. They are non-human, after all. Not only that but he doesnt seem to use many details like that.
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Or any detail at all for that matter.

https://sneed-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/35/0c/7d/350c7dbc1502b0703b40c4b5bbc919d9.jpg
 
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John Freeman said:
The rib cages are the main thing that appeared the most. I would offer to redline a few of his works if I had a functional drawing tablet.

His composition is just really boring too, I suppose. He could do a better job giving the viewer's eyes something to "walk" through in the painting. Look at this thing, more specifically, really observe it. Do you notice your eyes not having an idea where to look? Probably not, that is because this person did a good job, in this case, using the path and high contrast in color and values, that guided my eye from the dark low contrast buildings on the right to the more colorful buildings on the left, resting to the intense sunset, and then back around again with the building cluster in the left background.

He doesn't really do anything like that.
http://syrsa.deviantart.com/art/Guardflirt-374466366
http://syrsa.deviantart.com/art/Nomad-347717995

the only real thing that he can count on for focus is breasts or ass.

http://syrsa.deviantart.com/art/Dudusuth-326651209
in this particular one there is no atmospheric perspective.

However, there was an exception. The clear differences in contrast of color intensity in the cliffs give this a good sense of depth. Uh his poses are usually quite static.

and then there is uh, this

idk boobs are a clutch that he relies on way too much, I suppose. Without the breasts, his entire gallery would all be a lot less interesting.

A real art teacher wouldn't hold any punches, they tear students apart. I don't have to here either. As a fellow 23 year old man critiquing an art peer, I rate him a: 9/11 two twin towers way down


Don't get me wrong, I know why he does it, tiny rib cages are sexier to him.
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Yes, in "gaurd flirt" I particularly noticed that the railing behind them was completely one color, and his other drawings were just so plain that there's almost nothing to look at.
 
John Freeman said:
The rib cages are the main thing that appeared the most. I would offer to redline a few of his works if I had a functional drawing tablet.

His composition is just really boring too, I suppose. He could do a better job giving the viewer's eyes something to "walk" through in the painting. Look at this thing, more specifically, really observe it. Do you notice your eyes not having an idea where to look? Probably not, that is because this person did a good job, in this case, using the path and high contrast in color and values, that guided my eye from the dark low contrast buildings on the right to the more colorful buildings on the left, resting to the intense sunset, and then back around again with the building cluster in the left background.

He doesn't really do anything like that.
http://syrsa.deviantart.com/art/Guardflirt-374466366
http://syrsa.deviantart.com/art/Nomad-347717995

the only real thing that he can count on for focus is breasts or ass.

http://syrsa.deviantart.com/art/Dudusuth-326651209
in this particular one there is no atmospheric perspective.

However, there was an exception. The clear differences in contrast of color intensity in the cliffs give this a good sense of depth. Uh his poses are usually quite static.

and then there is uh, this

idk boobs are a clutch that he relies on way too much, I suppose. Without the breasts, his entire gallery would all be a lot less interesting.

A real art teacher wouldn't hold any punches, they tear students apart. I don't have to here either. As a fellow 23 year old man critiquing an art peer, I rate him a: 9/11 two twin towers way down


Don't get me wrong, I know why he does it, tiny rib cages are sexier to him. The biggest thing is the old "don't make a video game out of your fetish fuel" really overrules here.
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I wrote down some notes for my own use. I think you should come to the stream to give him this advice directly to be honest though. I suggest if you do decide to stick around and give him advice, that you try your best to appear non-confrontational until he gets used to, and appreciates your presence. You might even become friends.

If you do decide to stick around on his stream, and take part in his progression with stuff, just follow him on an account, because it gives you alert emails for when he's online. If you don't wanna do that, then he's usually on starting around 11 am, or 12 pm, and ending at 4 or 5 pm eastern time.

https://www.picarto.tv/live/channel.php?watch=SYRSA
 
Mookenstein said:
I wrote down some notes for my own use. I think you should come to the stream to give him this advice directly to be honest though. I suggest if you do decide to stick around and give him advice, that you try your best to appear non-confrontational until he gets used to, and appreciates your presence. You might even become friends.

