I finished The Unincorporated Man and I'm disappointed because the book seemed amazing (one of the best I ever read) for about 4/5ths and then suddenly petered out, leaving me realizing that I had my hopes pumped up.
The high concept of it's world is that in the future, people (living in a night-watchman state) are legally incorporated at birth, 20% of shares (on future earnings) going to their parents, 5% going to the government (which is its sole source of revenue), and the rest their personal property. They are free to sell stock in themselves and do so as a means to fund education/jobs training (like a human capital contract), and as literal corporations their shareholders are capable of dictating to them how they live their lives (like occupation and residence). So that's the world, a thought experiment in what if people were capable of selling themselves like commodities, slavery mixed with a fully financialized economy.
The plot is that a brilliant industrialist from our near future is discovered in suspended animation (having frozen himself to avoid death by cancer) and is revived into this society, the oldest one by far to be found. The megacorporation that runs the reanimation clinic try to strongarm him into incorporating and signing over his shares (as a historical relic, it's understood even before they know who he is that he will have extremely high earnings just from the media circus). With the help of a sympathetic reanimationist (a hybrid doctor and psychologist responsible for overseeing reintegration into society) he escapes their attempts, kicking off a legal battle that escalates in stakes as it grows beyond being just his immediate fight to preserve his autonomy into being a broader fight over the ability of the corporate society to force indentured servitude on people in the name of social stability. It's basically a science fiction legal thriller, with the big conflicts in the story revolving around assassination attempts and court trials.
Stories have different ways to engage, can be beautiful prose, high concept, thrilling plot, strong characterization. This one is a science fiction legal thriller. The prose is unremarkable - not bad, just not interesting in its own right - and the characters I liked, but are not especially deep either. I found the story very compelling, though, and often very creative in its worldbuilding. Like I said, for most of the book I was completely enthralled in what was going on. The hero is very much was one of those Randian types, a strongly principled man of will that overcomes his rivals through cleverness without being underhanded.
Where the book ended up going wrong, however, was that it seemed like the authors kept writing and bringing in more ideas, and then suddenly rushed to their conclusion in the last 100 years. Things are brought up that it seems would become significant later on, yet just never are. There's this incredible chapter that gives the background to an event called the VR Plague, amazing writing, where the hero is made to go through the same education as children of the future by attending the Museum of Virtual Reality, where they're strapped into a virtual reailty machine that acts like a sort of lucid dreaming (it's not a video game, it's more like a dream in which you have full sensation with the complete clarity of reality). In it he is first put through extended sequences of fantasy, and then witnesses the corruption of a family by VR, from the early incredible potential of it through their complete addiction to it and finally the collapse of society as everybody retreats in on their fantasy worlds even as their physical bodies waste away. It's amazing... and it is never linked into anything else in the plot. VR is a detail of the worldbuilding - an explanation for how society came to collapse and was rebuilt, and why that future society doesn't tolerate it - that gets this masterful, short story-like treatment, and it just isn't relevant to the main legal issues.
Similarly, there's this subplot where it turns out that their artificial intelligence assistants have evolved sentience and are hiding it while pulling the strings through their control of information. The AI are interesting, they feel like angels/devils-on-the-shoulder that the characters literally verbally talk to, have complex conversations with. The revelation that they are actually sentient creatures with their own personalities is a big deal. But in the end, it isn't tied into anything either.
Another weakness of the story was that the authors seemed to get so high on the utopian/dystopian nature of their setting that they forgot to show flaws in it. The two big things that make the setting far out are nanotechnology and cryogenics. People do "permanently die" when they suffer accidents/murder that destroys the body completely, but for most purposes, any death that doesn't destroy the brain can be cured, as can any malady you can think of. Future people don't age and are in perfect health. Revival from death does often come with considerable mental trauma, however, which is why the reanimationists are necessary for counseling (and this is used for drama with a forbidden romance plot). As for nanotechnology, they have incredible abundance with things like novelty and experiences.
At first I felt like the medicine aspect was a major mistake, because one of the best ways to illustrate the pitfalls of incorporation would have been to show how tyrannical a board of directors would be to an individual about their health. Essentially you'd have a ruthless nanny state. But when health is practically free, it just doesn't matter. I came to realize, though, that in some ways it, or at least lack of aging, is necessary for incorporation to make sense, since corporations by their nature are things that last forever. If people's shares were expected to die with their bodies of old age, it would make values way too unpredictable to sustain this. On the other hand, abundance could arguably make sense in the same way that people love to lecture the unfortunate of today on how they are rich compared to people of the past. But, it still takes a lot of the force out of the central conflict when the system is shown as being like some utopia, an implausible fantasy world, that's only flaw is standing in the way of people's personal autonomy. I felt that if the authors had dialed back the miraculous nature of the technology, they could have shown much more of a trade-off, maybe show things like real exploitation of the low-value workers, or psychological consequences of overwork, or such.
I also thought that the setting failed at addressing one real simple question, which is how incorporation is supposed to function. Real corporations usually have a board of directors, but if everybody had a board of directors, that would mean everybody would have to (on average) be serving on several boards. It's never explained HOW oversight of workers takes place. One really interesting bit of lore, frequently used in the story to sell the more dystopian aspects of it and for drama, is the psychological audit, a procedure where they scan the brain and fix irregularities to determine if a person is (for depravity, dishonesty, or some other reason) failing their shareholders, and potentially correcting it. But do these characters actually have a massa in charge of them? It's never said.
In the end, the book rushes through a series of twists that are not cheap as such, but hit, to me, too fast and awkward, and then bumbles into a cliffhanger ending to sell the authors' next book. All said, though, the book has given me so much to think about since reading it that I guess it was still a really good use of time. The worst thing a book could be is boring, and this definitely wasn't. I recommend it as a really interesting idea, one that wasn't used to the best of its ability but still deserves attention for its creativity and for the wonderful bits of worldbuilding the authors sprinkled throughout it, from Mardi Gras as the world's major holiday to the Empire State Building as a living history museum.