Well, I've suffered through the entirety of Danny's latest literary excrement, and boy this one was a doozy. I don't think I need to go too in depth because the same problems plague it throughout, the same ones as with the previous book only now seemingly in triplicate: ridiculous "notice me" word choices straight out of creative writing class, clunky sentence structure, a protagonist we're meant to think is always the smartest guy in the room yet constantly blunders into obvious traps and setups, two double cross scenes involving the same character, constant stupid alliteration that destroys the "dark fantasy" tone he's going for, and the adverbs, good God. I'm not a total anti-adverb zealot like Elmore Leonard, but maybe limit them to once a paragraph at most?
And above all else, it's
boring. I'd easily put it in the same class as other infamous works like The Eye of Argon or Sean Penn's Bob Honey Who Just Do Stuff.
Here's a selection of passages I picked out as being particularly egregious as I went along:

^the guy giving all this exposition just had his kneecap shattered and is dying of blood loss in the sand btw

"It lacked the slovenly briar of fact" is one of those what-the-fuck sentences in league with TekWar's "The robot pimp said, disdainfully"

one of the dozens of notes at the end of every chapter to explain all the stupid made-up words. Wow, just like in the pulps!
here we get the "we live in a society" edgelord monologue
Here's where our femme fatale double crosses our hero for the second time in thirty pages, only to get double crossed herself, but then man who double crossed her immediately pulls another double cross, and so they all kill each other anyway. Brilliant.

I could pretty much post every page, but you get the idea. This book was exhausting.
There's also has an appendix section that takes up like half the length, but I didn't even bother with it. From what I gleaned it's just some pointless, masturbatory "world-building" that has no bearing on anything.