You know what I'm fed up with people who just read the wiki and dont get the fluff that make fanworks without being fan's.
And this is the prime example:
The armour is sorta passable, but everything else is not - Let's start with that crappy rendition of a bolt pistol - sorry but nope a bolt pistol is semi auto only an is always depicted as such in the fluff, also it doesn't shoot like a fucking hollywood SMG, i.e. takes a burst to drop some one - a bolt is a round even in the 41st melnium to react explosively inside a target .i.e. mass reactive. A standard human sans power armour is pulped by a single bolter shot.
Then let's move onto the power hammer, A power weapon is a weapon that creates a field designed to interupt matter, but will still struggle with some really deanse matter, like armour, but a lightly armourd human or the helm of a space marine, a bruit force application of a hammer would be enought to turn a head into little chunks, let alone that whole fight sequence, just wouldnt happen a Astarties would not have been disarmed by anyone with a simple kick....
Now let's get to the last bit of filth, the blood of a single innocent would not be enough to secure a ritual to damn a plannet to extermintus, the inquisition put's herritics down like that regularly, if it was successful that level of daemon could be purged with a few guardsmen an a preacher.
Now let's go for the biggie, according to the into he's a Newley qualified neopiete, the Dangles are fucking terrified of there own nature, and will always send anyone on a mission with the oversite of a brother, the only people who would not deploy alone are captains an death company, and unless it was a final hold action they would not no matter his guilt allow himself to die as pennance, the DA's are oddly aware of how valuable each marine is...
Seriously fuck people who don't take a moment to understand a genera, and people who don't do there homework.