Tiberius Rising Tiberius Rising Chapter 17

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Jace just posted this on twitter. Haven't read the whole thing yet, will update the OP with thoughts when I do. This is an unusually long one (again)
 
Okay, so I think he at least finally settled on one spelling for Ramirez.

Also, apparently Stryker is always wearing an eyepatch ruining his vision, just so that he has a backup eye in case one gets blinded by something, just like the pirates of ye olde did. Furthermore, a new utterly misused term enters the fray: double-tap. I'm not even sure what exactly he think it means.
 
So, should I keep making my own version of Tiberius Rising, with the gay love stories and all that?
 
Did Stryker just admit he made a mistake? Holy shit.
 
MurcDusen said:
Okay, so I think he at least finally settled on one spelling for Ramirez.

Also, apparently Stryker is always wearing an eyepatch ruining his vision, just so that he has a backup eye in case one gets blinded by something, just like the pirates of ye olde did. Furthermore, a new utterly misused term enters the fray: double-tap. I'm not even sure what exactly he think it means.
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I imagine its like fanning, only with modern firearms and thus impossible.
 
So, Jace completely made up some shit about eye-patches just so his Mary Sue could be a bit more like Solid Snake; he made his Arabic terrorists speak Farsi; he mentions "parachuting" out of nowhere; he completely misuses the phrase "double tap"; he manufactures Ramirez's "Juggernaut armour" into being an Iron Man suit complete with bulletproof full-face visor, AND he still thinks hashish is the same as opium.
On the plus side though, Jace used the "but none of that mattered now" cliche again!! Yaaayyy!
 
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