Jae is almost charming in her writing. I don't mean the character, I mean how hard they try to make her likeable. The introductory cut-scene with the wooden models and terrible animations that supposedly presents her as a Certified Badass, the heavy accent and how the barkeeper and the narrative gush on how special and dynamic she is. There's such a charming innocence in believing this makes a character "badass" and "likeable" and not look like an annoying fuckwit.
And of course when you get given the chance to sell her out she goes poof smoke bomb ILL BE BACK. Yeah, sure, I hope you're back, there's a bolt round with your name on it, I've executed people for less. Wasted slot for a character.
I'm kinda ambivalent on it, often the Dogmatic choices are almost tone-deaf. The Imperium is supposed to be meaninglessly and needlessly cruel, but sometimes it's almost cartoony and they try to sell the Iconoclast path too hard.