If you do decide to stick around on his stream, and take part in his progression with stuff, just follow him on an account, because it gives you alert emails for when he's online. If you don't wanna do that, then he's usually on starting around 11 am, or 12 pm, and ending at 4 or 5 pm eastern time.

https://www.picarto.tv/live/channel.php?watch=SYRSA
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Well, here's the rub. This has all been unwarranted advice. If he will ever take my advice seriously, he is going to have to seek it out from me himself. I was just speaking my mind in this thread about his art because I can here, uncensored, without sugarcoating it. Through any other venue where he has control, he'd probably get upset and block me. Getting better at art is like ripping off a bandaid. It is painful and people will probably hurt one's feelings. However, the main thing is he has to want my advice. I am not going to jump through hoops or play games to give it to him. I am very glad that you read it, at least. The only reason I see all of this is because I have made and learned from way more mistakes than he ever has to know what I know.
 
John Freeman said:
Well, here's the rub. This has all been unwarranted advice. If he will ever take my advice seriously, he is going to have to seek it out from me himself. I was just speaking my mind in this thread about his art because I can here, uncensored, without sugarcoating it. Through any other venue where he has control, he'd probably get upset and block me. Getting better at art is like ripping off a bandaid. It is painful and people will probably hurt one's feelings. However, the main thing is he has to want my advice. I am not going to jump through hoops or play games to give it to him. I am very glad that you read it, at least. The only reason I see all of this is because I have made and learned from way more mistakes than he ever has to know what I know.
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I'm pretty much the only one who bans anyone from the chat, and it's only when they are bringing nothing of value, and a considerable amount of annoyance to the chat. If you want to, you could go in armpits exposed and dick hanging out. He'd likely argue with you, but progress has been made in the past on a few occasions, and that progress has stuck. You do what you do, I'm just giving you the option.
 
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People claim I won't rest until all threads (or more) are about me, when nothing could be further from the truth.

1] Members here start a thread here about me (when I am not a member), stating untrue negative things.

2] I find it, & decide to come here & correct the mistaken statements,

3] People proceed to continue negative statements about me, while also searching (& linking to) my blogs, member pages on other sites, etc.

4] I continually tell people I will leave permanently the second all pages & threads about me disappear, & am simultaneously told this will never happen &/or it will if I stay away from the site a while.

5] I send my computer to be worked on, forcing me entirely offline for 2 months.

6] I come back, expecting to see it disappeared while I was away. Instead, it has remained, continued, & been joined by more threads about me (why people love/hate me, etc.), & a Wannabe-Wikipedia page with the aforementioned links.

7] People again tell me it will disappear both never & if I stay away from it, so I post what I say is my final post in it. I soon find out people are discussing me in that thread & others, but when I respond to any of this discussion of me, it is moved to the original thread about me, meaning that thread will never be allowed to disappear.
 
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Cowlick said:
People claim I won't rest until all threads (or more) are about me, when nothing could be further from the truth.

1] Members here start a thread here about me (when I am not a member), stating untrue negative things.

2] I find it, & decide to come here & correct the mistaken statements,

3] People proceed to continue negative statements about me, while also searching (& linking to) my blogs, member pages on other sites, etc.

4] I continually tell people I will leave permanently the second all pages & threads about me disappear, & am simultaneously told this will never happen &/or it will if I stay away from the site a while.

5] I send my computer to be worked on, forcing me entirely offline for 2 months.

6] I come back, expecting to see it disappeared while I was away. Instead, it has remained, continued, & been joined by more threads about me (why people love/hate me, etc.), & a Wannabe-Wikipedia page with the aforementioned links.

7] People again tell me it will disappear both never & if I stay away from it, so I post what I say is my final post in it. I soon find out people are discussing me in that thread & others, but when I respond to any of this discussion of me, it is moved to the original thread about me, meaning that thread will never be allowed to disappear.
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Post in this one buddy, you're making yourself seem silly.
https://kiwifarms.net/threads/tjchurch.4234/unread
 
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Cowlick said:
People claim I won't rest until all threads (or more) are about me, when nothing could be further from the truth.

