The first part is a short snippet of Anevay one-shotting a bunch of the ebon blade knights such as Sally Whitemane, Nazgrim, and Darion Mograine. She can't even write a full sentence of any of them fighting back. Anevay just shows up, kills a bunch of them, talks shit for a couple minutes, then keeps killing. This part I thought was especially bad:
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Directly after she one shots the four horsemen there's a few lines about how much Anevay and Sylvanas are in love and how good of a lap dog Anevay is for Sylvanas, doing all of her dirty work for her.
About halfway through the chapter it jumps to Anduin, Silysa Bladewing (alliance champion), and Jaina. They all talk about how strong and scary Anevay is for a bit and then there's a few lines of just pure fluff between Silysa and Jaina (who I believe are dating?) despite them being in the middle of a war council meeting. Anduin dismisses Silysa and Jaina out of jealousy.
Here's the one thing that I think is interesting about this fic:
It describes Anduins jealousy of Jaina and Silysa and how he envies the bond they are able to share with one another. I like the concept they were going for. Anduin grew up very sheltered and was kept away from growing up with other children around his age. He doesn't even really have friends, the most he has is mentors and political allies, especially after the death of Varian. I love this concept; Making a fic out of Anduin trying to come to terms with the fact that he doesn't really know what a healthy friendship is like, let alone a healthy romantic partner. Learning how to find and protect those things would probably make for a very good story. I think this is why so many people like to pair Anduin with Wrathion. They're two very different characters but they have good chemistry, both of them are young, and both have the burden of trying to carry on their fathers legacies. All in all having Anduin being jealous of a good and healthy relationship is a good concept and if given to the right person I believe it could be carried out quite well.
But of course Lily and Mik didn't go down that path as we all know. No, instead what they opted for was to have the ghost of Onyxia, or at least her voice, corrupt Anduin through sheer loneliness.
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Apparently this is why Anduin is going to rape and abuse Anevay, because he's an incel haunted and degraded by a dragon lady, I guess.
I guess I shouldn't be surprised since Lily and Mik probably do believe that all men deep down are irredeemable if just pushed a little too far in one direction but it still genuinely upsets me that they can read this and think that this is an ok way to bastardize a character and more or less a whole host of men with intimacy issues. I get why she's doing it, I know its because she believes this is what happened to Sylvanas (and to a lesser extent abuse/rape survivors) but Anduin and Sylvanas are in no way comparable when it comes to being deserving of certain fates.
