James done did it
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Patrick thinks Firstname Lastname is his best character. Is there anything more to her than the side-splittingly hilarious name? Some great insights of Fat into the mind of a teenage girl?
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There are reviews from people who've read his schlock earlier in the thread. Needless to say, Patrick doesn't understand how women think at all. Most male authors fail at this and he failed in one of the more predictable and uninteresting ways, ie, just making a male character that is female. Read romance novels written by women if you want to understand female fantasy.