I was avoiding this thread because, as I mentioned before, it actually makes me MATI (the subject matter I mean, not you guys) but out of some wine soaked curiosity I poked back in.
I tire of reading people pretend they really care about one-off cut-and-pastes from some books they probably never heard of until YIIK (and the Merriam-Webster Dictionary), as if they're all college professors grading Andrew Allanson. It's not as if he Xerox'd a story beat or an entire plotline.
And therein lies my biggest problem with YIIK; he
did xerox entire plotlines and story beats, and to rub salt in that wound he did it incredibly badly. I can only speak to the material I've read, and others have done a good job digging up references I've never heard of, but I did a small (and not great) little write up on some of the stuff he stole directly from
Kafka on the Shore and I'm really torn because I can't tell if he was just hoping no one would recognize the bits he stole, or if he really thought he was so good at worldbuilding that people would think these additions were more decorations rather than the loadbearing ideas they are.
I'm also not going to go hideously pretentious with all this but it doesn't help that the writer makes it clear through his characters and in interviews that he really does see this, and by extension himself, as something deep and meaningful when its kind of obvious he only has the shallowest grasp on the stuff he's copying.
I'm not saying I've got it figured out but I'm also not trying to pretend anything I do or say is on the level of some of these amazing surrealist writers.
I'll try to make the same kind of point with a well known piece of media:
Remember the first time you read Catcher in the Rye, probably as a teenager? Maybe you had to for school, or maybe you picked it up because you heard it inspired several (failed and successful) assassins and wanted to see what all the fuss was about. If you were young and stupid and thought you were a super cool guy like me (I had my chucks and Linkin Park and you're not the boss of me DAD attitude) than you probably thought Holden Coulfield was this awesome, observant, introspective rebel who has this whole world figured out and sees it for what it really is; broken, corrupt and beneath him.
Now for anyone out of that phase of their life you probably read that description and went "Oh my god that sounds like an obnoxious, pretentious, angry little dickhead who has never lived a real day in their life and has no idea how the world works." And yep, you're 100% correct. Re-reading Catcher as an adult and you see Holden for what he really is; a sulky, sullen teenager who is naïve enough to think he's smart, immature enough to miss the complex nature of the interactions he's observing and REALLY lucky he didn't get shot in the head while aimlessly wandering around New York in a pretty violent era (also shut up about Ducks, Holden, they can take care of themselves holy shit I just put together that that's part of the point that we get as a reader and he misses as a character; like wanting to "catch the kids" falling off the cliffs of the rye fields he's worried about protecting things that don't need protecting and also egotistical enough to think he's the only one who CAN protect them.)
Now imagine someone makes a game out of Catcher in the Rye but they present Holden Coulfield as someone who actually DOES have it all figured out, and the game world around them agrees. Yeah the writer read the book and its obvious he liked it, but it doesn't take a college education to see they've pretty much missed the point.
If that example didn't ring with you, let me try a different one: You ever pay a horror game? One that really shook you up but in a way you loved? Try talking about that same game with someone who has only watched an LP of it. Sure, they'll have all the plot points, puzzles and characters but they can't relate to how those moments made you feel.
And I'm not saying that's a bad way to experience something, but it's probably going to rub you the wrong way if they then declare themselves an authority on said horror game and start arguing interpretations with you when they themselves only experienced a 2nd hand (and therefore much more shallow) version.
That's what YIIK's writer has done to the bits he lifted straight from Kafka on the Shore (and probably others but I'm going to stick with what I've read here. I think I've recognized a few Palahniuk bits too but he doesn't list any in the "credits" so I won't just assume at the moment). He took things like finding the love interest's record, copied it (and turned it into a boring fetch quest), and tacked on the shallowest interpretation of the whole thing ("She wrote the song for the man she loved and lost, who was another version of our Protagonist. Our version finds the song, connects with it because it's "for him" and they fall in love because of it") rather than maybe looking at the record and its importance to the story as a whole (I won't go too deep but I always looked at it more like a gateway, or a physical manifestation of a crack in reality) and how it relates to the deeper themes of music, fate and slipping between realities.
Now I've probably made myself sound like a snob and a dickhead, but I'm not saying it's
wrong to enjoy something on a more surface level or without thinking deeper about it, hell being able to do that is what makes some media enjoyable, but if you learn basic addition and try to pass yourself off as a mathematician, odds are no one will take you seriously. And the writer of YIIK has made it SUPER clear he wants this taken seriously and the reason we don't is because WE'RE dumb.
TLDR; to me this is why the plagiarism is maddening, not because he didn't credit the dictionary.
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Edit: If you just wanted to see the old yiiking out portrait here you go
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Wait, why did they re-draw the portraits? They needed more expressions/variety, sure but not a whole re-do. The old style at least matched the in game sprites. Did the creators say why they did this? Why slap a new coat of paint on a car when its the engine that's busted?