1] Members here start a thread here about me (when I am not a member), stating untrue negative things.

2] I find it, & decide to come here & correct the mistaken statements,

3] People proceed to continue negative statements about me, while also searching (& linking to) my blogs, member pages on other sites, etc.

4] I continually tell people I will leave permanently the second all pages & threads about me disappear, & am simultaneously told this will never happen &/or it will if I stay away from the site a while.

5] I send my computer to be worked on, forcing me entirely offline for 2 months.

6] I come back, expecting to see it disappeared while I was away. Instead, it has remained, continued, & been joined by more threads about me (why people love/hate me, etc.), & a Wannabe-Wikipedia page with the aforementioned links.

7] People again tell me it will disappear both never & if I stay away from it, so I post what I say is my final post in it. I soon find out people are discussing me in that thread & others, but when I respond to any of this discussion of me, it is moved to the original thread about me, meaning that thread will never be allowed to disappear.
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But you've been burning so many cows we want you to stay, TJ. You may get promoted to Null's Personal Hero &/or Kiwi Farms BBQ Pit Master.
 
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KingofManga420 said:
Post in this one buddy, you're making yourself seem silly.
https://kiwifarms.net/threads/tjchurch.4234/unread
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Already posted I was done there, since members claimed it would disappear (my longtime only aim) if I stayed out of it.

Also, I'm not making myself seem silly, especially surrounded by a slew of idiots.
 
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Cowlick said:
Already posted I was done there, since members claimed it would disappear (my longtime only aim) if I stayed out of it.

Also, I'm not making myself seem silly, especially surrounded by a slew of idiots.
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Sticks and stones may break my bones TJ.
 
Cowlick said:
People claim I won't rest until all threads (or more) are about me, when nothing could be further from the truth.

1] Members here start a thread here about me (when I am not a member), stating untrue negative things.

2] I find it, & decide to come here & correct the mistaken statements,

3] People proceed to continue negative statements about me, while also searching (& linking to) my blogs, member pages on other sites, etc.

4] I continually tell people I will leave permanently the second all pages & threads about me disappear, & am simultaneously told this will never happen &/or it will if I stay away from the site a while.

5] I send my computer to be worked on, forcing me entirely offline for 2 months.

6] I come back, expecting to see it disappeared while I was away. Instead, it has remained, continued, & been joined by more threads about me (why people love/hate me, etc.), & a Wannabe-Wikipedia page with the aforementioned links.

7] People again tell me it will disappear both never & if I stay away from it, so I post what I say is my final post in it. I soon find out people are discussing me in that thread & others, but when I respond to any of this discussion of me, it is moved to the original thread about me, meaning that thread will never be allowed to disappear.
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Why the fuck are you: A. Using ampersands, B. Interupting other threads C. Acting like you're trying to dispel attention when that's exactly what you're not doing.
 
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Cowlick said:
Already posted I was done there, since members claimed it would disappear (my longtime only aim) if I stayed out of it.

Also, I'm not making myself seem silly, especially surrounded by a slew of idiots.
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When they said it would dissapear, they meant that it would become less noticeable without you actively contributing to it.

TJ, Come on, we're all willing to be your buddy. All you have to do is admit you're acting kinda silly and stop pretending you're somehow above everyone else.

(And we have an entire thread dedicated to you! You can post about you in that thread!)
 
Mookenstein said:
I became a fan roughly 4 years ago, so I was probably 16 or 17 at the time.

He's Swedish as all fuck.

Even when I'M wrong.
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I have a feeling that you ARE SYRSA, as your timing is actually pretty suspicious, but even assuming that you aren't, It really didn't start about his art, it started with him being an idiot and fucking up a Vinesauce stream with his drama and inability to accept criticism. He acted unprofessionally, and no condition that he has, mental or otherwise will excuse it. You can defend his art all you like but at the end of the day he's a little drama queen and he's gonna have to accept the consequences of that, which is to say that we're all gonna talk about him.
 
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