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- May 6, 2020
I was reading Malice by John Gwynne but it's fucking terrible. Here's an excerpt:
This is a description of world changing events in a fantasy setting. It is the most autistic and robotic way of describing such events. Culminating with the phrase "dished out". This is a god so powerful that it left gaping rents in the earth's flesh that are still visible hundreds of years later. You do not describe something like that with words like "dished out". I should have dropped the book there, but I continued for a bit longer before the will to go on completely deserted me. I suppose it's not the worst written prose I've ever read, but it is certainly mediocre as hell.According to the tales, Treasures had been forged from the starstone, seven Treasures–cauldron, torc, necklace, spear, dagger, axe and cup. Wars had been fought over them, culminating in Elyon’s wrath being stirred and dished out: the Scourging.